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AUDIO: The Game is in my Pocket (repost plz rate) kennedy - 12.24.09 - 9.20/10

Couple blunts in my pocket, load the clip and then I cock it
Blast off to the Moon when Im in the green rocket
You say you want to battle well my name is Davy Crockett
Can murder with no bars, I got Johnny Cochran
And you know I aint stoppin, 7 cities where Im raised
My flow is priceless, I just got it appraised
Show you my price list and I got you in a daze
Try and find me but Im posted in the maze
Behind the first line in a cloud of Purple Haze
Cheeks spewin acid all competitors decay
Allow me to rephrase, no bars I spit arrays
Your head is on the guillotine, I got you on display
I exit my chalet, fatigues like a marine
Kennedy aint kerosene? Boy you better bring sunscreen
Your win is unforeseen, GI Joe like figurine
You shootin with 16 well I brought the submachine
Im sharp like Wolverine, Im sick but no vaccine
I do it everyday, you do it Halloween

would really like feedback/cons. criticism
rate my other vids and verses Ill return the favor
2Up 2Down

9.00/10

posted by kennedy on 12.25.09

Thanks for the feedback. Im out of Norfolk put up 2up 2 down if you still have it

9.00/10

posted by ensayne on 12.25.09

Seems unfinished even for a clip, you need to add 2 more bars to make it better. But fuck the rest you VA homie thats whats good 2 up 2 down was the name of my first song Im Northridge Raised out the hood VA Beach, Squad Up! Get at me! Where you from homie?

9.00/10

posted by fresh on 12.25.09

yeah the flow was off...like you were forcing it to work...it wasnt horrible though.

9.00/10

posted by profound on 12.25.09

style was a bit simple but its still better than most of the audio ive heard on here lol

10.00/10

posted by smfsteadymakinfetti on 12.24.09

nice shit dog

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