WTF!?!?!? I LOGGED ON AND MY INFO S CHANGED AND SHIT AND THERES
THESE WEIRD POSTS!!...
IM OFF
criticalbeats - 07.23.09 - 6.43/10
yeah im leaving so fuck the lot of ya the site has gone to
shit...
and dont bother posting comments like im glad you...
...i
criticalbeats - 07.23.09 - 0.00/10
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...
....t
criticalbeats - 07.23.09 - 0.00/10
tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt...
To be honest i havnt really read any of kaylas shit and Jessica ive
seen some shit from you but thats not the point here...
Jimps ha we best change your name to jimple,
because your
rhymes still way to simple,
your rhyming shit like "...
Lethal Bizzle uk grime artist im not sure i like this what you guys
think?...
ray im tired of this beef,
Jimps dissed me first and now
your fighting his battles,
what did he leave his b...
Verse starts at 0:21
sitting back nothing special to say,
see that girl walk my way, so i say hey,
s...
Ads
criticalbeats - 07.23.09 - 5.00/10
why so many adverts popping up, am i the only one getting it?...
ray im just a truth teller spitting it real,
i dont care about
how i make gimp feel,
his bars a shit why he in y...
Jimps man whats that shit you "be spittin",
best be freestyle
cos that werent "properly written",
ha you think i...
STOP WRITING DISSESS ITS PISSING ME OFF!!!
(but GA are shit
lol)...
GRIME ASSASSINS ARE SHIT...
killed with one bar
bitches!...
Rida!
criticalbeats - 07.20.09 - 6.14/10
whats your email im done writing......
YO PEEPS
criticalbeats - 07.20.09 - 6.25/10
Please check my bars Real Love cos i might record when i get mic
and i need feedback just say yes or no on the comment p...
Should Be
criticalbeats - 07.20.09 - 10.00/10
ill rearrange your thoughts with my "lyrical mind",
take you on
a journey through your soul im your "spiritual guide...
WTF
criticalbeats - 07.20.09 - 5.00/10
why cant i see my lyrics if i have lost my bars i will cry i have
three songs im gonna record and i cant get to them and...
SF out
criticalbeats - 07.19.09 - 5.63/10
yo Ndi there is too much shit going on like that number thing and
the fact that SF never does anything? im out man...
i wrote about my dog that got put down crackin
said:
5.00/10 posted by crackin creations on 07.19.09
I li...
Death
criticalbeats - 07.19.09 - 9.00/10
death its a terrible "thing",
watch time crawl by as the
pendulum "swings",
imagine them in heaven as the angels...
Random
criticalbeats - 07.17.09 - 9.50/10
white powder, this shits "plain awful",
but the cokes in so i
grab the "same paw full",
white lines line the tab...
Yo me and dante are cool so if you ll still take me im in yeah?...
Please check out my bars REAL LOVE its got the beat down and i
wanna go some feedback so holla at me....
Real Love
criticalbeats - 07.16.09 - 10.00/10
Verse starts at 0:21
sitting back nothing special to
say,
see that girl walk my way, so i say hey,
she ...
WIDASTAR
criticalbeats - 07.15.09 - 5.00/10
dont put question marks in the title dude...
yo man i just saw members i dont roll with people i dont know whos
b boy? and at some point i sed i would never roll wid...
Yo dawg so hows about me joining ya crew i mean it isnt great
without me haha...
sitting back nothing special to say,
see that girl walk my way,
so i say hey,
she ignores me i get the cold
shou...
yo Ndi you want me in your crew? battle me i wanna see what im
joining you win i join i win then i ll see haha...
Im ill
criticalbeats - 07.15.09 - 9.50/10
Intro:
In 2009 a man not named was found to have 13 different
bodies in his attic 3 of the bodies were his wife and...
(Critical)
Dear Diary
It was supposed to
be easy; hold up "the store",
Take the money then...
illi
criticalbeats - 07.13.09 - 10.00/10
so when i sit back im chillin,
but when i step to the mic and
spit im killin,
words like lead i dont need my gat...
collab anyone? i accidently deleted last post...
SK...
criticalbeats - 07.13.09 - 7.50/10
who is actually still in it cos ive lost track and last time i
checkd there was like 9? so yeah too many people it ll ne...
Im a king of this scene no "games",
an mc title no
"names",
my lyrics up in your "brains",
young money tryin...
Barman:
Hello, what are you drinking?
a whiskey ll go well
with thoughts you look to be thinking.
Criti...
Ha bitch you couldnt be more wrong
Scene Kings are alive and we
re still going strong,
so log off you computer t...
4th july its no big deal,
seems to you yanks makes everything
surreal,
you forget about the war and the economy,...
Intro
Yeah, death spittin... here we go...
Hook
my spit acidic now it kills,
i got the words to ...
So bitch listen,
when i spit on the mic i kill em,
cut open
there guts and spill em,
then take my rhymes and...
Ray Diss
criticalbeats - 07.03.09 - 9.33/10
ray, dont like my shit?
then why the fuck you reading it,
i
dont give a shit bout your opinion,
cos this sit...
Sex Ed
criticalbeats - 07.03.09 - 7.50/10
girls i like em alot,
walking about whith there you know what.
(what?)
you know? (no i do not)
well you...
im not in a crew but
my lyrics so dirty, flow so clean,
my
rhythm polish surfaces like mr sheen,
im the lone...
This Kid
criticalbeats - 06.23.09 - 10.00/10
damn whatta tragedy,
bitch pulled down like gravity,
pushed
cos he mad at me,
conscience hollow like a cavit...
back in 2 thousand and 1 i was sitting back,
when i heardof a
terrorist attack,
been onli 4 days since my day of...
(CRitical)
last night naw that was rough,
started drinking
acting like im all tough,
didnt realize that id...
yo did ya get my second chance bars? cos it says you onli got 3 and
my name wasnt on ya list
Critical...
sitting back watching the game,
these emcees are all the
same,
no originality no real skill,
so bitch im goi...
Stand back cos Criticals here, i ll show you true fear, i got devil
on my rear, satan whispering in my ear, so fuck god,...
mapstonee who you trying to be?
you say that shit was aimed at
me?
well you must be blind cos u missed,
i di...
now im just using my intuition,
i dont believe in this
"superstition",
its just what life throws at you
if s...
generation what you trying to prove?
im here now so you better
move,
so ima gonna lay it down straight,
im s...
Stand back cos Criticals here, i ll show you true fear, i got devil
on my rear, satan whispering in my ear, fuck god, wh...
ryul is that all that you got,
your lyrics so whack you need to
be shot.
you come on this site with an apocolyps...
Its critical, I dont fight: apolitical
my onli weapon is my
breath, so ill it causes death
my lyrics so crazy li...
Looking back everdays the same
spitting out lyrics, joining in
wiv da game.
but todays different theres someth...
Sucking on a joint just to get me high,
its a difficulty when
my heads up in the sky
people all around me going ...
[Hook]
So what happened to when i could sleep at
night?
with peaceful dreams not full of fights
i remember
w...
2puk92
criticalbeats - 05.14.09 - 10.00/10
2puk why you be spittin that shit?
are you stupid or was the
dope lit?
nah fuck that you dont smoke
you can...
Grime you say i m 6th person that youve beat
well it aint ovea
your fucking with the Elite
im sorry but there mu...
So Grime you ready for round two?
It dont matter cos my lyrics
will break you
cos my rhymes hit harder than kung...
look out its critical beats, bringing out the political heat
Im
like obama, not john McCain, so heres the begginging...
so whats up wiv ya name "grimey"?
suits your personality all
sneaky and slimey
three accounts man whats up wiv d...
(hook)
Theres this one girl i think i love her
when im with
her my mind is a blur
she makes me feel like im ...
look out its critical beats,
bringing out the political
heat
Im like Obama, not john McCain,
so heres the
be...
Im a fucked up beast held back on his leash
when i get free the
population will decrease
im a literature terrori...
You...
criticalbeats - 05.10.09 - 9.00/10
when the stars are up next to the moon
your shittin your pants
cos i ll be there soon
you know im coming youve g...
i been on a bit but these newbies are pissing me off wheres admin
advertising? runescape? i might leave...
