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jus writing c_d_s - 06.03.09 - 10.00/10
My rhymes animate,
Like South Park.
Predator of the deep,
The Great White Shark.
Grindstone Cheddar,
Thats right, Extra Sharp!
Make you shiver to your bones,
Like Afraid of the Dark!

I love to eat carrots,
So whats up doc?
Unexpected shocker,
Like a doorknob shock!
Only afford half a shoe,
That makes you a flop!
You cant finish a slammer,
Like dot...dot...dot.

(gf time lol)
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10.00/10 posted by fresh on 06.04.09
lol that doorknob shock shit is funny. nice one, Ill give you a ten, but it really should be longer lol.
10.00/10 posted by spinna on 06.03.09
lol luv it, short n sweet
10.00/10 posted by twisted on 06.03.09
9 on length,10 on the flow, and 10 on the pictures u painted with words, so i give ya a 10 homie TWISTED
10.00/10 posted by realeyez on 06.03.09
gotta show love for the creativity. ha nice one
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