(chorus)
im in the range rove, seat packed 8 hoes,
cus im
the best in the game tho case closed,
if they didn...
living in the diamond life, since than i been shining
bright,
flyer than a private flight, you could hear me flying
...
some say im gifted, nahh bitch im christmas,
gods gift &
privilege, hand print with 6s,
rap games the same but d...
think i might go out (ehh) better yet just stay inside,
I was
born in 96 the world was great in 95,
some say i c...
Forever
aft3rmath - 07.28.10 - 0.00/10
im wanting this as long as i, am alive to call this mine,
if
not, itll say the greatest where my body lies,
but ...
Read both verses or else dont even vote.
(Math)
as
your running you try to catch your breath, instead you c...
got me looking fresh from my neck to my shoes,
saying im the
best in the booth, its technically true,
& i never ...
One day
aft3rmath - 07.01.10 - 0.00/10
one day... i know well meet again,
need clothes, need money,
well alls i needs a pen,
think your gonna make a mo...
myspace.com/oneupp561
copy and paste that, we worked on a
song, its crazy, check it out. give feedback, leave c...
running round, the rest not fast enough,
caint pass this up,
Phase, Math, your up,
cus, my raps tight like i wra...
(first drum)
make today the day i race away, replace my name w/
2 words.... fame & great,
as i reached up, my dr...
fans, critics, boggled bout the lines i speak,
standing way on
top, you gotta scream hi to me (yelling)
rhyming ...
Ok, "Doeboy" had a pic on his acount, and he is seriously 60 to 65
years old, he changed it now, and dissed me when i ca...
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS, im hot like Cali weather,
taking shots to
the top like it was now or never,
sitting on top...
always had big dreams but this is reality,
talking bout the
the past but this is right now to me,
talking bout ...
prices going up, but your girl gives head to me with no extra
fees,
and if you want tips, ill pass it through your g...
flows priceless, like the ice on your wrist,
a wrong doesnt
make right, but theres no righter than this,
fans ye...
MYSPACE.COM/ONEUPP561
New song. check it & tell us what
you think.
right out of the studio.
sending so...
raps is a blast, more bang than an armory,
slow game, Okay,
lets go at harder speeds,
flows tamed? no way, spit...
chorus
aft3rmath - 05.02.10 - 8.50/10
so if its what math says than it has too add up,
there the
condiments of the game, better catch up,
flows check...
Aftermath please step to the stand. Put your left hand on the bible
and raise your right hand. repeat after me . do you ...
ME:
he started so i will finish, like its christmas heres your
present...
hit you w/ the Smith & Wesson, hit his...
reach for the sky, cause the stars is within reach,
indeed, the
best M.C on the highest win streak,
came through...
my mouths a flame thrower, how could you be dissing me?
im
lebron James, your Tiger, im in a different league,
e...
start a new a life, u gotta get away with me,
build a mansion
on a vacant beach, razzi cant make a scene,
hater...
(with, in, reach, ugh)
some make it to the top, i just was an
early one,
sitting in my living room, chef comes &...
the way i can change my flow, spit it and heats my tongue
you
point everywhere, when i ask where your bleeding from,...
followed this new persona with my old I.D right behind me,
so
AFT3R they heard there like "MATH, sign me, sign me, s...
when we were matched together, i knew wed last
forever,
from jewels spend cash whenever, shining through
the na...
myspace.com/itstheprodigies
two new songs from my two
last verses in the new studio!!!
check it, com...
theres no doubt in my mind, no ones challengin I,
even if the
clock broke id still say now is my time,
when my l...
theres one chance so face it, with one chance im takin,
words
leaves no traces of all victims & patients
the mo...