IM OFF
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.23.09
nah not co of grime im leaving cos i want to i was planning on
leaving this mornin just had some beef anyway what grime does is
his business i dont follow him
yeah it was iyte neway im leaving cos of peeps like headhunter lol
anyway have fun may come back sometime like never?
ahaha tea actually is more poular in china just saying...
with your DAD so YOU cant afford it... like i sed
nah doubt you could afford the plain ticket over here
yeah well FUCK USA said that for you glover
to be honest you could just ignore this post...
umm i dont portray my self like this to girls just on the internet
what you cunts gonna do??
im really not better than that haha
i know but all the new shit is piossing me off soo yeah plus if it
dont get better soon im leaving som ima say what i like
I Resign...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.23.09
damn man it was good man respect good luck with the music we still
gotta do that collab tho (Y)
damn i smell a cat fight
well atleast my profile got scoped ha iyte cool thanks for the
info. oh and if you get a chance take a peep at Jimps Round 1
dunno man and yo that pic is illi how you do that?
omg that crew is whack lol SK DOAWGGS
haha headhunter its obvious you want to rag her picture dont get
your sock wet... anyway nice shit jessica not your best tho
yeah fine but its over between you and me read my latest post
yeah its hot but you just reposted he diss Jimps sent my way on the
last verse, if hes gonna diss me cant he at least fight his own
battles
TRUTH
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.23.09
thats pretty hot tho but ended as i got into it lol is it sposed to
be spat fast?
Ads
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.23.09
damn admin could ya not have like mugged someone for the money?
ahaha
iyte i replied
yo rida put my verse on the damn LW diss
nice shit yo check out ma jimps diss
yo i just posted a jimps diss if you wanna include it it is pretty
hot
Rida....
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.22.09
yo i just posted a jimps diss if you want it?
its good would be a ten but i felt the diss on me was a bit weak...
Jimps search "Jimps Diss"
thats straight fire dogg ive always admired your work (no dick
ridin) shame you leavin fam
haha ive seen alot better no competition for Scene Kings
whats that?
aha put jailbreak on one =D
terrible did you not read our mic messiahs diss you really fuking
with us still? damn either you think your actually good or your
taking the piss...
doc 10 diss
6.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
its not great but better than what he could write
nah cant be bothered
Rida!
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
post all we got now i reckon
Rida!
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
check your mail and how long till this shit drops?
Rida!
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
ive sent it
YO PEEPS
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
okkk im writing
YO PEEPS
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
iyte whos in it? and rate dem bars!!
i dont like it
just rep SK say we re the best
criticalbeats@live.com
i can start writing now if ya like? just repping Sk Yeah?
illi man Scene King respect and im in for that collabo
shutup realeyez i rearranged your face with the diss i wrote
WTF
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.20.09
ok safetings admin
nice man that number shit was hot lol its hard to find rhymes for
critical aint it
Birth
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
another non talented rapper has joined the site welcome the exit is
thatta way
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
Sf was whack lol Ndi ran it ahaha
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
yeah man i reckon just leave it carry on as normal
safe safe Sk is back boys
ok i quit Sk cos there were like 9 peeps but i dont want SF
thinking i quit them to join SK i quit cos Ndi is acting shady...
but yeah im in
SF out
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
yeah man but i dunno its just it sounds pretty convincing you
posted that number up
SF out
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
yeah well it will fall apart i reckon i can see it happening
already
SF out
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
yeah well i didnt ever write anything with someone from SF so its
over for me dawggs
damn straight man thanks for having ma back damn crweations is
buiried fucking six hundred feet under when SE done with him
just finished posting now boys
Death
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
oh ok and why you referring to me as he? shouldnt you say you
Death
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
But you took the time to pay for the crime
whats that mean?
my thoughts
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
im glad i did yo check out my bars Real Love im gonna record
my thoughts
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.19.09
Thats some hot deep shit man.. SF respect
Random
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.17.09
cheers Dante
NDITULLIO!
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.17.09
cool you got anything lined up for SF?
NDITULLIO!
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.17.09
safe so im in |SF?
nice check some of my stuff im 13 as it is so you can compare
ive seen realeyez use them bars before so Simplicity got my vote
online...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
iyte well im off fam in a bizzle
online...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
safe man i got your back ha you got myspace man? add me
myspace.com/mccritical95 i aint got any choons up yet my mics broke
but im orderin one soon
online...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
safe man, oh and seeing as we cool and all hows about me getting
into SF seeing as Nditullio was gonna let me in anyway ahaha
online...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
cool bredder oh and check my bars real love its tight flow
online...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
wassup man? just realized its stupid holdin beef from that long
back so yeah we cool?
same as twisted
iyte ill check it out yo check my bars Real Love its got the beat
wid it i wanna get some feedback
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
dante i said it a while back when we had beef i wouldnt roll with
you so yeah im a man to my word and dont kick dante out for me he
was there first dawggs
WIDASTAR
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.16.09
yeah man
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
i dunno i just dont like the way he acts and his bars i think im
just gonna stay solo
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
ok yeah and thats it me or dante your choice man
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
yo can i help take out the parasites i just dont like them haha and
i got some alright verses on em already and an insane vers on one
of them
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
i quit cos last time i looked there were nine people and i hadnt
heard of some of them
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
actually there top 3 didnt become messiahs cos im not in it lol
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
iyte man you got myspace?
