NICE! can tell you worked super hard on this one! send me audio! lol

yea dude! dope shiz! you got a hot flow man. im jealous lol.

pretty good dude. love the lyrics and how you talk real. i always respect those trying to speak the truth. but uh... some sound like first takes. cuz they sound forced at times know what i mean? like your trying too hard to keep the beat. and "why" sounds like the best produced track you have on myspace, but love the beat for Better than me. but good stuff nonetheless. keep it up!

funny shit lol loved it

naw you sound like a brit to me lol. very off beat kinda flow i like it tho. and ya got a good tone of voice. if you get a better mic, youll prolly sound real pro.

dam man good stuff! glad to see ya posting again thought u were out 4 good! and i love the beat btw

i unno i want to forgive but right now i dont think i can be cool with him. we had a big message exchange on myspace about how hes getting his name out there and he gave me this whole (apparently bs) story about how he was becoming known throughout memphis, playing at shows, selling his mixtapes on the streets, finally getting a decent income from his music, how he liked the support he was getting from this site as an artist, and reminded me that i thought his stuff was mostly filler lyrics when he first came on, and i agreed that in REAL LIFE he was actually quite ahead of the curb.... well screw all that now i guess. i even tried to give him more tips on how he could maybe get his name out there more.... yea... jus a little pissed off at this time.

nice stuff dude! like the intellect while keepin it hood thing you got goin on. it works

whens the next contest? totally want to try it out this time.

Mr. Untouchable or Sicknosis. both were good. i didnt really know venom but super fresh left?........ eh who cares lol.

ha! good stuff dude. its real, its funny, great job lol

wow thanks for being blunt about it GOD! yea i unno i was trying to flucuate my voice a bit... dont think it works for me. lol

whoa whoa whoa... can someone please tell me what the fuck happened? im confused

its good, but once again the volume levels bother me lol. your voice gets really soft as the last verse goes on, then the refrain comes in like BAM! its just distracting me from enjoying the song is all. do you have anything to mess around with the levels for individual recordings? if not, you could give me the acapella and the beat separate, and id do it for you! lol. didnt take you for a singer though, so thats pretty cool lol.

10 10 10 all the way. lovin it dude. you get better? lol

good story... just feel like it could be written better for some reason... but i dont know how your hearing it in your head so i dont really know, but lyrically its eh..

aw dam i missed it? wtf?! message me the link when you repost it! lol

breezy likes anime porn! lol! i thought tokios was better... liked his metaphors more i guess. breezy, I couldnt find the tempo either. I guess he must rhyme REALLY fast or something lol.

hahahahaha nice. like the snapple line the most.

everything b4 mainstream was brilliant! then it was eh

dam dude that sucks big giant dick. guess your not friends anymore huh?

love it! the other one was aight tho.

yea good stuff, but eh, i need to decline. trying to do recording stuff now too so, yea.

yea my crew is called my dick, and you can suck it! lmao! OH SNAP! jk jk. im not on enough anyway dude. i dont care enough about the site anymore to join a crew lol. that shit was dumb. i dont like disses. im just into writing my real shit.

like your stuff dude. keep it up!

true talk. love it.

i unno... exquistes diss was all about fresh being gay and getting raped... he had those two good points though that i think made it good. but lyricalwise, sorry to say ive seen much MUCH better from him before, and I think fresh brought the same good amount he always brings. thats my take though.

im just above and beyond your comprehension sicknosis lol. its ok tho. so wait im confused... did all of SK join messiahs? whats up with that? they hated each other, broke up, and all joined the same group again? lol

Ayo hip hop! u prolly wont read this, but in the last verse, i took the "phoenix" and "steady flow" things right from one of twisteds recent rhymes. and i thought the similar sounds between "CHARIZARD" and "ORANGE" (if pronounced "arenge") was pretty cool too. thats my defense for the last verse. said my part lol

wow that was quite possibly the worst reasoning ive ever heard lol. so if i wrote a couple more verses and didnt write about pokemon (this is the first time i used it this much) i may have won? stupid democracy... this is why we have electorates lol

wow... great battle right here!... should be featured in a minute lol

aight i sent it in.

i didnt? i just emailed him from my work telling him my hard drive fried and i couldnt write anything at work (duh) so i unno... if i had known someone could take my spot i woulda done that.

yeeeeeeeaaaa gas mask is in!

yea glover went harder. no joke. seems like sick knows it now too lol.

SK: RoughRida, Grime Mc (and Grimey), Twisted , Kid Exquizite , & Critical Beats .... AFFILIATES: Gudsen17 , Poet Delirious, & Nditullio01. Parasites: Glover, Tokio Thunderbyrd, Kylootheclown, CDS, Fresh. and youve heard the others. so check em out and decide for yourself.

see... this is why i wanted a different name... too easy to diss with wordplay lol. but it wasnt my decision, and lo and behold u exploited it really well for something written in a short time lol. if you want a battle i think i can arrange it... after the weekend when im not doing anything but working haha.

haha i was bout to say... he doesnt look like a computer person lol. u never know though I guess... anyway... CAPTCHAS?!?!?

wow is right... lol... dude its real basic. most of it just sounded like bs. turned on the wrong light? that didnt even make sense. and punching people in the arm? is that even threatening? why not in the neck? the one decent line you had was the beast...christmas feast line.

yea it did! but the other stuff I left a comment for you on that already on your other post.

the search engine works, but looks weird when you type anything in it. it overlaps everything else, or is hidden under it. and the add a crew page doesnt work. i know ur only in the process, but i just wanted to make sure you knew in case you thought those were completed.

i like the penis lmao!

first two verses had one killer bar each, then that last verse was great. btw im turning 21 this month, so your assumption is completely wrong lol.

many differing views lol. good stuff though. realness always appreciated.

lol the last word didnt rhyme, but it was good no doubt. the flow seemed off at times cuz of the syllables in the words you used, but you rhyme quick so it prolly made sense in your mind. and rida, 1st of they rhymed in "ality" and it was great, and second, id like to be cool, but i also think you can do better.

tru tru... i havnt even started dissing yet lol. im taking a break from the real shit though. i had major writers block trying to do more of it this week, and even thought bout quitting this altogether cuz i thought i had lost it. writing for fun and doing disses and stuff is actually helping I think though, to be honest. i was convinced for a few days that I had completely lost my mad skillz (lol) altogether, then i wrote the new Headrush and it all came back lol. but yea, im not taking this seriously are you kidding? NK want to blow us away, China will prolly end up imploding in the next couple years, America is still shit even with Obama in the white house, and you expect me to care about a bunch of kids who prolly younger than I am beefing over the internet? aint forgot what im about buddy. peace. PS cant speak for the others though... seems like theyre really upset.

two of your verses had 5 lines instead of 4 lol. that auditioned line didnt make sense either. had some good diss lines though. not bad. not great either.

exquisite was the best, really good stuff, but everyone elses was just aight. but no doubt youve all had some pretty tuff times out there, so much respect. and most of you found god? really? thats actually pretty cool, cuz Im pretty spiritual but not like, religious or anything.

the old kings deeeeeeead and gooone... deeead and gooone... yeaee yeaee. oh and yea you did grime, i saw it. you were commenting somewhere on one of realeyez rhymes when you said it.

the website made its own sn? weird...