I know its fair its quits, you just cant handle this
to win
the chances slim, youll need some bandages,
im sor...
my flow is insane, you know how i spit thangs,
get out my
switchblade, carve Ensayne into your ribcage,
got ya n...
call in doctor aftermath, over stocked with stacks of
cash,
over topped with nasty raps, after that bagging
stacks,
...
style is in prison, locked up but never forgetting
vivid, my
mind isnt living, its fffoggy and tripping,
smooth ...
as you running your try to catch your breath, instead you catch a
tek,
aim for the head or chest, vultures couldnt e...
to ashes as the city burns, buildings kiss the cities
curb,
kneeling to the cities words, hearing as the sirens purr...
verse 1:
saw the the way id work ya, walk all da way burned
up,
scars in place of ya first cuts, not a job to ta...
i i i know i be, sliiide, with no idea
so say yah if you know
its me,..........
never ever die, no R.I.P, T.H.E,...
(CHORUS)
with knots like these, i should rock tight
jeans,
but its not likely, not not likely,
you on top li...
iiits greats when i see ya, cant member faces or
features,
cause this case of amnesia, ccccase of
amnesia,
mind ...
CHORUS
aft3rmath - 02.11.10 - 9.00/10
(CHORUS)
with knots like these, i should rock tight
jeans,
but its not likely, not not likely,
you on top l...
(Intro)
everyday the sun light shines on me,
from head to
feet im steadily, set to leave,
im blessed with th...
i gotta gotta gotta get, lots of it,
on top of it, the loss of
this, oxygen,
so watch me get, monsterous, pocke...
southern girl, love her style, checks her clothes,
neck to toe,
stress for hoes? thats a NO,
so i be writin for,...
Now girl.. You know the feelings i get, is concealing a
trip.
i really hate feeling like this,
Im sittin here
...
i heard ya musiic, it just sounded, like its some clown shit,
yet im well rounded, so i lost that weight,
and ...
REDRUM
aft3rmath - 01.26.10 - 9.00/10
it couldnt look any clearer,
put REDRUM on ya shirt let ya look
ina mirror,
got em shook cause im realer, lyrica...
im the greatest they aint messing wit,
testin with, question
this? so i leave em questionless,
at the bottom, gu...
come and fly with me, baby hold ya head higher,
disregards the
tears shred prior, bled by ya,
step into my space...
veins is frozen, the blood has closed in,
last words were
spoken, my thoughts is broken,
blood is leaking, throa...
start at 19:
hate it or love it, i did it from
nothin,
ill say it in public, my bars hott, like a tray in t...
S.A.L.U.T.E,
better do that when you see me,
its
A.F.T.E.R.M.A.T.H
im goin hard dont give me no leeway
t...
swagga like us? nah not yet,,
sleepin in the lead, like my
alarms not set,
tight grip on the top, never fall off...
how dare, you say u from around here,
you must be square cuz
you definitely aint round here,
round here, i found...
Start at 22 seconds. watch how it flows
(chorus
x2)
you must be blind man, the we shining,
cuz
we.........
she like the way she baggin things,
like celebs in
magazines,
want it bae, have it then,
cash it in, like it...
Everything, I conceived, can it be, make believed,
I jus want,
want to breathe, easily, into dreams
Self achieve...
if only u knew what i was capable of,
through the hate and the
love,
like a satin above, but staying above,
...
56 ace
aft3rmath - 08.17.09 - 0.00/10
get used to the taste,
of the dirt in your face,
the sec
you stepped into 56ace,
56ace, 56ace, come on man i...
quit it man, my flow is steadily delivering,
lika little man,
but filling in, like a killer can,
I should be REC...
(chorus) x2
marching like a soldier might,
so i hold the
mic, with my right,
and with go the hype, gotta ...
Talking bout shotz, well bitch im balling boy,
talking real,
knowing hes faker than a fucking mcdonalds toy,
let...
to big of a picture can you capture my rap,
or capture the
fact, that my raps are intact,
when i rap its a fac...
one of the days wished you would of stayed back, way back,
lay
low, stay home, mean it when i say so,
but now yo...