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
iyte man but if the crew dont live up to my standerds iom out mann
sorry cruel world an all but whatever ha
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
and yours is? i just want some peeps to roll with
Roughrida
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
Honestly your better at multis but i like ridas flow better and get
sambuka lol
help me out
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
hey man just write let people see and rate ya, can ya check out my
bars Real Love, got simple rhymes but a real nice flow
everyone
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
damn man no space for people like you on this site
Nditullio
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
iyte i ll take a look
Real Love
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.15.09
ahaha i get pissed when i beat people in a battle and theyre like
im just 15
well grime lol kyloo thats more than recycling
dude its just for us to stick up for each other check out my rhymes
rteal love its got the beat there too
gotta go with grimes insane multis but jais t did have some nice
lines
hey man im in uk all day
nah sorry ndi
Collab...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.13.09
ah too late mate got one going now
SK...
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.13.09
lol, nine members is too much
6 bars as in 12 lines? or 6 lines?
Freestyle
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.13.09
i understand that i meant so you put emphasis on the rhymes
lol its based around eminems stan the girl in stan is the ex
oh so your chicken?
iyte i ll write a crew diss
who else in it?
yo rider check my releyez diss this clown dont know what hes in for
yeah but your not in a crew so i cant take it all out if i could i
would easily
UPDATE!
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.09.09
damn check my Realeyez diss it is straight fire
yeah there nice bars but ive posted my diss you cant bury me
prime time
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.08.09
are they bars?
olliswoop 2
7.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.08.09
seen better but olliswoop sucks balls so its not hard to beat him
you buried him i saw his diss to you it was good but not up to this
well kst is a fag lol Sk smoked him, and no worries i like your
style
ah nice bars but the uk grime scene is what its all about
aye i aint seen bath saps finest or whatever i ll check it out, and
you got my myspace yeah? SK =D
aha nice thats how you get a name diss a VET especially heiz...
iyte rider... umm not sure if im in sk yet lol check out Spit Kills
2 ima record it
well you said like a month ago the crew pae was done and would go
in but i cant see it yet its kinda annoying
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.06.09
iyte hold up i ll post it soon
sicknosis for me dawggs
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.06.09
umm im online but im british ahaha so i would be down to diss 4th
july is it independence day?
HIS STORY
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.06.09
thats tight man can ya check out my Spit Kills 2?
posted by admin on 06.17.09
UPDATES: Crew page is done. Will be up soon. Forums and PM system
are going in next audio/video/updated search after that. Anyone up
for donating? Post here
yeah... right
damn thats nice you lot should record, also check my post Spit
Kills 2
Freestyle
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.06.09
nice freestyle check out my post Spit Kills 2 should i record?
Spit Kills
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.05.09
when i record theres gonna be alot more lines spat quickly with a
half speed or slow beat
Spit Kills
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.04.09
so you think it deserves a one?
Spit Kills
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.04.09
yeah im taking that line out lol thats was for the site
some nice multis but flows bit patchy check out my bars Spit Kills
Ray Diss
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
i cant get onto myspace mate i need a new one but am i in Sk?
Ray Diss
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
umm i dont have a very good myspace made it yesterday... i ll add u
Ray Diss
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
yeah man i been talking to grime, you got msn?
Sex Ed
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
ok then after you
Sex Ed
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
iyte man how many bars and i was just havin a laugh
I Suppose
9.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
nice good to see summin funny check out Sex Ed freestyle
Sex Ed
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
Freestyle i got bored so yeah this came up
IM GREAT
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 07.03.09
i like it
check out "Sex Ed" freestyle i was havin a laugh
what your saying my shits not good enough for featured? read some
of my shot its fire... and im leaving the site now anyway got no
computer at home so whatever it was good tho
please feature "Im Levaing" it would meen alot to me =D
Im Leaving
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.29.09
thanks man i wanna get some feedback and check out my bars in the
featured collum first post featured as i leave lol
Im Leaving
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.29.09
gotta save for a new computer *cry*
check out ma last post for a while "Im Leaving"
and good job
iyte all good except warhammer lol gotta have beating some one to
death with a dildo in their somewhere
Kingryhmes
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.17.09
hey is scene kings the new goon squad? cos it needed a makeover
Kingryhmes
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.17.09
scene kings?
