So you
e saying if I make beats on a keyboard it pretty pointless?
I wanna make beats so I get more into hip hop than ju...
Ay yo I just got into making beats and I have a question. .can you
record the beats u make ON your keyboard or do you ne...
Ay yo I just got into making beats and I have a question. .can you
record the beats u make ON your keyboard or do you ne...
Ay yo I just got into making beats and I have a question. .can you
record the beats u make ON your keyboard or do you ne...
Im bored so I thought I should write some bars about artists that
inspire me to make music. Hope you enjoy!
The...
First of all. .my grandma lives in MY house
and Ill chase you
round playing cat and mouse.
Place a mouse trap wa...
I found the instrumental to "Just A Friend" by Biz Markie. .pretty
ill, check it out. But heres my verse. anybody down t...
Man why are your rhymes so ill? How long have u been spitting? What
do u listen to?...
I was bored so I thoguht Id post a few bars. .I know its short but
fuck it.
This is off tha dome. .while im chi...
I found the instrumental to "Just A Friend" by Biz Markie. .pretty
ill, check it out. But heres my verse. anybody down t...
So Im calling out yung breezy.
So much rhymes that can make it
easy,
in fact to easy to clown on that faggot.
Freestyle
danny rodriguez - 06.22.09 - 6.25/10
Its the good life that I wanna live,
not go to work and just
smoke spliffs.
And record rhymes twenty four seven,...
crazyflow
danny rodriguez - 06.22.09 - 6.84/10
Ay yo whats ur favorite lil wayne mixtape/album? and whats your
favorite song?
My favorite mixtape definitely h...
Yo what influences everyone on this site to write
rhymes?
Me personally would be hip hop and weed. I wanna
help...
Man I didnt wanna do this but, listen up. .
I came to this
site to read verses and rhymes.
Not to talk to a...
Man wassup with rating everyones flows. .we wanna read some of ur
shit too! Well at least I do....
B0RED
danny rodriguez - 06.21.09 - 7.67/10
Damn. .Im bored as fuck so I just keep coming out with these
rhymes.
Ive never heard of a second version o...
Yo Ill type this verse cause I love spitting. .
I feel more
creative with this joint im hitting
and killing beat...
I spit verse after verse after verse,
god blessed me with this
lyrical curse.
Shout out to gudsen17 for liking m...
Super Man
danny rodriguez - 06.21.09 - 8.00/10
Damn, I think Im addicted to tha rhymes and beats
cause the
music never stops, and I always tap my feet.
I find ...
lil a
danny rodriguez - 06.21.09 - 6.50/10
I just read your DOA Freestyle, check it. .
Imma be tha
one causing auto tunes death
with my dope ass rhyme...
gudsen17
danny rodriguez - 06.21.09 - 5.00/10
ey yo thanks for tha comments and liking tha shit I write. I gotta
question, what do u like about my flows?...
Im trynna tell me folks flowing aint easy
but for some reason
they dont believe me.
Telling me to get a thing ca...
I grab tha microphone and check it, ridiculously wreck it.
Shit
I spit will leave new york terrorized like in Clover...
Im not doing this shit for tha fame, tha cash, or the
hoes.
Well maybe for a few dollars cause I really need new
clo...
gudsen17
danny rodriguez - 06.20.09 - 0.00/10
ey yo im white too but my rhymes are iller
and ill cram them
into ur chest without using a driller.
Dont bring m...
gudsen17
danny rodriguez - 06.20.09 - 7.50/10
I know its kinda short but fuck it.
Ay yo gudsen Ill give
you a good, clean battle. .
my rhymes will shake ...
So I wake up then break
this weed im about to blaze up.
Mom
was bitching I made loud noise
but fuck it I got...
haha aight buddy, Ill give you some props.
I dont think my ill
rhymes will ever stop
so listen up cause imma swe...
Aight check it. . .
When I read your display name I read
tha word "fresh"
but when I read ur bars they
e ju...
you wanna battle?...
gudsen17
danny rodriguez - 06.19.09 - 0.00/10
Yo I appreciate tha comments
most cats nowadays dont keep it
honest
but thanks for keeping it real and stayin on...
I just wrote this verse a few days ago, its not done yet tho. .let
me know what you think of it so far!
I got t...
I have metaphors in my mind twenty four seven/
rhyming on Dilla
beats while hes chillin in heaven/
Rest in peace...
My16 Bars
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 07.23.09
just chillin lol
any1 got 1
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 07.07.09
lil wayne la la la instrumental. check it out on youtube
yeah I have fruity loops demo but I wanna make beats on a keyboard,
itd be much easier for me as a beginner.
haha the title made me laugh
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
haha talkin bout some bitch with stds
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
have u ever freestyled on acid?
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
lol good thing you got clean.
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
haha shrooms are cool too, I havent done them yet tho. Hows coke
feel?
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
Ive only messed with xanax and vicodin a few times. I like xanax
they were bomb, but I dont do that shit anymore lol.
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
haha yeah Im like 5 foot 7 and weigh like 128, im 16. Ey bro u got
a myspace?
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
Im not really a pill person, more of a weed smoker and I like the
hallucinations. I wanna do shrooms and acid so bad! Hell yeah
strawberry cough is bomb, I had some 2 weeks ago in a fat joint
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
Sour D is fucking bomb. My connect gets his stuff from the clinics
so its really good weed lol. He hooks it up to. Aight dude Id
appreciate that. Will I hallucinate with one hit?
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
Damn fer sure dude. Ive bee nstaying at the valley with my cousin
so It wouldnt be that hard to meet up with u, I juss need to exact
address andstuff. but let me know when ur down ehre in Cali. Ill
smoke you out and buy that acid cause u the homie!
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
I live in Palmdale, which is like an hour away from L.A. Im
guessing im like an hour and a half away from Compton,
Freestyle!
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
you were blind or what? haha. Oh fa sho dude bring like 3 hits and
Ill search for you to get that acid lol.
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
ur da fucking man! Does it burn when u drop it in your eye? Fuuck
whoever your buying from tell them to send some shit down here to
Cali!
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
haha thats fucking down! Did u take it on a blotter paper err what?
How much do u get it for? Sorry for all the questions, I would do
anything to try lsd
fucking dope man! I like the way you spit bro
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
I havent. .there isnt any out here. How was ur trip? Insane?!
Freestyle!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
fucking ill bro. youve done acid?
beef
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
haha I dont even know whats goin on either.
Damn this is a close one to me. . I gotta go with breezy tho.
Glover
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
Aight fa sho man. If u have a myspace u should add me, so we can
work on a collab soon!
I changed it cause I wanted a new one, I really dont have a big
nose lol. Tha camera was just up close.
WHO WINS
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.27.09
Dude you mos def won! Nice rhymes
sick shit dude! I liked the ill cross you over line.
This shit as whack. . .
Yo this shit was pretty good man.
The Key
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.26.09
this shit is fuckin ill bro. I could relate to tha first 3 bars
I check out ur song on youtube bro, not really my style but I still
give u props for doin your thing.
Ay man you should check out my recent post. Id appreciate if u did
that
collab
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.26.09
Ay yo Ill write my verse to this tomorrow. Im about to go out and
eat somewhere with a chick. .Sorry about that shit man. Good verses
tho. .what beat are yall using? The snoop and dre chorus sounds so
familiar, well Peace and one love !
dannyyy
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.25.09
oh forreals, what u guys write about? If I like tha topic is it coo
if I throw a verse in there?
mom
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.25.09
props on keeping it real. You should write a song about this
Nice stuff, you should check out some of my posts. I like vicodins
haha!
IM DUMB
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.25.09
Damn good shit man. I like tha verse where you talking about
blazing. Stay up!
Do that shit man, Ill take a hit off this joint for you.
I think you could also buy a card, for $120 or $200,
somewhere between that. Dude I dont even know what stress cause im
high 24/7! lol
Tha docs will basically give you a medical card if you have a lot
of stress. How down is that? too down! how old are u bro?
Thats down bro, good luck with that! I dont really sell, mostly
buy. .my connect hooks it up fat too! We were good friends before
he started slanging so now when I buy a a gram he basically hooks
it up with 30 dollars worth of kush. He gets his stuff straight
outta the clinics
I smoke kush all day ever day but it aint nothin new. How much do u
get an eighth for over there where u live?
haha thats wassup man! I smoke every day, how often do u blaze it?
Fuck shwag step up ur game with some kush bro.
damn white widow is my favorite! I juss picked up an eighth last
night, Imma roll 2 joints right now for breakfast. A Gram in each
one
Dude come to Cali, we have some good ass fuckin bud. Ill smoke you
out with 2 grams
I feel you on this shit man, but with my mom!
Im diggin this chorus, you should hceck out my song Chase the
Clouds Away.
daaaaamn this shit is dope!
cause ur used to spitting evil shit lol. Im into that soul shit na
mean?
check out ma verse bro!
haha aight but I aint a serial killer, ill give it a try.
If ur talking to me naw bro. .I dont have anything out yet. But my
cousin recently got his mic connected and he makes beats, so I
might go down to tha valley and record some shit. Ill probably have
some stuff out in July tho. Ill keep you guys updated!
fa sho dawg. what do ya wanna write about?
haha I know you said my mom doesn blow. .I said dont come back
with a diss saying some shit like that cause its dumb. But ur verse
is aight. .Mine was better.
check out my diss on beastyflow!
beastyflow
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.23.09
you post first!
Dude im gonna record this song, and make love to a girl while its
playing lol.
is this gonna be a mixtape err what?
since were all talking abotu shoes and clothes n shit. . who else
where levis on this site?!
danny diss
0.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.23.09
bro Im not fat.
I got into spitting last summer but Inever wrote lyrics down and I
started taking it serious this year, like I write every day and
shit. But I have no way to get my voice heard, I cant afford a mic
or anything to record, so I juss spit with the homies. I wanna
record so bad
yeah Lil Wayne has some metaphors I thought were never possible to
explain haha. Im 16, I stay in Palmdale. .tha 661!
I hate how DC shoes are fat tho. I stick to nikes and vans
Hell yeah, Immortal Technique is on my top 10 favorite emcees. Lil
Wayne is legit too, just not his Lollipop and Prom Queen shit. I
only listen to his mixtapes.
dude imagine Vans and heelies together?! Thatd be too dope
sik wit it!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.23.09
daamn bro you fucking amaze me. Im so stoned!!
Dude NOBODY could ever write like Slug. Atmosphere is my favorite
artist. .U should check out their Overcast album, every song on
there is dope as fuck. I dont try to write like other rappers, I
write whatever comes through my mind, but emcees I look up to would
be Slug and Evidence.
KINGS MARCH
9.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.23.09
good shit maayun, you remind me of Immortal Technique.
space time!
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.23.09
haha damn ur rhymes are good. I dont know what I was thinking when
I tried to battle you lol. Stay up!
I like this line. . "appreciate who you have thats the lyrical
lesson RIGHT THERE cause i had a dream come true too bad it was a
NIGHTMARE" nice work. Keep it up
hit me up on tha space! myspace.com / my_darkest_hour
damn dude ur fucking good, i like the beat. .your voice sounds good
too. .no homo. U should check out my recent post and tell me what u
think.
let me hear u do ya thing!
aha nice drunk bars.
daaamn that hook is in fucking sane! all 3 verses are legit too.
Freestyle
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
I know syllables and literally dont rhyme haha. I wasnt trying to
make them rhyme, and yeah this is a freestyle. .how tha fuck would
u know? Are you like some emcee magician that can tell a freestyle
from written stuff?
this is good shit bro. U kept it real.
crazyflow
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
oh haha. .Naw I have it somewhere in my notebooks. I wish I could
record it but I dont have equipment or anything.
Fa sho Ill be on the look out! I finally put the url in my other
post, check it out.
crazyflow
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
youtube.com/watch?v=u1gYjL16pHc&feature=channelpage
crazyflow
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
I put the url like 3 times but it doesnt show up in the comments.
crazyflow
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
ey super fresh just go on youtube and put "lil wayne outstanding"
crazyflow
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
yeah that song is dope, I wrote a verse to the instrumental.
Influences
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
ya I know what u mean spinna. But homies I got are so negative and
shit, so I spit with my cousin. .that foo is like 13 idk. Im trynna
get him to stick to rhyming cause its so enjoyable and creative.
Influences
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
Damn, I loved Pokemon when I was a young ass kid haha
short n sweet.
lil a diss
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
Ive seen u do better.
good stuff man!
KILLER
8.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
Im diggin tha Dr. Phil part haha. but ey Fuck that foo! solve your
problems by smoking weed =]
thunderbyrd
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.22.09
yeah, I hate how I dont have much bars but I think I got decent
rhymes. Ur next gudsen! lol jk
slap that computer and tell it to get its shit straight. .lol
thunderbyrd
8.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
fuck it, juss post some rhymes. Thats what I came here for!
B0RED
8.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
I leave it at 5 cause I dont wanna feel cocky and give myself a
high score, so I juss keep it at 5.
Spinna Diss
6.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
nice flow man, but its kinda lame when someone talks about moms
like that. .
B0RED
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
lol yeah thats why I mention second version. . Palmdale ma brotha.
I rep tha 661!
haha yeah I know watchu talkin bout thunderbyrd.
Super Man
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
I should make this verse longer, I wanna get it on the featured
bars section.
FreeStyle
8.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
haha "i think about pussy instead on countin sheep" good line right
thurr!
gotta dream
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
good shit maayun!
gudsen17
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
yeah I just speak about whatever is going on in my life. I like it
when someone relates to my lyrics, cause personally to me thats
what hip hop is about. Connecting with someone through problems and
feelings/emotions. I appreciate u liking my style!
Laid Back
9.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
ur rhymes are down! pretty good shit. .how long have you been
spittin?
I see you love hash brownies like I do hah. good stuff tho! Check
out my "daily morning bars" whenever u have tha chance!
good stuff man! i like the hook, its catchy.
fuck it
5.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.21.09
It doesnt sound like ur ready to go in a fight,
it seems more like u gotta practice on tha shit you write.
I dont know who tha fuck you are and i dont care. .
so beware when my rhymes come out tha air.
Theyll make u stumble as if u were standing on a chair
in mid gravity.
I dare u to bite my words with ur nasty cavitys.
Ray Diss
10.00/10
posted by danny rodriguez on 06.20.09
haha damn, I like your flow bro! straight dissed that foo.
this shit makes me wanna make love!
keep it up dude! im digging your style.