Classic
aft3rmath - 07.03.09 - 9.17/10
my practice, has spread across the atlas,
its classic, or acid,
when i go back and attack it,
to pass this, you...
History
aft3rmath - 06.22.09 - 9.75/10
your click cant speak, cause i got more records than
history,
its just defeat, when you spit with me,
let the
ha...
saying shes a good mom, "i highly doubt it"
i dont cry about
it, but spit rhymes about it,
saying you loved me ...
compared to cancer, my flow completes sick,,,
cut you into
pieces, puts you in the deep six,,,
some deep shit, i...
complaining to me, cause you got beef,
while i got blood
stains on my teeth,,,
and if your heart races, then i...
hot lyrics can u handle my breath,
hands on your neck, straight
up demanding respect,
mans at his best, let my w...
in fact, i spit rap backwards, like im dyslexic,
except
it, think of a thought, through art, and connect it,
ENDED IT RIGHT THERE:
U SEEM BLIND LIKE A BROKEN
LENSE,
AND U COULDNT MURDER INC EVEN IF I LEFT U WITH BROK...
SHARP
aft3rmath - 05.10.09 - 10.00/10
JUST A QUICKY TO SHOW THAT IM BACK:
SEE ME IN THE FINAL
FOUR,,,
GOT MORE CONNECTIONS THAN A SPINAL CORD,,,...
THE ZACK IM TALKIN BOUT IS ON FEATURED, I DONT KNOW HOW HE GOT
THERE, CHECKOUT SOME OF HIS LYRICS HES A EMO WIGGER >THE ...
u know me as the aft3rmath,,,
too big of a picture
capture that,,,
but im spitting like its a part o...
its the aftermath and i just do what i do,,,
im on top of
this game like i live on my roof,,,
and it...
HEY MR. U IM EVEN GONNA STEAL YOUR STYLE PUT MY RAPS IN
"QUOTATIONS",,,
I TOLD MYSELF TO TRY BUT , NAW , I AINT GOT ...
just no
put me down
both came out hard. takk lines esp lightened me up. shits good.
good shit to both of yall, you killed it
match us your syllables and it will be fine. good post
ayy you still down to hop on a track, roughrida played some of your
shit, im amazed. were doing some songs together, you got talent.
glad to see some good music on the site. felt the oldschool style
but lyrics are insane. myspace.com/oneupp561 our music
quick shit
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 07.28.10
match syllables or get them similar and your bars will be 100 times
better. cus your really good right now & dont write it right so id
like to see how you would be if you wrote it right.
Damn glad to see some good music on here. myspace.com/oneupp561 .
loosing our breath is the new from the studio
glad to see some new talent, you know what your doing, good flow,
internals and externals, good punches, all on point
it was truthfully close, but i think noyz took it. truthfully...
& Rage dont say shit lmao you got nothing to say about my diss,
nothing.
nice vocab, some fillers but in all its a really good post and it
all flows. good shit, lookin forward to readin more of your shit
still killing it i see. if you wanna listen to our improved shit.
myspace.com/oneupp561 " females,na my nigga fuck it, i took to much
time on that matter of the subject//
to all the bitches, ex girlfrends, an my girlfriend, i know you
love it//
fuck was i thinking, being a man an becoming a husband,// " lines
are real. cant lie
i dont why, but " Dont wanna mess up your first impression with me.
Think of me as your landlord n your rent isnt free. " made me
seriously laugh, all was good, good diss, but couldnt figure out
who it was too
good news: you write it with matching syllables which flows
perfectly in a song, and overall just pretty good.
bad news: you need to use doubles even tripples when you write, and
leave out fillers. but i wouldnt be telling you any of this if i
didnt think you were good. work on it and hit me up with your new
shit. but still this is a good post
hahaha you guys are funny vv
you SUCK.... LMAO
im listenin to break up.. its good, you have the background noise
down. just quality you need, but not your fault, good shit
succsess
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.17.10
no, its not bad, just have to write the bars in the right format
myspace.com/oneupp561 realest audio.. period, h.o ima go listennn
though
lmao. you dont even rhyme your last words... leave the site pls
Who won
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.17.10
wanna talk about looks, you look like a skeleton. is just funny as
hell, but stop dissing kids that suck like this faggot. and match
up syllables with your lines. but good diss
succsess
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.17.10
no..........
