user
xxxkylootheclwnxxx
beauty lays in the eye of the beholder

Joined:
07.01.09

Home:
Binghamton
ny/carbondale pa 570


Profile

bars
i like her xxxkylootheclwnxxx - 07.03.09 - 6.33/10
soo it feels like everything in my life is back in one peace//its like a lifetime raped up in a week//to hearts connect with one spark the cars parked laying back the seats//staring into her eyes then are lips meet//her head placed on my chest cuzz for now its best if we just sleep//in my book slow and steady wins the race//no need to rush things well slowy enhance the pace//for now well just hold hands and Caress the essence of are adolescence with grace....it may sound like its too soon to right this all down in a ryhme//but when i stand along her side//my heart beat tends to rise as my stomach fills with them butterflies//so what if i should get lost on journey into her eyes//i got told thats were all the sercets "lie"//i guess theres not a word that can describe how much i really like this girl or how much i would like to just give her the world//


damn! theres so many words left unsaid were should i begin//i guess you can say im "falling" again//its crazy how this young lady can make a whisper flow through the wind//her smile is like a shooting star that falls from the sky for an instent you close your eyes make wish//open wide just in time to say good bye but first one last kiss//for me its hard to explain this//but i never used to be the type who liked to kiss//but everytime me and her kiss i never wanna let go her lips...DAMN! the thoughts in my mind collide with the vision of my eyes leaving it blurry//my heart beats in a flurry//to the bridge of her nose i press my lips//then bless it with a kiss//i guess theres no real way for me to explain this or show how much i like this girl or how much i would like to give her the world//~KY~

nothing to special but it is what it is.....
comments
3.00/10 posted by roughrida on 07.03.09
not feelin it, flow is nonexistent
8.00/10 posted by super fresh on 07.03.09
nice shit man/ check out "whos lovin you"
8.00/10 posted by twisted on 07.03.09
well she dont like you...LOL actually this isnt too bad im GOING to ACTUALLY rate it unlike most niggas who beef and give each other 0"s which is pretty fucked up. there was sum parts that felt a lil choppy but overal its was good.
add comment
Add a comment on i like her
Rating :
Comment:


Image text: