just no

put me down

both came out hard. takk lines esp lightened me up. shits good. good shit to both of yall, you killed it

match us your syllables and it will be fine. good post

ayy you still down to hop on a track, roughrida played some of your shit, im amazed. were doing some songs together, you got talent.

glad to see some good music on the site. felt the oldschool style but lyrics are insane. myspace.com/oneupp561 our music

match syllables or get them similar and your bars will be 100 times better. cus your really good right now & dont write it right so id like to see how you would be if you wrote it right.

Damn glad to see some good music on here. myspace.com/oneupp561 . loosing our breath is the new from the studio

glad to see some new talent, you know what your doing, good flow, internals and externals, good punches, all on point

it was truthfully close, but i think noyz took it. truthfully... & Rage dont say shit lmao you got nothing to say about my diss, nothing.

nice vocab, some fillers but in all its a really good post and it all flows. good shit, lookin forward to readin more of your shit

still killing it i see. if you wanna listen to our improved shit. myspace.com/oneupp561 " females,na my nigga fuck it, i took to much time on that matter of the subject// to all the bitches, ex girlfrends, an my girlfriend, i know you love it// fuck was i thinking, being a man an becoming a husband,// " lines are real. cant lie

i dont why, but " Dont wanna mess up your first impression with me. Think of me as your landlord n your rent isnt free. " made me seriously laugh, all was good, good diss, but couldnt figure out who it was too

good news: you write it with matching syllables which flows perfectly in a song, and overall just pretty good. bad news: you need to use doubles even tripples when you write, and leave out fillers. but i wouldnt be telling you any of this if i didnt think you were good. work on it and hit me up with your new shit. but still this is a good post

hahaha you guys are funny vv

you SUCK.... LMAO

im listenin to break up.. its good, you have the background noise down. just quality you need, but not your fault, good shit

no, its not bad, just have to write the bars in the right format

myspace.com/oneupp561 realest audio.. period, h.o ima go listennn though

lmao. you dont even rhyme your last words... leave the site pls

wanna talk about looks, you look like a skeleton. is just funny as hell, but stop dissing kids that suck like this faggot. and match up syllables with your lines. but good diss

no..........

Nobody can step up cause when I pitch its a no hitter, My pockets never on a diet they always getting bigger, those lines got me..

ummm, joosemc won with no competition, but... i dont really give you all that much props cus the other guy is fucking horrible...

and the flying scar line... wasnt good, but i liked every other.

for the way you write i at first would of thought this would be horrible, but i actually read and it was pretty good. you need to match up syllables and make lines even, or else its nearly impossible to flow on a trackk...but still its not badd truthfully

i already read this yesterday... the lyrics are fairly insane.. im just not into that twisted shit... but still the vocab, flow, everything, is all on point... period

W.E.E.D, W.aste E.very E.dgucated D.ecendent like im a SMART killer, Inforce holes in main arteries your neighborhood calls me a heart driller, thats the lines which got meee

You NOTICE~SEAN, Im the dude with the DOPEST~SONGS The one you FOCUS~ON, With each LINE, The DOPE~IS~STRONG if its a TUG OF WAR for fame then the ROPE~IS~GONE I cant be beat, Cause My punches like EXPLODIN~BOMBS ive read over and over.... INSANE

read both like twice, heed obviously took it, good battle. but its just better flow all the way around and has better punches.

i looked at this and i was like wtf. i have too read this, cus usually people that write shorts lines like this (or in this form) suck, but the vocab is ALL good, better than i could doo. all over good, but for others, make lines longer and match syllables but this all flows somehow. lol im shocked, GOOD SHIT

ensayne, let me get him, dont diss him back pls?? i want him, you know i got him

... ride your bitch, sattle free, break your bones.. fragiley, fact to be, a rapping teen on a hiphop magazine,

i would highlight which lines are good. but truthfully everyline is good, read the whole thing & am impressed... never read any of your post before. but good shit. all fire

" And by the way LYRICAL BEAST you SPELLED PISTOL WRONG TOO. YOU LIVE IN WESTBUBBLEFUCK NOBODY GIVES A BUCK ABOUT YOU. " Million is a faggot. this shit is tight. like the way it went, but those lines really caught me. some lines made me laugh. all around good diss

Theres few on this site that is good. theres a crew, called gas mask nation, w/ some of the good lyricist. im one of the best on the site. from what i heard you are too, im gonna make a crew, i want you too join, comment my newest post for details

" No good rappers to spit with they too weak to diss this, My16 is going down, is this really what we end with, I refuse to let my shit evaporate with no remembrance, " caught me.. damn, good vocab, good flow, good everything. on point. what not.

sounds like some big L shit beast... really good bro. lyrics are unbelievable.

if thats your audio, the lyrics are insane. it flows perfect. and everything is a ten. quality could be better, but im sure you recording on a sketchy setup. we have audio too. myspace.com/oneupp561 check it out. your a good rapper though

haha give me 5 minutes & you will be destroyed

your verse is truly ridiculous. cant even quote any lines there good. omgggg

" oops thats life cause its filled with the trouble the same trifle that hit the city and left us rubble " liked that shit. overall it was good, good shit

What happened too dissing me back, apparently nothing, i posted that night. & if your little bro actually died, than thats fucked up, sorry bout that. but it be nice to see a diss come at, because i posted that night. at least try

" "poor british kid","your skittish friend",your lines are poor like a dominican, " haha. made me laugh. foreall damnnn, good, cant wait to see his comeback

the girls call my dick a football coz they MOSSED it, Then they took it literal and I SCORED when they TOSSED it, for lyrical beast. EWW thats fire

" keepin at a steady pace one foot at a time like a one leggid race " make all lines longer, and put it into 16 bars form. but you have good lines. i like itt.

Waiting for your reply to me

Ok imma choose a player this time a Hero. Sometime my bars are cold So imma pick SubZer0 Imma FreeZe you then laugh and then break ya spine. Im the champ so imma take whats rightfully mine. is just hott. GOOD SHIT

haha ktea. he probably doesnt understands the words you used. thats why. its good shit.

and you the type that drop the soap, on purpose,to get fucken poked, . made me laugh.. haha good shit

people getting slaughtered, like a mass flood how the bloods flowing like water, steady dripping as i look up to the sky an pray to God but i aint even christian . love that line

hmm. just wondering.. but why the fuck you rating me with sixs. i dont care about rating but still

like the internals. NO ONE notices internals and externals. "watch the clock, glock will knock" good shit still though. better than most of the faggots on the site

yeah its straight. dick and vagina lines wernt good though. thats what lung means about wordplay and simple, rhyme internal and external rhymes more, and doubles, its not bad though

what is it?

once again.. sick. one of the best on the site. idk why no one notices you

flow never fades cause i get my fade on matter fact im way gone ..kush, haze, purp yeah thats what i stay on/ was plain sick

" This axis acts as light and dark passage/ And guides me passed the sticks river floating caskets/ Promoting collasping lungs and charcoal tablets/ I took prodigy protraction never the flow with action/ " is sick and flows good as hell. good shit, glad to see someone on this site can actually spit

Damn, glad to see someone can actually spit on this site. "The atmosphere and wars aside the liqour bottle when im sippin it/ Battles tear apart lives so lets have these thoughts never visited/" & never snooze spit real with a side of blues to chill/ I tell these dudes Im Ill its not a fluke its skill/ straight up sick broo

dude....sick. kinda want it in my car

damn this kat is crazy.. no lie. catchy voice also

no 6 voted on first. 3 on second. thats 9 for 9 saying i won, plus i dont go on forum ALL DAY, so what do you want? a formal document saying i won. just quit. your prob like 13 rapped in himself. when your not even good. LMAO.

like first better still good though. check my diss on lyric ability. tell me who won

back space line was mine to hahahahaha. it comes clear to me you cant not talk about dick and ass in every verse. LMAO QUEER

um like 5 voted on each. lol. theres another 10 for yourself. lol your a joke.

fav wayne song of all time right there. pretty good shit too

DAMN good shit. glad to see new people on the site than can spit. Check the diss i posted and tell me who won. so i can shut this kids mouth though. anyways still good shit.

hey guys this faggot comments himself with tens in every verse.. hahaha. and he sits on forum and tells ppl to comment his shit all day. but yet still... EVERYONE KNOWS I WON. HAHAHAHA HOP OFF KID

BITCH. GET A LIFE AND HOP OFF THE SITE.....YOUR NOT ON MY LEVEL. AND LOOK THEY THINK I WON... AGAIN HAHAHAHHAA

10S............

WITH..........

YOURSELF...........

COMMENTING.........

STOP........

it was good. lil more vocab next time. but still good truthfully. PROPS. rate the diss right under you. say who won.. this kid thinks he won, so you decide read both and say who won. thanks

i like it some lines are good as hell

look you suck. your not good. i beat you and everyone agrees. hahahahah hop off

nah your shits good. make the lines lil longer. too thin. not just saying it but its good. and id tell you if it wasnt. you need work but still its deffinitlely not bad...so good shit

just sick... damn. some of the best ive seen on the site. glad to see some ACTUAL talent on the site and someone who knows how to spit

neither

if you shooting love at me, best believe im gunning back.. fucking sick

it was good but check out other bars like mine. dont write like a paragraph. check my bars and see how to space out. but it was still sick

" Im harder then jumpin ova a Prison Fence further Intelligence Only Money Drugs Hoes none Else catch my other sense " was good and it flowed good. liked it.. cut down vocab lil though

bitch witch ass trash. hahaha your not on my level. you think your all good. your simple and thats the truth. Its OK just not on my level...hop off

stop commenting yourself with 10s. your bad. HOP OFF

i WILL destroy YOU

it wasnt good.. needs more vocab, i wasnt finished in my bars.. dont diss me when your not on my level

need practice

Donald Trumped the game, yeah I fired the booth.. People SWEATIN my lyrics, because I perspire the truth.. just sick

i missed ya bro, ive improved SOOO much. myspace.com/itstheprodigies just got into a local studio, and working on gettings signed soon, check it

im down for a crew

"cock than finish", as in cock and shoot, "and will litterally drop your image", as in his body will drop as well with his image or his name, theres alot of lines that were good you might of not understood, the "skyrocket" line, catch a skyrocket as in bullet, and also as in the cost of living. every line made sense wether it was understood or not, truthfully i thought i had this one and he had the last one, but hes a good battler, oh well he took it. like i dont think he had harder lines than "let the bullets run by ya, open your top lika sun visor". i thought i won this won. its straight though, good shit eyez

Agree with rida, up and down but still really good parts

Killed him plain amd simple

Ight Ensayne your the judge, dont base your vote off him vvv. If u think i win we go final round if he wins thats 2/3 and that means its over

I had to rewrite all my verses down. Yo your the only judge, you decide who wins round two betweeb me and realeyez, if i win, round 3, if he wins it over thats 2/3.

Yo ensaynes decides who wins im gonna start writing now. Ill tell u when im done, if Ensaynes says u win, that 2 outta 3, and its over, picks me, than were going round 3, no more than 32 bars

if you want me you got me, i checked out your old shit and i like it, im not being in the crew if you get some niggas that dont know how to spit though, if you wanna hear me, go to myspace.com/itstheprodigies

" But emotions run deep as rivers, and the pain flows just as deep.. Cover my eyes just so I could try and hide what my life will see.. " deep as river, pain flows just as deep. like that & "I wish I couldnt feel what I can see, like I had blind fingers... " also crazy as hell

like i already said your verse IS crazy, on a audio it be solid, but its good as hell

