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Random criticalbeats - 07.17.09 - 9.50/10
white powder, this shits "plain awful",
but the cokes in so i grab the "same paw full",
white lines line the table, we "reign unlawful",
ima fucked crackfiend, my mind is a "brain falafle".

soaring high i stumble outta "the door",
from ecstatic to morbid an emototional "see saw",
still spitting bars my shit still "real raw"
my shit mad, got you bitches wanting to "see more".

i got a stammer till i step to the mike,
crowds murmering the thought of me creates hype.
but my heads elsewhere im not ready to fight,
oh am i up against you? then im alright.

spit a few multis get the "crowd ready",
you try to fight back but this "clowns dead see",
you going for my throne but my "crowns steady",
i deliver my final blow your one "dead teddy".
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8.00/10 posted by johnny_b on 07.22.09
tight u have skillz
10.00/10 posted by dante on 07.17.09
good shit critical
10.00/10 posted by criticalbeats on 07.17.09
cheers Dante
10.00/10 posted by achonii on 07.17.09
wow your good and your only thirteen if you keep working youll be able to be big at like 18 yh also im in a crew called dope street saints well be happy to have you as a member in our crew if your interested
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