Nobody can step up cause when I pitch its a no hitter,
My pockets never on a diet they always getting bigger, those lines
got me..
ummm, joosemc won with no competition, but... i dont really give
you all that much props cus the other guy is fucking horrible...
and the flying scar line... wasnt good, but i liked every other.
for the way you write i at first would of thought this would be
horrible, but i actually read and it was pretty good. you need to
match up syllables and make lines even, or else its nearly
impossible to flow on a trackk...but still its not badd truthfully
i already read this yesterday... the lyrics are fairly insane.. im
just not into that twisted shit... but still the vocab, flow,
everything, is all on point... period
W.E.E.D, W.aste E.very E.dgucated D.ecendent like im a SMART
killer,
Inforce holes in main arteries your neighborhood calls me a heart
driller, thats the lines which got meee
You NOTICE~SEAN, Im the dude with the DOPEST~SONGS
The one you FOCUS~ON, With each LINE, The DOPE~IS~STRONG
if its a TUG OF WAR for fame then the ROPE~IS~GONE
I cant be beat, Cause My punches like EXPLODIN~BOMBS ive read
over and over.... INSANE
read both like twice, heed obviously took it, good battle. but its
just better flow all the way around and has better punches.
i looked at this and i was like wtf. i have too read this, cus
usually people that write shorts lines like this (or in this form)
suck, but the vocab is ALL good, better than i could doo. all over
good, but for others, make lines longer and match syllables but
this all flows somehow. lol im shocked, GOOD SHIT
ensayne, let me get him, dont diss him back pls?? i want him, you
know i got him
... ride your bitch, sattle free,
break your bones.. fragiley,
fact to be, a rapping teen on a hiphop magazine,
True Love
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.23.10
i would highlight which lines are good. but truthfully everyline is
good, read the whole thing & am impressed... never read any of your
post before. but good shit. all fire
" And by the way LYRICAL BEAST you SPELLED PISTOL WRONG TOO.
YOU LIVE IN WESTBUBBLEFUCK NOBODY GIVES A BUCK ABOUT YOU. " Million
is a faggot. this shit is tight. like the way it went, but those
lines really caught me. some lines made me laugh. all around good
diss
Theres few on this site that is good. theres a crew, called gas
mask nation, w/ some of the good lyricist. im one of the best on
the site. from what i heard you are too, im gonna make a crew, i
want you too join, comment my newest post for details
" No good rappers to spit with they too weak to diss this,
My16 is going down, is this really what we end with,
I refuse to let my shit evaporate with no remembrance, "
caught me.. damn, good vocab, good flow, good everything. on point.
what not.
Failure
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.23.10
sounds like some big L shit beast... really good bro. lyrics are
unbelievable.
if thats your audio, the lyrics are insane. it flows perfect. and
everything is a ten. quality could be better, but im sure you
recording on a sketchy setup. we have audio too.
myspace.com/oneupp561
check it out. your a good rapper though
haha give me 5 minutes & you will be destroyed
your verse is truly ridiculous. cant even quote any lines there
good. omgggg
my craft
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.22.10
" oops thats life cause its filled with the trouble
the same trifle that hit the city and left us rubble "
liked that shit. overall it was good, good shit
What happened too dissing me back, apparently nothing, i posted
that night. & if your little bro actually died, than thats fucked
up, sorry bout that. but it be nice to see a diss come at, because
i posted that night. at least try
" "poor british kid","your skittish friend",your lines are poor
like a dominican, "
haha. made me laugh. foreall damnnn, good, cant wait to see his
comeback
the girls call my dick a football coz they MOSSED it,
Then they took it literal and I SCORED when they TOSSED it, for
lyrical beast. EWW thats fire
Journey
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.15.10
" keepin at a steady pace
one foot at a time like a one leggid race "
make all lines longer, and put it into 16 bars form.
but you have good lines. i like itt.
