Who I Am
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.01.10
Not bad kid, I think if you focused a little more on multies and
vocab you could improve tenfold.
Lol why was this reposted? Ah well, people like it anyways haha. Oh
and I think Tarek got confused, the first verse is me, and skull
sniper is KC.. Just to clear things up haha
Garbage
Thats some real shit man, and I cn trust and beleive its all true,
because I know you dont lie about dumb shit. Well you got my
respect and it aint gon change, glad to see you post somethin
again.
"how can kids these days give a ten for a rhyme that has no point
or purpose,
but dont even read a script thats worth more than the core of the
earth is," That was some of the realest shit right there. How can
niggas just dickride and leave tens and not read the script. Smh,
damn liars. KC had a pretty good multi set on here, all you need to
do is clean up the grammar a bit and make a few corrections and the
shit would be legit. Dope stuff though guys keep it up.
Nothing less than ill. You came at 40 hard in this shit too haha.
The way you formatted it, and the rhyme scheme in each line was
somethin to be smoked, meaning it was dope. The things that you
wrote brings new hope to the notes. Lyrics are all created in the
mind, and the way you formulated this written makes me think it
would be better recorded.
Thats not bad, at least you can flow, but I doubt you have a Lexus,
and that picture you got up is just funny hahaha! Nah but on some
real shit you aint in young money so dont claim it. The audio isnt
too bad, the beginning had a nice flow, but at the end it kind of
just went off and went downhill, it improved slightyl, but it was
all aight. To be honest you need to work on being real in your
lyrics and not just trying to conform to mainstream music, whereas
I know you dont have anorexic wheels. Basically you have potential,
but you need to work on bein real and try to work on punchlnes and
multies.
Well I`ll say this, it flowed. Nice vocab, good format, and the
wordplay used, well more like the vocab is what it made it good.
Its only 14 bars though, so thats why it should be longer, make it
a 16, and "fuck ya crew with a old dude dirty diaper dick, ya scum
suckers" was kind of wack to be honest. "cant take back the hate
that made me leave your face cracked
rape rage itself n spit shells when released from the waist band?
Was alright, but it only rhymes if you have an accent, which I`m
guessing you have some sort of accent. One thing I can say is great
vocab though, but dont overuse it and do it to death to the point
that it doesnt make sense.
Well to be honest, this was very bad. Not good at all. The flow was
off so much, your lines were long then short then long then long
again making it fuck up the flow, most of the lyrics didnt make
much sense, but at least it rhymed. The cell line had no relevance,
"do lyricism" is incorrect grammar, and what was up with that drop
the baby line? That line had no relevance to anything you said, nor
was it good. There werent any multies, there was like two attempts
at wordplay, which didnt seem to work well, an no punches. Overall
this is a bad audio. But I will say one thing, at least your doing
audio, so this is a good start. Work on your flow, try to
incorporate punchlines and multies, and work on making what you say
make sense and being relevant to the lines before.
lyin ass nigga lol
im out..
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 08.12.10
That was probably your best and most real post ever. Honestly. The
flow was legit, there were almost no lines that didnt make any
sense, the storyline went well with the topic, and the multies were
on point. Well I know you`ll be back one day, and when you come
back we`ll make an epic collab.
Lowzone isnt in gmn.. and this wasnt very good. To be honest, I
mean I didnt expect better from you because you arent that good
either.. but yeah.. try again..
Thats not bad man.. I`m feelin the vocab but dont overuse it or it
will fuck up the flow of the song, do you record??
Do you really think your better than me or sean?
Lol nigga your garbage real talk
Made It
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 08.09.10
This really isnt that good though to be honest.. You need to step
your game up before you even think of steppin to me or any member
of GMN.. Undead Solidiers and shit compared to GMN... Real talk..
Made It
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 08.09.10
Man you aint made nothin lol
If I could, change my past, back into the present.. I wouldnt
hesitate for a second.. It would be done, done and over with, my
mind is left open and.. They thought they left me broken..
If I could, change my past, back into the present.. I wouldnt
hesitate for a second..
On the past I am chokin, the present is potent.. The futures what
I`m smokin.. Still my mind is left open..
Lol.. garbage.. ass.. mothafucka..
Not horrible, but you could use a lot of improvement. I think you
need to work on your delivery, and flow, try to incorporate some
more punchlines, this was something that had a variety of different
punch possibilities but you didnt seem to use any. There isnt any
multies, the beat is good, the flow was ok, I think you need to
slow it down, and ride the beat instead of trying to drive it, the
delivery was forced, and each time you say takin rap back it seems
like it gets older each time because you said it so much.. It was
alright, but all you really did was talk about takin it back but
you didnt mention any of the greats, dre, pac, em, eazy, snoop,
there were no name drops, and it kind of took away from the
creativity of the topic. Overall it was decent, sounds like you
have some ok quality but you def. need to learn how to mix your
vocals.
Wheres that diss to me at ????
saying yall sick really you straight fine/
lol that sounded like you sayin he fine and thats gay and what the
fuck this diss is like... a 6 at best lol this shit has no punches
you just talkin and no multies.. you just talkin.. i kill you nigga
so im gonna pick it up/
like your face when i have to rip it up/
.... garbage lol what the hell nigga you could never beat me lmao
Most of this was just capitalized words that were not punchlines at
all, and the quotations have no reference to anything, considering
multies. It was an alright storyline, but the last thing you said
didnt make much sense with the storyline as a whole, it only worked
with the end. Work on your multies and punches, and try to be a
little more creative. Flow wise it was alright, but it was choppy
at points, and some of it was just stupid, but it was alright
overall.
LMFAO!! Wasnt IV callin us internet pimps, and now he`s callin this
chick "sexii" lol what a douche.
Change
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 08.04.10
Thats kind of more like poety then bars, but I was feelin it, it
kind of made it choppy, but I could envision someboy speaking this
on a microphone in a chill laid back place, a small coffee shop at
night where people do poetry and shit. Not bad though, the message
was kind of running on, and there wasnt a lot of substance to it.
You should talk more about what has actually changed in your life,
and make it more personal, and unique to you. That would be dope.
Overall though its pretty decent.
Not bad.. The quality is kinda shotty, and the flow is lacking
slightly, but I`m diggin the message, when you redo it might be
better
Who cares about that kid anyway.. who is he lol
That was pretty nice man, my dude 40 lohh keeps talkin bout you. I
see why. This shit was nice, a little mixing troubles but its good
overall. Let me know if you tryna collab, I got a few things Im
workin on that could use a second verse.
Lol this was iight, not many punches but the flow was there, lol @
vegeta, hes such a hater, left 0`s on my shit too, twice on the
same page haha. But yeah man, the flow was there, some simple
rhymes, although it was a freestyle so cant really complain. You
got some thick ass ass eyebrows though! You might wanna trim them
shits bro. Lol
SHOOTIN!
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 08.02.10
THAT NIGGA VEGETA ISA GARBAGE ASS HATER LEAVING ZEROS ON EVERYBODYS
SHIT AND HE AINT GOT NO BARS UP! YALL SOME WACK ASS NIGGAS!! RILL
TALK!!
Heroes
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 08.01.10
Thats dope man. I like the way you structured it, even though its
not bar format, it flowed pretty evenly, although at some parts it
lacked end rhyme, therefore making the flow hard to follow, it
picked up with the story. The chorus was nice too. Keep it up.
Not bad man.. the mixing needs work, the audio needs to be turned
up and it skipped a few times, but its all good, it wass done on an
ipod touch.. lol nice doe
Thanks man I fixed it
Thats dope man.. lol. Hey if you wanna write a hook or chorus for
my collab Life with Fresh on it you can, just post it and let me
know whats good
MAN FUCKDAT!! WHERE DA BATTLES AT!! I SENT YOU THAT SHIT TWO DAYS
AGO N IT STILL AINT UP RAY!! YOU FALLIN DOWN ON THE JOB!! AND YOU
AINT GETTIN WORKERS COMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh noe
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.26.10
ALL YALL NIGGAS SUCK ASS!! THIS KIDS A BEAST! ACKNOWLEDGE HIS
BEASTNESS!! !!
LOL Bro Jericko is from Rap Royalty and Sik Wit Skills is from
IAmCrack.com I know both these dudes haha, the remix was tough
though.
MIXTAPE
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.24.10
Thats whats good man, try to get it out soon man, I`m doin the same
thing.
Well I sent my verse, the time now is 11:24. I got it in before, so
yeah, drop it haha
Throw my name in this bitch
Were you the guy that said he could step to some of the best and
beat them? I hope not.. Because.. This isnt really that good, the
flow is off, most of it just doesnt make sense, you dont know how
to create a proper sentence, the way you structure it is painfil to
the eyes, the title is incorrect, because this is only a diss,
seeing as how his verse is not here, and its really just lyrically
not that good at all. The concepts you used are played out, you
used virtually no internal multies, I was surprised there were end
rhymes that actually had multies to be honest. It was pretty much
just all around bad.
Damn man I gotta give it to you, this shits raw. I really like the
emotion you bring to the track, and the way you deliver, its kind
of different, thats why its good, your not like the average emcee.
The hook is some real talk too. Check out my new track Dont Play
With Fire Featuring C Smoke, its on my page, just click my name.
When I first joined the sight I did this same thing, and I smashed
on everybody that answered the call, for some reason I dont see you
doin the same thing, but if you wanna battle we can get it in
Well you can definitely flow, but you need to learn how to turn up
the vocals, equalize it so the quality is better, and you need to
get a better mic, the lyrics are pretty decent, but I had to turn
my computer all the way up just to hear them, you need to learn how
to mix, and then when you get a better mic it will all come
together. If this is your first audio then good job man.
That was actually pretty dope man, that "My berettas got an agenda"
shit was nice, and the Mikes Massiahs word play on his crew was
pretty decent, it will actually bea challenge for him haha
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.22.10
LMFAO ARE YOU SERIOUS?! You made a crew as my name to try and say
your better than me.. thats sad man... seriously.. haha
Well I gotta give it you man, the flow was therem imagery, vocab,
and mutis were all present, no name/wordplay, but its not a diss so
that doesnt really matter, solid piece you got here man. Like WAB
said, if you spit it on Audio, and the delivery was nice, then it
would be twice as dope, if you do spit on audio hit me up, we might
drop a collab.
Lol thats what I`m talkin bout Hype, I think most of the punches
hit pretty hard, there was minimal filler, maybe 4 lines max, but
thats fine, this shit was still pretty dope.. Cant wait to see what
he comes back with, and what with with that "forgot to type the
c`s" line?
btw vow weezy and highdistortion are biters and should not be
allowed to be in this tourney anyways.. just sayin..
Well if any more spots open up, add me in, and let me know..
Beat 22
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.22.10
I would have to say that both verses are dope, I dont feel like
quoting shit cuz im tired, but good job to both of you, KC stepped
up on this shit.. Profound had his original sickn ess, and that
superman line made me eyes wide.. yes.. I said made me eyes wide
lol
The third set of 4 seemed forced in the flow, but overall its
pretty decent, you rap just like KC, aka Skull Sniper, I like the
style though, its a little more updated with multis that arent
overdone, hell to pay and necessary dont rhyme though, so you lose
points on that one, and it ended kind of weak, but overall it was
decent man, keep it up. If you have any questions you can feel free
to ask me, I`m down to help out a fellow mc.
Or "Ensound" thatd be dope lol
lol who the hell is this kid
Moonshine
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.21.10
Well I`m glad we got another person that does audio, let me know if
you wanna collab, I got a few things cocoonin, but I`m down for a
collab..
Thats pretty dope man, how do you master your vocals?
AHAHAHAHA LMFAO Get slapped in the glasses and Im like "damn,
b*tch, all I wanted was a sandwich, Im famished!"/ THAT SHITS
FUCKIN HILARIOUS. LOLOL Thats fuckin funny man, I dont think this
is good for a GMN tryout but this shits good for laughs lol
I didnt say yours wasnt more personal, I just said he had better
lines.. lol
Well good for you, lol either ay Rida beat you, he just came with
better scripts, I`m sure many others will say the same hting, I`m
cool with both of ya, but Rida came harder than you did, point
blank.
Well, to be honest. Rida took this battle, straight p, no argument.
Both came with good scripts, but ridas is better for many reasons.
I will point them out so nobody says I`m dickridin. First of all,
Rida had better punches, I mean come on Chris, Son/Sun? That is
like... not good at all, and the fact you put DAMN there made it
really cocky with a line that wasnt even that good. That Yo Dumb
Yoda line was forced, as was the whole star wars comparison, not to
mention its been used by countless people. Although the Yoda line
may not have been used, its still not a very good comparison based
on the fact that it doesnt flow well. Ridas script flows evenly all
the way through whereas after you took a break to talk about real
shit, your punches lacked, even though you said they were going to,
battles are about punches, coming harder, and being more personal,
I learned that after Rida beat me in the tourney. The overall
reason Rida won is because his punches, and flow, and name/wordplay
were better, Mr. U had virtually no nameplay, where there are a
million things to say about Ghost Rida/RoughRida, not to mention
Seans previous history of lies. You could have used all of these to
your advantage, but you settled for a less than average script.
Ridas got my vote, the reason has been explained.
Raw
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.21.10
You ought to be ashamed of yourself.. How can you just steal
somebodys lyrics like that? People put their heart and soul into
somethng, only to have others steal it.. How would you feel if
somebody stole something you put your heart into? Well you suck so
nobody will ever steal your lyrics. So you wont have to worry about
that. But yeah, kill yourself.
Shut the fuck up kid your a biter and I found you out, leave the
site with your held held down in shame. You do not deserve to be a
part of hip hop.
Raw
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.21.10
I SWEAR I HATE BITERS..
Raw
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.21.10
Army Of The Pharoahs
Wrath of Gods
[Verse 1: Apathy]
I could talk bitches out of they jeans
Gold diggers out of they cream
Little wannabe rap motherfuckers out of they dreams
Im slick, I could talk a hustler out of his fiends
I rap so hot, the water in my spit becomes steam
Im like a pound of uncut coke when hittin the scene
Yall are powder particles that trickled off the triple beam
Stop trippin, little chicken, I ain payin, Im pimpin\r
If ya waitin for trickin then you should date a magician
Wake up and listen, and keep this in the back of your mind
My thoughts are heavy, the weight alone could fracture your spine
Cats swear to God they high, hearin Apathys rhymes
And hold a torch up to trees like the back of a dime
These little backpack faggots probably jacked my lines
But like divorce with no prenup, half of its mine
Yall are just bitches (Esoterodactyl got morgues to fill)
While Aps on a mission to make green like clorophyll
You are a BITER kid. Get the fuck off of this site now. I knew I
heard this shit before. Leave in shame and never return.
Nah Fresh he said Stand in a Pose, like posing, not a Posse like a
group. Stand and Oppose. But yeah man this shit was dope, except
for that defeat line, its way played out, you almost lost points
just for using it, but the rest made up for that screw up, and that
line about leavin him shook without havin an earthquake is pretty
played out too, but the rest of this shit was dope, the wordplay
you used on christmas was dope, and the flo was almost perfect. If
I could give this an overall rating it would be a 9.6, so I round
up to 10. Solid diss bro.
Those commander in cheif and removing simcards lines were dope
man.. What can they do? Lol
Lol that Espy line and the Ghost in fights shit was beast..
Well I woulda beasted on everybody til it was e and pro in the
end... then it woulda been anybodies game lol
Well the multi I came up with is STILL in there, but thats cool,
this shit was pretty tough..
Well I`m just sittin here laughin at these dudes... "well i feel
like i should tity fuck u mad soon..." .. "not bad and lookin good!
whats up with u haha? " Lol I`m just sittin here like... :? haha
Ahahha damn Magick you puttin it out like that.. lol
THAT NIGGA SIMP IS SUCH A FAG!! LOL!! But yeah yall niggas this
shit was beastly as fuck son.. Did the come back yet?
The real talk is lets keep in mind I freestyled this in 5 minutes..
That was pretty good... but I never ask to use your rhymes.. Real
talk..
Not bad man.. I think if you incorporated more punches it would be
iight.. We could collab sometime if you want, get at me.
................word? fuckin stupid..
Obviously this is somebody playing a joke. Well it aint funny...
lol.. ok maybe a little, but you still bit my shit.
.............
Stop lying kid, youve been caught biting, just leave. Seriously.
Fuckin biting my shit... get outta here bitch..
This dude will slay them where they stand, with my bars. Ya fuckin
biter.
YOU FUCKIN BITER THIS IS MY SHIT!! I DID THIS A WHILE BACK IT WAS
CALLED BURDENED. Get the fuck off this site now.
lol iight i got you man well good shit here, keep it up
Sure you are....
Well I was about to say props to you, then I found out you were a
biter. Google these lyrics and its by some kid named ATrain on
yahoo. You ought to be ashamed of yourself. Leave the site and do
not return.
I`m just sayin, dont be talkin shit if you cant take the real
Yeah... this isnt very good at all, besides the fact that your a
simple dickrider, and left a 5 on my shit, I will actually leave
you honest feedback, even thought your probably too much of a bitch
to take it into consideration. The flow was ok, but the way you rap
is just an attempt at some mainstream, and its not very good to be
honest. You will not rise on the my16 charts. I doubt I will ever
see you on featured bars... You cant spell, your punchlines are
near nonexistant, you display no lyrical prowess, you lack multies
in all forms, and you just are not on my level. You should probably
just quit rap right now, your not very good anyways. I havent seen
any pictures of somebody named "Stafford" as Americas Most Wanted,
so you lied, and the way you ended it was just stupid. However, I
have left actual feedback, whereas you commented leaving a 5
rating, with a dick riding comment saying "It sucked a dick"
Obviously portraying yourself to an uneducated, brown nosing dick
rider.
Blackout
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.14.10
Thats some weird shit man.. kinda like Ems style but its some other
kind of shit, it rhymes, but thats just some weird shit. You talkin
bout fucking ducks and shit lol but yeah this was pretty funny man,
not bad. Incorporate some punches and more multies and what not,
then you could start gettin better.
DICKRIDAS
6.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.14.10
You probably shouldnt finish it because its not that good to be
honest. I think you need to press spell check before you send this,
there were a lot of mispelled words, and some things didnt make any
sense. It seems like your just starting out and what not, so you
need to focus on punchlines multies flow and try and be more
creative, the concepts you have here are pretty basic. You really
need to focus on flow, it was hard to rap it to the beat, because,
well, it really didnt flow too well. You need to learn how to ride
the beat, not try and attack it with so many words.
Top 5..
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.14.10
Man get the fuck outa here lol
OH NOEZ I HAZ BEEN DEEMED A RACIST... shit up nigga lol
"you thought you could control the net, im the master of mind
games,
ill have you using your facebook password tryina log into your
myspace" That shit was fuckin killer son. Not to mention you used
the beat I dissed you and 6 other people on, so that was pretty
much epic lol. This shit went hard, and the last line is nice man,
you got hella fuckin personal lol beast shit man
"I got my suit, tie, and briefcase, time to show you what the
buisness is
Im back to murderin rappers, but this time, theyll be no witnesses"
That was my favorite line in there, it had the best flow out of
everything on the beat, the other lines flowed well, but this one
was much better. I think you should start starting more sentences
with larger words and create multies out of them and see how that
works. But anyways this shit was dope man. "Good shit"
What the fuck johnny bravo is this supposed to be a diss or
somethin...? LOL
Oh crap
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.11.10
This is horrible. What the fuck is that guy talkin about lol
The multies were beast, another generic compliment about how good
the peice was, blah blah blah, good shit, pokemon, water jugs, and
a five dollar bill. Nah but forreal this shit was good, I think you
should have changed up your rhyme scheme in the beginning, but the
multies and vocab were great, and it flowed excellently.
Yeah I would have to look at the other battles too.. but even I`ve
used a charmin punchline before, and I know a lot of people that
have. I aint doggin you I`m just sayin it could have been better.
This was alright, not many of your usual punches that are really
good, or the wordplay you use, but its structured perfectly, and
its got a decent flow. The sun/son line in line four made no sense
at all. The Charmin comparison is so overused I was surprised you
tried to revive it, but it didnt seem to work out very well. That
jail time line was decent lol it made me laugh. The opener was
pretty good, it started off with a good flow then kind of went
slightly downhill, then stayed like at the halfway point, there
werent many metaphors, multies, nor was there much vocabulary, but
its a solid diss. You could have done much better, I think if he
comes back he might be able to beat this, but if you come back
after his come back, then its wartime. I know how that goes.
Overall it was decent, nothing really stuck with me, but we`ll see
how the outcome soon enough.
Rendezvous with me in the chatroom at 22:00 hours and we will
discuss your initiation.
Hype diss
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.07.10
Desanto I ccant even front.. That shit was dope..
Bunnyz.. Lets get it in lol and Sketch.. We can collab, come up
with a topic.
"Perfect ~TIMING~ with my ~WORDS~, but never ~watch~ what i ~say~"
That was a dope ass line right htere, and that Halo and Hurricane
Chris line.. Those blood and crips lines with the tooth fairy were
nice too. Pro, that exclamation line was dope and funny as fuck.
That oil spill line and the saved by the bell reference and the pig
latin lettering lines were all dope too man. Awesome collab. We all
three might need to hop on another one of these.
That was murder son.. Lol Grime is dead. Rip Grime MC.
alchemy
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.06.10
"we gave up the credits man, giving glory to the mask,
i hold your story in my grasp decidint if ya worthy of our task,
kill the game, change the names im sending dorthy back,
cooking her dog in the tin man, and leaving them gory, stacked,"
That whole set was dope, and that old folks hips line was hot. The
beginning wasnt very good, then you got into a better multi mode
and the flow arose from the ashes and flames started forming when
you spoke of the nation and the gas mask evaporated turning into
ashes when you blasted the masterful art tactics from the center of
the labyrinth.. Tryna collab Im freein on the status.. lol pretty
dope man. If you uwanna turn this into a GMN collab let me know, Im
down.
That was pretty good man, I fucks with 9th hard, I used some of his
beats a while back in my R&B stage.. Expand the concept on this and
it would be dope, use more imagery, throw in a few multies and some
ore punches, as far as I can see you got a nice flow if you spit it
how you write it, just spice it up a little, and write an actual
two verses and hook.
The Video was just added for promotion.
"cuz i really do know i have a great talent but keep decidin to do
nothin
so its like havin a pretty girl on your arm for so long and youre
still not fuckin...." This may be the realest and deepest shit I
have ever read from you. BUY A MOTHER FUCKING MICROPHONE. I swear
man if I ever come across a large sum of money I1m comin to Denver
and we`re hittin up a fuckin studio for a week. No joke. This shits
like some of the deepest shit ever. I`m not even playin, and its
because its relateable to me too. I know I can do better in life
its just the fact that I`m too lazy to apply myself and do what
needs to be done. This is some real shit man, seriously. I mean you
could actually make it with this kind of mindset, these lyrics, you
need to get into a studio, buy the rights to this beat, and perfect
a delivery, flow, and mic presence and record this business. I dont
think the guy below knows what he just read, if he read it at all.
I can tell you put your heart into this, if you turn these lyrics
into a song, I will promote for you, and everything. No joke.
KC return
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.06.10
Not bad man, the multi set in the beginning was dope, but you fell
off way too much in the end, I was kind of disappointed, but
overall it was pretty good man. Just pick it up in the end and its
all good.
Well both of the were beast as fuck, and I think both had some good
punches, but mr u had more punches, even though pro had a better
structure and flow with it, and the whole multi set mr u had in the
beginning was pretty dope. I cast my vote for mr u, because of the
punches, pro came it, but mr u brought more to the table this time.
Side note; Mr. U also got more personal with his.
Well, the votes 5 1, me in the lead. We CAN go round two, but I
dont see the need..
preview
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 07.02.10
Damn man this shit is ill, if you tryna collab I`ll hop on this, I
REALLY fuck with the flow on this shit, and the story just seemed
to compliment the flow so effortlesslt, shit dope.
"i battle pros,and raddle skulls,ur AVERAGE JOE like the reality
show,u lil ho" So you sayin the words Im sayin now too? AND YOU
LATE WITH YOR DISS?! I mean you already lost on grounds of the
rules set, lol, but honestly, this wasnt that good man, not to
mention that average joes is in of my lines .. and the rest is
pretty much filler lol I got a job, Im a dude, you know this, so
stop lyin lol, and the pizza rolls line was ok, but again you
jockin on my style sayin I eat mcs and shit.. but its alll good....
I won... LOL
AHAHAAHH you wack and I`m bout to murk you
Paige Lee
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.30.10
Damn, at least somebody got that HAHAHA
Paige Lee
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.30.10
NO. lol
Paige Lee
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.30.10
FUCK THAT LIL CUNT lol
Sign me up as a one man team against both of you.
Paige Lee
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.30.10
You crazy fuck pro lol IMA BE MY OWN TEAM AGAINST YOU AND UNDEREX
IN THAT BATTLE TOURNEY
Paige Lee
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.30.10
this niggas a straight up liar... LOL
Paige Lee
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.30.10
PUT ME IN THAT BATTLE TOURNAMENT SON
This really is not that good at all. First of all you need to
format your shit better, check your spelling, and at least try to
make sense. "can have your life with a nod" That made no sense in
any way, shape, or for, OR language if it were to be translated.
Seriously, Paige, you need to step up.
We should collab again tonight man.
The whole beef is squashed.. 40.. That Forever Remix was ill bro..
The Epidemic has followers.. I have already recruited three
Operatives. The only place to go is up..
Not bad at all man, the rhyme scheme and multies were pushed just
even to hit hard, the opener was great, but there was something off
in the flow of the story, like it jumped to quickly from one part
of the rhyme scheme to the next, but overall its pretty damn decent
man, I like this kind of shit.
What the fuck is yall niggas talkin bout, this shit was raw..
HATERSZ!!!
Thats pretty good man, that tear a story line was some pretty dope
word play.. and that shins collide shit was ok, I think the flow
was good, but it was kind of too basic, mix it up a little, instead
of going with straight up 4x4 verses change it up some.
Who are you son
Son.. if you comin at my crew.. you comin at me.. Im bout to
stretch you
Rival?? Wtf??
The reason your comment didnt post is because you cannot promote
other websites on this website.
Bes Fran
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.23.10
This guys a loser VVVV but I love you bes fran
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee howd i get in there lol
Im still here though.. haha
I dont know man, all the good people have vanished into thin air..
haha
ello mate i am nu to the site but i wel merk yer face!
Biter. You stole this from mr u top rated bars.
"I make it affect the people like a deadly disease
shut ya trap hip hop is alive and will never decease " That was my
favorite line, and the pepsi line was good too. I see your getting
a little better but you need to work on an actual rhyme scheme,
because where you come from and how you say things does not rhyme
with how we say those things.
REAL life
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.21.10
Damn Kahari man this might be the best shit I ever read from you
man forreal
the rap boogeyman |X| 21 Jun 2010, 02:49
i actually never evn called myself an emcee. ive always considered
myself a lyricist. same as phenom
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Shit had me weak
Damn man that was some real shit.. If you can get on a level like
this again we may collab..
What.. lol the old admin sold the site but we all still here, you
just dont be around much, its dead sometimes, but at night the
shits normally poppin
How dare you group PROFOUND with these weaklings.. PROFOUND IS
GOD!!
Eyes so low and red they look like they can send lasers..
Sicknosis
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.17.10
Cool Ima go check now
Damn this is pretty hot.. I would send you the beat if I had it lol
Sicknosis
4.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.17.10
I thought you had a beat son lol my email is ensayne@rock.com and
you can just get at me right here with ideas aha
Sicknosis
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.17.10
Doesnt matter at all to me man we can get on anything and Ima kill
it
Sicknosis
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.17.10
Cool man cuz I just got a studio condenser producer USB mic
yesterday and my qualities damn good, so I could get on that or
somthin
"satan tries to buy me out, but we still collide no doubt
I pull the light of zion out, swing one time n hes dyin now
this is a stick up, I want the lyrics the beat and the emotion
gotta spit it out cause my brains overloaded n it aint closin "
"yall beef aint speakin my launguage, cause its no problemo " And
the way you ended it was all just awesome son lol amazing shit man
Ahhhh This shits FIRE son!! I get ALL OF IT!! Ahahaha !!
Ghettos..
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.17.10
The hair inside my butt and on my nuts is always ithcin.. even
though I`ve only been out of the shower for a minute..
Damn thanks man lol
Thanks yall!! This is some BACK TO SCHOOL type shit for me..
Damn dude I really feel you on this one bro Flowman is a little
stuck up and I never did like him but I dont even know him like you
do and he gettin to you like this thats some shit man
Yeah I thought somethin was a little off lol
Aww shit this collabs gonna be amazing son..
Damn pro this shits crazy lol
no.. just get out of gmn lol
CLICK LEAVE CREW WHEN YOU PRESS EDIT CREW BECAUSE YOU ARE NOT IN
GMN
Thats pretty ddecent man..
WHO ISMW
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.14.10
what the fuck son
WHAT UP
2.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.13.10
WHAT THE FUCK PRO DO YOU WANNA COLLAB OR NOT NIGGA?!
WHAT UP
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.13.10
Damnn.. Ima need to touch on that before I leave.. and We can
collab now Magick, you too Profound!
Not bad.. and I just might touch it..
Haters.
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.13.10
Pretty dope man.. my favorite line was "So my missions to excell
til im dead or imprisoned." You deinitely have a talent when it
comes to the ICP type shit
Not bad man.. I liked those fuckin a watch and celibate gats
lines.. and the finisher was an uppercut.. not bad man.. write some
more. maybe we`ll collab..
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS FUCKIN GARBAGE NIGGA!! OH MY GOD YOU SUCK NO
FUCKIN JOKE YOU FUCKING SUCK KID..
Question
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.12.10
YOU SUCK
GARBAGE
GARBAGE
GARBAGE
That shit was dope bro, and I could really relate to that EBT and
food lion and save a lot shit.. bottom dollar nigga.. thats where
we used to have to shop.. wal mart.. them places.. anyways. good
drop man, really relateable and pretty deep, better than your other
dumb high shit lol
Loser you got a comma after profound so you aint the real one lol..
We see through your lies..
Ayy man if you want to collab hit me up and I`ll let you know what
we can write about
Smoke.. ny nigga.. We`ll talk bro..
Ahhh my dude Smoke lettin em know whats up lol
That was pretty dope man.. keep it up..
battle me nigga... lol
THAT SHIT IS FUCKIN ILL SON
Only me and profound actually understood this shit. To grasp the
cocept of the way you worded this you have to be in an altered
state of mind, the way you spoke and delivery were amazing, this is
some very good lyricism right here. Its not punchlines, just some
real shit that really makes you think, with a splash of elements of
horrorcore, more horrifying emotion, is very suspenseful, I agree
with this.
get him
oooommmyyoooddd this niggas garbage son lol
Thanks man.. it means like.. We Gods murk any niggas that be dick
ridin dumb niggas.. Type shit..
This is what drugs will do to you kids.
this nigga sean is dickridin mr u... doin the same shit he did to
me son... lol garbage nigga.. garbage..
Let me know whos actually bitin son.. ima murk them niggas... vets
even.. straight up.
oh shit son lol yeah man we gon collab here soon.. ima let you show
these dudes who smoke REALLY is..
rAY.. TO BE HONEST.. I have seen you do much better. This wasnt as
good as some other shit I`ve read from you, the punches weren`t
very hard man, and hardly any personals except the last line, which
I chuckled at.. Nah but it was iight, not your best though
OHHHH YALL NIGGAS DUMB LOL
Mic holder shut the fuck up and leave the site talkin all ya
bullshit lol
you just had 3 vets tell you that you aint nice.. leave.
You seem like the type of dude to talk shit and NEVER back it up..
I fucks with king cobra.. you got involved.. COME AT ME AGAIN AND
IMA TEAR YOU TO SHREDS NIGGA REAL TALK
PROFOUND
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.09.10
that nigga mic holder is dumb as fuck
this niggas name is eighty hd... like.. adhd... A.D.H.D... THAT
SHITS ILL LOL but nah your rhymes need hella work, hit me u if you
want some help man, the scheme you followed wasnt bad though, i
like the tone of the piece itself, the way you presented the lyrics
made it done pretty well, just make it longer and come up with more
clever punchlines..
Well this aint a bad shot at horrorcore.. but it could be much
better... I see potential.. You alright. Collabed with profound..
maybe you need to get on a collab with me and I can show you what
Real Horrorcore is.. ask about me..
GMN
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.09.10
Word On The Streets.. is true. I had a song called word on the
street lol.. but I will smash any oposition..
Well cross that bridge tomorrow.. after I take this nap.. well.. go
to bed.. and.. we can walk over .. fuck it im goin to sleep. we gon
collab tomorrow lol
Lets Collab Shadow..
Thats pretty dope sweety.. Keep it up.. I got my eye on you..
Not gonna lie man.. That was pretty decent.. like the jumanji and
johnny bravo line and rits cracker and ammo and rambo lines were
dope.. We might collab. Approved.
I think you should just quit lol
"Santo said something in his diss about lotion, thats cute,
Ill drag you into the bathroom and smash you with tap shoes, You
lost your touch, but then again, I never saw you tough,
I advise you not to run, the air on my level will stop your lungs,
" That shit was funny and ill son lol damn man haha and that wack
since the birth of heredity line was dope son...
Damn bro this is somethin serious.. I`ma go eat somethin.. might
get smoked up.. then drop for this.. and GODS AMONG MEN our collab
we gotta do tonight..
Shadow
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 06.07.10
Thats because I can only be me bro, and all I am is Real..
Lol... why do niggas try to be like me... With my GhOsT
shit..
THATS MY NIGGA C SMOKE!! Get emmmm... This shit was ill son. I
looked at the title and aint even know the person that dropped..
then saw it was you and almost popped a brain vein son... "I need
that mic to speak the truth, baby not just music.
" That shit hit realll deep man.. forreal.. Im glad to see you on
some new shit bro.
That may be a possibility.
ayy man i gotta say this shit is all multies... but it dont make a
lick of sense bro.. ima go smoke then write somethin up with some
ill shit and vocab and multies that makes sense lol
That was alright.. no bad.. but not that good either.. the h1n1 and
aids lines are sooo played out, but you made up for it with a
pretty good flow, until the end where it got choppy and fucked it
up, but the multies in the beginning and next of kin lines were
dope.
Pro.. It was aight. Ima be straight up. It was ok, not your regular
shit though, I`ve seen you go harder than this. The 2 live crew
line was good and that death sentence line seems like you could
have played with it a little bit more, but not your worst.
YALL SUCK
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.31.10
LOL THATS MY NIGGA SPEAKIN THAT REAL!!!!!!
ooooo
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.31.10
you suck!
check my post to you called evilbunyz lol
Never thought you would stop as low as these wack niggas KC.. and
who the fuck is lyrical beast he aint a vet lol anyways good luck,
no competition with GMN though tbh..
yall niggas needa hop off eachothers dicks with that NOOO shit...
but yeah shits gonna end unless the new admin emails me back with
details..
BATTLE ME
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.25.10
Who are these niggas? LOL and baphomet I`ma get you tomorrow, all
three yall lames haha
MAN YALL ARE HATERS I WILL NOT LET THIS NIGGA MILLION GO DOWN WITH
A .50 SCORE ON A POST. FUCK YALL HE TRIED LOL
Honestly, Boogey came with a WHHHHOOOOLLLLEEEEE different style
than he usually does, and I bet it took him like at least an hour
to write that verse lol but Ima give it to boogey because most of
the punches hit hard, profound came with it, if it was a REAL
battle like outside with a crowd pro woulda won on account of
laughs but as far punches go boogey got it, I think pro had better
flow though, and whats with that WHOLE sentence in quotes lol you
didnt rhyme the whole bar after that with quotes lmao
"Inhumane spectacles powered by solar and electrical,
Shock tentacles turn the best rappers into vegetables," That shit
was just ridiculous man. Your a fuckin monster lol
Well I think it took a subject like this to bring the old Hype
back, its great to see you coming with this shit again man.
Favorite lines "Magicians with missing lipids see endless visions,"
That shit was just ill with flow and a little multi.. and "While
the humans make a habit of burning the atlas to ashes," The whole
set there was just ridiculous man. I think Im gonna go write my
verse now lol
nigga your gaaaaaaargabeeeee.. ANYBODY heres knows i would smash
you.. i just dont wanna waste my time with you
Murkedededed.
BATTLE ME
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
I`ll battle you.. WITH AN ORANGE AND CYANIDE
MUAHAHAAHAHAHHAAHAH!!!!
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
DO YOU REALIZE YOU GUYS HAVE ONE OF THE LONGEST RUNNING CREWS ON
THIS WEBSITE? THATS AWESOME!
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
AHHHHH LOOK AT THIS SHIT LOL
THIS CREW GOES HARD!
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
Spose was in this crew tbh
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
THE FIRST CREW WAS GARBAGE!
Young Boy
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
NIGGA LIVES IN NEBRASKA!
Young Boy
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
AHHHHHAAAA WTF IS THIS LOL
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
what is this lol
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS LOL
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
sweardagod lol
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
Whats this crew about? And who made it?
DEAD @ murk you with ease
Damn, thats whats up, my favorite lines of mine were the ecstasy,
subway, and siamese lines. and you know i like them roger the
rabbit and tetris lines lol
What the fuck is this? LOL I havent even heard of this crew...
Niggas startin crews on the low and not even reppin the shit LOL so
whats the deal is Aft3rmath the leader of yall niggas or what?
Thanks man, I got stuck at LIVE BILLS, but then after I put SIGNS
ILL I couldnt stop lol
are you serious nigga.. lol I`m willin to put money on it that I
know 10 people better than you here... the balls... fuckouttahere
with that shit lol
The roger rabbit and tetris lines were dope lol I`ll hop on this
shit
???
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
What the fuck is this lol
*Sucks teeth* Nigga you was workin on that already randomly lol
Dont matter forreal.. you pick one
Nah man I`m lookin for somebody I haven`t battled yet, but we can
collab
Lookin like a fuckin tourist dude.. "Just passing through!"
PROFOUND
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.21.10
The truth is he did have more bars, but I said 16 so he went over
lol but we gon run that round two just because haha
lol @ ass campers... man.. pro.. your like the only fuckin dude
that can actually step to me on this site and hold his own.. or
even win.. forreal
Any Crew
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.20.10
Only the strong remain. Looks like you were the best out of the
crew. I already knew that. If your willing to intern I make be able
to talk to Bludie about getting you in GMN..
what is this. who the fuck is sophia lol
"ima all male mammal, my iron nuts hang low like clickity clank
muhammad ali jab you to death while im sippin my drank" Ayy that
shit was just funny as fuck man lol good dis haha
These niggas right... you do suck.. but thanks for the compliments
and all that shit.. no response earned..
UniQue...
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.19.10
Smoke a cone... that sounds homo lol
I dissed you nigga check it out
The site is closing June 6th. So yeah, shut the fuck up cock
stroker lol
X who
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.18.10
OH MY FUCKING GOD YOUR SO COOL CAN I JOIN YOUR CREW?!
You all suck!
you fuckin suck man honestly. and this aint some type of "i hate
you but we gon be cool after the battle" type shit, you really,
really suck, badly. I never knew somebody could be bad at sucking.
But YOU proved me wrong nigga..
battle.. me..
battle me
Believe me, you will. There will be blood..
you suck man get off ensaynes nuts hes better than you.. lol nah
man but that "I know more torture methods than SAW two hundred n
fourty four" shit was beast lol ima reply tomorrow im bout to go to
bed now
Well hes coming back, were doing collabs, keep an eye out for
them..
Lol oh ok I got you, and yeah I am a vet and all thanks.. and yeah
me and hype are pretty cool. Hes still alive lol
wow really dude go on bars and type something instead of looking
stupid in here
Stevie Wonder was a singer man..
"These white lies are gonna lead to white lines," I think that shit
was so simple but it still hit hard for some reason. The hook and
the demand you gave at the end for the hook was pretty dope too.
Precision and decision were the only things that really even
rhymed.. and Im surprised you even used those in proper tense...
you are garbage though
That was actually pretty decent man.. not bad. I liked the multi
set in the beginning and that same flow shit.
Most of it didnt even rhyme, and it is formatted poorly, and you
need to change your name, because there is only one Joka around
here.. and you know that man..
"while I combine mine with devine heavenly design" WHAT A MULTI!
LOL and "i can spit longer than you can read, till your eyes bleed,
spit colder than ice cream, spit cleaner than white sheets,
spit till i make ice freeze, spit till i influence white teens,
spit eons of ion beams, spit till i spit blood on my own sleeves.."
That whole shit was just cool haha "when the Hyperbole is drastic
you know who smashed it,
the average maverick isnt fantastic or slightly passionate," And
this multi here flowed rather well. Andthe way you ended it with
that set hype was cool haha good job guys
If you liked it whats up with the 4 karismatic LOL
Sweardagod... LOL
No problem dude, Im not really a dick or a dick rider, I just pick
on new guys, your alright though, you can take criticism when its
honest, most people cant.
Not too shabby, I think you could have come up with harder
punchlines though, and some of the lines were a little off flow
wise, I think if you made most lines even in length with a
comparable amount of syllables it would flow much better, overall
this was a good piece, you came out kind of slow, like a movie that
doesnt take off too fast, then it kind of picked up pace, and it
hit a plateau effect to the point where I was just reading and not
much else amazed me. Nice subject, and you had a little creativity.
There werent any multies, nor much vocab throughout the whole
piece, but it was made up for in subject matter, relevance, and
delivery. Also, you my want to run a spell check, there are a few
grammatical and spelling errors, but again nice drop.
That was a solid diss, good man, but that ask beavus i get nothing
butt head line, Big L used in a freestyle in 98.. but that"switch
your backspace & enter key," shit was firee lol
We can go a few rounds for real this time if you want to pro..
you suck lol
DUDE GET IT THROUGH YOUR FUCKING SKULL YOU CANT BEAT GMN
who gudsen? nah he cool people lol
NAH THAT AINT GONNA CUT IT MAN THAT OCTOMOM SHIT WAS BEASTLY
ALTHOUGH I USED A SIMILAR LINE LOL
Gudsen your obviously a dick rider because I know you didnt even
read this you just saw it said fly boy entertainment didnt see who
it was from and left a comment lol GUDDSEN I CAUGHT YOU BITCHHHH
LOLOL
Come on now dude you know that shit murdered you, your really just
hatin now honestly..
"maim you n make the pain lasts longer than the octomoms labor"
That shit was pure unadulterated murder
Its Over
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.12.10
SHHUT THE FUCCKK UP BITER!!
I mean to be honest you just murked em, they really suck, lol
and it was garbage, i murked thy ass lmao
YALL NIGGAS ARE PLAIN HATERS!! LOL
wowzers..
WOH THE FUCK ARE YOU?! LMFAO wackness
Not bad man, pretty decent rhyme scheme, but you talkin bout you
dont bang then say me and my dudes carry blacks and blues, flags
and you talkin bout bustin shots sayin other niggas shouldnt. Just
seems kinda contradictory.
attack
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 05.10.10
Nobody in your crew will beat me in a battle. You all suck tbh.
Nah this is one of my freestyles I just whipped up, but its better
than anything you ever written. Tbh.
Gudsen, shut that shit up, this kid sucks and you know it, no need
to be nice LOL
Well I`m not gonna argue with a child, I am 19, and I am positive I
have made more money in a month then you have made in your whole
fiscal year. Smh. And as far as females go, I got a Harem. So hop
off the sack nigga, I am better, ask ANYBODY.
"when it comes to paper we get naughty like nature" That line was
so basic, but the shit hit. And Noyz came decent with the flow on
this, and his vocab was upped, but the multies were lacking both
verses. Try to use a little more multies, and Noyz, try to come up
with more clever punchlines. "diamonds and fame,they just chasing a
lost cause,
im rolling with a trench coat and moxberg sawed off," THat was my
favorite line from Noyz. Also, Lambs and name do not rhyme. Not bad
though guys.
yall niggas dumb lmfao
Well overall these were some hard punches, but you contradicted
yourself saying "you see i dont talk about guns in my raps" Then
you said in the end "gotta bannana clip fulla Teflon u can catch a
round from it" So you know that kind of took some flavor from it.
The "cut ya wrists off" and "KEYS" lines were fresh, and the blood
crip LK shit was just funny. "tell me how ya ass feels when you get
out the pen,
what you doing 5 to ten, " idk i sold a gram a blow it probaly
depends"/" That line right there was just fucking hilarious haha.
Well this was a pretty well rounded diss, personals lacked, but the
punches were hard and the lines were funny. Good job man.
No, no but really. In all seriousness you guys really suck.
FIFTH TIME!
fourth time! LMAO
Thats the third time you edited that comment MW..... what the fuck
this nigga just changed his rating from a 1 to a 7 i saw you do it
ya lil pussy lol
word? lol nah he didnt own me
Nah I made that shit up to be honest, and the only rap you read was
a play battle, I dont even have to explain myself to a peon like
you. I could epicly destroy you and devour your brains if we
battled. Seriously. I am better than you. Bar None. And I dont
drink mountain dew. I drink water. You suck, and you both fail at
life, and give eachother tens because your gay for eachother. We
got BrokeBlack Mountain in this bitch... The number is what you
need to call though, or somethin, cuz yall niggas garbage to be
honest.
What? Dude seriously you honestly fucking suck lol nobody is going
to think this is good at all. Call the number.
*Ahem* What.. IS this bullshit?! In all honesty, and I`m not saying
this because your dissing me, but you really do suck guys. Forreal.
This goes beyond the point of a diss. If you want pointers I can
help you out, honestly. Call 1 800 RAP HELP. Thats 1 800 727 4357.
I`ll be on the line waiting when you call. Dont be ashamed, we`ve
all been wack at one point or another. That number again is 1 800
727 4357. It spells RAP HELP for the last 7 numbers. Give it a
call, I promise you will not be disappointed.
No Contest
what is this bullshit lol
Well obviously they too pussy to see me alone so they could never
take GMN..
Who the hell are you? LOL GMN is STILL and will always be the best
crew on this site and we still retain the title...
Pros gonna murder you guys... I would murder you all single
handedly as well tbh
I mean I already chewed you up and spit you out lol no reason to
reply haha
Calm down guys he just dissed me for fun lol
YOU SUCK! BRING THE SITE BACK YOU DITZ! I LOVE THIS SITE! lol
lol, dude your ridicuous...more... MOREE!!! LMAO
you suck, cant spell, and you spelled iornlung wrong... dumbass lol
Well damn dude if you can come up with some more shit like this I`d
be willing to collab with you. Very good flow, it flows smoothly
all the way throughout, even with the shorter lines, and thats hard
to do. The vocabulary was unparalleled. Amazing multies in the
first verse. The second verse ended very nicely, with an offset
flow that added to the piece in a calming manner. The concept just
grasped my mind and refused to release it. This is indeed a
masterpiece, in text, if there ever was one.
Thats actually not bad man, relatable too. I like that part, "but
soon ill be gone and youll never hear from me again/
you wont even get a letter as if i didnt have the pen/" I think
that was pretty fresh. And the flow was pretty good man.
If you want to battle post a diss and I will reply..
both of those verses were shitty tbh
"think your that important, your posts are a tattered assortment
ya mom shoulda had an abortion, but the world wasnt that fortunate"
That multi was awesome lol and that STARCRUNCH shit was crazy, and
this line is true. "since the best left lames think they great,
that bullshit will have to cease" Niggas think because we left for
a week or two they run shit, maybe GMN better hop on that wagon and
bomb some crews..
im mad you left me out of the equation, you know i smashed crews
lol
Why are you still posting here? Come to RR dude lol, I swear if
they dont close this site Ima come back lol
Hey man your a pretty good emcee when it comes to writing, havent
heard audio so I cant really judge too much, anyways, come to rap
royalty.com Thats where its at now, and when you sign up type my
name into the referral box. This is where were goin because my16 is
shutting down. And I was feelin that 7 c`s line, shit was dope.
Not bad man, but your stuck on not finishing the piece, like it
only has 15 bars, nice flow with this one and the multies were ok
iight get at me in the chatroom
Not bad kids, if you made it longer I could really vibe to it, the
way it was spit made it seem off flow like it was missing a line or
somethin rho, but nice internals and end rhymes
Well I think I gotta give it to C4 too, because he came with harder
words, not exactly punchlines, just a better word choice. But whats
wrong with two dollar bills? I got a bunch of em.. nothins gay
about that Tinii... LOL
shut up boy LOL
BECAUSEYOUCANTDOITYOURSELF!ANDILLBEASTONANYBODYHOE!
Always comin with that good shit man. Seemed like some Eminem type
shit, I think you should have made it an argument with yourself
inside your own mind, and have your spirit realize that you were
looking down at your body instead of your girl cheating on you. but
still good story man
This was ok. No punchlines or wordplay, basically your just
talking, got an ok flow. I`m giving an honest opinion, so take it
to heart, and dont just come back like fuck you, and some bullshit,
that means you too doc i see you gettin mad when niggas talk to yo
girl lol
Whats up Doc? Why the hatred? Tell me why I felt like BUGZ BUNNY
SAYIN THAT lol nah but wassup girl
yeah man if you can think of a good site and shit i might be down
to tear up another site haha
yeah man that jason kid posted a zero on one of my posts lol
JASHLEY
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.27.10
lol at this kid hatin on me
yeah definitely too cocky bruh, nice , but even i aint that
cocky... forreal.. des.. lets be serious
Not bad Blitz. You need to start making the shit in better format
though, bar format. That way its easier to read, and use some more
punches man, it was just multies, but at least you can do multies
haha. That green screen shit was funny too like in the movies lol
Not bad man, I can really relate to a lot of this shit here,
because I have been thinking of doing a post like this for a minute
just never did. nice in the beginning but kind of fell off in the
end.
Nah man...
Iight doc and hp, i feel you, ya better get ya lil sis before i
bust her ass though, the bitch aint bout to speak to me like she
could EVER be as ill as I am LMFAO bitch ya need to check yourself,
or I`ll NIKE that ass..
hold up bra... sicknosis will murder all of yall just like gudsen
would... lol.. the gudsen diss was probably the best,but.. that
beat is like... not working for you guys, nobody flowed forrreal..
and OH MY FUCKING GOD.. that little girl can not rap... lmao.. she
sounds like brittany spears on crack... and drunk... trying to
rehearse a wannabe eminem verse.. nah, scratch that. She sound like
MEG off of FAMILY GUY tryin to be gangster.. forreal... haha nah
but everything i said is honest opinion. Nice effort, it was
mediocre at best, the last dude had the best flow and shit, but
gudsen or sick could EASILY murk ALL of you.. haha. I wish I could
give a 7.3 or some shit, because it doesnt deserve an 8 but
deserves more than a seven. ahh well.
Aftermath
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.25.10
I want to edit this shit, because its cool but the grammar is off.
Still a ten from me though lol
"you cant harm this, plus i got the rock an i palm it
blood sparying out your top leaking all on your garmets/" That shit
was tough. "or you might get the best of me,
i treat the booth like a kitchen, i got the recipe/" That shit was
nice too man. "Im in my prime when i rhyme like picasso paintin
pictures
jesus christ flow, reading off biblical sciiptures
cause i got alot of flavor with these stylish mixtures/ " That shit
hada nice multi set too man. Too much good shit to keep listing lol
good job dude
my flows like crack it got all yall addicted" "
"I flip more scripts than yoda, im the X factor like lamar odom
you got no cohones only raisens, but ive grown enlarged scrotums"
That shit was ill dude lol "take the ass whippin like a bony bitch,
beatin you like you owe me shit
one punch n your nees will buckle,another one n your dome will
split" That shit was just fuuny and mean as fuck lol. Nice diss man
Well damn I gotta give it to all three of yall, KC surprised me
with the multies, although some of the vocab and context, and
grammar was incorrect, he still did good. UnderX came with it, some
nice punched, and Boogeys was sick, had some nice vocab, and just
the was it was worded was ill, and the flow was on point. FUCK
YALL! ... for not asking me to contribute to this.. lol
"ive already proven myself, i cant outdo myself every time,
they want you to fail, so they can judge your every rhyme," That
shit is true man. "a dragon with a bag of magic ready to sprinkle
madness,
my axe bashes and thrashes the atlas and evil axis," That line just
had a perfect multi set and flow with it. And the line that
followed it was good too. But the last four bars were kind of
random and didnt make much sense. All around though this shit was
pretty nice dude. I think the first verse was the best, and you
kind of just started speaking truth after being sick during the
second verse.
GUDSON
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.23.10
Man.. what the fuck is this... lol doc10 told me you was good...
SOMEBODY LIED TO ME!! LOL
I gotta say man, I thought it was gonna be garbage, but you had
that crossfire chrysler line in there and that quarterouys line lol
nice man, but when you rate use the rating system, its right up
there where the comment is lol
ensayne
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.23.10
mixcraft is iight, but you gotta pay for that shit
ahh i feel you. i aint got time to record now im too busy with
other shit, i might be takin a break from this site, and a break
from the internet hha
ensayne
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.23.10
audacity and a mic, and some headphone i got from my 11th grade
comp class
We only had beef like one time though lol and yeah man, where tha
fuck you been at
Thank you. I know what you mean, if niggas read my shit, and then
say I`m bitin.. that just must mean my shit is too hard for them to
accept the fact that I wrote it... LOL
oh iight yeah niggas be straight hatin though lol
doduo.
Poker
6.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.23.10
I must say, your really not that good, so dont try to give me
pointers, or say that my shit is bad, until you come up with
something better than this, and learn how to rate. See the little
thing above the chat box that says rating? Yeah, that. Click it.
Scroll down or p depending on what you think it was, 0 is bad, 10
is good. Your alright, but you checked one of my pieces that I
freestyled in 2 minutes and formed an opinion about my lyrics, so
before you judge me, read my other shit. I gurantee its better than
half the shit you ever heard or read in your life, ask anybody
round here.
My Name
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.23.10
looks like you tried to use a character from characer map, my16
aint recognize it, and you tried to play it of.. i think thats what
you did.. if so.. FAIL
Tell me whos bitin nigga..... tell me... fuckin hater man.. you
suck kid.. forreal... see me in a battle
Freestyle
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.23.10
"Rappers need a lyrical connection and Im the one that keeps em
wired," .. "The game is losin employees and Im ready to be hired,"
and this one here "Im slaughtering these bitches like a soldier and
consider it infiltration," Only cuz I just did a post called
infiltration.. lol beast shit dude nice vocab, you used it all
right, and the flow was nice too man
Iight Sini, yeah man this dude just hatin cuz he probably sucks
monkey nuts.. I dont bite, and nobody in GMN bites.. the fuckin
cockneck..
TAY HIGGS
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.22.10
yeah what they said... lol it didnt make sense, but oh well, nice
try.
Good idea, if you wanna collab on it, hit me up.
Not bad dude, if you would have provided the instrumental and four
more bars it would have been much better, luckily I know exactly
how the flow goes. Not bad man.
what the fuck is wrong with you? go write this shit in a journal.
nobody wants to read about your personal problems, your really just
putting yourself out there and making yourself look stupid by doing
this..
I mean its pretty much just personal shit, i think poly came hard
on this battle, but you beat him imo. The shits just fucked up how
he can say shit like that, like if somebody read The Saddest by Emc
and said that shit, I would never speak to them again, read The
Saddest by Emc its pretty good, deep and meaningful, then youll
know whats up. But for now polymath, you are a bitch.. forrreal..
Nah Grime he was just in the crew, but yeah tough shit man, I`m
cool with FK and all but he be on some bullshit, thats why I don`t
fuck with him like I used to.
You gonna have to talk to bludie or phenom about that, i mean you
can try and write an ill 16 lines with punches multies and wordplay
but idk man the crew already pretty stacked..
Hello
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.20.10
hhahahhahaah you dumb whoever did this shit lol
Ha I liked that cant fuck with this pussy like he has aids line and
the last one was nice too man
BATTLE ME
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.20.10
Word? Why you got meth pic from how high as your picture... battle
me
is this a diss
Yeah dude your cool and all but you cant be in GMN. Bludie, Phenom,
or I didnt approve your joinin, so you need to leave the crew
dude..
Fly Shit!
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.20.10
Thanks dude, what part of the EC you on?
Fly Shit!
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.20.10
Not GSN. It`s GMN. Gas Mask Nation. If you look it up, nobody in
the crew sucks, we`re all pretty much lyrical beasts..
Fly Shit!
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.20.10
Out of all those names, Concept X seems to be the best, just my
opinion. But I`m GMN, so I wont join your crew, and I`m also here
to let you know you wont surpass GMN. Just sayin, but what part of
the East Coast you ridin on?
ensayne
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.20.10
hahahahaa tell em rock. nah but forreal kid i did just go to town
on your ass.. like i was ridin with olive oil to the town
square..... ahaahahahaa
Tangent isnt a person its the name of the piece.
Now thats some deep shit man. I`m feelin this. Let me know if you
want to collab.
What kinda beats you got?
How bout YOU suck your OWN dick!
Thick dicks? Are you gay grime?! and whats with the "greezy s baby"
?! You tryna be wayne?! And who the hell is red cafe?!
Stop wasting all your time writing these fucking
lyrics............. AND GET OUT AND BUY A GODDAMN MICROPHONE TO
RECORD THEM SO YOU CAN BLOW UP ALREADY!! Real shit though, this is
amazing, literally. Amazing. I`ve watched you grow over time, and I
think you`ve gotten much better.
Everybody here right now is dickriding on vocabulary. I`m going to
be a man and give you an honest opinion. It was ok. The vocabulary
was misplaced, the grammar was off, a lot of spelling was wrong,
and the capital letters are everywhere they didn`t need to be.
"UnFamished Relavents insults many Niggaz intellegence" That line
made absolutely no sense. Although I will tell you I liked this
line here. "this is a Classic gots deep Drastics Flippin niggas
like gymnastics" That hit pretty hard dude. "Contiplated" is not a
word. If you clean it up a bit, and correct the mistakes, and
change that one line I`ll collab with you on it though. Don`t be
all sensitive though. I`m giving you an honest opinion, that`s
something to respect. Let me know what`s good.
OH MY FUCKING GOD! That was fire.
poop sex? really? thats feckin disgestin... LOL
AYY YOU FUCKER YOU USED CONGLOMERATE TOO!!