Wow... I think thats a... tie?!?! amazing...

first two verses were good. the first had a great flow and last punchline, and the second had great lyrics. then it kinda fell off from there... work on it a bit

yea it was eh... try and be more clever with the punchlines. for example, instead of using cold as a block of ice (which is quite obvious) why not cold as a Mother Teresa joke? cold as frostbitten lips? cold as Jack frost? gotta paint a picture for the reader. use more wordplay or more descriptions. that should help. think dynamically and more abstract... like how you do when your high lol

dam this stuff is getting ugly! lol

oh wait... thats right... LKs already dead though lol... been dead for awhile.

good stuff. i lost the flow in the middle of the second verse though... i thought that was weird. it was the part about comments. didnt seem right.

ok... tokio has a different thinking of what a line is... what fresh just did seems right to me. thats the way most other ppl on the internet think too. tokio, u jus confused the hell outta me with ur definition of a line and bar lol. i think a bar is two lines, like fresh said. ur saying its the other way around?

diggin it... diggin it. love to see what you make of it

im actually bobbing my head right now. no joke. real real real real real real stuff right here. ADMIN YOU SHOULD FEATURE THIS IF YOU SEE IT! its something everyone needs to see. as someone who has wrote something like this (autism), i cant imagine how hard it was emotionally to write this. i was sooo emotionally drained after my autism rhyme i felt numb. keep on keepin on. its all you can ever do.

jess got it. better lyrically in my opinion

yawn... nothing to say... its been done too much before dude. read some of the rhymes that have gotten 10s and learn from how they all write, and what they write about. need to work on adding more wordplay and stuff into ur rhymes.

loved the flow, reminded me of wutang or something. but the topics were bland... u made it seem TOO much like wutang.

hahaha liked the rhyme as well as the speech. truth from the mouths of prophets. thats what ive been saying all along lol.

yea i liked the darkness... good stuff

yea true, good lines, didnt follow the flow though. it didnt seem to work out when i tried to speak it is all.

yea that last verse killed it. i lied lol

it was good, but you should see the rhyme im workin on when i post it. its about the same topic, but with a different perspective. u need to stop that shit dude. shit doesnt only fuck you up, but everyone around you and everyone it took for you to finally smoke it/snort it. Mexican babies dying down south dude, thats all im saying. know where the shit comes from.

yea it was good but manes right bro. ur always pretty hot with the lyrics in all honestly, so why u need others approval? dont sweat it. excited for the album tho! jus dont go astray. be more aware of whats going on around u

lol nice. good stuff

ha! i thought u jus forgot about it that seemed so long ago lol

nice. u training for the army? thats awesome dude! good luck with that.

dam. hard, nice vocab, great structure and flow... cant argue with that lol hope to see more from you. good stuff right here. total mindfuck

dam, cant wait for this site to have a discussion board eventually! lol

exquizite, im really diggin your stuff. real issues, and real talk, all day. good shit every time.

i didnt get most of ur references im sorry to say... whats the Niburu and the Elohim? but other than that, great vocab, i think we write the same way and think alike, but with different flows.

yo nice stuff dude. keepin it real, thats what i like

if you were asking for help on wtf is goin on... i have no idea... cept that all the crews were reppin and dissin each other for awhile, and grimemc made a fake loose kannon sn and started posting as a gay version of them, which was actually really funny for a bit lol. thats all i know though. wasnt really paying attention to all that.

ha true stuff dude. feel the same way bout my girl. two years dude...

did mine! check it. hope theres still time though lol never said when or if the contest ended lol

dam dude ripped to pieces... lol... wait a minute... I LOVE R&B!!! dont be dissin my Alicia Keys and Corinne albums now...

NICE USE OF LANGUAGE BUD! much more thought out than most and vocabulary is siiiick!

true that a2k. hip hop culture is also much more. thats a different story though, like another few paragraphs lol. this is just about rap music, and i try to explain that it shouldnt be just about the music, or the message, but the thoughts and stories of normal people (and hopefully in the future more of a good mix of people).

yea i liked the ending too lol. SIR! funny stuff... pretty good diss though too

ok... but you dont know the back story cuz you new here... thats actually grimemc posting as the loose kannons crew to make them SEEM gay to diss em lol.

YAY! MAYBE ILL WIN!!! LOL

yo, lemme know when and if you get my Nursery Rhyme entry.

wait... what?!?! no ur not! its spelled a/c/l/m/i/n/ ur just a fag who wants attention... it even says you joined today lol

you think this a joke son? THIS IS MUTHAFUCKIN LIFE!!! jk i gotcha... but just lettin you know i heard that in order to get better you need to be writing something... anything really.. everyday. whether it be rhymes, stories, a book, journal entries, whatev. keep that in mind.

aw cmon dude... too hard. cant decide... i think pop wise, run dmc, notorious BIG, sugar hill gang, tribe, etc. def have an edge over most of the new pop guys... but other than that theres still GREAT underground rappers, constantly improving and switching up hip hop. ur being WAY too broad with that dude lol.

??? did you rap in it? if your trying to do mash ups, then listen to Girl Talk, hes amazing at it, and making dough from what he used to do on his imac lol. Girl Talk is something like you should be aiming for. there are lots of other mash up artists out there, but hes prolly the most famous. at least around here.

didnt i vote on this already? TWISTED!!!!

i like the flow, like the quality, and ray is right on all accounts, but why do most the people on here whisper like the ying yang twins? twisted is prolly the only one ive noticed with tracks who doesnt do that. you, tokio, roughrida, grime, mr. hip hop, all now have tracks like that. gotta pump it up for me sometime guys... something a lil more INTENSE!! not saying ur all bad, just saying have more confidence in your voices and switch it up, turn it up a bit.

hahaha good stuff.

Actually was called Charmander in high school, and i speak alot of truth, so yea lol. i guess you brought pokemon back into my mind though, if that makes you feel better.

nice dude. u see those numbers though? u cant use some symbols yet when you type cuz they may not work. thats all that was wrong though lol.

love the flow, love the lyrics, the vocab, etc. great stuff dude.

yea i got that lol. good lines. pretty much all of em. that 2012 shit is scary though dude... dont remind me. it just looks like it could be anything at this point: global warming or massive climate/ nuclear war with NK, or Iran, or Russia, or China, or India, etc/ edgar casey = the earth shifting its axis!?! DAMMIT WHY DID YOU REMIND ME BOUT THIS SHIT!!!! WERE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!!!!

siiiiiiiiiiick. nice stuff and well thought out. i like it.

pretty good. not bad at all

it was good i like ur real life shit. thats what im all about. but yea, instead of using caps and / to space apart lines, why not just use the enter key? is it broken? lol

liked the sleeper line and the apron one lol. not my style though so i wouldnt steal it lol. havnt heard problems of ppl stealing rhymes, unless it was to repost them. ppl on here even make fun of others for reusing shit, so i dont think ull have a problem. most on here pretty straight

jedi mind tricks resides there. schooly D, the first accredited gangsta rapper, from philly. DJs Jazzy Jeff, Cash Money, and Spinbad all from there too. there are a bunch from philly dude. apparently, philly may have started urban graffiti too. they are also home to one of the best high school level spoken word teams in the country (check out Brave New Voices). I go to college there, so I know some some lol. probably have more love for philly than NJ actually.

lol nice stuff.

dam nice lines dude. keep it comin! im tellin you dude, you gotta stay on, i cant stand all this horrible, boring dissin bull lol

i think you had some really good lines, good rhyming and stayed on theme but the flow seemed awkward. seems like u rushed it a lil. it didnt come together at times you know? i dont know how else to explain sry...

nah i got that wolverine line tokio lmao. good stuff. very amusing. takes me back...

life. for me, its about life. my experiences, and my interests. its that simple.

THANK YOU! GOD DAM! ive been waiting for a post like this all day lol. ill check em out once im outta work.

i like tea..... does that make me British? lol

yea... it was eh... confused a lil cuz i couldnt get what u were trying to say. seems like you rushed it a lil. take some more time with it and yea, rhyme a bit more.

AMERICA!!! FUCK YEA!!!! are there any good rapprs from the UK anyway? and who are they? lol! gimme some names so i can check em out! and dont say MIA, she had one great gangsta song and everyone thinks she raps now lmao

gotcha. ill condsider it now that ive got money comin in.

tru dude. those underground artists seem to be doin well enough though, like immortal technique, jedi mind tricks, killah priest, AZ, etc. and all the alternative rap comin out now like asher roth, the cool kids and shwazee (sp?). its there, gotta just look for it.

dam dude, harder and realer than anything else ive read on here... stay up!

oh well... why not rap about ur learning disability instead of killing ppl and making us feel bad? rap about what you know and what ur about, not what the other rappers from the ghetto say or do. thats how they live and their lifestyle, make urs known.

LMAO! dont worry im laughing at you. seriously, /YEA CANADA HARD AS SHIT MANG!/ are you joking me? you need punchlines. all that was just you busting caps and kicking ass. i dont care about that! say something creative and interesting next time.

short and nice, just like the one i jus made lol

LMAO! duets are so sweet! both have a similar style too.

yea true dat rida... u should shoot the bitch at the end tho! lmao! but do whatev u were planning. very creative i like it!

hahaha nice very creative.

true thats what i thought too, twisteds was just slightly better than roughridas, but if the contest was supposed to be only 16 bars (i didnt look at the rules) then id go with rida. grime, it was clever, but kinda lame, especially since i dont know of any famous rappers from across the pond, lol. u shoulda been trying alot harder to prove to us there are, cuz honestly im sure 99% of the peeps on here know 0 rappers from there.

so real i can touch it lol. no homo!

hahaha niiiiiiiiiiiiice.

u dont need to be on every dam day lol. u can take a week off every once in awhile. we got lives... u know? or do we? lol

true stuf dude. if ur gettin tired of her like that, shes probably not for you. ive seen some like that who stay together and get over it, and some that had been bickering like that for a REAL long time and one finally got fed up. u gotta ask which are you and how much more you take.

yo thx for the free download. but i used be a sound guy in high school, and listen to your track again and see if you notice u and ur friends voices are louder than the awesome refrain you have goin there. i dont know much about recording, but if you can, but if its as simple as I think it is, all you would need to do is backtrack and turn ur mic volumes down. other than that, it sounds really pro.

OK THATS WHAT IM TALKIN BOUT!!! THATS the stuff i love to see! love have you brought it together roughrida! u rap well in your own way, and i rap mine, so dont go lookin more often for MY recognition, cuz we just have different tastes obviously. but this was true stuff, and thats what i like.

yea uve def gotten better. still dont care for the whole staying strapped thing and modern rap cliches you keep goin back to. im usually much more impressed when someone can stay off that and still kill it. but u did have some good punchlines, so i cant complain.

really good stuff dude. especially if ur buddy raps the same way, like with a gangsta/drug theme.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA LMAO!! shit is funny! yea this rating shit is gay. whatevs man.

in my opinion, if ur on alot, posting alot of decent stuff and commenting on others stuff, and have seen the wackest writers come and go... then you can consider yourself a vet. the first week i was on here, my stuf was pretty week. now ive gotten much better and more respected than before, and therefore I consider myself vet. this site is also REALLY new to the scene if you havent noticed, so if no one even agrees with me, ur bound to be one sometime lol. oh and how the hell do you look at the top 30? lol

haha funny stuff. nice. u got some talent dude.

yea i already commented on creezys, i think its too close to call. id like to see more. if i absolutely had to choose though id have to choose roughrida

it was aight. liked the first verse, the second fell off though. i think you 2 are about even so far.

pretty nice. not into the whole gangsta thing, but this was actually pretty good. reminded me of Jedi Mind Tricks.

dam CHICAGO UP IN HERE!!! that was tight man. and it was real, so real i could touch it. tru stuff right here. im white dude, but gotta respect afrocentricity. if only more people focused on that and not on the culture they have been force fed, rap would be much more pleasant to listen to.

i dont say it cuz its just not right to me, but im not gonna get involved in the argument. but the line bout gettin fucked in the ass by ur buddy and the ending killed him lol

VERY NICE!!! u def have potential dude!

LMAO ur verses are like, 3 4 lines? ur refrain is longer than ur verses! and theyre positively horrible! this isnt a site for soulja boys and the like, dude. u dont know how to make a song, u dont use punchlines (or any kind of literal fling for that matter), and you have absolutely nothing to say. and yea, you should be laughing, its funny you think that this bs is even worth posting! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! but seriously, i dont think ur being serious. if you looked at anyone elses stuff you would know this isnt up to par. and if ur being serious, i feel bad for you.

yea that one line was cool (stair) but glover is right, its primarily garbage.

oh and that Title is Too Long stuff must go as well. it doesnt make any sense why thats even necessary. My titles are always too long because its three words lol. i dont think when you look at something u HAVE to rate it is fair though. and yea how does that payment thing work? is it an investment? if you get more ppl to the site and are able to pay it back will u? can it be like microlending? lol

yo dude change ur profile pic plz. i keep confusing you with realeyez, and he had it first so it seems like you stole it from him so... yea its buggin me sry to bother you. im not getting involved in this stuff.

ha i was right i guess... no one cares apparently... cept the new guy who probably didnt read it

lemme see you write more first. this is kinda mediocre, so show me something. also, if you can go back and change the rating and actually read the rhyme first and actually comment on it... that would be nice. lol

DAM DUDE!!! SHIT IS TIGHT!!! but prodigies is right, DOA dude, but hey, i heard an interview with Jay Z on HOT 97, and hes right ur only in high school right? so u gotta get that money first before you can do anything meaningful. jus dont let it change you dude, and personally, i give much more respect to artists like jay z who dont use autotune and let us hear every fluctuation in his flow, and still spit sick lyrics. keep that in mind as you release that mixtape.

yea a lil too fast for my taste. i cant understand all of it with the accent lol but yea, it was ok from what i heard. not your best lyrics sounded like a freestyle. the quality was great though! fo sho.

hellz yea dude. that stuff happens all the time... esp at college where that mentality to drink til you puke is everywhere... true stuff...

great stuff you 2. confused about the ending. so glover dies and you hide him in a housing project? other than that, powerful stuff. its fun acting insane... much more of a chance to be creative

better sell those jordons and get a poetry book my friend... cuz i dont care about a word you just said. hey that rhymed! cool! anyway... yea focus a lil more dude, otherwise, everyone will jus pass over your rhymes and not even read em.

yea short and sweet dude. thats the way to go. great lyrics

great stuff dude. seems like everyone wants to use bigger words since me and realeyez came along lol. the flow is really good tho

get what your saying dude, but its all over the place and really confusing. ur trying to say ur fed up with the way hip hop is, but some lines go way off track just to rhyme, like the parts where u talk about rhyming and poetry. i have a feeling ur trying to say what ive been sayin, but in a more disoriented and condfusing way. read my We Can Rebuild if you wanna get a good take on this issue, its probably the best ive ever written. also, try to get more creative. u have the message down, u just need to make it fun and interesting to read, with punchlines and similies and stuff someone else wouldnt even think of.

i just wanna see captcha gone if u can lol. def keep the posting lyrics though, cuz on letsbeef sometimes the recordings are really shitty quality and you cant hear if theyre good or not. reading through a persons lyrics lets u know if u wanna hear from them at all.

i def like the beat and the refrain... cant hear what hes saying to well tho can only catch half of it lol. apparently, whoever it is likes halo . i wanna rep this on youtube too once i get a decent mic... i dont wanna sound like those chumps on letsbeef when i spit, with either a beat thats too low or too high and ruins the song lol

some true stuff guys. very nice. thats how my uncle was to my family.

HOUSE OF THE RISING SUN! lol. gotta finish it b4 i can really rate it. excited tho.

dam dude! totally finish that shit! gotta keep it real for it to be good. thats what everyone keeps telling me, and this is a great example of that.

pretty nice dude. u def have potential

pretty good dude loved that last line, but you need some more impressive stuff in the middle. liked that you stayed on track tho

Me and realeyez

yea that was real nice dude. great flow and big words, the way I like to write too lol

hahahaha followed that whole beef dude! sry grimey, glover destroyed you, and the loose kannons gotcha bro!

yea it was straight. alot of ppl on here would get what ur saying most are looking for an alternative to the bull rappers are spittin these days. thats why were all making our own lol. if u like public enemy, go check out Chuck Ds show on the REAL News Network. hes the only REAL rapper getting airtime on this issue it seems like.

wow guys that was... alright... lol jk it was awesome. me and realeyez working something too. gonna be fantastic.

realeyez. lyrik doesnt know who ray is and shouldnt be talkin like that, but hes got a point. realeyez brought it together better I think too. great battle though guys.

ILL DO IT!!!

tomorrow dude? me and realeyez workin something, but its through emails dude! give us a week! i dont do this for a living!

hahaha it was funny to say the least lol.

i liked the chuck e. cheese token line. THAT was creative. and i used to watch DBZ all the time too lol. but i think you should look at some other peoples stuff to improve your own before you write anymore for now. jus seems like you dont understand how this whole rap thing works. u def have a different style though, quirky emo white kid ish lol.

1. im white. ill say it right now. HEY EVERYONE IM WHITE. i dont care. 2. wtf was that? that wasnt very good dude, sry to say. respect for being truthful, but seriously, not very much creativity. and u jus dissed urself off the charts lol.

dam thats some real stuff dude. loved it. u write so much i cant read it all though lol.

yea i def like twisted more. spinna, no doubt yours was great too, i just like the realness of twisteds

yea hip hops was better, its hard talking bout my neck of woods. all we do is drink or go to the movies or out to eat. ive had more fun times in philly actually now that i think about it lol. good job hip hop

aw... i liked my virgin line lol

i liked grimemcs stuff more.

a tru dragon of truth dude... jus spittin the flaming truth. straight fire.

dam... this one is hard... i think spinna won though with a very slight edge in creativity and punchlines. no doubt headbustas was great though.

i unno they both seemed a lil lacking in something, but i couldnt tell you what. cobras was def better though by far.

yea i think da vivus won it. heiz had alot more words, but less unique content i think is what it was. sry heiz.

rays got it. no doubt.

sry dante, i go to college in philly and every single thing u said about it is true lol. philly is a great city. much respect.

yea this is a toughy... but im gonna have to go with grimemc on this one, so sorry glover. grimemc was just a lil more clever i think. haha jus read dantes we think alike.

yea realeyez won it, no doubt. syper just sounded too out of control. gotta keep a cooler head dude.

no prob dude thx for taking it like a man too. some guys just lash out at me for telling it like i think it is. ill check it out.

i really think u have potential man, but read over this again. its all over the place. gotta make something more coherent before ppl can start respecting you. like i get what you are trying to do, but i think ur rushing it. try and switch up the flow, make ur couplets longer so u can add more words=info in your rhymes. jus a thought. then u can really rep jersey.