Waiting for your reply to me
Ok imma choose a player this time a Hero.
Sometime my bars are cold So imma pick SubZer0
Imma FreeZe you then laugh and then break ya spine.
Im the champ so imma take whats rightfully mine.
is just hott. GOOD SHIT
haha ktea. he probably doesnt understands the words you used. thats
why. its good shit.
Gasmask
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.13.10
and you the type that drop the soap, on purpose,to get fucken
poked,
. made me laugh.. haha good shit
people getting slaughtered, like a mass flood how the bloods
flowing like water, steady dripping
as i look up to the sky an pray to God but i aint even christian .
love that line
hmm. just wondering.. but why the fuck you rating me with sixs. i
dont care about rating but still
like the internals. NO ONE notices internals and externals. "watch
the clock, glock will knock" good shit still though. better than
most of the faggots on the site
yeah its straight. dick and vagina lines wernt good though. thats
what lung means about wordplay and simple, rhyme internal and
external rhymes more, and doubles, its not bad though
what is it?
once again.. sick. one of the best on the site. idk why no one
notices you
Mack bitch
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.11.10
flow never fades cause i get my fade on
matter fact im way gone ..kush, haze, purp yeah thats what i stay
on/ was plain sick
" This axis acts as light and dark passage/
And guides me passed the sticks river floating caskets/
Promoting collasping lungs and charcoal tablets/
I took prodigy protraction never the flow with action/ " is sick
and flows good as hell. good shit, glad to see someone on this site
can actually spit
Damn, glad to see someone can actually spit on this site. "The
atmosphere and wars aside the liqour bottle when im sippin it/
Battles tear apart lives so lets have these thoughts never
visited/" & never snooze spit real with a side of blues to chill/
I tell these dudes Im Ill its not a fluke its skill/ straight up
sick broo
dude....sick. kinda want it in my car
imma do it
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.02.10
damn this kat is crazy.. no lie. catchy voice also
no 6 voted on first. 3 on second. thats 9 for 9 saying i won, plus
i dont go on forum ALL DAY, so what do you want? a formal document
saying i won. just quit. your prob like 13 rapped in himself. when
your not even good. LMAO.
like first better still good though. check my diss on lyric
ability. tell me who won
back space line was mine to hahahahaha. it comes clear to me you
cant not talk about dick and ass in every verse. LMAO QUEER
um like 5 voted on each. lol. theres another 10 for yourself. lol
your a joke.
fav wayne song of all time right there. pretty good shit too
I Am Remix
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.29.10
DAMN good shit. glad to see new people on the site than can spit.
Check the diss i posted and tell me who won. so i can shut this
kids mouth though. anyways still good shit.
hey guys this faggot comments himself with tens in every verse..
hahaha. and he sits on forum and tells ppl to comment his shit all
day. but yet still... EVERYONE KNOWS I WON. HAHAHAHA HOP OFF KID
BITCH. GET A LIFE AND HOP OFF THE SITE.....YOUR NOT ON MY LEVEL.
AND LOOK THEY THINK I WON... AGAIN HAHAHAHHAA
10S............
WITH..........
YOURSELF...........
COMMENTING.........
STOP........
it was good. lil more vocab next time. but still good truthfully.
