lets settle this shit once and for all

its the face splitter/
heavy weight hitter/
venom spitter/
y...

Ha! eh yo...bob your heads to this one...time to take it back to my natural style of rhythm..CHECK IT

Verse 1: ...

bet the haterz wanted me gone for good huh?...well im sorry to disapoint you...but Anthrax is back...CHECK IT

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im guessin you suicidal... you in for it now...

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It was a mistake provoking the paki emcee/
You...

No hocus pocus just some lead vocals/
Wrap round your head and choke cold local yocals/
And I love giving the an...

respect to my man phenom,profound,
check me out

my words are crystal clear/
deep intensified trance in...

aiyo banger lets get it poppin i want you to understand me/
dont talk to me about AkS im fuckin half pakistani/
...

Theres no voice inside you that shadow isnt moving/
You must be losing to confusion having illusions/
Theres no ...

shout out to my man,profound,mdesanto, repp to the fullest

CHECK IT
I stretch to go the distance yo my lung...

aiyo puttin yall on notice check me out:

Agatha Christie cars named Christine/
Hard to deal with agin when ...

(start at 11 seconds)

An automatic systematic rhythmatic sound/
If you aint with the program you gotta get ...

I come like the living death straight from the dirt/
Back to avenge his own death on this earth/
Tone deaf rhyme...

My vocal cords break the laws that apply to nature/
Low and these niggas love to hate ya/
A ground attack Im bou...

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To delight I sit back and write a rhyme like this one/
Relax grab the buddah and proceed to twist one...

Im tryin to be as bleak with my speech as possible/
Just in case a nigga tryin to throw me an obstacle/
I make y...

turned out pretty sicknasty.

im done

waiting for that fuckin comeback

clip lines made the flow cleaner i think you neded to work on the deliveries abit better overall my fav wuz the freddy kreuger and killing niggas in they drams wuz tight

im feelin the wordplay its kool easy ten (i wouldnt compare it too slim shady though)

some of the best work ive read so far... your flow syncswith the beat so perfectly and i like the pauses really nice delivery overall this is awsome

i love the vocab really good delivery you had some nice punches in there over all this a def a ten

suck on horse dick and DIE you muthufucka this is CHECKMATE by JADAKISS and all you ppl who didnt know that GET THE FUCK OUT AND LISTEN TO SOME REAL FUCKIN MUSIK>>>FUCK LIL WAYNE MAN

im goanna say its your best this is a 12 right here

the beggining three lines had me caught and then the rest had me bobbing my head

i liked it "shedding tears like bullets and shells bells of churches in my ears after i spill my own blood cells " that was my fav part i think you should work on your vocab a bit and you could be amazing

i love the flow

speachless dawg this shit insane

sick man i always love bars from you

thx bludie appreciate it

FUCK YEAH THIS IS FUCKIN DEVISTATIN!!!!!

thx alot joka it means alot cuz

haha thx....i think cobra surpassed me on this one though

OH SHIT! dudei would love to see like the whole version of this....i think this shit is amazing for something that short man...WOW

fuckin thx man appreiciate it

i won!

i think i won the voting proccess thanks to all yall much luv

i say hmmmmmm ME!!

shit thx man

hahaha loove the ending

kool thx

haha you wrecked him dawg!

thx bro

hahaha lol thx

thx bro

you gave it a 5 lol its kool thx bro

thx appreciate it

i appreciate it man

i vote.......ME

SICK LOVE IT!!

haha luv the ending

HA! eazy E thats funny thanks bro