GREAT STUFF! teddy wasnt pres in the 40s and in a wheelchair though, I think you mean franklin d. roosevelt lol. teddy was the funny looking guy who stopped trusts and monopolies from forming, and loved hunting and nature. im a history buff so... yea lol. we should do a collab on a history rhyme like this sometime dude! thad be sweet.

hahaha yea pretty good guys. seemed forced a lil bit is all, like you were trying too hard to make it rhyme at some points. GREAT story telling tho lol.

yea... good shit. i think i saw at least some of what grime wrote somewhere else though, that would be my only complaint lol.

very very nice dude. i think we rhyme alike for some reason its kinda weird. maybe just cuz we use big words and lots of rhymes lol.

wow totally blew my mind. everyones got some kind of hardship in their life. u def overcame yours. no doubt. oh, and this one is free... u dont have to look at any of my shit. im not like these other clowns lol!

yea the first half was more hoppin. still good tho

sooo many good lines in this one dude. who the hell is ur team tho? lol specify plz

yea pretty good shit. check out REAL NEWS NETWORK online, its a different outlook on the media as well as the world, i think ud like it. i do! lol

yea... it aight... not great but yea seems like u rushed it a lil.

dont even bother with him dude, i just ignored him after he wanted to start his own contest and rate it himself lol

it was aight, and ur right i do comment more than rhyme. ill explain: i come on here planning on writing, look at what other ppl have done, and end up almost every time trying to help out everyone else who sucks, which is usually alot. i dont post anything unless i like it on paper first, and i like writing ideas down on paper more anyway. here, ill show you...

yea? fine. go to ur own beaches then...wait... oh thats right! u go to Jersey for that lol. not hatin on the rhyme or on you, jus gotta rep my jersey. DIRTY JERZ! WE DEVOUR YOUR WORDS! DESTROY OPPOSITION LIKE HUSSEIN DID KURDS! THE WHOLE STATE CONCURS! DIRTY JERZ!

dam dude... much harder than my life at 16!!! kicked out by ur mom? just for drinking? wtf is that shit? that sounds very illogical to me. glad to hear ur gonna stick with it tho. but uh... smokin weed and drinkin wont do shit 4 u. gotta get urself out that rut first before u start makin ur life better. oh and one more thing: FUCK JMURRAY INCONSIDERATE LIL BITCH!!!! ok im done lol

omg!!!!! so many problems with this!!!! .1. u had one good punch, the "fine china" half/a/line. .2. READING UR OPPONENTS LYRICS AND TAKING IT APART PIECE BY PIECE IS THE ENTIRE MUTHAFUCKIN POINT!!! IF U DONT UNDERSTAND THAT UVE NEVER BEEN IN OR EVEN SEEN A RAP BATTLE!!! r u retarded? how r u supposed to win if u can make the other guy look bad? isnt that the whole point of a battle? to listen to the other guy, and spin his words back on him to make him look foolish? this beef is getting kinda out of hand, no doubt, but u cant come back at like 5 other ppl or whoever uve pissed off with this stuff... its embarrassing...

pretty nice. not bad.... wait who r u again tho? u come on here and the first thing u do is diss the first person u see? lol that hilarious!

hip hop is u not having a job, not getting money, and sitting on ur ass all day? sry dude thats just not what hip hop is to me, so i have to disagree with that. otherwise, it was aight

LMAO dude, hilarious! sounds like ur on acid at the same time tho lol

if u actually did that in 5, props to u. im jus sayin, it seems unlikely, but ur the only one who knows the answer to that so jus keep bein honest. alot of fake ppl abuse the fact that we cant see what their doin on the other side, so jus be real. im gonna believe u 4 now tho cuz i liked it.

alot of it was jus filler bs. but yea u had some good parts. the last verse, the RAW line, tissue line, and i guess halfway thru when it got steadily better cuz u stayed on the haunted theme, were all good parts.

that had better be something u said into a mic freestylin and not something u wrote down, cuz if its something u had time to think on it jus wasn that good. u didnt do anything with it. and it was too short to really be impressive, sry to say. loose kannons and others have made much better collabs. check out some others stuff to see what i mean.

nice nice feelin it.

awesome punch lines dude. stay up!

yea... ok... u? sure...

im not sayin im wu. im not wu. im jus me. wtf are you even talking about? did u even read it? and who the hell do you think you are telling me to listen? obviously you didnt read it cuz u didnt even say anything bout it. and i wont bring myself to diss someone who I have no idea about cuz he doesnt have the balls to even make a screename and let his rhymes be known and let ppl know who he is and what hes done before. and btw, u have a line in there that is just 3 curse words in a row. "cunt dick shit" that doesnt even make any sense. im here to stay, wack rappers like you (whoever the hell you are) need me to keep teaching.

Aight because your only 13 and ur rap rhymes well and u have great imagery and similes and shit im giving you a 9. but no offense, Lancaster PA is not a place where you have to be worried bout shooting ppl. and, your only 13, so u shouldnt have a gun in your hands anyway unless its a BB gun lol. Read my Wu Tang if u wanna. The of it is: RAP ABOUT WHAT U KNOW. its THAT simple. I also think u have a whole lotta potential if ur so young, so jus keep learning as you go along in life. most of the ppl on here are past their prime (probably including me) but u have SOOO much time to improve yourself even more. stay up and keep your mind open dude. peace.

OoOoOoO!!! someone hates gay rights obviously... lol. even if he WAS gay, id still back breezys stuff over yours dude. gotta come up with punchlines man, like "ur rhymes so lame, they should be in special olympics." that was just a quickie, but if u spend time on it, ull get better. not hatin just sayin

nice dude. thats what i been tellin these youngins man. but they dont wanna learn. they jus wanna do do do until they get themselves into some bad habits.

aight first off... dont ask for help unless you want some fuckin help. 2nd of all, it got lazy and boring cuz u talked about gettin rich, fuckin hoes, and smokin blunts, and on top of it mixed it in with potentially good lines. ex: "i got more strips then a tiger...i feel like somking this blunt... someone pass me a ligter." WTF DO U MEAN? ARE U IN THE ARMY? add a line after that, that instead talks about tigers or having stripes or whatever. do you see what im saying? it was all over the place dude. and a couple people actually appreciate some of my bad comments cuz it lets them know where theyre headed in the wrong direction. im jus tryin to be honest dude... if you cant respect that, if you dont want my advice, then ill jus get the fuck out of ur way and u can keep gettin sycophant comments from ppl who jus want u 2 rate their shit. i take my time with this criticism FOR YOUR SAKE. think on it. peace.

jus did check it.

yea ok... well... i think you lost it after "practice." it was good up until that point, where it seems like u got lazy or rushed to finish it. the lines u throw down after that are all REALLY mediocre and boring. try and write something fresh dude. THAT is what will get u respected and noticed on here.

yea it was good dude. definitely unique. very creepy stuff

that was actually better than that diss u jus wrote lol. maybe u should jus not think too hard on it? i unno...

really good stuff dude.

wow dude. jus wow. its amazing. ur really really really good. no joke. ur like a blessing that came down from heaven compared to 90 percent of these other guys. i really hope to see more from you in the future. seriously think about recording some of this stuff. u stay on track, have great lyrics, put me in the moment there with you, and have a point to make. reminds me of robert frost or something. keep em coming dude, cuz u def have it.

roughrida doesnt know how to use the rating system. prolly didnt even look at ur shit. but I did and its really good stuff. my girl says the same about me, even though she was the one who cried in a situation similar lol. shes been through alot more than I have, and it seems like this guys the same. i just recently started talkin to my girl bout my past and its been almost 2 years, so u jus gotta wait on it. and about the rhyme? it stayed on track, pulled me into the picture, and left me feeling something. so good work lol. PS he lucky to have that body lol jus sayin

ok ok... gettin better, but dont think ive forgotten bout those older verses. im still unsure bout u so far, but like i said, i think ur improving.

tru dat man. good stuff. no doubt.

/Smashing you like a fat chicks lost chex mix, Youre lyrics are as simple as a teenage girls text is, And Im the opposite of simple, Even ejaculate complex jizz,/ LMFAO!!! fat chicks and chex mix!?! who the fuck thinks of that shit?!? also liked the bouncin a check line alot.

yea... id say u 2 are on the same level...... and thats not a compliment. check out the comments i left him... im tired of saying the same shit over and over again.

yea that syrup is def gettin to you... /open my mouth and just spit just like a baby thats throwin a fit/ yes, u definitely DO just spit. the shit is just flowing out like ur ass is Niagra dude. see? aint that shit funny? its a simile. and u need to improve em and use em more often dude. ull see when glover hands u ur ass. nice knowing u...

yes! someone who actually wants feedback! mines usu never good though, esp to newbs, sry dude. i would say stay on track. i wouldve given it a 5 if u had stayed on the point of ur bro being in iraq, but i can see why u decided not to add the second half cuz u seemed to aim it at urself. it seemed REALLY selfish of you to do that in the middle of a rhyme like that. also, use some more technique dude. i wanna see metaphors, similes, allusions, etc. that stuff u learned in english class. anyone can rhyme, but it takes a lil more to be a rapper.

eh... it was less than decent. listen dude, that shit you hear on the radio? its exactly that. shit. u look like me. a scrawny white dude who shouldnt be talking like some ignorant gangsta who knows words and never went to an english class in his life. the point is to rise above all that my man, and learn something in life to make u better at whatever u want to do. u beefing with glover? read his past shit and ull see what makes a good diss and good lyricist.

ELITE YOU A DUMBASS LIL BITCH!!!!! YOU WORRIED ABOUT UR STUPID DISS AND ONLINE MUTHAFUCKIN BEEF WITH SOMEONE UVE NEVER EVEN MET WHEN IM TALKIN BOUT GUYS MY AGE GETTING SHOT IN THE BACK OF THE FUCKING HEAD!!!! A GUY, WHO UNLIKE 99 PERCENT OF US ON HERE, ACTUALLY HAD SOMETHING GREAT GOING FOR HIM CUZ OF THE LYRICS HE HAD BEEN WRITING SINCE HE WAS A KID, AND SOME ASSHOLE JUS RAN UP ON HIM AND SHOT HIM WHILE HE WASNT FUCKING LOOKING!!! HOW THE FUCK MORE IMPORTANT IS UR FUCKING BEEF THAN THAT? UR FUCKING RETARDED!! SERIOSULY!!!! I HOPE YOU SEE THIS AND CRY YOURSELF TO SLEEP ON YOUR KEYBOARD YOU IGNORANT PIECE OF SHIT BITCH!

some good lines, seems messy though. thats the only way i can explain it. its like u throw in some really bad lines in with good ones.

pretty sad dude. who r u even talking about? u need to make sure u declare who ur dissin or theyll never look dude. and u dont have ur pic up either, so u shouldnt be saying anything like that that someone could jus throw right back at u. and the line about icing on the cake: try making a simile to cake or icing or wordplay on one of those words. u didnt have any lyrical technique in this one.

wow. raped again and again and again and again and again. theres nothin left of him now lol

dam dude. very deep and intellectual stuff. love this right here.

last words: thot it was good but if you have a climax or pause in the song, think about cutting out the drums altogether and jus have the piano play alone, that would sound great. completion: thot that was just awesome. charlie brown: very funny beat, could be a silly/happy song in there. what do u use to produce? u have actual equipment? i jus have this one software demo of mixcraft, but ive already made some decent stuff on that.

haha very raw dude.

stfu bitch. UR the one who doesnt know what hes talkin about. i try and give advice round here, u jus cant take good criticism. many other ppl round here have liked it when i criticize their shit truthfully, and none of them have taken it like you have. learn to listen or get the hell out. if u ever even come back, cuz obviously it was decided: u suck, and without help wont become anything better than dirt on my shoe.

its aight. some good lines. not really talking about anything tho. jus spittin lines i guess is what u were doin?

love it dude. def finish this one its gonna b hot.

so does my gf. LMAO! had to say it... so anyway, it was decent, shouldnt make fun of ppl acting gangsta then do it urself, that kinda turned me off to it.

jus listened to ur song on ur myspace. saw u had one when I checked grimemcs stuff. very Cool Kids lol. i liked it. pretty good.

i listened dude and i couldnt really hear you. the one song is distorted as hell and the others make it sound like your whispering or something. either speak up, or if thats the way you want your voice to sound, then turn ur mic up. ill be able to make a better judgment after all that.

ok, i love love love the flow dude!!! the lyrics and content though... its eh... but hey that just means your on par with most other famous rappers out there!

pretty good i liked it dude. id like to hear that from some other ppl who dont take my advice tho lol

what? .1. learn to spell .2. that was lame. try and be more creative. .3. i dont care what you do on your spare time, just please have something to say when you come on here and want to write something. im jus trying to help you dude.

some pretty nice lines dude. try and space it out a lil tho. took me awhile to capture your flow when you write it all bunched up like that.

haha hoooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!

HAHAHA nice dude. gonna have alot of battles on ur hands now, not that theyll be able to return with anything half decent lol.

i think its worth a better than average. def had some better lines in this one. gettin better.

eh its alright. its hard to rhyme about this and make it good to me tho. im jus bias like that. liked the poke at spleens part.

liked the grenade part, still not ur thing tho bro.

aight if you cant write gangsta well then just dont do it. try something else man, maybe this jus isnt your thing.

sick lines individually dude. juve is prolly jus one of those new punks

yea dude the only line i liked is the one grimemc mentioned. the rest is just basic. talking about ppls moms and stuff, and i unno man, i wasnt a wow rhyme.

didnt have a whole lot of technique, so I cant give u a 10, but very potent and had a lot of feeling... more than I can say for most of the people on here.

good stuff dude. off the hook, chain, whatev man CARNAGE

hahaha very nice. a diamond in the rough of all this spam and newbie stuff. lol didnt even try to rhyme that. im just that amazing lmao

yea its pretty good dude. the stuff bout shit comin out ya ass was UBER gay tho, no matter what u say lol. dont use anything like that any again.

i unno its aight i guess. this is the absolute highest I would give it though, i was gonna go lower. needs something original dude. no technique or or anything. but u stuck with the flow and the theme so thats an average right there.

huh? where? i dont see it. its not spelled Uni corn. Hes not a vegetable you know lol

dam dude super deep. I really like it. ur def a step above most these other guys i can see it already.

haha pretty nice dude.

it was a lil less than decent. it was too short to really tell, but the lines didnt really wow me at all. btw, ive heard that John Cena line like 20 times on this website. why does everyone choose john cena? anyone ever heard of mr. incognito? EVERYONE STOP USING IT!!!!!!

again really like the flow and the language ur puttin out, but it doesnt make any sense? try and put something together thats more cohesive. then ill be really impressed. i think u got potential though.