PROPS. rate the diss right under you. say who won.. this kid thinks
he won, so you decide read both and say who won. thanks
advice
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.29.10
i like it some lines are good as hell
look you suck. your not good. i beat you and everyone agrees.
hahahahah hop off
nah your shits good. make the lines lil longer. too thin. not just
saying it but its good. and id tell you if it wasnt. you need work
but still its deffinitlely not bad...so good shit
just sick... damn. some of the best ive seen on the site. glad to
see some ACTUAL talent on the site and someone who knows how to
spit
neither
if you shooting love at me, best believe im gunning back.. fucking
sick
it was good but check out other bars like mine. dont write like a
paragraph. check my bars and see how to space out. but it was still
sick
" Im harder then jumpin ova a Prison Fence further Intelligence
Only Money Drugs Hoes none Else catch my other sense "
was good and it
flowed good. liked it.. cut down vocab lil though
bitch witch ass trash. hahaha your not on my level. you think your
all good. your simple and thats the truth. Its OK just not on my
level...hop off
stop commenting yourself with 10s. your bad. HOP OFF
i WILL destroy YOU
it wasnt good.. needs more vocab, i wasnt finished in my bars..
dont diss me when your not on my level
need practice
Sweat Me
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.22.10
Donald Trumped the game, yeah I fired the booth..
People SWEATIN my lyrics, because I perspire the truth.. just sick
i missed ya bro, ive improved SOOO much.
myspace.com/itstheprodigies
just got into a local studio, and working on gettings signed soon,
check it
im down for a crew
"cock than finish", as in cock and shoot, "and will litterally drop
your image", as in his body will drop as well with his image or his
name, theres alot of lines that were good you might of not
understood, the "skyrocket" line, catch a skyrocket as in bullet,
and also as in the cost of living. every line made sense wether it
was understood or not, truthfully i thought i had this one and he
had the last one, but hes a good battler, oh well he took it. like
i dont think he had harder lines than "let the bullets run by ya,
open your top lika sun visor". i thought i won this won. its
straight though, good shit eyez
Agree with rida, up and down but still really good parts
Killed him plain amd simple
Ight Ensayne your the judge, dont base your vote off him vvv. If u
think i win we go final round if he wins thats 2/3 and that means
its over
YO ADMIN
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.14.10
I had to rewrite all my verses down. Yo your the only judge, you
decide who wins round two betweeb me and realeyez, if i win, round
3, if he wins it over thats 2/3.
Yo ensaynes decides who wins im gonna start writing now. Ill tell u
when im done, if Ensaynes says u win, that 2 outta 3, and its over,
picks me, than were going round 3, no more than 32 bars
if you want me you got me, i checked out your old shit and i like
it, im not being in the crew if you get some niggas that dont know
how to spit though, if you wanna hear me, go to
myspace.com/itstheprodigies
Tears..
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.11.10
" But emotions run deep as rivers, and the pain flows just as
deep..
Cover my eyes just so I could try and hide what my life will see..
"
deep as river, pain flows just as deep. like that & "I wish I
couldnt feel what I can see, like I had blind fingers... " also
crazy as hell
like i already said your verse IS crazy, on a audio it be solid,
but its good as hell
" on the beat i just go crazy, i go i go Michael myers " like it, i
use the studder flow in my songs too
"my claims may sound profound, but go there n youll be murdered n
neva found, " good shit
ensayne.
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.09.10
That was crazy, plain & simple
your shit is mind blowing bro. RESPECT. its real shit, you rap
about some real shit
damnnnnn the lyrics are complex. i love this shit
i said boy 4 times. in two lines, and that was that the point, i
mentioned one thing about your mom, and you see grind time battle
rappers say shit like that to so you cant say shit
Aftermath
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.05.10
you keep telling me too hop off, you started shit, saying MY audio
was bad, when its just as good or better than yours, you know my
lyrics are good. SO "hop off kid"
young noyz
2.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.05.10
this kid is horrible
new diss, sorry i been ACTUALLY RECORDED, i dont spend my life on
my16 so i couldnt get back to you so quick.
