Ay, all bullshit aside, that passionate with
rappin.......Ive spit that same exact shit in a freestyle,
not sayin you jocked, or i jocked, just funny lol, nice
fuckin script, flows on point like a mother fucker
dope shit
lol, I see the multies got alot better, my fav line was "
The referees are never bias to the fact that im the best MC
" haha that made me laugh
The multies were beast, another generic compliment about how
good the peice was, blah blah blah, good shit, pokemon,
water jugs, and a five dollar bill. Nah but forreal this
shit was good, I think you should have changed up your rhyme
scheme in the beginning, but the multies and vocab were
great, and it flowed excellently.
yeah this is dif then your other posts, you got some
versatility faget lol but good shit man, you might be better
than profound one day....
ex your vocab an erthang was astounding fam for real
ill multies,great lines,and devine flow....my favorite of
yours that you have done..good vocab,and good wording you
know its not perfect,but this is mad ill,and its featured
bars type probly around 8
Thats dope bro, the use of multies is spot on.
thats fuckin amazing big l style im digging this man
shit that was dope got kinda tongue twisted reading it lol
Mayne you got this rap shit down I love reading your shit
every line I expect some crazy ass shit cuz it usually is
whoa dope dude. way different then normal shit. lots of
multis. good shit dude.