Damn nice man. What up though, I heard you was writin for nu boyz
and shit.
I dont care you could have the prettiest ho.
You still have a nerds voice and the shittiest flow. " AHHHH HAHAHA
!! THATS GOOD MAN.1 Thats funny. And he really does like love DMX..
HAHA! Not bad kid, not bad.
Well, here`s the decision. Realeyez came with the fire, where as
Aft3rmath kind of came with a few childish punches. But the lines
after spit here" you got the white flag, you just have to wave it
first,
so you can catch what im throwing at you cause im using grenades as
words,
so go ahead and pray your verse, say AMEN Aft3r my name is heard,
if not, theres 2 guns in front of you, just like you came in 3rd, "
Was pretty good, but when eyez came with this, "You think that your
hotter? Well I think that I’m colder
Shoot at your chest and knock ur heart out the back your shoulder "
It was kind of over for me. I mean thats just sick. I`d like to see
a third round but I`m givin to to Real because his shit just came
off more legit, whereas math had some really good shit, it just
didnt feel like he could stand behind his words forreal. There was
more emotion in eyez shit than math. But Real what did this mean?
"If I wanted a battle dog, I would battle my poster" ? Do you have
a dog poster in your room? And what was with using October, it kind
of seemed like a filler line. And Math, what was wit this? " but
ill cock than finish, & literally use the term it will drop your
image, " Did you mean like the finish on an image? Like the
finishing paint on a picture frame? Let me know so ?I can
understand and possibly recast a vote based on refernces. As for
now, Eyez took it.
"So stop fronting like you stunting like evil kenevil
I’m on probation still cause they said the eagle’s illegal" Shit
was just beast.. "Rap without Realeyez is like a pistol without the
clips
Rap without Aftermath is like…..wait who cares???" That was just
funny .. but .. "You from FL no one from the rap game makes it from
there " Was kind of not good becasue Flo Rida.. is from Florida..
and he made it.. just sayin lol ... And the rest was good too. Now
on to Aftermath shit.. ""theres no doubt hes winning this", but
Grimes a BAD LIAR,
they wouldnt spit that iron, not even with a flat tire,
its right in your face, thought you got hit with a pathfinder,
face caught, will have his jaw looking like quagmire, " That whole
shit flowed and had good punches.. And the following line "there
was a line and you crossed that shit, aunt, bro, and ma got hit,
and sis was outlined with the same chalk you play hopscotch with, "
Was just funny. I`ll be ready to read the war that follows... as
for now... Realeyez got it of course.
YO ADMIN
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.13.10
Well I guess we better start saving all of our fire ass verses to
hard copy because this shit looks like its going out of business.
Seems like some shit lil wayne would actually say...
"People want me to “change”, so I just give them a dime
Still want me to “watch”, well shoot I’ll give you the time" "You
cant perfect this, I’m hungry so I eat fools up like breakfast
Wit just one diss, I’ll shoot shots at you just call them tetanus"
Those two punches were just.. LIGHTS OUT.. Nice shit man.
GMN Rep!
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.12.10
"While I got a hold of the game like a catchers mitt" That was my
favorite line in there, I think it was your only punchline. But
yeah man this shit was pretty beast. Way to rep.
vagina
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.12.10
MAN ARE YOU SERIOUS. YOU STOLE THIS SHIT. NOT TO MENTION THIS IS
THE MOST STUPID THING EVER TO STEAL. WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH
YOU?! FAIL FAIL FAIL!!!
Habit
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.12.10
"Every track i pick to spit is fucking classic
Like an accident acid trip fucking tragic " That shit right there
had great flow and multies dude. But you kind of fell off in the
third verse because the way you started it was kind of irrelevant.
It really didn`t make sense with the rest of the verse. But good
job on multies and flow here man.
It was ok. Didn`t really hold much substance. The message basically
says fuck you. There`s not many punches and it wasn`t very
personal. I think you could have done better. It was ok though.
"Infact im something you never felt before like a oral orgasm/
The possibility is infinit when I got a target for practice/
And it should be a lot easier now smashin a plastic actress/ " From
there on the flow was impeccable, although, I think you need to
devise a more clever way to get your punchlines across. Using like
and as are similes and metaphors, and thats good, but if you can
compare without using either, then you`ll be much better. Overall
it was pretty good man.
Not bad man, Just for the moment was ok, I liked the dude on the
first verse, I think I was listening to you on The Come Up on the
second verse, pretty good flow if that was you.
12 Rounds
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.10.10
DAMN IT PROFOUND!! I PUT SERIOUS INQUIRIES ONLY!!!
12 Rounds
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.10.10
Diss me, and then I`ll reply tomorrow.
You fool this ait no nikki minaj style! LMAO.
LOL Not bad man, I mean if I have time tomorrow to come back I just
might, and lol at Klondyke bar speaking the truth.
Well it`s about time you got down with the illness man. I knew you
would come to the dark side eventually.
Well damn this was pretty nice smilin chick. I gotta say you put
your heart into it. Sounds like you goin through the rough shit,
just stick it out and if its meant to be it will.
you still stealin biggies lines..
Haha good shit man, I like how you were like "But can you tell me
how the FUCK did your registration to THIS site get approved!?/"
LMAO and whats up with that A Star kid? He really sounds gay saying
lets make "MUSIC 2qetha" Unless its a female. But yeah good shit
man.
No, wavin the 4 4 is biggies line....
This was rather entertaining. Smh. I liked that nice dreams and
bleach in my ice cream multi haha
"Visions of money in my eyes so I always pay attention" That was a
good punchline there bwoy! "The sickness I spit it vicious,
chemical bombs hear them hittin
Yall bitchin cuz my wittems got hella percision and Im never
missin" That was a good multi there.. bwoyy!! "Demonic savage,
ravages the miniscule religious ministires
I have the perpincity to manipulate monumentous transparent
iniquitities" That was some good vocab there...... BWOYYYYY!!! And
you had a good ending of course too. I never get tired of reading
this ill shit man.
Man what in the fuck is wrong with you? The beginning was so ill I
read it twice, recorded it, echoed it out, made my own version of
it, bit your lyrics, got signed, then woke up, only to read this
shit, spit it, and sit here amazed at my computer screen. The first
four bars are jizztastic. They flowed impeccably, and as for the
rest of the verse, well, it was ill too. You sick little bastard.
That shoes in the hood, fantasy, and the dna line were all pretty
dope, you just need to rearrange your sentence structure, to make
it easier to read. Do more shit like this, and if you freestyled
this, sit down for a while and think about shit. It will be better.
FUCK YOUR CUMPETS!!! THATS RIGHT!! CUMPETS!! PITS OF CUM!!!
Well, I would not call this murder. But it was better than the
last. It`s ok man. I think you can do better though, this is kind
of just filler, theres not many punchlines or personal shit here,
its mainly just battle filler with mean things tied up in an
unorderly fashion.
Well, I`m going to break it down here. The first three were good
rhyme wise, but as far as truth goes, it kind of doesnt live up to
the expectation of Relativity. And I don`t know why you chose to
put only three end rhymes then go off into another scheme, it kind
of threw off the flow. The line "My brain is like a well that never
goes dry/" Was just too basic, I think if you thought it out more
it could have hit harder, otherwise its just filler. "Into the
dimension thats the 1st/
In hate and evil my soul is immersed/" This was kind of a forced
multi, because you wrote it backwards for the soul purpose of
making it flow, whereas if you would have said something else, it
would have flowed better, and made more sense. In the end it just
seemed like you were trying to make an epic ending, but it was so
long that it threw of the whole flow to the drop. It made it kind
of speed up, then suddenly stop, where it would have been better to
just let the end come easily. As far as lyrics go, it was ok, I`ve
seen better, I`ve seen worse. I`ll keep an eye out for your posts
to leave more feedback.
This isn`t Grind Time though.... Point is I beasted on thy ass.
Accept defeat kid, you`re making yourself look stupid..
Mehhh. It` ok. Those lines about fuckin my mom and the amount of
times you rhymed boy were just too overplayed. If we put these up
to a vote, I would be the obvious winner though. Nice try. Thanks
for the publicity though.
Nigga. You`ll be back.. like herpes..
Well, I have to say. This is pretty damn nice man. Kind of basic.
But it did get the job done. And I like how you kept the end rhymes
all the way through the verse, that takes a little talent, although
some of them were forced, and the "your mom gives me head" line is
so overused. But this was pretty good man, if I put them both up
side by side, I`d say you won this battle.
Well, I think you kind of had that Drake style in this one, how you
stopped then said something relative to the flow, I did that in
one. Well, it was pretty good man. Nice job, and way to rep the
crew.
Well. It wasnt the worst shit I ever read. But you definitely need
some work man. I think you need to focus more on your end rhymes,
other than your internals, because if the end doesnt rhyme then it
kind of throws the flow off. But overall, it was ok. Again, you
need a lot of work, but this isnt the worst I`ve read.
Death Row
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.05.10
Not bad man, pretty good story, a few typing erros but the ominous
feeling of the beat and the story made up for it.
"And I got dont get me wrong it been great and all I know that
But I would give it all away if I could have the venom in my throat
back" Yeah man that shit hit hard. I definitely feel you on that
one. Yeah man this shit is ill, its kind of like a recession, in a
good way.
This was ill. But it wasnt a diss. You gotta make sure you stay on
topic when you diss somebody instead of just saying random cool
shit. The more personal you get the better.
Ensayne
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.05.10
Not bad man. LOL @ Obnoxious ridin your dick because I murdered him
repeatedly. But yeah dude, gonna need to see more hard hitters,
your gettin better though.
Not bad man, I think this will start putting you into a higher
elevated state of mind, and by being battled by somebody on a
higher level than you, it will definitely make you better. Its like
coming into the NBA and playing against Lebron and Jordan
immediately.
Gas Mask Academy. I see you used my word there man. Thats whats up,
we are about to school these guys and turn them into savages..
LOL. You are not very good at this are you my friend?
i dissed back lil man check it out
a lyricist, come with more artwork than the ninja turtles names" I
LOVE ninja turtles!! well! That was rather entertaining. good job
lol
Not bad man, you rhymed killin em quick twice, but thats no big
deal really, but i didnt really feel the emotion, but you said you
were fucking around, but the flow was def. there man not bad, nice
job dude.
Man, what are you doing dude, this is just overkill lol
*Hands Bunnyz a fluffy.* You earned this. This was good man lol
write more to it and record it, and maybe we can still do that one
audio we were gonna do.
Ill indeed, so does this mean pro is gonna be going as silverback
from now on? lol
cypher
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.01.10
Space shit out man. Make them into bars. Otherwise this is pretty
good man.
ensayne
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 04.01.10
Spell? Nigga. I spell correctly. You, however, do not, and you
suck.
and your saying im gay talkin bout dick in your mouth.. garbage ass
nigga dont come at me
"Ill be glad to take ya money, like a vending machine/" lol that
line was so simply put, but so ill man good shit haha
"If the proof was in the puddin, I already ate it" ya fat booch.
that was a good line lol nice man
Well first of all the name did grab my attention, andanything with
Asylum in it I always read. Not bad man, I think this was pretty
good, a little basic, but still good rhymes and nice flow all the
way through.
"cut your footoff,put your toes in your mouth so you can taste
DEFEAT" lol that lone was just great dude, and the "pour GASOLINE,
put the PUMP in your mouth like you got ASTHMA" line could have
been better thought out but it was still good man. All I can say is
this is a step up, and rather surprising. Good shit man.
Well I mean all I can really say is that this was a really good
post. Phenoms stood out the most for me with that last multi, lol
and Pro had the flow, Unders verse was pretty good, but could have
been better, but this shit was still ill.
Not bad man, I thought this was actually pretty good, something
that was worth reading. Except that beaver line, I didnt really get
it, but its whatever lol
Do you know anything about rap? how you gonna do 13 bars, and have
the third bar not rhyme with anything? your ok kid. but your not on
my level, anybody would agree. so honestly just hop off man. Get a
life. lol
Aftermath
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.31.10
I dont need punchlines to beat somebody wack as you. Hop off kid.
Seriously.
Man what the fuck is this bullshit? With something like this you
could sign to young money and make millions... lmao
Not bad man, this is the kind of stuff I would rather read, I dont
know about everybody else, but seems real to me. Its actually
relatable and theres a pretty good flow to it, at some parts it
kind of went too fast, and in the end it seemed a little forced,
but throughout it had a pretty mellow vibe to it. I think this is a
step up. Keep it up.
Lol I have to say man the multies were definitely there man. If I
were to diss back again I could flip the shit out of this though,
but that only means it was a good diss lol
I see it.. A future collab between Ensayne and The Rap boogeyman is
soon to come... Lol Good shit man, definitely was pretty nice. And
the ending was just beast
Well I mean I cant really say this wasnt ill and be serious. I kind
of expect the best shit from you now so this is just the normal
really, for you at least. Beast of course though haha.
Yeah I knew this was going to come about, I was just sitting back
and waiting, I wasnt gonna say anything, but I wanted to see what
you two would say, I think you should battle for the name layout
lmao.
Hha not bad dude. I liked that slammed harder than a dennys plate
line and that bacon bits line. Maybe because I like food, idk
either way it was pretty good man lol
"I take pride with my bitter attitude on life,
And I look down on people who throw around love so light." That was
the most real thing that I read in there. Nothing like a woman
scorned to speak the truth. But the ending with that we know shit
kind of fell off, and I think you could have finished it stronger,
but still some good emotional deep shit.
Well, this was very good man, punchlines lacking were made up by
the flow, and just the whole feeling of it. Damn nice man.
Its kind of hard to believe that people that rap like this take
themselves serious. And that others feed into it, whether they
actually believe it or they just give good ratings to receive good
ratings. My opinion on this is that this "rap" you just posted, was
quite mediocre, the flow is choppy, the vocabulary is non existent,
and the punchlines are just not there. That being said, I have seen
worse. But I have also seen much better. My suggestion to you is to
talk about things you actually do, like what you do at work, how
your day was, what you thought of the girl staring at you across
the room from starbucks. You know, like actual shit people can
realte to. This here is just another street rap.
Cipher II
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.28.10
Not bad dude, it was kind of everywhere at times with no real story
or following point, but multies and flow were there.
I think you could have come much harder, I know you only spent like
20 minutes on it though so its pretty good, but definitely could be
better bro. I liked the cobra verse the best though lol
Well of course it was beast lol I liked both verses, but Phenoms
line "I straight RUN OVER MUSIC, you dudes cant even SHAKE THE
BEAT" was simple but still got the job done lol
Some Bars
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.25.10
I agree that it was kind of all over, and had no real meaning, but
the lines were good and multies were good too but you need to edit
the format a little better and maybe finish it lol and whats with
the three line rhyme? i never liked those lol but this wasnt bad
man
This is pretty decent dude, its hella original, you just need to
make your lines longer and more in depth..
"The Rap Boogeyman" Said: i actually think your recent disses
towards gmn are pretty good. I mean you definately upped your game
to get at them and ill give you props for that my man. I dont take
sides though i just give my response in a diplomatic way. Cause
gmn are some raw killers.. And you have people in your crew
that just cant really step up to the plate. You and beanie are
really the only ones i ever see post too. Regardless good disses.
And good luck lol go rate the battle between me and wizz kidd if
you get the chance.
Ayy I think he came at his sister, do you know Pro personally man?
Lol, this was ok, not bad, but indeed pro would murder you.
standouts
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.24.10
Pro and I already murked you alone, now The Nation went in on all
of ya niggas... the battle is over.. Victory goes to GMN..
Killacamm
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.24.10
Well anybody that comes at me or GMN will be handled. Looks like
Killacamm just got served, and isnt going to leave a tip, thats ok
though, I have more customers waiting..
GMN Diss
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.24.10
Damn! Boogeyman put it down. haha. b ut yeah man, this was pretty
bad. lol
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.24.10
Gas Mask Nation. Thats all that needs to be said.
I must say, I am a little shocked, this is very good for somebody
new, I think some lines were a little too long and there could have
been more variation in vocabulary, but overall this was impressive.
"burn you then french inhale kush mixed with your ashes" And that
nascar line were just awesome lol.
I wish I could be in Gas Mask Nation!
Well, this is the most original shit ever, besides the
venomspitters raped by a walrus post. I must say this actually made
me laugh out loud, and was more entertaining than most peoples
lyrics up here. lmao pro you dumb drunk bastard.
Tokios comment took me longer to read than the battle did. I have
to give it to rida and saint though, it just seems like they took
it.
"...N multies are more than One syllable rhyme in ONE Line...." he
just described it there for you. They are multiple syllable rhymes.
Example: My mental capacity will destroy your dental anatomy, trace
my style? The stencils challenging, Ill bust your bones and break
your pencil if you battle me. See? Like multiple syllable rhymes,
the use of more than one end rhyme internally. Not the worst Ive
seen, but you have much room for improvement, ask people for help,
we wouldnt mind helping you better yourself. I wouldnt at least.
lol not bad man, you remind me of a slightly better version of FK
Demented.
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.13.10
"Come at you from all directions like a busy intersection," That
was a pretty beast line lol and what was up with that trade shoes
line?
It wasnt though. Seriously.
Yeah, your pretty much garbage, I was hoping my lame stupid diss
would start something, but I see you nothing but an ignorant lame
ass nigger.
Well I read this and forgot to rate, lol of course. Indeed, it was
dopeness. Lyrical qaulity was there, flow was present, this has the
makings of a great song.
"call your conundrum a country cause your in a large panic state"
That was my favorite line man lol . Dope shit. And that spalding
line was good too lol
i knew this kid was garbage
This was not as good as people are making it out to be, but it was
ok.
My rhmyes like limbo got women bending them knees low. " U thought
that line just6 flowed good man lol nice fdrop
yeah man lmao you smashed him like a grape
Your mean for gettin on his girl.... lmao @ special head
Dopeness.
Cold Art
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.09.10
I was feeling the multies and the vocab is great as usual, I just
didnt see many of your good punchlines in there that you usually
have. I have seen a lot better from you, but this is still good no
doubt man. Nice post.
Well I must say Fresh did have the best verse here. The last line
was just ill as fuck. I liked Des and Phenoms too but Fresh verse
was def. the best.
This is just insult to injury. You already murdered them all once,
did you have to do it again?
It was kind of forced slightly from the length of the lines but
still unadulterated murder lol
Dreams
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.08.10
This is pretty good man, post more shit.
first 16
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.08.10
I was going to say you suck, well, you do suck. As this new guy.
But as Chris Smithers your ok. lol
Ayy I found her on FB because you got her email as your email for
my16 haha
Ray Im gonna be honest. Im gonna read this later, but you JUST
posted this, and magick gave it a 10 already. I hereby label him as
a dickriiiider. lol im out imma pep this later ghost
Spit Fire
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.06.10
This was ok in the beginning, but it really fell off in the end
like you just got lazy with it, and wtf is killacam talkin to
himself for? ANYWAYS. Not bad man, when did you join GMN?
Well I dont know if this was a diss because you didnt do many
personal lines or if its a collab about some shit, either way the
punchlines were good.
Word? Ray got the crew goin huh? Well good luck!
So you pretty much killed it. "Deplete my opponets when I enter my
sacred rhyme zone
Im so ahead of you dudes like your behind my time zone
Yall like the westcoast Im the east, three hours ahead of you
In that time I could write 20 verses to the one verse you said youd
do " And of course that caps line and dope fiend line were ill.
Multi Massacre. Illicism. Verbatiously Voracious. Ill Legitimate.
Purely Beast. 10 Stars. If you went to the general for auto
insurance they would approve you before you stepped in the door,
thats how ill this was. Did I mention it was good?