Haters
8.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 04.05.10
ok doubles, some good lines, make it a 16 next time, bits pretty
good
what a bitch vvv fallen angel
cross niggas like i was christian. damn good shit
Your horrible, simple rhymes, no doubles, you nees to step your
game up or theres just no point to even TRY to rap
it wasnt technically on point, but the internals made it work, it
was complexx GOOD SHIT
Aftermath
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 03.31.10
no punchlines........ period
Phenomenon
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 03.17.10
thanks bro, im glad you actual understand and read verses instead
of jus putting "good shit". but thats to a beat, that why it was
technically off, im postin the song on myspace soon.
myspace.com/itstheprodigies
"I got a snake with an apple that took the pureness right out of
eve."
damn bro
you wouldnt even diss me back faggot ass bitch, one of the
prodigies is my bro the other is my friend. fuck you bitch. saying
i suck, to pussy to diss me back? my ACTUAL RAP, NOT MY16BARS
BULLSHIT, AUDIO, ACTUAL RAP, FUCKING KILLS YOURS, YOU CANT RAP,
QUIT PERIOD
last verse was iffy to me, but all the other shit is good as fuck
i read dat shit. but you going round saying my shits bad and givin
me bad ratings and shit when that shit was pretty good so its
whatever bro
not good
u guys are dumb. its to a song we did. thats what the songs called.
LOVE ON THE MOON. your gonna rhyme the same shit twice
pussy ass wont diss back cuz he cant beat the shit i wrote. but u
diss some new comer faggot that has no talent so you can seem good.
your soft, i rap you lyrically. "GET OFF MY DICK BITCH"
WRONG. tHeres punchlines. And it flows if u could make it flow. But
apparently u cant ur weak. Waitin tk see wat u come up for me
Nah vvv, thats bullshit. It flowed an would sound good on a track
and that why ur pose 2 write.. Good shot
i can use big words that half of them dont fit or go in with the
bars he writes. i heard his audio. he cant spit. period
your lyrics arnt on my level and your audio sucks i heard your
shit. get off my level bitch.
lil waynes old shit was real but he turned fucking gay
Enriched 2
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 01.19.10
sick as fuck no lie.
this beat is so different. its crazy. crazy ass shit bro. 10/10.
i already wrote to this song. sickest beat alive no lie. im doing
this song
just wrote the the game. Good shit
illy
3.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 01.11.10
Battle me bitch
Catch Me
1.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 01.11.10
dissen my shit your shit sucks. bitch ill kill you in a battle and
audio dont try me lyrically cause your not on my level
8.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 07.29.09
diss me back, give it your best shot
dang bro, i actually like your verse mo then twisted good stuff
damn, the end was wierd, but the verse wuz sik as hell, try to go
on ma shit again, i want u to hear it, it can actually flow unlike
most on tha site
i added you on myspace, go check it, and check out my songs on my
page leave a comment, i checked out all yur shit, and it was pretty
good, and the diss is good to LOL
myspace.com/aftermathproductions561
you deffinitely brought the site back up admin good shit,,,but
wheres the love iv been featureless, and top ratedless ha its all
good
faggot
New Audio
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 07.06.09
thanks, for real,,,,and i made it where you can download them on
myspace does it work???, idk if it works,,,but mr. u i want that
hustle song too il throw it on a cd or some shit
Top Dawgs
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 07.05.09
nice shit, and ima check it out h.o
you guys have no organization, i cant be in a group that doesnt
know what the fucks going on, no beef or disrespect, but im just
not the right person
actually ur really bad
stole that off the internet plus u suck, and the prodigies are way
better than u so get off the site
hahahhahahahha i dissed him too, if you wanna check it out but dis
is amazing
Z@(h Dizz
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 07.03.09
hahhaha i dissed that fagg to, if u wanna check it out, good shit,
real good
like he said its clever and i laughed
same it flows good, espicailly with your actually recording talent,
i want u to post more, and i will come out with audio soon also,
but keep it up your one of my favs on the site
Classic
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 07.03.09
comment if you like it please????