Terrorism
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.17.09
aha post lyrics up as well my speakers bust
anybody
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.17.09
ello bitches
so lemme get this straight you were in the Goon Squad? then you see
Loose Kannons say its shit then you write a terrible verse dissing
your old crew to impress them? man thats low for real getta off
there dicks
i thought you boys were in a crew? Goon Squad? ahaha
LK means Loose Kannons?
Iyte i tidied up my verse a bit so hope its easier to get the flow
CrazyFlow
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.16.09
Whats all this bout a goon squad? an we need forums badly i thought
this was a diss
iyte i ll start writing when im back from school
Laid Back
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.15.09
ah nice flow kept the rhyme going like it, check out Last Night ft
Grime
cant you? and id rather you put a ten ahaha
i can digg this mann check out mine and Grimes collab Last Night,
can i jump in for the remix?
i like it mann got some complex shit there...
check out mine and grimes collab Last Night
i like it man check out mine and Grimes collab
Me and Grimes entry for collab contest, true story
umm without england US would be different boys no founding fathers
im liking it good lyrics complicated rhymes 10
checkout my post "Last Night" and i wrote a dance "Crit Step" just
for a laugh checkit
i got an idea not sure bout it tho, im thinking a crew page? so the
crews get pages and its easier to organize battles etc
damn your myspace looks awesome! just do summin like that if you gt
tha time
freestyle
8.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.13.09
its aight nice rhymes for a freestyle check out my Freestyle
Ray won this one...
well done xpert good battle
aye get some votes in on me vs xpert theres onli been 1 vote soo
far
yeah change the deadline im getting wasted tomorrow =D and i dont
fink i ll be in a fit state to write P:
cheers mate
ayo can u put bristol UK so as thres no confusions? and its girlie
not grilie
Lucci sorry Simezzy but ya just took the themetune and changed a
few words
Mr Hip Hop
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.11.09
no worries just making sure
Mr Hip Hop
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.11.09
ollie(dash)pop131@hotmail.co.uk yeah i know its lame :\
nice one ray grats
FREESTYLE
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.10.09
thanks i just felt the flow =P
i like it big words P: but seems yyour trying bit too hard flows
not amazing good freestyle tho
ah nice. i wrote the one called this is england but i didnt
actually talk bout england soo much =S
iyte im not up his ass i said theres nothing in it onli reason i
voted grime cos he from the UK if i was from America id give it
cobra too close to call. I just understood grimes cos there was
some british slang
damn its tight... too close... ima gunna have to give it too GRime
give him a chance,nothing in it for me
man you couldnt get a crew newaysthat shit is weak
lol admin should sign up
pure evil
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.09.09
well your not making a big impact if your gunna come back write
summin big man this is weak
i wish people would stop saying theyre young as an excuse it doesnt
effect your rapping skills
my computers fucked up is too slow sorry, bludie you do it
Grime won it for me
realeyez hands down
nice shit here ilike the message. i rap bout politics too mann but
mainly cos political is one of the few things that rhyme with
critical P:
Olly :L
8.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 06.04.09
sorry took me a while to reply been busy writing an i forgot but my
reply is up
right basically i dont think 2.0 will have enough originality for
our site but my photoshop is broken so i can make a good one in
html at the mo so bludie you do it
fear of the number 13
im happy to or whatever or im happy to work wiv somebody? although
are we usingoriginal html formatting or the new 2.0 skin?
whos this aimed at? and its shit neway
umm too short, not 16 bars, and the rhymes are too simple
ah two your sposed to post a reply... anyway mines up so check it
out plus eazy a is just summin i heard so...
DantE
1.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.31.09
just nawh man thats bate shit learn to rap, i woulddiss u but your
not worth it
so i ll write back neway just sayin i respect you vets an all but
im coming through leading the new wave =P
Lime
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.31.09
im new still but i felt that generation are whack, an i got respect
for vets but tbh i dont care much bout them so check out ma post
Generation and Vets
GENERATION
5.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.31.09
most of your lyrics are
ima gonna have to diss generation nawh cos this is illi
thats mint should be featured
is iyte. think mines better P: check out Writers Bloc i wrote it
not soo long back
yeah that best shut him up
ur shit mate and you kinda complimented him uh oh "wait, you shoved
it so far up his ass, he died" so your saying he hs a biggun then?