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.05.10
You all took a BLOOD TEST... and failed....
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.” “smoove is a queer.”
“smoove is a queer.” LOL
AYY YALL MOTHAFUCKAS GUESS WHAT!!!!!!!!!! I...........
like...............................................................
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CEREAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is your crew gonna be called man?
The Plot
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.03.10
Well, as far as I can tell you are getting much better, I like this
drop. I feel like Im really starting to slack, I really need to get
back on my shit. Nice drop.
I see.. So you probably wouldnt be down for a horrorcore rap or a
story tellin shit. How about a good old fashioned R&B song, called
Relationships?
I think it will be something alot better when its finished.
Damn Bunnyz. Haha you went in on me didnt ya? I got you though..
Iight man, we good.
No you cant.
Not once did I see a punchline. Not once, did I see a metaphor. Not
once, did I notice any actual wordplay. Nine times you said my
name. Illville is not really where I reside, I guess you were too
stupid to realize I was calling myself a good rapper.. Well, you
had some ok flow, but I honestly rate this a five.
Teehee..
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.02.10
Haha I read this earlier but forgot to rate, you love them Dre
beats dont ya? Pretty nice, I think you kind of went off subject
though, but still good haha
Yeah man thats that emotion right there. Im feelin this.
The whole of verse one just hit home, kind of like my wolf in
sheeps clothing how you ended it. "causing me to be a breed that
deceives" good multi and nice wordplay. "n be able to love someone
inferior when shes so much superior?" that just flowed perfectly,
and the rhythm made it like, just ill. I like this man, sometimes I
wish I could write deep like you do man. haha
...........fail
16
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 03.01.10
I like how you came on this, but it made the flow kind of choppy
with all the commas, and the way you ended it didnt make sense, if
you like them why dont you correspond with them? Ive seen better
from you, but this is good.
At first I though this was Watch the city burn the one you did
before, but its not, haha, but yeah this is good man, like always,
well do one sometime, i just been working alot lately.
Not bad, I feel that KC recycled a few things, and the flow was off
at the ed, but Saint had me weak for a minute, and KC was just
pissed lol i liked it though, original and it reminds me of that
movie beyonce was in lol
tay higgs |X| 01 Mar 2010, 04:16
Uhmm Do Sex In Tha Hospital To Ah Dying Patient. Anxious Patient.
Will be done tomorrow.
Definitely a good introduction verse. I agree with most on how the
flow is a little choppy, and your end rhymes were slanted, but its
still good man, not bad.
"So if they see someone they love leave, everyone becomes
impermanent." Thats so true and thats how people and children get
abandonment issues. Yeah, this was some real poetry here, I like
it.. I might do some, its been a minute since i got deep.
Jet Speed
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 02.28.10
Well you had some hidden punches and some deeper meaning, like the
depression of the 1920s. I liked this man, not as good as I thought
it was going to be, but it was still good.
Aye
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 02.28.10
Nevermind about that collab..
I honestly rate this a five. We should collab, only because your
name is rapper and thats epic.
Must say I was surprised, I wasnt expecting much, I see youve come
a long way from what you use to write, this is good man. We may
collab sometime.
Check it out its finished, its called Spring Cleaning.
I think Ive seen alot better than this from you before, I didnt
like it too much, some of it didnt make sense, and you didnt
structure it right. Wasnt horrible though.
Not bad man, it seems kind of like an asian rapper though, like no
disrespect to asians, but it seemed kind of like the grammar and
structure of speech was thrown off to force the flow, there were
some good punchlines, and it flowed well mostly.
Well isnt this just ill as fuck? lol good shit guys, I like the
topic too, seems like somethng I should have got on....
We all have our opinions, mine is bunnyz took it. He came harder
with more slightly personal lines and just didnt give a fuck.
Flowman just didnt do it for me.
Nope. Apart from these other dudes, I actually tell the truth
regardless of people I like, ask anybody. I honestly think bunnyz
got you on that one.
The man below me is the definition of a dickrider. Just something
you should know. But this isnt all that great, not terrible, but I
have to give it to bunnyz. Honestly.
CANNONS
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 02.25.10
Not bad man lol but i didnt really see many of your great
punchlines in this one like i usually do.
Not bad, if its your first time trying to rap I think its pretty
decent, try to tell a story with something, see how that works.
practice
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 02.25.10
I just want you guys to know that you fail for allowing godz pimp
in your crew. lol
Yeah this is definitely some deep shit, I bet a lot of people go
through the same thing so a lot of people can relate to this. Its
pretty damn good jess, keep it up.
Swear I read this last time you posted it, haha but yeah man this
is pretty damn good.
I like the viewpoint behind this, and what motivated it, stick to
being yourself, thats what your best at.
The rhyme scheme seems a bit of in some lines, and the flow as ok,
but the overall rating is an 8, solely because I feel you should
even out the rhymes and make it flow better, pay attention to the
details of it and you can make it better.
Illicism. Again.
Not bad man, I say keep.
Well if thats the case, one is chill and pretty good, and the other
one just kind of really sucks.
Well, random killer spree, turned out to be some killer shit.
Lol not bad, but not the best... I know you aint callin Virginia
pussy though.
Sounds more like an audio, but not bad, its pretty good, did you
record it?
Nice man, I was feelin the flow, crucification isnt a word, maybe
you meant crucifixion, but apart from that this shit was good.
Somebody told me you were beast, I am highly disappointed with what
I just read. I was lied to.
"My options vary from fags to bitches
both breeds see my swaggs delicious " does that mean that you are a
bisexual?
I think you should change your name to something cooler. Your
content is good, but nobody pays attention to you solely due to the
fact of your name, I like your shit, but nobody will read it if you
have a name like that. Just speaking my opinion.
Wonderful. I loved that faceless wrist watch line, I will collab,
just give me some time.
Well, I see being a lyricist isnt easy either.
That was ill. "You cant just have the blueprints to life, they have
to choose you" "You despise me cuz I speak things into existence,
my WORD brings LIFE" Those were some of the most in depth things I
have read on this site in a long time. Kudos.
"the way I shred him like confetti, its just 2 explicit
like a minority murdered hes just another statistic " lmao nice
shit. Well damn you just kind of killed anybody who wasnt in GMN.
Good shit man, I might just go off and dis everybody too lol
Mortars..
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 02.17.10
WEAK AS FUCK! YOU GUYS SUCK BALLS! LOL nah just playin, This shit
was ill, and i laughed my ever loving ass off when KC talked about
pros infected toe, and shit was ill with photon blades hype, and
thanks for the shout out in epicgees diss kc lol yall murked.
Classic
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 02.16.10
We will record to this.
Well a host of the show runs the show... so that didnt really make
sense..... But not bad.
Not bad man, I like the Folgers line best, and how you played with
the Maxwell coffee, if you would have thrown something in there
about Pretty Wings for Maxwell the artist it would have been a
double punch, but it was still good no doubt.
Worthy of my approval. Haha, this was good man, keep it up.
he does look like he is one of those guys who thinks their the shit
but really arent lol a.k.a A Douche lol
you make him sound like a rare species of pokemon... I choose
you.... EPICGEE!!
more like......... LYYYIINNNN!!!!!
What the devil? You didnt kill nobody! lmao
WHAT THE FUCK MAN?! If your gonna diss me do it in bars, not my
post. What an eye sore. lol
I wonder who ghost rated my shit like a bitch... lol epicgee posted
a comment with a link in it, and it wont show, he gave me a 0
though lol what a hater haha
Profound, Nelson is from The Simpsons.
There is room for improvement, but like I said, nobody can teach
you what you need to know, what you need to know you need to teach
yourself. You will understand one day if you stay active in music.
I didnt sign up for this contest.....
This was pretty good, I like the message your delaying, it is
inspiring. Seems like something pretty good, I think KC could have
done much better though. Overall its still great though.
Your a biter, heres the proof. allthelyrics.com/forum/lyrics
review/70039 rap about a girl that is driving me crazy my first
rap.html You are complete and utter garbage.
The title of this specifically piqued my interest immediately. I
knew right off the bat that this was going to be something great
when I started the first verse and started flowing with it. This is
probably the best and realest thing you have ever written besides
that one about your angel and how your girl aborted your baby. You
definitely need to record this one, and make it a good effort. I
think this is amazing man, it describes the life of the common man
compared to the rich and famous, Im definitely feeling this, and if
you recorded it and it was good quality I would bump this shit in
my 87 Caravelle.
well enriched i couldnt really follow your flow, and smokes, you
got a lot of the same sounding words, but as far as hard hits go,
and punches, and comedy, i think smokes got this one
Doesnt seem right, but fuck it, its whatever bro, Im not mad, just
venting.
If you re make this and make the audio sound a little less scratchy
and spit it with a little more emotion like your other shit I will
be thoroughly impressed. Its still good, but it could be better.
I see you give yourself a 10 each time.... Well Im not really gonna
diss back, I could shit a better rhyme than this in my sleep, and I
got other shit to do so argue amongst yourself lol
Well here I see no punchlines, no metaphors, no vocabulary, hardly
any flow, and zero nameplay. I call this an epic fail. And actually
I can assure you my flow is on point, and just all around better
than what you call rap, so... "BITCH, GET OFF MY DICK!! GET OFF MY
DICK!!"
Not bad, the flow was a little off midway to ending, and I think
the rhymes could have been better, Im assuming this was a freestyle
though so overall pretty good.
Of course this was ill, look who all was on it lol
why would you post an old diss to somebody who already changed
their name?
No doubt it was Ill, and a lot of funny lines, but there is a
little disappointment resonating inside me, like, the three of you
are amazing alone, or on other peoples collabs and normally
outshine everybody else, but on this one, nobody had the best
verse, and nothing really stood out that much to me. I halfway
expected everybody to come harder than they did up here, because
you three put together would be more like a dream colla, but this
one didnt meet standards. It was good, but I think you guys should
do another one all together to outdo this one. Overall it was
awesome though, and those lines about the wookies had me laughing
lol
"like a vicious diabolical chronicle I smash thru any obstacle " ha
i liked that line man flowed great and that sceintists scratching
their heads was just funny lol
serenade
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 01.22.10
Well I can see why KB was all over your dick, damn good shit man.
If you tryin to collab hit me up.
This was pretty good grime, I think you shouldnt have doubled up
your verses because it made it sound a little forced and choppy,
and a little off beat, and the bars were too long in some parts
making you out of breath and messing up the flow, but the lyrics
and flow in the beginning were good.
Too mainstream, I hated it. Lol nah man good job, I do actually
like this beat, so I will make an exception, lol. And you guys went
in on it, somewhat, seemed a little too mellow and chill, but thats
better than screaming, whats good with C Star though. Is he trying
to get down?
I fuck with this beat, and you rocked it pretty nice, you got a
different style, somethin like mine, something different. Good shit
man.
"cut off all your fingers,are love will be on jerry springer,
the smell of dead bodys linger,they call me the thinker,
the pyscotic brinker,either way i have many names,
methods are the same,only the victums have changed," I think this
had the best flow to it overall, I also think you will do better
without trying to force flow the ending words of the post, just let
the flow come naturally instead of trying too hard, and dont rely
on that listing shit too much, it kind of makes the flow choppy,
its like gloppy grits, but you want smooth and steady.
I believe it. LMAO
alll yalll niggass dumb!!
This is the best thing you have ever written on this site.
damn, i think this is the best diss fk ever did lol yeah hes got my
vote for punchlines and sick shit, you just didnt bring it that
hard springer
Yeah your pretty much garbage kid. You had NO punchlines, nothing
personal about me, and no metaphors or wordplay, you suck man. And
your little boyfriend too, Yall just hatin lol Im done with ya, I
already won, and thats a fact.
If REAL recognize REAL, how come me, and nobody in my crew see you?
Are you serious kid? Like, the rabbit will actually murk you, lol.
Im pretty sure you and your friends are all the same person lol
NOTHING HAS EVER COME OF THIS! ADMIN! YOUR FALLING DOWN ON THE JOB!
MAKE THIS SITE WHAT ITS SUPPOSED TO BE!!!!
Feed me rappers just got eaten. lol
I have to say Smoke this was pretty damn nice, not usually your
style, I see cali and them females changing up your style a little
bit, but its for a good cause.
People started a war so you know we had to finish it, we so special
with the sickness you can call us Ill Legitimate...
We can audio collab this shit right here, I can write a verse and
get the beat and everything, let me know whats up. We can call it
"The Ventriloquist".
That was good bro. Shit was pretty damn nice, the beat was fucking
sick, and you flowed well on it too.
"better lock the chastity or ill fuck your girl again, bring so
much heat when I write I curl the pen" sceintific on em.... "beyond
legendary, I make the night black as sackcloth
then spit light on a cloud with heaven as the backdrop" that was
just awesome imagery... "you dudes is noiseless, like a mime tryin
to be a singer
so battlin me is pointless, like a man with no fingers" I cant even
begin to describe how ill that line was... Great shit Pro, you
havent posted in a while but came back hard like Ron Jeremy on a
bitches spine.
Blessed
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 01.13.10
Hey man, are we still doing that Picture Perfect Collaboration or
not? You kind of blew me off to go and work with Grime.
Nice way to make an entrance into the world of horrorcore. Dope
lyrics and pretty nice flow. But if your going to come at me in
every song, or my crew, expect a diss, if your serious you can get
it.. again. If not, let me know you were playing. It seems like on
every thing you do, you wanna come at me, then in the chat you say
were cool, thats why I dont fuck with you that hard. But if you
playing its whatever. Just to let you know I take this rap shit
seriously.
"from the depths of a bodybag my reflection screams,
try to redeem my conscience but it was only a dream," and the way
you finished it was good too. nice shit bro. you need to record
things like this. This might be your best one in a long time
Yeah man the message is there, and I bet this line is true as fuck
"at the MTV awards bitches be giving fake hugs with no love" the
never do look like they mean it, and the whole thing was just
deeper in thought than most shit. Good shit man.
Not bad, but not your best, it was ok, but I couldnt really get
into it for some reason.
Well, that was rather beastly.
Ha not bad man, I didnt really follow the story but yeah the lines
were nice and the flow was there too so good job bro.
Nice shit man, I like the message you guys relayed here, it aint
all that gangster shit lol but yeah FK you always were the one to
rap about politics and government.
Beggers
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 01.10.10
Not bad, to me it seemsa little too commercial but thats how some
things are sometimes, delve into the lyrical side. Then you will
impress me.
Not bad man, its from the heart, but you should put it in bar form
you know. And I dont know if shes your internet girlfriend or what,
but I wont judge. Its not bad, just put more feeling and passion
into it, like if you actually do be kissing on her and shit then
put like how you feel and the emotions that run through your mind.
Not bad man, you need to put one more bar at the end because theres
only seven there and the flow is off, if you came up with some
punchlines and metaphors instead of just stating it like "heres
what happened" and told more of an in depth story, like how she
felt, and how he felt doing those things, the emotion going through
there bodies and the thoughts running through their minds then it
would be better. Just basically put more detail into it.
"you couldnt slaughter me if i stood there and gave you the knife"
thats just funny lol and that golden shower line lol and the
element line was nice. Damn good overall, he will have to come back
with 51 bars to beat this, and he will probably call it Area 51 and
make it 51 bars since yours was fifty and outshine you, then you
outshine him, and we just got some bright ass motherfuckers
gleaming like the sun, until i put on my hater shades and walk away
from you bitchies...
It was nice, but the last line was a complete lie, if you gonna
come at me dont be subliminal and say respect to me at the end when
you talk about me in a song, because we both know Ill smash you and
the crew. But yeah man good stuff.
Yeah man this is some deep heart felt shit like your type style
man, good to see your coming back with it and not those silly posts
you were talkin about. I like it, from the heart, some REAL shit.
We both got that female history, we talked about it, Im feelin
this.
Well, this was really deep, and I can see how it was inspired those
are two great songs. I think if you have time you should record
this on a long beat, and just loop the hook. Amazing story here, I
think you should have added a little more about Ricky though. But
overall amazing.
"we was chewing while your ass was suckin on your chico stick " you
just openly announed your gay man. lol and how you gonna act all
hard but in the mini chat you gonna ask me if its REAL beef, and I
got at YOU. But you brought it to crew, so crew can merk ya too. I
really dont like you at all honestly. Get off my dick, for REAL.
But yeah, call it what you want, its beef. And I murked ya ass. Not
to mention you jacked Nas, and a line from a mixtape that Big L did
back in the day.
Damn nice bro, the audio only comes out in the left speaker, must
be the coding, other than that this shit was amazing man. We will
do some audio collabs soon bro.
The lyrics that she claims to be her own are by Hillside Hoods
City Of Lights. I know not whether it is the truth, I dont care. I
just wanted everyone to know what happened.
FLICKER
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 01.05.10
Well I emailed you so speak your peace.
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 01.05.10
"From family tree to just another leaf in the park//
Hope these bright ideas help you see in the dark"
Damn that was deep, I liked this, keep it up guys.
are you guys fucking serious? lol everybody on this site would murk
you. i bet your somebody here, probably enriched, acting like
somebody else. yeah, your both enriched.
Yeah man your verse was pretty good but Flicker kind of
disappointed me here. It was too simple. Not her best shit, shes
done better. BUT, I have seen worse, so not bad, good job.
The Rock and Stone Cold Steve Austin are the most used in here, but
you missed the sock and mankind lol but damn this shit was beast
and funny... my favorite part is this. "excuse me who are you
again? IT DOESNT MATTER WHAT YOUR NAME IS!" LOL A CLASSIC. you
missed the pancake line, lol but still awesome shit man
Nice shit you venomous racist bastard. lol
Who the fuck is ekam? An "unliterate" ass person lmao
Well damn the structure was off like a bitch but the wordplay and
flow throughout the whole was...well, it was exclusive. Nice shit
man.
Murked.
Yeah. This was a good diss. But you spelling anf flow was off
through the whole thing, and the shit your saying "promised fame
and fortune" I never promised fame nor fortune to anyone on this
website so half your diss has holes in it. But, I will respond.
Dam you for this being so original. I loved it, and I dont see how
it could be offensive. It was simply an amazing, realistic story.
If I would have stuck to the rating that I was given, MA, this
would almost be my story. But I changed it up so I can have a
better life and more career opportunities.
Nice stuff man, little basic but it was just speaking REAL really.
If you trying to record hit me up, we can collab on some shit.
Lets just lower that rating there... ahh.. thats better.
you really suck man, learn to rap first, then learn to format it
right.
lol that hype verse was just funny as hell haha yeah fresh was
right about the bludie verse lol you got on hype the hardest though
lol good job man
Lol I didnt even know Joka posted this until now, and fuck g til
the end. Period. But yeah thanks all who read and rated.
Yeah man you shit all over my version to this beat, I called it
Grind Time, and I did it back in 7, I didnt have any punchlines,
hardly very many metaphors, but my flow was perfect. But yeah man
great audio. We will collab sometime. Might even just use my old
verse to this lmao
all u wack Mcs for christman ima send all u smart pens" That was my
favorite line lol good flow man and nice vocab. Thanks for the
shout out too
Quality shit, as is late as fuck, but still good. Funny lines. And
my name is prophecized, so no complaints here.
Yeah Im on and might be for a little while. And ok man its cool, we
can release it in 2010. First 2010 collab gonna be a smash, and
iight KC.
Yeah like cKrisis said, you should invest in a new mic. I like the
lyrics their great, and the beat is epic, but your flow was a
little off, and the quality isnt too great. But if you had an
actual studio to work in for a while you could do great. By the way
did you finish that verse for Picture Perfect?
"far from a phoney,unlike our mod," aint it the truth.