" on the beat i just go crazy, i go i go Michael myers " like it, i use the studder flow in my songs too

"my claims may sound profound, but go there n youll be murdered n neva found, " good shit

That was crazy, plain & simple

your shit is mind blowing bro. RESPECT. its real shit, you rap about some real shit

damnnnnn the lyrics are complex. i love this shit

i said boy 4 times. in two lines, and that was that the point, i mentioned one thing about your mom, and you see grind time battle rappers say shit like that to so you cant say shit

you keep telling me too hop off, you started shit, saying MY audio was bad, when its just as good or better than yours, you know my lyrics are good. SO "hop off kid"

this kid is horrible

new diss, sorry i been ACTUALLY RECORDED, i dont spend my life on my16 so i couldnt get back to you so quick.

ok doubles, some good lines, make it a 16 next time, bits pretty good

what a bitch vvv fallen angel

cross niggas like i was christian. damn good shit

Your horrible, simple rhymes, no doubles, you nees to step your game up or theres just no point to even TRY to rap

it wasnt technically on point, but the internals made it work, it was complexx GOOD SHIT

no punchlines........ period

thanks bro, im glad you actual understand and read verses instead of jus putting "good shit". but thats to a beat, that why it was technically off, im postin the song on myspace soon. myspace.com/itstheprodigies "I got a snake with an apple that took the pureness right out of eve." damn bro

you wouldnt even diss me back faggot ass bitch, one of the prodigies is my bro the other is my friend. fuck you bitch. saying i suck, to pussy to diss me back? my ACTUAL RAP, NOT MY16BARS BULLSHIT, AUDIO, ACTUAL RAP, FUCKING KILLS YOURS, YOU CANT RAP, QUIT PERIOD

last verse was iffy to me, but all the other shit is good as fuck

i read dat shit. but you going round saying my shits bad and givin me bad ratings and shit when that shit was pretty good so its whatever bro

not good

u guys are dumb. its to a song we did. thats what the songs called. LOVE ON THE MOON. your gonna rhyme the same shit twice

pussy ass wont diss back cuz he cant beat the shit i wrote. but u diss some new comer faggot that has no talent so you can seem good. your soft, i rap you lyrically. "GET OFF MY DICK BITCH"

WRONG. tHeres punchlines. And it flows if u could make it flow. But apparently u cant ur weak. Waitin tk see wat u come up for me

Nah vvv, thats bullshit. It flowed an would sound good on a track and that why ur pose 2 write.. Good shot

i can use big words that half of them dont fit or go in with the bars he writes. i heard his audio. he cant spit. period

your lyrics arnt on my level and your audio sucks i heard your shit. get off my level bitch.

lil waynes old shit was real but he turned fucking gay

sick as fuck no lie.

this beat is so different. its crazy. crazy ass shit bro. 10/10.

i already wrote to this song. sickest beat alive no lie. im doing this song

just wrote the the game. Good shit

Battle me bitch

dissen my shit your shit sucks. bitch ill kill you in a battle and audio dont try me lyrically cause your not on my level

diss me back, give it your best shot

dang bro, i actually like your verse mo then twisted good stuff

damn, the end was wierd, but the verse wuz sik as hell, try to go on ma shit again, i want u to hear it, it can actually flow unlike most on tha site

i added you on myspace, go check it, and check out my songs on my page leave a comment, i checked out all yur shit, and it was pretty good, and the diss is good to LOL

myspace.com/aftermathproductions561

you deffinitely brought the site back up admin good shit,,,but wheres the love iv been featureless, and top ratedless ha its all good

faggot

thanks, for real,,,,and i made it where you can download them on myspace does it work???, idk if it works,,,but mr. u i want that hustle song too il throw it on a cd or some shit

nice shit, and ima check it out h.o

you guys have no organization, i cant be in a group that doesnt know what the fucks going on, no beef or disrespect, but im just not the right person

actually ur really bad

stole that off the internet plus u suck, and the prodigies are way better than u so get off the site

hahahhahahahha i dissed him too, if you wanna check it out but dis is amazing

hahhaha i dissed that fagg to, if u wanna check it out, good shit, real good

like he said its clever and i laughed

same it flows good, espicailly with your actually recording talent, i want u to post more, and i will come out with audio soon also, but keep it up your one of my favs on the site

comment if you like it please????

