Hell Cross ft. Apollo
apollo
- 03.03.10 - 9.20/10
I wanna make rhymes that beat blocks
But sick and tired of
missed shots
Fuckin with the phanotms in my brain the
detox
I want to creat the horrors over the broken
corridor
Obsessed I need more of the pills to released the
horrible
My souls at a distance my hearts not listnin
This
world is enough to take your head to a piston
Lucifer comin
around again
Lost, will I be found again
Sonar is dimmed
in the cespool that im drowning in.....
It was Good But dont have a 3line rhyme From the start but
rather at the END.....N yeah it was too short Make it
Longer...
Ummmmm "Corridor N horrible" dont really rhyme dude....but
still it was aN OkAy post.....
10.00/10
posted by saint on 03.03.10
This is amazing, It would be fucking the real deal though if
you made this like a 32 bar spit...
good rhymes, but yeah its short make it longerrrrrr
good shit man, short though
9.00/10
posted by cross on 03.03.10
aight aight im feelin dis
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