Optimism
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.30.09
Im looked at as an accident, a hit it and run. Damn, thats some
shit. And yeah friends with benefits never work. Somebody always
ends up catching feelings, and its not really a benefit in the end.
Keep your head held high Jesse, your a beautiful woman who deserves
a good man.
lol @ the simpson line, i think you could have come up with a
better way to do the graph line but its still good haha and the end
YOU GAY BITCH !!! I thought was funny as hell because it made it
seem like you screamed it lol nice
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.29.09
The end all will soon come into effect...
Real Talk
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.29.09
Its not bad but it has nothing to do with R.E.A.L talk. Its just
lines thrown together that sounds mainstream, a few mediocre
punchlines, pretty easy to follow flow, but not much substance
throughout, Ive seen worse.
then i will blow you cyotes up like a road runner cartoon ... haha
nice... i love that show lol.... i will rip one of your legs off
and break ya jaw with your heel bone ... just ill.... i will reach
my hand down ya throat and rip out ya spine
cut ya brain in half then smash em, call it a meetin of the mind
mace your face with razor blades lace with cancer and aids
infect ur body with bubonic plauge and make you swallow grenades
........ and just the way you finished each verse was epic.
Illicism.
Not bad man, a little complex but simple at the same time, nice
flow, make it longer and you got a great post.
Whats this? Do I have new dick riders? LMAO! No da ak 47 or
whatever he wrote this shit hes right 90% of it is a flip lol
Nothin
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.27.09
I just want you guys to know I hate you all equally for ruining my
epic moment.
LOL @ CURTAIN CALL BITCHING AND LMAO AT FISH HOOKS IN YOUR BUTT
CHEEKS HAHAAHH
Well. Guess who cant wait for part two from KC pro and Ensayne?
THIS GUY! I want to do another one called The Aftermath, where we
do our stories more in depth and finish them off, and if you
wouldnt mind could I host the collab as well? And I didnt really
like Kid Exs verse that much but it was good enough and KC did
great and Pro lol that crazy motherfucker.
Sounds like mainstream. But thats what Hip Hop is, no disrespect.
Its good. You just wont see me on it. Sorry to bring you down lol I
liked it though
Thanks Profound, your a wise dude, and yeah KC I know man, fuck all
that stupid shit. I need to just fucking make it then get on my
R.E.A.L game.
Nice guys, KC why do you sound so pissed off at somebody here? And
Pro I like this "when the essence of my depression comes to the
forefront
I trade women in for fluid intoxication and more blunts" and "im
heartless like a mortal kombat fatality, ima predator
contorting estrogen filled minds like a demented editor" those just
flowed nicely to me.
"Abhorring spit, leave your wrist slit, like its legitimate
Forget about the bones just tear them at the ligament" That was
some nice shit man, I like this it was definitely Ill. This is how
you Rep. R.E.A.L
Nice shit man.
Ehh it was ok, Kerena didnt really put much into it. And lol at my
little tiny diss in there. This subject has been done to death
though lol but not bad KC
lol @ this being simplicity dissing me with bitten lyrics
LMAO HE SAID POOPSCILES! HHAHHAH POOP! POOOOOOP! lol no but in all
seriousnessi take into the account of matter that this was a rather
well formatted disscographyertion and that you murked him, lol no
but good diss man. need to sea a round too
dude wtf am i in every post of yours or something? lol
Seems unfinished even for a clip, you need to add 2 more bars to
make it better. But fuck the rest you VA homie thats whats good 2
up 2 down was the name of my first song Im Northridge Raised out
the hood VA Beach, Squad Up! Get at me! Where you from homie?
Damn bro thats some pretty deep shit right there. Im feelin it.
See this is the kind of shit I want to see reppin R.E.A.L. When one
of my members comes weak I let them know. No disrespect your good
dude, but I think you could definitely rep the crew better. I want
you to rewrite your verse for R.E.A.L COLLABORATION because I think
you could have done better. Its up and posted just waiting for a
verse from you and another member check it out.
Nice man, good stuff. Your doing better.you spelled my name wrong
though lol
This is more mainstream than underground hip hop lyricism. I dont
like it as much as your other posts. And in the first verse you
kind of went off subject midway. But other than that the flow was
good all the way through, and the end of each line dropped nicely
with the beat.
I am your father like darth told luke cause the force is with me
reincarnate you a thousand times n kill you throughout the course
of history
I deploy lyrical armies n n slice beef like arbys n serve you hot
shit
I smash you like twelve sumo wrestlers verses you in a mosh pit
....... its that whole four bars that was just like DAMN 0.0 when
you read it lol arbys.. haha good shit pro
Not bad, but you used too many ending successive words. That kind
of gave it a dull flow. Still not bad though. But you have done
better.
Well Fresh pretty much already summed it up lol but yeah this is
some good stuff man. Im glad you dont really think its him like
some do lol
freestyle
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.24.09
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
My Story
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.24.09
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
all out
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.24.09
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
YOU REALLY GOT WRITE MORE THAN THAT AND BE MORE PERSONAL TO RUN
SOMEBODY OFF THE WEBSITE LOL
Nice man a change of flow, not bad. And that I.L.Y shit is true too
haha I dont do ily if I mean it.
AM I GOING TO BE THE ONLY ONE TO SAY THIS? YOU ARE NOT THE REAL
KANYE WEST! STOP POSING! LOL!
TEAR your PALMS from your WRISTS, your best on the site, HANDS
DOWN,// ....... Your phising peoples passwords on your top 10,//
...... if thats true im glad i didnt sign in... i knew that lol...
I have botted myspace, im white, sixteen, rich and my mums dead,//
Private school, have a fat girl friend, thats enough said,//
....... doing that was just copying 8 mile... just so you know...
lol... BUT YEAH! Overall this is your best diss ever! If Chris
doesnt come back with something nice or he talks about anything in
here or flips Im voting for you.
Damn right! I aint heard from you in a minute where you been?
Naw man this is a whole separate collaboration. We will still jump
on that one too though.
THIS COLLABORATION IS FEATURING: ENSAYNE, PROFOUND, YOUNGZAY,
AMYTHEST. WE NEED ONE MORE R.E.A.L MEMBER! R.E.A.L MEMBERS HOP ON!
MIGHT PUT EMC ON.
THIS BEAT FOR THE COLLAB HARD AS FUCK ROBOTICALLY AINT NOBODY
STOPPING ME SPTTING SUNFIRE BURNING THROUGH YOUR BARS LIKE A
THOUSAND ANOMALES AND CANT NOBODY TOP ME IM ON TOP LIKE A DROP BE
ON THE STREET LIKE A COP BE AND TELL ME WHY IM SO ILL THEY CANT
DROP ME LIKE A PROPER GANGSTER TEARING UP THE GHETTO HOPPIN OUT THE
WHIP TALKIN SHIT.. HELLO! FUTURISITC GHETTO GANGSTA MAKE ME WANNA
SPANK THE BADDEST BITCH WHO THINK SHE THE R.E.A.LEST CHICK CAN GET
THE PIPE ALL NIGHT LIKE IM A MARIO SITE SPITTIN FIREBALLS KNOCKIN
DOWN FIREWALLS, INTERNET GANGSTER WANNA HIRE YALL FOR SECURITY CANT
EVEN BE SURE ITS ME WHEN I MURDER THEE BECAUSE MY FLOW ON SO TIGHT
ITS LIKE A MURDER BEAT. R.E.A.L STAND THE FUCK UP!!! WE BOUT TO
SMASH! ALL DAY ON THE SITE TALKIN SHIT LOL YOU CAN GET IT LIKE A
BITCH IN CELL SMASHED THE INTERNET GANGSTERS DELL WITH A CROW BAR
HE WONT GO FAR HE CAN GET IT LIKE A HOE GUARDED WITH A MAXIMUM
SECURITY PENITENTIARY SMASHIN THE MOST KNOWN RAPPERS OF THE
CENTURY!! FREESTYLE.
HOOK We got a thousand rhymes interlaced with a thousand lines,
we told you a thousand times you can get your bodies boxed up like
a thousand mimes!
I am hotter than 2 o clock in the summer. I rock the beat to a
slumber, ... ILL. LOL WAY TO REP BRO. WE GONNA COLLAB TOMORROW WITH
PRO.
Yeah man you know I be on that Horror core. You in a crew? Hit me
up if you want in R.E.A.L! I got you, you pretty much inducted me
then I made your crew what it was no disrespect But I repped and
murked everyone, I feel like you could be a valuable member. Lets
talk.
IM ON BRO DONT MATTER WHAT IT IS I RIDE FOR MY CREW!
AHAHA YEEAHHHH MANNN THATS THAT FIREEE!! LOL NICE FLOW BRO. KEP
THIS UP. YOU REPPIN IT NICELY!!!
THATS THAT FIRE. THANKS. I LOVE TO SEE R.E.A.L MEMBERS REP IT.
KEEP IT UP BRO! THAT FIREE!!
This is why your in one of the best crews on the site. R.E.A.L.
Keep it up Pro.
Not bad, yeah except for that I.T. line, but yeah, whats up?
If you want lessons on how to form a decent line I will be in the
chatroom. Click Forum and start typing.
Ive never seen a stupider person since the creation of homer
simpson ...... LOL....... AND.... m a diabolical chronicle causing
u nightmares beyond ur sleep ..... THAT SHIT WAS BEAST LOL AND HOW
WOULD HE REPLY. DOES HE COME ON MY16 TOO? LMAO
Good shit man, who all did you ghost write for?
I liked the show in lil a verse but it didnt rhyme like fresh said,
and kc sick as usual. I like that PCing line lol
Diamonds and pearls man, good shit.
Yeah man Im feeling this, dreams are nothing if you dont actively
pursue them though, so keep writing. Good job guys.
Yeah man this is really deep. I got on some shit like this today. I
am really feeling this, I like it alot, especially how you said men
dont know how to express themselves thats some true shit and that
part about being another single mother and definition of a true
queen, that hit home. My dudes little cousin is only fifteen and
she jut got pregnant too, what is going on in the world? I miss the
old days.
I bled my soul out on this song...
Well damn, now I understand a lot more about why you act the way
you do. This is deep, the kind of ship true Hip Hop is based on.
Good job Kerena, and KC, I expect nothing less. Kudos.
"Ensayne didnt reply to The Warning, hes scared of me, " FALSE. IM
STILL COMING AT YOU. AND THAT BAN BATTLE SHOULDNT HAPPEN, ONE OF
US WOULD LEAVE, AND WE DONT WANT THAT. SO DROP IT. "its not hard to
get a pic with girls, how about with you touching them,
thats impossible for you, neanderthal looking druggie with a double
chin.. " lol @ that.... "i like anything shirt, but what the fuck
is that polo shit,
you got swagg? hah.. thats exactly why cardone went solo bitch.. "
lol.. damn man... lol overall looks like you went into decimation
mode. good shit.
take the verb out his name, and find this kid is just
unable,(UNtouchABLE), And that simplicity doo and shaggy
untouchable line was funny haha good diss guys.
Im far from a hater lol as far as Im concerned were still cool, I
just dont hit on the girls anymore. Its really pointless.
Well I refuse to, because to me its child pornography. Lol but more
power to you.
Swear I thought Hype was the first verse because it was so fuckin
ILL. Great collab guys. This shit is ensayne.
Dont Come At Me.
The picture on your profile tells me you listened to some Nas and
thought you could rap, but this is a fail. Stop saying nigga before
I come to your home and personally slaughter you in front of your
family.
Yeah man I agree with FK, good for a quick one, if you take your
time on it though it could be much better.
Had to read it twice over to actually realize some things lol nice
shit man
Unstable
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.19.09
Yeah man I like the new style, I just have to find the flow, Im
sure it flows well when you spit it but it seems choppy when you
read it because of the commas, but otherwise good shit man.
Aww you think Im cute, how adorable. And you think you could have
me calling you honey... haha your a silly girl Kerena.
Haha it was funny, because you guys really do do the same shit, I
dont really have much to say except you hyped this up so much to
the fact that Im disappointed that there arent really that many
good punchlines in this. Funny, but yeah, and dont lie you know
Jesse dont be all over you on the phone just last night she denied
your ass after you been waiting all day to talk to her, and shes
gonna do the same thing tonight.... LMAO. Good stuff though Im not
hatin.
This is why you cant join my crew.
Damn, all I need is one mic, because I have a gay ass headset with
a gay ass mic with gay ass quality. Good shit though guys. Like
always.
Damn true, your a good member man. Stay reppin.
Instrumental was pretty nice haha and the flow was good and pros
verse made me laugh and hypes verse was just nice lol good job guys
I dont know who you are but you got some flow, join the site.
who are you? and how is this a diss in any way shape or form?
Lol this was good, I have to say if you put this and his last dis
up this would win.
When did I agree to being in your tournament?
its like u running on a treadmill, just useless kickin
you like popeyes witout the sides nothing but chicken
tryna be hard as shit when u soft like linen
hook u in the face so hard that ya head start spinning , FUCK!
.................................................... you need to
tune your lyrics, you arent as sound as me,
you aint did a lap, ive ran circles around this beef..
......................... no words.............................you
won? i came from behind like YOU dropped the soap,
you arent cold, but your fucking momentum has been froze..
,........................................... YEAHHH.. I have to
give this one to Hype, because his lines just went more into depth,
like that slit your neck line blades in your pillow case shit was
crazy as hell lol but yeah great battle. ROUND 3?
When I see Rida respond then it will be good, but that 7 gays line
was funny as hell lol
Haha this shit was good, but like I said before, I still think you
have done better, expect a response sometime.
Well, Im on this new attitude where I dont give a fuck what anybody
says, and it really helps. Lol. Im down for this.
Still diggin in their ass! lol good shit man haha
ensanity
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.16.09
Well, that was far better than anything I have ever seen you type.
Maybe you could do better, I think your flow could have been
better, and more vocab, and more hard hitting personal lines, but
nice nonetheless.
slippin
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.16.09
OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT WAS FIRE! JOIN MY CREW! WE NEED AMAZING
PEOPLE LIKE YOU TO DEMOLISH THE BEST RAPPERS ON THE SITE!!!!
What I Do
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.16.09
Hey man thats not bad, the flow was perfect all the way through,
step up your vocab and you could be beast.
Ballin
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.16.09
You cant be intellectual if you cant spell it right...
"intulectual" lmao and "i in my room clothes the door get some
lotion and then count da greens " if that dont scream im beatin my
meat with broccoli...
I liked hypes verse the best but you were right it really isnt my
type of music. not bad, just TOO commercial.
YOU NEED A GHOST WRITER?
Hype: "Of course you know this means war..." Lol good stuff man
Not bad, not much of a hard hitting diss, but the rhymes and multis
were good.
That was some good shit man, lol you only tap ass when you type it
haha good shit
I gotta give it to khaos he just ca....LMAO nah its mr u all the
way for those last four multies haha great shit
This shit was great man, nice flow and use of vocab.
Shitted on! lol @ crash his car hahah
Good shit. And I actually read it. gosh venom is dumb >.> lol
im back
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.15.09
What kind of car do you drive? Year, model, make.
HYPE DIS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.15.09
Got personal on his ass. I dig it.
LH Diss.
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.15.09
Well, its good, but you know where I stand, and what I said.
Somebody had to get at all the members, and I been dissing the fuck
out of them for 3 days, thanks for taking some of the load off lol
good shit bro
This IS dope... lol good shit. I like that darkness
Good shit man its deep, I actually think your getting a lot better
and the flow was good here too.
KC MM now
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.14.09
"slaughter,butcher,ENSAYNE horrorcore insane BRUTALITY, " I like
that, and good job changin ya style up I like it
Yeah man LH is right you are getting better good job, way to be
creative haha
Way to rep REAL bro.
It was a quick freestyle I spent like 10 minutes on KC lol
Ha, it was good, but you really rely on the word "bitch" too much.
You said it seven times total. Food for thought. Good lines though.
But "You should try getting some sunlight...yeah man..LIKE A TAN"
Was just conveniently misplaced, it didnt fit at all. Most of this
was forced rhymes, but still not bad.
GOOD LORD! Buahahaahaha! That was fucking epic Pro! That line about
the sweaters and deleting the pokemon game... man.. if somebody
deleted my pokemon game i would cry... LMAOO MURDAAAA!!
HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Ahaha chemical warfare, did you read my Astronaut Annihilation?
There was a lot of that in there lol great execution greasy
LMAO!!! WOWZERS!! 0.0 you cant spell at all lol but it was funny
haha
Doin good man, step up your grammar game though and then it would
be awesome. Good stuff though FK.
Diss or collab? Cuz Im still waiting for people disses to roll in
lol
I am about to find out who did it.
Thats some MIMS shit lol good stuff man, this actually deserves a
10.
Ehh it was ok, minimal vocab and hardly any flow, the bars are
uneven as fuck, it looks like the Appalachians, and there werent
really any punchlines. It was alright though. You can probably do
better.
Yeah it was pretty damn good, I liked Desanto verse best, Tokio had
some good shit, but thats pretty much it.
Pretty deep guys, nice stuff. Simp def. got in on this. And KC,
this is normal for you, always deepening the posts.
Lol @ most of this being true, I did ask how you got so good, I
wont deny that, I did take EP from ya, but its whatever, and I am a
big dude.. lol nice man, I will add you to the shuttle.
Real Talk
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.12.09
"Actions speak louder than words, so I show and tell." Nice, format
this into sixteen bars and you have a verse. Post more when you
can, you got some real opportunities here with me paying
attention...
free
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.11.09
Is this about you? Or just something random?
I see you bringin it, good job 2Ex.
Damn right, I can make a fire storyline for this, Im gonna be mad
cocky on it though, grab some kingdom and what not.
Haha not bad KC, they are getting better I agree with Pro.
There we go. Lol now people will understand.
I fucking hate you.... lol
Ayy REAL is always gettin shout outs lol good job man, this was
crazy as hell and long as fuck but the shit was damn
good...pussycuntbitch... had to use the other curse words too haha
nice stuff brah
Lol good diss, but I beat Cardone 5 0, ask him. He will tell ya
man. haha
What Would Jesus Do? That, is the question. Lol and I like that
Feck That, I wanna get on that haha
Much better. I like this one, extended, uncut, pure cane.
"Tattoo tears moisten years the sentences vary under comprehension"
I had to stop and think about that one for a second, I like this
guys, Im only like a fifth cuban, mostly german italian and
scottish and well fuck it all but yeah this was good, I know
nothing if latin struggles but this was pretty good lyrically.
Code 16
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.11.09
"they ask me about after life, i say i was born in reverse,
already died, now i live to meet my future self in birth, " that
did it for me. and that rip his spine out side ways through his
nostril was so graphic, haha, record this, then I will be happy.
Great stuff
Hype.
I liked this man, but k.s.t could have came harder. Explain
something to me, why do people do only 3 lines hat rhyme? Then like
5 that rhyme? Why not just stick with the four 4?
The way you talk makes me want to join, but you know I run REAL,
thanks for the shout outs always brah.
Recite the words scriptively wrote in ink on the aincient tapestry,
.............................Artistically sign my name with your
blood in calligraphy,
....................................................Always
contradictively challenging the Theory of Relativity, ....... When
you delve into the thought of that line, its much more than a
lyric, its fucking ILL. I love your style man, proud to have you as
a member of my crew. We will definitely complete a beasty ass
collab. And I love how you payed no attention to the length, and
just wrote until you were finished. People always ask me, "How many
bars?" and my response is always, "You can not limit creativity."
"Give us our respect for this lethal shit we inject" You know I
feel this man, respect man, you got it from me. And great job guys.
