sik chorus bruv!
haters need to get off my dick i can beat any of you faggits
in a rap battle and writtens and plus i just started doin
audio so get off my dick no rapper is good when they first
record audio its called practice and go look at my writtens
ill fuck any of yall up so stop hating
ur lyrics made this song a TRADGEDY wat u did to this beat
and chorus is unforgivable...nice beat +neopolean
dynamite.....dont mix
yo i like the chorus
but nigga ur voice is fuckin wierd as hell and ur horrible
lyrics are amazing
and i love the emotion.
sounds like coffee house poetry
luv da chorus dawg
DIS SHITS PARRED
haven herd from u and a while or i haven been on but gud
song joka i miss ya raps man
chorus the best part of the song
Loved the chorus. Good flow, lyrics was aight, i liked 2exs
average/savage line a lot. Overall A decent audio, and fuck
the haters joka, good way to use emotion.
i really like this one......Chorus was amazing.....emotion
in voice,and clarity are perfect...i think Joka should flow
a little more kind of sounds like your talking sometimes,but
this is ill,and a great job
thank you all for your feeback yes my voice does sound weird
bc i put emotion in it to show feeling in the rap to make it
better..
Maziing chours.
Wow. The chorus was amazing. Your voice sounded awkward as
fuck. Idk If you did thatt on purpose for some reason..
maybe? Lol. But I fuck with the lyrics anyway. Quality was
pretty freaking greatt... Yeahh.
psht i already liked this on facebook you shrool lol but
yeah, i like it. haha
OMG, i would deffently bump this in my hood, 10s!!!
Good Chorus;;
Voices Is Not Too Good.
But It Was Good..
FEEL GOOD JOKA YOU ROCKED MY SHOES
10s for you both, nice voice though Joka, surprised me alot,
like really good shit im not gonna lie i didnt think your
audio would be good on the beat cause the beats so slow and
shit, but you showed so much emotion you really killed it.
All the lyrics flow so well thats what made it really
baller. 2ex you killed that shit, way to incorporate your
own style, that can go a long way.
Ummmm.... Iono what everyone else was listening to, cuz to
me this was just eh. Yeah it was alright... Great quality
though, but I dont think the lyricism was any good, and joka
sounded like he wanted to cry lmao. Iono, maybe I just wasnt
feeling the topic, or maybe im just a hater..... Who knows
these things?
good shit and yeah you put more emotions and it made it
better, better flow to good shit, by the way who did the
hook
This was good....And Joka ur flow was Cool.. to me.....Both
did good....Keep it Up!!!
this is good man, yall both did good
This is pretty cool, that chorus is fuckin sick and u both
had good lyrics, both of yall actually did really good...
great shit yall...props n respect
pretty good shit yall, keep em comin
good shit guys a lot of emotion i feel it a lot