I really liked your flow, but other than that its a nadda. you didnt seem like you talking about anything. try spacing it out too so ppl like me can read it better lol

yea it alright.

yea its decent again. jus your flow is confusing me now.

Haha nice it was good nonetheless. loved the line: I have a pokeball, But Im not picking you. LMAO! i did one on transformers not too long ago called Unicron lol. why are we all thinking of childhood cartoons all of a sudden? i blame tokio.

yea its pretty good. definitely unlike anything ive seen on this site so far. i like the flow. kinda light on the language aspect though.

who? you mean like you? its pretty bad dude. I dont even wanna read through it cuz I cant when its all bunched together like that.

it was aight. but whos ricky? and whats all this fascination with em lately? hes good, but ur not him. no one is him. hes him. your you. be urself. like asher roth. he says he even raps like em, but hes def not em.

dam dude. definitely put me in the kitchen watching him so this with that one. I really liked it.

real nice..... but arent those similes? lol! metaphor= my voice is a thunder cloud. simile= my voice is like thunder. if im wrong lemme know, cuz thats the way I was taught it.

read some other peoples stuff to get an idea how you should space ur shit out, cuz its kinda hard to read and capture your flow the way ur writing. and another thing, it seems like you have alot to say, but dont know how to put it all into one song/poem/whatever you wanna call it. you gotta spend more time with it. no ones timing you dude, so take as much as u want. some of the good ppl on here are the loose kannons, the prodigies, heiz, itsrayfrombk, etc theres alot more vets who are good.

what the hell is this? are u 8 years old or somthin? i like the shoe on ur icon though lol. ive got a thing for shoes. jus not enough money in the world.

its missing alot man. try and find a way to say how love really is. ive been in a relationship for like 3 years with this girl who i hope will never leave my side, and to me, this just sounds like you have the hots for someone. im workin on something about it, so youll see whenev I post it. oh, and dont put a line about gunning down rats in a love song lol

ur talkin about rap, not hip hop dude. rap is trashy as shit, loves flashin dolla bills, nice cars, big houses, smokin weed and snortin coke cuz she such a dope hustla. hip hop is an educated, respectable woman who enters voice of those who actually have something to say, or something they need to say. she enhances peoples words, movements, and emotions. she is the fire that the tru mcs and b boys feel. get it straight dude.

Agreed this should be higher than 5 on featured. its one of the best of the best.

haha tokio there was a guy doing spoken word on stage and actually made it really amusing. he had a point, about rap, but in getting there he made everyone laugh throughout the thing. So if u wanna mention cartoons, and maybe just write about how u miss em (i know i do), how different a cartoons life is from ours, maybe a deeper meaning or message you found in pokemon that no one else could see? its all you dude. jus think deep.

hahahaaaa niiiiiiiiiiiiice that was awesome dude.

really nice diss lol

Retarded TEXTCEES You Cant Even Spit, // really good line lmao. yea the rest was aight tho. what I think makes great rhymes is when you find a theme and stick with it. check out my DOOKIE FRESH diss. That was good one I did, keeping the theme that dougy was a virus infested p.o.s. THAT is what, for me at least, makes a great rhyme, as well as the poetic technicalities that your speaking of.

yes. very much so. u didnt respond to my shit, u post these one sentence things, u said that one guys diss against you sucked and you gave him a 10, and you dont write that much and when you do, its not spectacular or anything. i would say sit back and get a feel for how ppl do on this site, cuz everyone thinks ur kindve annoying

pretty good as always man. thats the shiz

Real nice stuff. liked how you sometimes carried the rhyme over into the next line, but it jus seemed like you tried it too much if thats possible? i unno, it got better as it went on esp liked the supper part lol

DEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! so real dude.

Bristol where? PA? and it wasnt all that great dude. oh and many ppl like lil wayne and Eminem, so i done know why ur dissing them. i get what ur sayin, im the same way, but it needs work if this is how you usually do. just stay up and keep workin at it. metaphors and similes dude.

yea hes right dude i dont think you know what your talkin about. 1. Turn the beat up, it’s all that I need, Rocking my pumas … and my white tee,// = gay as hell. that is not how the GOOD rappers on the site write. .2.Hit or miss, this penetrates the uranium nucleus, // one good line, good job, now lets see if he can bring it together......3.Smoke crews like a hookah plus I’m nuking your crib, // okay, wtf was that? what does hookah have to do with nuclear bombs? did that even rhyme? No offense dude jus get ur shit straight.

the last verse was great, the rest jus seemed like filler about weed. try focusing on time and clocks and stuff throughout the rhyme and then put that last verse in. ill wait for the re/release lol

yea it was pretty good dude.

good stuff man.

yea it was really good. I think i get what you were tryin to do, but heiz is right, the magnum line didnt make much sense. if theres a pause in your lines or a separation of thought, add a comma or dash or something. it might make more sense to us what your flow is like.

eh i read it afterwards and i could definitely do better. still, i dont think neptune is gonna have anything worthwhile to come back with.

yea it was aight. lets see what he says back. youll have more to go on once that happens.

i cant find ur flow. use the enter key lol. space it out a bit so i can read it better. otherwise im keepin the grade. sounded ok from what i read tho

ok, well i don even know what your trying to say, but that may be because you just changed the words to a song already done by cassidy apparently. i dont listen to him, so yea, but thats pretty lame dude. PS im at work get at u later

yea its aight. finally, something decent. a lil too sadistic for my taste tho

hahaha very funny really nice stuff.

thats terrible. hope you werent trying. you go and give everyone zeros then write this? what IS this?

got work in the morning. dont keep me waiting. its all you bitch

did you jus join? you serious? this is how you start a battle? ok lemme see it. ill humor you.

very nice rhyme, and lot of respect for saying all that stuff. im more of the complete opposite, but dont worry im not a dick about it I actually like listening to others views lol. I def see where your going too. you sound like ron paul. now THERES a brave, brave man.

jus start battling neptune if your looking for a fight. hes being a dick and grading everyone with a 0

neptune jus wants to get f,ed in the a. dont listen. hes just posting 0 on everyones shit. u did real well dude.