tell me what u think

yea its a ten, nice vocab

pretty good, keep it up

wow u suck

i already and i dont really know what there talking about it all goes for me good shit as always lol

i got a mac and record from it, comment my mom verse

i respect the song but that comment "i cried like a bitch" stop acting hard dawg, ur dad died ur suppose be sad, it will fuck u up dawg

longer next time but its good

one word wow really complex, amazing

comment if you know what i mean. admin if your reading this, i want this to be right next to the prodigies one on featured

i think i know what your going through

yea more of the second part

thats amazing

its not complex but i still like it and its a 10. comment sea sick i just posted it if u can

why is no1 commenting my new verse its fucking raw

i dont like either, my oppinion is im better than both, but if i had to pick it would be twisted

i like this verse comment if you like it, tell me if its good enough for a verse, need your opinion. thanks

mr.hip hop won its no competition

a quick one not my best

realer than most its a ten nigga

a quick one i thought it was clever tell me if u think its good

A QUICK ONE, TELL ME WHAT U THINK AND READ HIS PUSSY DISSES AND TELL ME WHO WON SO FAR

UMM IT HAS SOME NICE FLOW, I LIKED IT IT WAS PRETYY GOOD, COMMENT MY SHIT TO, ITS THE VERSE THAT SAYS ZACH DISS, LIKE RIGHT UNDER URS, JUST KEEP IT UP THOUGH

I HEARD BOUT DA HUGE BATTLE, CHECK OUT MY NEW DISS, JUST POSTED IT, GOOD FLOW IM NOT ON ANY SIDE

BEST LINES I HEARD FROM U, I KNOW THIS IS FROM WAY BEFORE BUT ITS STILL MY FAV VERSE FROM U

i think this is joels, but if it is u have consistent flowing rhymes, that i liked, which would flow way better than ur usual raps in our songs, but its really good, keep writing,

its long, and its good, i like it, im looking forward to seeing better vocab from u, but if u keep up the flow, ur shit will be looking good, comment mine its called sharp right under u, then if u want check out my diss on somefaggot named zack, just keep it up and try to check out my shit

call my cell, and it sounds the same, but it depends how actual spitting has improved

NOT UR BEST, but its deffinatly good, keep it up, and u will be a veteran on this site, lol that sounded homo but for real

look at my diss, its good i played bball all weekend, and im gettin better, haha i beat mike, one time, and whooped coleman

A quick one, comment and tell me if u like some of my lines, tell me if i should use them in a real verse to spit, please comment??

i like it, not the best but its deffinatly good, that kid zach really pissed me off, im bout to diss that bitch, and bye the way im back

he seems like a faggot who cares anyway, its a waste spend ur time on writing bars for real lyrics instead of dissing some fag

ITS GOOD, but im gonna be real and tell u next time to increase ur vocab, but keep it up

GOOD JOB, im glad u liked my total disaster lyrics too, keep it up,

good "with a touch of bread ill be toasting" i like it

It was just for fun, no beef

mostly freestyled

almost a 32 i think

i dont care what these mother fuckers say, this shit is 10, damn every1 is ruining heiz haha

i can read dis shit over and over if i had no life, jus kiddin bro, i read it and its funny and straight up too

GOOD SHIT, MINES RITE UNDER UR SHIT ON NEWEST BARS

that kid did steal lines lol

thats good, you only do 2 verses?

respect for girls. but its horrible

shit sucks...prodigies are actually real..

NICE ITS STRAIGHT

nigga thats whack...