This verse is under rated, I will promote for you. Because this was
true.
Lol why didnt I se this before, I like how you got me and bludie
name RIGHT there lol good shit toni
Umm.. Well. I liked Fks verse, you just, kind of, didnt do too
well... I think you could do better though. Try a little harder
next time.
From what I see it could be pretty good, depending on where you go
with it, fuck that kid this seems ok. AND YES I SAID FUCK YOU
IMATAPARTY. THIS AINT NO PARTY BOY. Finish it another time
"Newencore", I like the name, and contact me, I like to see where
you go with this.
Hey man I gotta say that was pretty damn good, way to rep.
"But being followed everywhere you go doesnt sound so fresh to me,
Matter fact I bet that would be the death of me." Ayy thats some
REAL shit man, Im feelin this. Doesnt make me not wanna be famous,
but I still like it lol
Why do you rap?
lol he says he quits then writes a diss... haha
"Well, that was a great verse. Nothing like a good cypher to
recharge your batteries!"
*Falls over on laptop* lol
Yeah man I definitely agree with Bludie, your getting better, I
never understood why people do a five line then a 3 line rhyme but
its all good.
Flow was good, and it will work fine man, I feel like you could
have done better though, we have a very high standard in REAL, your
getting there though bro.
"Ensayne scripts so Twisted cant help but Realeyez we gifted " The
ILLEST shoutout I ever seen. Lol good job guys.
Some things were spelled wrong, but it all made sense. Otherwise,
ILL.
Too many good points to name, good shit Fresh.
fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
IT EXPLAINS ITSELF...
fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
FRESH LIKES PENIS? fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
FRESH IS GAY!
fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
Is Fresh really gay?
Find out in the next exciting episode of.......!
DEEZNUTZ!!! LOL!!!
Freestyle
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56
oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO
NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get
them mcnuggets in my mouth
Do it now
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
The importance of the number on the IP address of this post is very
serious. Reach me as soon as possible.
Jabberjaw lookin ass nigga...
If your looking for a crew hit me up, you can try out, and we will
consider you.
Cocky
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
If you know the importance of the number of this post on the server
of this legendary key, then you have done a good job, contact me,
if not, disregard this comment, and act like you never saw it.
UGH
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
Socrates and most of the ancient greek philosophers kept a
brandished human skull on their desks at all times when they wrote,
to remind them of how real death is, and how quickly it can
happen...
Cocky
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
Do you have what it takes, to join a great crew? Contact me if you
think so.
Jack and Jill went up the hill, and I killed them for a thrill.
Simplicity
Nothin
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
The 0 rating is a sign of respect from me, when you see it, I hate
on you, giving you power of my thoughts. If you wish to delve into
the subkect matter of this post, contact me. This post is an epic
number, and if I am still around to see it, then I am doing the
right thing...
HIGH FIVE. THAT WAS GREAT.
I think you could have done so much better man, it was ok, but I
think you have more in you.. I liked that line about the atheist
cranium though, that was ILL.
The Egyptians may one day rule the world, when this happens, I want
you to contact me...
vibe wit
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
The user upon which this comment falls, please contact me. I have
questions for you...
Within the fathoms of time, I made this comment, the user upon
which it falls, account will be deleted in 1 week, the contents of
this comment, are deadly. Do not click the X...
FEAR GOD
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
GIGGIDY!!!!!!!!!
THAT IS JUST AMAZING, YES INDEED.
THAT IS JUST AMAZING, YES INDEED.
Im Good.
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
THAT IS JUST AMAZING, YES INDEED.
TESTING
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.10.09
THAT WAS AMAZING
Is the rabbit coming at me?????
YOU ALWAYS ON SOME OTHER SHIT, AND I COULDNT DECIPHER THE VERSE THE
FIRST TIME, I READ IT AGAIN AND STILL KIND OF DONT GET IT BUT I
LIKE THE FLOW AND MULTIS WHEN I SPIT IT FAST. WELL DONE.
I like the beat a little but not enough to collab on it, otherwise
ILL.
Demons
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.09.09
The flow was a bit choppy, but overall this was great. You are
DEFINITELY getting better, I like that line about the biblical
miracle and them being stupid readers, that was dope. But of course
it could be better, I like the hook too its catchy, and many words
were misspelled but it was great anyways. Well done Fallen Knight.
I expect nothing less from you two. Great as always.
This will work perfectly, you cant shelter or limit creativity.
Well done.
Congrats. I see you still put it up, ha, good stuff man, I was
actually feeling the flow too... fresh... lol.. but yeah good stuff
man. Way to Rep.
Im rather surprised you know what a cypher even is
click me
6.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.09.09
LOL @ ME BEING FIRST, LOL @ YOU SPELLING LYRICIST WRONG IN YOUR
TITLE, AND LOL @ LOLING ON THIS POST... LOL
click me
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.09.09
*DELETES BUNNYZ HARD DRIVE*
It was great lol I think you should have written more FK and where
is 2EX verse? lol but good stuff guys
This was awesome, you need one more bar, and the flow in the middle
of the first was a little choppy but over all good stuff flicksy.
Lol well kid exs verse was not as good as I was hoping, but, Olive
Oil delivered, and hyped the shit up lol, and damn you for popping
her collab cherry. Oh well, a vi sa vi, she will be mine soon
enough lol
This was good, and pretty, well, good. Lol it seems that your your
telling a true story and not on some fake shit man. I think you can
do better with the bar format and complexity of the lyrics though.
Also one line is short, then the other is long, it makes the flow a
little chopped and diced, so your kinda screwed. Lol but good stuff
man.
Damn man, Im glad you hounded me to read this. It was absolutely
great, and that line about the girls being hoes is so true, I used
to love this bitch and she fucked up then I did then she did again.
But yeah man, deep post, your getting really good.
creepy me
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.08.09
Your vocab and flow is getting much better man, just work on the
ending structure and what not.
THIS IS GOOD, BUT IS IT SUPPOSED TO BE A FLICKER DISS? IF SO THEN
IT ISNT PERSONAL AT ALL. LOL
My pride
4.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.08.09
your a female arent you? lol join the site then start writing,
nobody really reads guest work.
That was pretty good man, make the bars a little longer and a
little more to write and you could have a pretty good verse. Write
more, your under my radar now.
to MOC
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.08.09
LOL @ PROFOUND, HE IS RIGHT THOUGH.
......lol you just said you suck dick...and theres only three
members dude get your facts straight lol
Pretty much amazing.
Lol some of the shit didnt rhyme at all but nice try with your
drunk ass haha
REAL REP
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.08.09
Glad to have you as part of the team now 2Explicit.
This was some deep shit guys, Im feelin it, I liked both verses.
LOL I LIVE IN INDIANA TOO DUDE
love tree
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.07.09
Seems a little depressive. But I like it. I like the way you worded
things, with actual poetic words, like older poetry. Im feelin it.
I feel you, slow flow on em. "my ruthless crucifix judas movement
brings fools to the abyss " That was my favorite line right there
man. Good shit.
YUO CAINT FECKIN SPEEL WERTH SHEET!!!!! lol good multies though
GOOD SHIT, BUT YOU NEED TO SPELL THINGS RIGHT... LOL
NOT BAD, YOU GOTTA STEP UP YOUR GRAMMAR GAME THOUGH, ITS HIS NOT
HES
ITS OK THAT YOU DONT LIKE ME ESPY. I DONT NEED YOU TOO. DONT YOU
HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE COME AND FUCK UP YOUR PERFECT TEN POSTS WITH A
7? OR A 9? WHEN YOU THINK IT SHOULD BE A 10. I HATE THAT SHIT.
LOL @ VENOMSPITTER BEING A BITCH AND NOT POSTING UNDER HIS REAL
ACCOUNT AND ACTING LIKE SOMEBODY ELSE THIS WHOLE TIME.
Manifest
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.06.09
This is good stuff man. Are you new? And do you plan on being an
active member?
Matter fact..I think rida grew tits...
lol @ b robb thinking I was talking to him. but now i understand
why he came at me lol
LOL are you dissing me dude? Not bad, but like be real, if you dont
"bust macks and sell crack" dont talk about doing it.
kyle diss
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.06.09
"severely" sever each one of ya body parts
then put them back together randomly and call it abstract body art
... damn and all after that lol good shit man
LOL @ how he ended it. Get him to join the site. Hes good so maybe
we can battle or collab
If you talk to bludie tell him to read whats on my page about the
constant family slaughter, he can still submit a verse
Well I dont have a problem with Gudsen, but I must say... This was
mean...
This is going to be good...
I WISH I COULD GIVE 9.5"S BECAUSE THIS WAS GOOD, JUST A LITTLE BIT
OFF. BECAUSE YOUR FLOW IN THE END WAS A LITTLE CHOPPY THEN IT
PICKED UP. OVERALL GOOD THOUGH, BUT PROCESSING DIDNT GO WELL WITH
THE LAST 3 BARS, NOT TOO SHABBY THOUGH.
Lets get it.
callabo
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
If Icollab with you, you will be instantly famous. So if you have a
good subject, I will do it.
HEX
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
YOU CANT SPELL BITCH! WITH BIT!
FUCKING BITING BITCH!
HEX
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
BITER!!!!!!!!! ATTENTION MY16 WE HAVE A BITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEX
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
biter...
HEX
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
GET A FUCKING LIFE YOU FUCKING IDIOTS! YOU PISS ME OFF TO NO
FUCKING END. GET A FUCKING LIFE, OR END YOUR OWN. I CARE NOT WHICH!
YOU FUCKING SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 UGGHHH!! I WANT TO GRAB YOR FUCKING
NECKS AND JUST TWIST UNTIL YOUR HEAD POPS OFF LIKE A BARBIE DOLL!
FUCKING BITCHES! I WANT TO SLICE YOUR THROAT AND BATHE IN YOUR
BITING BLOOD. I WANT TO BOIL YOUR BRAINS IN BIOLACERATE OIL! FUCK
YOU BITERS! I WANT TO STONE COLD STUNNER YOUR ASSES INTO THE
GRANITE AND BUST YOUR SKULL OPEN WITH A TIRE IRON! FUCK YOUUUU
BITERS!!! YOU ARE ALL FUCKING BITCHES! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
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BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
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BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
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BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
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BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!
FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK
BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!
P.S.
You cant spell bitch, without bit. Ensayne
Well, if nobody else will comment in agreement, I will do it
myself. FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HEX
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
FUCK YOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thats not bad man, make it better formatted, easier for the eyes,
and it would be great.
ENSAYNE
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.05.09
oh lol ok, can you go to A"NILE"ATION and click the little pencil
and change it to a ten for me?
LOL IIGHT I SEE YOU, BEFORE ANYBODY JUMPS ON HIM, THIS IS MY DUDE,
AND WE JUST HAVIN A FRIENDLY BATTLE. SO DONT GET MAD CUZ HE DISSED
ME LOL GOOD SHIT NILE, I THINK I GOT YOU THOUGH. WHERES MY TWO
GRAND? LOL
Good stuff man, but I have to agree with the phenomenon, you
vocabulary here is immense, but you need to put more words into it
to make it longer, and make it make sense more, instead of commas
to make a stop flow you feel me? Other than that there are a few
words misspelled but nothing horribly mispelled. Good post overall,
just take into account what I said.
You should get KC to read this, it was good man. I like your style
man. We def. gonna collab.
you better bar format this lol
This is some hot shit. Lol I like hypes verse the best, bludie and
joka came hard too.
Im feelin the flow here bro, haha i love that word asphyxiate, i
cany spell it without google lol
Aha thanks fresh
LOL WOW DUDE!! JUST WOW!! HAHA MONKEY FUCKER LOL
Deep stuff from the heart, I like it man. I"m lovin the multis and
internal rhyme you got goin while still teliin what you gotta say.
Thats good.
LOL TUTRONE TOLD ME ABOUT THIS, NOT BAD, LOL THANKS FOR THE SHOUT
OUT NIGGA, BUT FORMAT IT INTO BARS AND IT WILL BE BETTER
THERE! HAPPY?! LOL GOOD SHIT MAN
Deep shit, is this true or just like from a movie or something?
Critical.
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.03.09
That was good man, I liked the flow, and I see I got you on some
vocab too. Dont be gettin too cocky though lol
This was some good shit here lol and fuck that dirtyd kid I think
he went to my school lol I beat that kid in battles multiple times
Yeah the line that fresh said was my favorite too lol this was good
guys
GREAT SHIT GUYS. FEATURED BARS! LOL
Admin is really fuckin up lol. Great collab guys. But why did this
have no ratings but it was on top and featured bars? I got shit
that has like 16 10"s and maaaad people liked it, but I wont
complain too much, admin is just rotating the fame torch. So its
all good.
Overlooking the shadows of pharaohs shooting arrows
at black sparrows eating MC’s skeletons like bone marrow ..... That
was fucking ILL.//
...................................................
Out of the womb, born varsity letterman
Your girl fond of my voice, so when I’m in the booth I let her
in..........Lol I liked this line because, well it was just cool
lol...................................................I used to be
a radical tyrannical cannibal Hannibal
leaving you in manacle’s in a position intangible
......................................................I Loved your
internal rhyme multis here man. Shit was great..... Over all, I
think this deserves to be on top rated bars. And I have nothing
against you Lil a, but that was a bitch move you did giving him a
zero.
Lol yes that mermaid sex was fun to write, I enjoyed every second
of it! Lol.
Well you know Im still gettin on it man
MMMMMM SON THAT SHIT WAS TIGHT!!!
I love your rhymescheme in this one man. The end scheme is dope.
whatever
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
YOU LEAVIN NIGGA?!
This should be top rated.
Fat bitches dont burn calories... thats why their fat... lol good
shit man, real deep. Full of insight about your life. Good stuff
man.
Ahaha I like that last line. Good shit Misses Flick. lol
Yeah I remember that, and Morgan and Jasmine were over too, I was
trying to protect my females too. But yeah, the dude didnt really
have a gun. Good stuff though ma.
I think that if you made it longer, and went more into detail and
used more vocab and multis then this could be something great. It
is good though. You are getting better.
LOL I DID RAP ABOUT SOME GAY SHIT BUT YOU COULD HAVE JUST PUT THAT
LINE IN THERE BECAUSE I POSTED MINE FIRST... HMMM.. LOL AND I SEE
YOU GETTIN PERSONAL WITH THAT VIRGINIA BEACH LINE LOL GOOD SHIT
LOL MY NAME WAS NOT MENTIONED HERE ANYWHERE. I GUESS HE KNOW
BETTER.
PUT YOUR SHIT IN BAR FORM AND STOP TYPING PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!
Good shit, now just write a storyline about how you are demented
like somebody, preferrably a mastermind killer.
lol at that leonidis line.. that was my favorite part of the movie
lol and, he listens to AKON naked rubbing his nipples with KY while
he SMACKS his balls, LOLOLOLOL!!!!
Check the hands on the mic, tell me what my future holds.
and
I follow dreams, left everything behind like it was a last name.
Those were two great lines that I liked. Good stuff though yeah
definitely add more. Hit me up if you want to collab on this, if
not its whatever. Still good shit though.
Tears
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
Man, I had to focus. Down to the REAL man. This is good.
white ass
3.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
I STILL CANT GET OVER HOW YOU SPELLED JESUS
WRONG..............................................................
........................................... C"MON
SON..................
white ass
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
WHITE BOI DOES PROFOUND... LOL
white ass
2.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
YOU FORGOT THE E AFTER BEFORE!!!! I LOVE E"S!!!!!!!!! YOU
BASTAAAAAARRDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!
Lol thanks for the shoutout, and that filler and lame flips line
was funny haha
white ass
4.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
YOU SPELLED ADVICE WRONG!!!!!!
white ass
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
YOU SPELLED PRECISE WRONG!!!!!!
white ass
3.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
YOU USE ROLE IN THE WRONG TENSE!! IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ROLL!!!!
white ass
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
YOU SPELLED JESUS WRONG!!!
Profound + 2 lol
Kingdom
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.02.09
Lol I called you King Tut before I saw this post, and you might not
realize it, but you droped 2 names here, mine, and Envy, which is
Joka lol, Ilike it man, Feels like I influenced a couple peoples
posts today after my Crown of Thorns verse. Good shit homie.
LMAO AT THAT TOAST IN MY WORLDWIND!!! HAHAHA GOOD SHIT NAME DROPPIN
I shed tears to this man, I cant imagine the pain of losing a
child. This is great man, it should be featured. Im sorry you had
to go through that, but it makes you a stronger person. One love
homie.
Stazia reminds me of the girl I fell for HARD. Her name was Chauve.
I really loved that girl. And Alisa reminds me of my ex Jessica.
And DAMN man, my girl right now name is Melissa, I love her, but
she lives in VA, so I dont know how things are gonna go. And dont
let go man. This aint no fuckin homo shit this is REAL TALK between
two men so any people saying its homo fuck you. Dont give up on
love man. You seem like a good dude. Just keep hope man. Much
respect on this post from the heart man, I know it hurts reliving
the memories, trust me I know. But its good to vent. Stay up homie.
Thanks mom, dropping words of wisdom.
Oh I read this before man I see you added verses by other members
though, and I appreciate the respect of you putting REAL first, and
my shout out from you and Solo. Good shit man.
Thanks man. I love writing from the heart.
Legend... Thats right.. New post coming soon entitled Legend.
Lol at you guys arguing then making friends, haha check out my new
post Crown Of Thorns. Its some REAL shit.
Yeah and thanks for the apology man. Glad we can squash the beef. @
Worldwind
LOL FUCK YOU AND ENRICHED DICK RIDING ASS
LOL IM BOUT TO MAKE A POST CALLED "DROP THE MIC" AS A DISS TO ALL
THE WACK EMCEES HERE LOL
LOL THAT SWAN SON DID IT FOR ME. I GOT OFF. SQUIRT SQUIRT! LOL
DAMN JOKA GIVE ME SOME TIME TO WORK ON THERE LOL AND OK KC SOUNDS
GOOD
WHY YOU GOTTA FUCK UP MY RATING? LOL
Etrane, make sure homeboy pays me my proper respect. Thats all I
got to say.
Lol Flicksy, haha dude Enriched and me were cool but he is like all
over you so its kind of really in the way lol
Good shit guys. So is Tref back or what?
WELL THANKSGIVING FEAST IS TOO FAR AWAY NOW LOL AND WE CAN STILL DO
BLOODY MASSACRE BUT I THINK CAMP TORTURE IS JUST A LOST COLLAB LOL
WE WONT DO THAT ONE.
Lol he really is on my Flicksy clit like a damn pair of panties
doe...
Its not bad, but I must say you payed way too much attention to his
post, I bet you didt copy and paste, you knew it by heart. I have
seen better from you though man. This was kind of thrown together
like a sloppy jumbalaya.
NEW RAP
6.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.01.09
Man, I like the flow, but you definitely need to use some vocab
man. And a few multies wouldnt hurt. Some internal rhyme and
wordplay would spice it up too.
THIS IS GAY! I WANTED LEGENDS!!!! I CALLED IT!!!!
Garbage... Lol just kidding man. Great shit, you could Join REAL if
you wanted to wif you consistently post like this.
Good shit man, glad your back.
Mr. Untouchable: 4, Ensayne: 7, Realeyez: 6.
Lol thanks for the shout out, and trying to steal my fans.... lol
If you read all the commenst all the way through then it is only 4
votes for Mr. U, 5 for me and 6 for realeyez. Unless were counting
people that do double votes, which I dont think we are.
Mr. Untouchable:4, Ensayne:4, Realeyez:6. Lets keep voting.
Giving this one to Ndi, they talked about their last battle too
much and then ndi just came in and dismantled their mandibles.