History
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.22.09
tell me what u think
yea its a ten, nice vocab
pretty good, keep it up
wow u suck
i already and i dont really know what there talking about it all
goes for me good shit as always lol
i got a mac and record from it, comment my mom verse
dad redo
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.14.09
i respect the song but that comment "i cried like a bitch" stop
acting hard dawg, ur dad died ur suppose be sad, it will fuck u up
dawg
warmin up
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.14.09
longer next time but its good
13
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.14.09
one word wow really complex, amazing
comment if you know what i mean. admin if your reading this, i want
this to be right next to the prodigies one on featured
i think i know what your going through
yea more of the second part
thats amazing
its not complex but i still like it and its a 10. comment sea sick
i just posted it if u can
why is no1 commenting my new verse its fucking raw
i dont like either, my oppinion is im better than both, but if i
had to pick it would be twisted
Sea Sick
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 06.10.09
i like this verse comment if you like it, tell me if its good
enough for a verse, need your opinion. thanks
mr.hip hop won its no competition
a quick one not my best
What I See
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.20.09
realer than most its a ten nigga
a quick one i thought it was clever tell me if u think its good
A QUICK ONE, TELL ME WHAT U THINK AND READ HIS PUSSY DISSES AND
TELL ME WHO WON SO FAR
UMM IT HAS SOME NICE FLOW, I LIKED IT IT WAS PRETYY GOOD, COMMENT
MY SHIT TO, ITS THE VERSE THAT SAYS ZACH DISS, LIKE RIGHT UNDER
URS, JUST KEEP IT UP THOUGH
I HEARD BOUT DA HUGE BATTLE, CHECK OUT MY NEW DISS, JUST POSTED IT,
GOOD FLOW IM NOT ON ANY SIDE
want that
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.10.09
BEST LINES I HEARD FROM U, I KNOW THIS IS FROM WAY BEFORE BUT ITS
STILL MY FAV VERSE FROM U
i think this is joels, but if it is u have consistent flowing
rhymes, that i liked, which would flow way better than ur usual
raps in our songs, but its really good, keep writing,
Night Ride
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.10.09
its long, and its good, i like it, im looking forward to seeing
better vocab from u, but if u keep up the flow, ur shit will be
looking good, comment mine its called sharp right under u, then if
u want check out my diss on somefaggot named zack, just keep it up
and try to check out my shit
call my cell, and it sounds the same, but it depends how actual
spitting has improved
You...
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.10.09
NOT UR BEST, but its deffinatly good, keep it up, and u will be a
veteran on this site, lol that sounded homo but for real
look at my diss, its good i played bball all weekend, and im gettin
better, haha i beat mike, one time, and whooped coleman
SHARP
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.10.09
A quick one, comment and tell me if u like some of my lines, tell
me if i should use them in a real verse to spit, please comment??
i like it, not the best but its deffinatly good, that kid zach
really pissed me off, im bout to diss that bitch, and bye the way
im back
Neptune
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 05.10.09
he seems like a faggot who cares anyway, its a waste spend ur time
on writing bars for real lyrics instead of dissing some fag
ITS GOOD, but im gonna be real and tell u next time to increase ur
vocab, but keep it up
GOOD JOB, im glad u liked my total disaster lyrics too, keep it up,
im so ill
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 02.22.09
good "with a touch of bread ill be toasting" i like it
It was just for fun, no beef
mostly freestyled
almost a 32 i think
To Heiz
10.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 02.06.09
i dont care what these mother fuckers say, this shit is 10, damn
every1 is ruining heiz haha
i can read dis shit over and over if i had no life, jus kiddin bro,
i read it and its funny and straight up too
GOOD SHIT, MINES RITE UNDER UR SHIT ON NEWEST BARS
that kid did steal lines lol
thats good, you only do 2 verses?
respect for girls. but its horrible
shit sucks...prodigies are actually real..
Lil A Diss
9.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 12.22.08
NICE ITS STRAIGHT
THE ERA
5.00/10
posted by aft3rmath on 12.20.08
nigga thats whack...