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its aight man but unless you have a voice like DMX or KRS ONE i dont see this workin for you. try something else for right now. ppl cant hear your voice if your just typing it down dude, they just see your lyrics, so it doesn matter if you rap like ol dirty all we see are your mediocre lyrics. keep that in mind next time you write.

again with the mom and girl fucking... god dammit... do you ever learn?

i just had a hip hop heart attack! LMAO! killed him over and over then tokio threw his fuckin body in the fuckin furnace! tokio def was the best this time around, but I guess thats why he was last. jus WOW. PS neptune should die

wow!!! that was really nice dude. really liked this one. kept the message constant, and brought other artists into it, like dam man i wanna see more of this type of thing.

that seemed like just a bunch of stuff thrown together... and btw it seemed like the flow got messed up somewhere in there, or I jus completely lost it. I think you really really have potential though, just didnt come together right is all.

hahaha yea really nice ones

dam... worst moment ever... so tru

gotta offset the hater grade lol thanks prodigies and cobra

yea totally dude. its got the same idea like one of atmospheres song, but its written in first person rather than an observer.

nice dude love the vocabulary lol

haha tru... shouldnt do that...

yea pretty real dude.

i thought it was good man. shouldve kept up with the universe thing though that was getting good before you switched up.

HAHAHA some real nice lines dude! wouldve gotten higher if I thought it was 100 percent, but it seemed like on some parts you got a lil lazy, but I guess that happens sometimes in a song this long right? good job tho.

keep on keepin on. nice stuff

eh... i gets its respectable that youre going into gospel rap. it forces you to write about something different for a change. but its still not wowing me dude... i dont know what it is. its just not that good.

uh... u did? lol pretty nice

WTF?!? what the hell are you saying?

::cough cough:: ugh.. rhyme.. so.. sick... contagious

kinda scary for a pimpin song, but looks like it was really easy to right. try somthing more challenging next time for kicks.

nice. i go to school in philly. great city, and great times.

(1) lern ta spel geneus! (2) you diss him before me when my diss was first? now i feel hurt... (3) all you talk about is fking other ppls moms, AND MY MOM IS A SAINT!!!! so there goes that idea for your next comback...

eh its aight. too short to really tell dude. if your really 56 tho, then props to that alone lol

eh.. its aight. liked the bo peeps lost sheep line tho lol

Blundie. It prolly wanst him at his best but i loved the herpes sores line. and d, blundies right, sometimes ur lines dont make sense. gotta work on that man.

hahaha loved the chalk line near the end. really graphic with the straight outta hell thing too. that was good

yea im diggin it. lol tight like a cornroe, thats a hot line

truth raining cats and dogs dude

haha changed my mind... killed it

jus get the hell out dude. have you seen your other ratings? why not jus prove to people you can write first, maybe then someone will wanna battle you

It didn wow me for some reason, but ill give you a high score for keepin it constant and creativity fo sho

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMM!!!!! lol

hahaha nice. best :ur so gay: dis ever!

Nice man. i like it alot nonetheless

purdy gay. try actually saying something next time.

listen to I Wonder by Hassan Chops on the King Geedorah album. he feels the same way. keep on keepin on bruh. thats about all a man can do.

dam man really nice. try to lay off the racial slurs tho kinda turned me off to it. other than that great lines.

yea i like it alot. and I LOVE THAT BEAT!!! glad to see someone else knows who they r lol i just found out about em like last year tho so im kinda new to them to i guess.

Nice lyrics dude. kinda fell off a lil toward the end. i think itll b a good showdown now, no doubt

HAHA!! HOTTTTTT!!!! //so you cant hear me laugh when i slide on a mask n rape!// thats the only line where i wasnt smiling, i was like wait... WTF?!

pretty good... lil above average i think ur def improving dude. //Open niggas up like they been ejected// u mean injected? sounded funny the first time i read it. //Cause Ill start breaking and destroying niggas like vandalism//Eating rappers that just what I call cannibalism// I liked that part. //And steal the top from you niggas yup you got intercepted// This is a pretty good line too.

hahaha so tru... screw corporate media! I know its not the only thing you were talkin bout but thats what i got outta it.

1st off, calm the fuck down lol 2ndly, it wasnt a great diss, but it jus sounds like you wrote it in anger so that could be why its not as great as some of your other stuff.

dam dont mess with a guy with hip hop in his name lol

huhuhuh....chillz down my spine. tru dat texas shit is real cold lol

HOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

eh...... nah. the lines werent really hitting home for reason for me dude. sry

pretty nice. i like. def something different

I don even know what to say... im so confused... you were just all over the place... was it jus a crazy freestyle? had alot of good lines though no doubt.

OoOoOoO nice

Property so big it should be on a atlas, Um ready for my next meal cause nigga you just breakfast// = great lines It seem to me that the most of a work out you get is running ya mouth// You still sucking dick I hear you suck it spic and span// = nice putting it together the rest was aight tho. I think h e i z still has you beat bruh.

yea pretty sure some of those came from other people on the site... so yea... shouldve stated that its not your stuff more clearly..

like how it came together, very nice

Im talking about exactly that... I write all that gangsta stuff and then say how dumb I think it is people try to live this way.

Dam man. that was nice. better than alot ive seen so ull do fine.

Shorter and sweeter than lil ds. i think u won

I thot the second verse was hot, but the rest was mild and decent to be honest.

pretty good

ballin. lol

kinda weak bro

haha nice dude. let em have it

Got alot stronger as you went on. real nice. blackking had it comin

Got better as you went on this time. real real real shit.

i like it, i like it...

AHHHH!!!! shit is awesome!!! blackking is just a dumbass dont listen.

much better lol. but still thot it changed 3/4 of the way through.

Beginning and end were great, i think u lost it somewhere in the middle though. seemed like just rambling for awhile there. thats prolly y blackking thot it was weak

hahaha killed it. done. its over. TKO

good stuff. nuff said

Haha like it alot dude. I liked the 10 karrot popsicles line too.

nice. liked alot of the rhymes. a 10 is more like some of glovers shit though. read up on his stuff if you havnt already. try and learn from it.

yea 5 sounds bout right. U rhymed and had like 2 good lines maybe. Nuthin special yet, but try comin at him with more punchlines dude, youll get it.

Pretty good, didnt wow me enough though

good stuff...

Good stuff man. Potent, about ur life: exactly what I was lookin for on this site.

you can jus edit it from ur profile page if u need to

tru that man tru that. industry needs a slap in the face

HAHAHAHA I love this F rhyme!!! LMAO!

nice man i think like that all the time. thats how i try to rhyme. oh shit that rhymed! lol

nice dude u got some of the best lyrics up in here. keep at it!

Talkin bout a lady friend man... LUST?! GET IT?! LOL

. . . . . . . . . . . U need a friend man? Im here for u lol Cant say ive never felt that way but seriously... shit dude!