roughriders stuff aint amazing but it kicked this shit
rough won this one
Dante dizz
9.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.30.09
nice diss but you takl bout yourself too much and not enough
dissing him so a nine i think. check out my post Welcome to Hell,
summin new i need feedback on
My flow
7.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.30.09
spelling out your name is so whack check out my post Welcome to
Hell
dont like the slashes it clutters up the words but its good
one of ya best its sick
Olly :L
8.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.30.09
iyte i ll reply then P:
awesome, was that actually freestyle
ryul diss
8.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.30.09
yeah its not my best
shit your lyrics are crap. and wtf is runescape?
nice check out my post This Is England
nice id buy it
chck out my newest post This Is England
Gonorrhea
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.28.09
nearly pissed my pants hillarious! nice flow too.
rayfrombk
7.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.22.09
omfg you put stars over niggas good tho
Olly :L
8.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.21.09
you aiming that at me? My names ollie =P
not bad but id blow you away :L
Mates
7.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.18.09
good for your first one mate but its not amazing
shit and too short
oh my days youve invented the emosexual its an emo/homo good flow
tho
I fuck men.
9.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.17.09
begging flow is a bit off but is good (Y)
lax remix
9.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.12.09
thats some pretty good shit keep it up
can you chang you
e rating on my Grime Diss you gave it a 5 and a
10 which lowers the total so can you change it please
my life
8.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.12.09
pretty good im liking it you gave my a 5 and a ten can you change
the five please mate
oh and whilst your on my profile rate "Fake Shit Finished"
yeah i dont think its great either
Im Ill :(
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.12.09
Thats ill =P bit fucked up tho
peep diss
3.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.12.09
so get gassed, stay gassed forget about me
cause like a fsi engine im audi!
wtf?
FANTASTIC
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.12.09
is Nice good flow can you rate mine "Fake Shit Finished"
Well i was just sticking up for him but ima gonna back off ya ok
Oh sorry i didnt readit properly P: i dont want to have a beef with
you your lyrics are sick iyte just dont call me Grime please
You
e pissing me off because i want to have my own reputation not
grimes shit one and:
"First 6 bars stung.. As for Grime, I thought you shook that
paragraph shit"
I thought that meant i beat him?
untouchable
6.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.11.09
why you chattin to yourself? Is Alrite but ive seen much better.
If you want you can check out my bebo/myspace or come on msn at the
same time with me and him i reli need you to stop calling me Grime
its pissing me off why would he write a diss that beat his own??
how dyou mean? Ive always typed like this.
Its cos we
e botth english. Im sorry but i wanna make a name for myself and
having you call me grimey is not helping!
Fuck off are we? How can i prove it to you?
can you shutup wiv the same person thing iyte? Im trying to make a
name for maself plus I challenged him P: I thought itd be an easy
win :L
Well is onli a friendly but if you wanna tell him iwon im fine wiv
that P:
We got bored so yeah my reply is up!
its prettyweak espicially the delivery try changing the word order
aswell look up Bludies Top rated piece or some kannons and my shit
its got good flow wth a solid delivery
I Love Her
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.11.09
cheers Kannons who posted?
I Love Her
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.11.09
changed to 8 bars
thats some nice shit man check ou my freestyle "Fake Shit"
H I E Z
2.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.11.09
Man you a pussy read my post "Fake Shit" its all about peepl like
you man
(FREESTYLE)
10.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.11.09
thats some hot shit man check out my new post Fake Shit freestyle
from earlier today
Real Niggas
9.00/10
posted by criticalbeats on 05.11.09
Thats some ill shit man but the flows bit patchy at tmes so i ll
give ya a nine
Tokio imgonna leave this alone now obviously grime did summin bad
so i aint rollin wiv no one until someone tells me what the fuck
went on iyte
well you
e just a lovely person to talk too arent you :L
Nah mate im still here and its not Oll E
so you rip the shit outta my name
then youre too pussy to tell me yours
yeah you
e a real hard man
Tokio whats your name?
Yeah so whats your name dickhead?
Fuck you man
I dont know what you and grime have got going on so im gonna stay
out of it
and rapping is all about keeping a beat plus i play bass to rap
over so the name fits iyte?
And stop saying im grime fucks sake
Im Ollie NOT Chris
Oi Bitch
You
e right Oll E is a shit name o that accounts over heres my new shit
iyte
grimemc
nditullio01
simplicity
the venomspitter
sicknosis
brandon cardone
mr. britain