Stillmatik definitely.
Game Over
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 12.01.09
Read it earlier and thought I commented, well, good shit like
always man lol i liked that teriyaki line haha
oh iight lol well thanks for the clarification, i totally forgot
about it, its just a bar lol but yeah man thanks
Good shit Flicksy, and dude wtf enriched... come on man. Your
getting me back to the time when I really didnt like you...
LOL!!!!!!!! that is all
Lol good shit man. I feel like I am becoming a very largely talked
about person on this site lol
Repeat fucked up your rating... Lol. Phenomenal. That is the only
way I can describe this. We will definitely collaborate soon man. I
see you have stepped up immensely since you started.
You wack as FUCK NIGGA! I guarantee I could beat you, hands down...
Literally... I would STOMP YA FACE IN LOL
This is the definition of bitchassness. Niggas biting my lyrics.
Good job on the copy and paste though. I never knew you were
capable of such amazing actions. Biter.
G3T M3
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.29.09
What the hell, are you a blood or just fuckin illiterate? Either
way you still need to use the letter C in your raps... If you were
blooded you would have put c in SacK, but whatever man, not bad
though, just step up your grammar.
ensayne
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.28.09
Nigga if you asked about me you would know I have 2 Record Labels,
one I produce under, and one I use. So get ya facts straight before
you come at a titan, WHO IS IN FACT BETTER THAN YOU. Now go work on
your technique, your a bit rusty, and for your own sake keep my
name out of your mouth. Dismissed.
Yeah man sure, I wasthinking the same thing. Maybe something crazy.
Lets toss ideas back and forth. How about Cloud Nine, like
something to do with idk man lol lets chat about it on the chatroom
or up here lol
Yeah but he needs the practice, hes a beginner, and he wants to do
battls to get better. So yeah, he is a waste of time, but you will
be helping him, he isnt that bad for a first timer, I have seen
much worse.
No problem man, Im kind of training him too, I started teaching
people up here, giving input on how to get better. People like to
learn from me.
"always callin people dickriders, thats exactly what a gay would
say"
Ok that was the simplest line in here, but it made me laugh so loud
it woke the dog up lol good diss man
Ahaha, good shit man, I told you, I knew you would come with
something nice. He probably wont be coming with no low ratings and
hating because I let him know about the rating respect factor. But
yeah, good shit mn, I hope he comes back at you.
lol in the chat he was like, is he good? and i was like, you
shouldnt battle him, haha, but he was like, well i would rather get
my ass handed to me then back own like a bitch, so i think hes
gonna diss you lol
NEWCOMERS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.27.09
Well kyle14, its a process,you should try following a rhyme scheme,
and rapping to a beat, each drop at the end is a bar, on most
beats, so if you can spit something nice to that bar by the end the
beat drops on the stanza, your flow will get better, as far as
metaphors go, look around and compare something to something else
to make it sound good. Live Example: This kid is really bluffin, he
about as hard as a mini muffin.
There is a box ofmini muffins on the counter in the kitchen, so
just look around. Compare things, make it funny.
Good stuff, I like the flow in the first verse the best.
That shit was pure fire. Great collab Grime and Hype
Hey that shit was nice, might need another verse though, what do
you think?
Simplicity is so Gay.........he makes Richard Simmons look like
Hulk Hogan.
Fresh is right.
Simplicity is so Gay.........he makes straight jokes.... LOL!
penis..........................
Ahaha nice shit man, that Casual T line was dope.
The animal went to work.
why super fresh.. why?
Its not bad man, but I think you could do better. From now on you
need to post it in bar format though. We tell you this all the time
lol
Not bad man, I like the flow, but make your bars even in rhyme
scheme, sometimes you do three rhymes and it is kind of off, but
not bad man.
It was ok bunnyz, lol but the ensayne in the membrane line is a
little played out and the gay lines are too lol but not bad.
Pretty good man, I think if you put more time and effort into it
instead of freestyling it yu could from multies and word play
better. Good shit nonetheless.
Bludies verse is done, its on his page, and this is nice as hell.
Good stuff man, good message too.
Good shit as always man, when are you gonna post that Escaped
Verses Collab?
AGRABBAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOBCAAAKKEEE!!!!
4.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.26.09
Fresh is a noob...
NEWCOMERS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.26.09
Evilbunnyz, in my ensayne opinion, I think, in order for you to be
more evil.... You must....RAPE NUNS!
Not bad man, looks like you went to work on this one and put some
heart in it, like gime said the flow was a little off, in the first
verse, but it picked up in the second, and it was pretty good.
NEWCOMERS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.26.09
Well, Mr. Untouchable, all you have to do is study my flow.
Its not bad, you have a long way to go, I think if you use more
vocabulary and form longer bars and do a full sixteen and pu more
effort into it, you will get much better.
NEWCOMERS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.26.09
Post something, something new, with vocabulary, and multies, and
try to tie in some word play, and I will check it out.
NEWCOMERS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.26.09
When I fist started this site I used something called rhymezone.
Rhymezone.com will help you with vocabulary, main thing you do,
read the dictionary, seriously, I have read the dictionary when I
got bored ad my vocabulary is impeccable if I do say so myself.
NEWCOMERS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.26.09
What do you need help with specifically?
Real deep flicksy. I liked it, it really gets into the soul of the
media, and exposes people for who they really are.
Much better, you put it in bar format, you came hard with good
vocabulary, and you just wrecked shit.
Prtty good shit man, I need to get back on the multi game myself.
Lol yeah it will be soon, its part of a collab thats coming soon.
Lol yeah an I might just delete this and post it again tomorrow.
Ahaha I like the topic, good shit, I might put a verse on it too
lol
raise up!
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.25.09
Whats good, who is the crew leader here?
Leave 10 ratings only please.
Like Still said, shit is solid. Flow like a liquid. And I let it
pass like gas... lol
Hey man I feel you on this shit, we all been there. Just try to
live a good life man, you can get out and have a better life, you
just have to believe in yourself.
Lol I liked it, it was funny. But you should relly start making it
in bar format so its easier to read and not like a paragraph.
It was deep
LMAO! WOW LOL
Damn, I like how this flowed and the way you tossed the words
around, good shit, check out last post, I think its the best I have
ever written.
Good shit bunnyz. Pretty good beat too.
You know I had to peep the post with my title in it, good shit man.
That bend the bars/ lyrical cage line was fire. Good shit man,
truthfully, I dont like free world either. He is fake to me.
Nice man, I see your getting better.
Lol Etrane, nash and hydruzare both one guy that comes in the chat
and talks shit, then leaves without posting bars lol
Pretty good man. I never payed much attetion to you to tell you the
truth, but your pretty nice.
Well then this 10 is for realizing your own skill level, and
accepting your own faults even at the premise of my offer, I have
respect for you in that aspect. And maybe with some help you could
do as you are saying and get up there, until then, I guess just
keep watching me. If you want to collab sometime dont regret to hit
me up.
Not bad Flicker, you gotta write a little more though. And yeah if
you want you could join REAL, thats my crew, Im sure you know
though. But yeah if you want you can tryout.
No problem man, Im just here to promote and help people get known,
respect man, I look forward to future collaborations with you.
Regrets
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.23.09
About time this got up, good shit from everyone.
This was good. But you hyped you and them up so much that I was
expecting a little more from them, not xactly a let down, but it
was ok.
Good diss toni
Lol I just wrote and stopped when I was finished, you cant limit
genius. Ahaha.
Better, you formed about 2 multis without knowing it, but make your
bars longer, combine them, make them flow better.
rida diss
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.22.09
Lol you came at Grime too haha good shit man
Oh My GOD! WOW! I AM GLAD I DIDNT FACE YOU! YOUR A LYRICAL
MASTERMIND!! Lol no not really, you got a long way to go before you
can battle me homie. Keep at it though. This isnt terrible, your
just a beginner. Everybody has to start somewhere.
"Feet stompin your face in time to face what you facin, and what
you facin is jason with a mic makin his statments." THat was good,
and that line about the the four aces in the same hand was nice lol
Ahaha thanks for gettin at him, I wasnt gonna waste my time, I
think you should start combing your lines t make double rhymming
bars, it would be much doper that way.
This was great man, if you started like this then you know you
shouldnt be leaving.
Lets go 12 rounds
He still typin in caps too lol
Damnit Pro. This is the only 0 I will ever give you because of your
decision, dont let other people dictate what you do, your stronger
than that and better than most. So your ass better come back. Lol
man forreal thats in the way. Are you retiring from rap or just
this site?
Lmao wow dude, nice, when I do mine its probably gonna be more of
just a storyline in story format and not diss format lol
"I own heaven as well as hell, so theres no need to repent"
Shit was nice, andI love parkous, lol I want to learn it one day.
Guess what, Im taking this verseand making it a collab with me and
you, and call it Mental Lexicon. Lol cuz my verse on lexicon was
great and this flows perfectly with it.
that as so stupid. and no tref you wouldnt lol
BEST RAPPER ALIVE!
Love it, its really deep and good use of imagery. This is gonna be
a good collab lol
Your only as good as you think you are. This is only nice if you
mean it.
Not bad man.
Hey man this shit as nice, if you ever do wantto join my crew, you
can horrorcore battle me, and you can get in, lol and yeah I got a
fan in flicer, she said she read all my stuff, and she fine too lol
but yeah man good post, and thaks for the respect. We may collab
sometime.
Not bad, I like the cncept, just structure it better, form bars and
not lines, use better grammar and what not. You will get farther
that way.
Profound came on the serious tip, bunnyz came on the playful shit,
it fits well together. lol
Any one interested in joining must first battle a member of my
crew, if none are on at the time, you will battle me, depending on
your skill level, we may go a second round, a horrorcore match,
allowing me to asses your lyrical murder skills. Then we will speak
from there.
Deception
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.20.09
This is pretty good, I didnt understand the line about the feathers
though. Overall it was good though.
Leave 10 ratings in your comments please.
Great vocab in the collab, and I like the hook. If you recorded
this it would be good.
Test
1.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.20.09
Do not rate.
Its good But I havesen his alot lately so its not very original per
se but its still good.
I know Im late as fuck on the post, tis was ven beforeI signed up
lol but yeah profound told me about this so i had to read it, great
shit man.
Profouns is up 3 0.
Lol FK you never beat me.And yeah man great diss, Im with my girl
right now so I will get back at you a little later. Good shit man.
I looked to you because your name was similar and what not. And
thanks for the compliment. I will check out some of your shit, I
didnt read it all just saw the names but I will check them out. If
you keep it up you could get into my crew.
Lol thanks man, battle back haha and you will get better, just post
a diss to me.
Lol good shit bunnyz ya furry fuckhaha
Ensayne
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.19.09
Lol its not a thing about pride Im just trying to help you get
better and get your name outthere, I see you have some potential
and I want to help, its not a back down thing its just one guy
helping another, but yeah thanks for the compliment and I will post
my diss tonight. Come back when you can.
Not bad, you need to write a little more from now on though because
this is only 12 bars. The site my16bars.com lol good job though.
Pretty good stuff man.
ike this man, its real deep. Makes me wanna get back into poetry.
Overall it was good, but the first line didntmake sense, butthe
last four were nice. And the whole thing flowed well.
Lol not bad Nile.We might collab when you become more of an active
user.
love life
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.19.09
Poetic.
That shit was nice. Lol bunnyz gavea 9 because he wasnt on it haha
It was alright.
Area 51
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.19.09
This is Ill.
Your getting better man.
real talk
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.19.09
Could be a lot better, I dont know if you really "in da streets"
like you say you is though. And talkin bout guns and shit man come
on, if you "a grown ass man" why you talkin bout childish gangster
shit? Lol Im just sayin man, get more lyrical.
Bunnyz. No offense. I liked his verse better.
OOH CAN I JOIN? I AM PRETY GOOODD!!
That shit ws awesome man. The beat needs to be longer though lol I
know you cant help that but it was nice.
Nice like always. Good collab.
Commented on Bunnyz page but i will here too, this was great shit
man, bloody bunnies lol
That shit was creative man. Great flow.
One point for each bar because it was nice, if you add more or make
another it will be better. But welcome to my16bars newcomer, I am
Ensayne. Ask about me, Im pretty big here. I look forward to seeing
more from you.
Nice man, lol free aint joinin though, good practice though.
Your geting much better
Hey man that shit was nice!
Not bad man, I think Im still gonna have you battle somebody
though.
Good shit man, edit for the spelling errors though on police thing.
Overall great though
Bloody Bunnies! That shit was epic. Great shit guys.
Nice shit man. Great flow.
This might be the best I seen from Venom.... But desanto got it
easily.
NOT A G
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.17.09
Nice. You got him.
The first four bars were terminal son. Awesome post.
Great vocab man
Great shit man lol i always like a crew diss
Lol I like that his talent stops startin part
Hey man this sounds a lot like my song called Turn Your Back, about
how my old girl didnt wanna talk to me after some shit, I like it
man, deep and from the heart.
Nah nigga you fuckin suck
Well it turns out my brothers cr is crap so hes getting a new one
and I will be out there by next monday. And Bludie Ill be living
there for a bout 9 months or so. Until I leave for boot camp.
Damn we was supposed to write? lol i freestyled this shit.. Wish I
knew, I would have put more into it, son it aint lookin good for
me! haha
Ehh, not a great battle, but J from the AQ has my vote.
You kindadissed yourself talking about, short, sweet, and rough....
lol its ok though
Good shit man
Better than most of yor shit, your getting better man
Great vocab man
fresh
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.16.09
Nice man, when you get a chance you hink you could change that 5
rating you left on my page to a 10 for me? i like my shit to be
feautred lol
Givin the gold to Greasy on this one man, he came harder no homo
Lol shit had me rollin
I read this before I guess I didnt leave the comment, good stuff
man, from the heart.
Untouch took the battle but the poor favor doesnt seem to flow
because thats not how it said, good overall though
This actually is pretty good, I like the details. Work on your
vocab and flow a little if you want to battle somebody, but you
just seem like you would do poetry.
Must have spit that shit fast because the ars were so ong thatI
couldnt read it fast enough to know how it would flo with the beat,
but grat lyrics man, as always. Make sre to check out my collab
with toni coming soon called Spaced Out.
Yeah for real, and why the fuck you hatingon me? stick... dumb ass
fuckin name lol
Great shit man, Im gonna be stepping my vocab game up in this
tournament just in case I have to battle you. And that would be a
good thing for to do anyways.
Can I be a back up judge?
Are you serious? LMFAO!
The rabbit is hopping right along aint he? lol good shit
Am I too beast to compete?
Yall took me out the competition?
now yall REALly in the way... lol
Yall in the way..... lol
Lol I know cobra it wa a quick write and lol at Tref
Your my REAL whore and thats it... lol yeah.. Your worthy. Go join
REAL.
Nice I like how you said you wanted to join in the rap lol well I
guess I will kill you now... again... lol then I might let you join
Talk About Gruesome.... lol
THIS IS FUCKIN FIRE TO THE BEAT WE GOTTA RECORD MAN!
Lol iight but change that 9 you left to a ten for me man
Givin this one to Greasy
Thanks KC and Greasy lol this girl got talent now I am bringing out
the stops to see if she can handle it and come back, and I might
add her to the crew.
Check out my diss Torturing Tref and come back with something nice.
Nice, time for my round two.
Nice, Im bout to murder you though. lol
Not bad Tref, getting better, now let me check that diss to me lol
Well, I dont know how all this happened. Lol but this was good too
Regardless of you betrayal that shit was ill, but are you coming at
me too, saying "if your from Lyricity Im literally paving the
lyrastreets" ?
I could add 8 more bars...... lol
We should really record this.
Sound like you was really drunk ll
Ahaha nice man, just what I was expecting.
to find the REAL best battler
Well I am the leader of REAL... so... you know... lol
Nice man good shit. I like that snow globe line lol
Ripped. Ahaha nice shit man.
Well viceroy wasnt good at all. Slim came ok, but you still too
hype off your own shit, and caramel and rambo dont rhyme. it was
Iight though. Like it sounds like your trying to rap like somebody
on the radio that didnt make it
as 2good
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.11.09
im the main source of rap, somethin like a lobby
?
I didnt get that line but this wasnt too bad
Is this supposed to be a verse... lord in heaven...if it is you
will never get signed... EVER!
"jeezz another one..haha taking over my 16 " ?
What.. nahhh... you look like akon on crack... and why it look like
you sittin on your moms bed? lol
Why the fuck you lookin like that, crooked eyes and shit... Lol and
there is nothing slaughter about this, you rapping filler. Thats
all foreal lol
I cant understand what your saying... And stop raping the page..
you posted like 18 at once.. you are in the way
The flow was a little choppy becaus the bars were so long, but I
liked it over all. The methods were normal, nothing too special,
but I think its your first time so its all good. We will put you in
a collab. And soon you will be inducted to REAL.
This shit was niiicee.. I couldnt get a shout out or anything
though? lol
Indeed.
Ehh it was ok, the flow was nice, but there werent any really good
punchlines or metaphors. It was ok.
Wake Up
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.11.09
You reposetd this like 3 times. Lol I read this before, its not
bad. Im not really into all that government conspiracies shit but
this is pretty good
Speechless. This is wonderful, you should record it.
Lol its all good man. I am not expecting much out of this contest,
its pretty biased from what I see, but I will give it a chance
Thanks man, you should post some shit. too.
A BA BA BA BIRD BIRD BIRD, THE BIRD ISTHE WORD! A BA BA BIRD BIRD
BIRD, THE BIRD IS THE WORD!!!!
BUNNY lol
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.11.09
Yeah I did make it sound pretty cool Huhh? lol
This shit is like a discussion board... lol
Makes me hungry... for flesh..... lol nice shit man
Lol NDIhas had it out for mr for weeks lol read my post
Lol no thats fine with me, just know I am doin 16 bars regardless
of the rules lol
Well in order for me to compete I ask that you change it back to
16, this is my16bars not my12bars, and change the match with me and
greasy, I feel like you guys are trying to get him out too fast and
so does he. These are my requirements if you want me in the
competition, if not I can bail.
I can look at the chat from my phone but I cant post anything in
the chat room, its a tease... lol
What if we do not have access to a computer and can not email you
the verse? But can still post it, is that ok?
Alright, that works too. When and where do we submit our verse? Or
is it just by a post basis?
Yeah me and Greasy on the same page.
I read it again but it did not specify whether or not a judge can
vote for himself or another judge who is competing. To make it
completely unbiased the judges should not be allowed to compete.
Really depends on who all the judges are, because I dont want
anybody to be able to rap and judge and vote for himself or their
friends, and I dont want like one of my haters as a judge either
lol so who are the judges gonna be?
Interesting, Im down.
BUNNY lol
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.11.09
The collaboration will be entitled Terror Domes. We might rap about
decaying the brains of innocent souls with the mindless lines we
spew from our epic mouths. Rather, we may rap about torturing the
spirits of the innocent, until the very core of their character
collapses in a pool of blood...
SOUL TREE
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.11.09
This is better man. If you took your mind off hating me so much and
put it into actual lyrics you would be able to do better. Good job.
Man seriously I am not about to waste my time arguing with you on
somebody else post, so just hop off my mother fucking cock.
Seriously man, you fucking suck, embody agrees with me, so just do
yourself a favor and back out of this website, leave with the shred
of dignity I allowed you to keep by not telling you to kill
yourself. Dismissed.
Lol Iight man and seriously enriched what the heels? Walk away from
this shit man you are a disgrace to hip hop lol
Oh ok lol well that was before I was here so I never knew that lol
and I guess you could change that to a 10 if you want to lol
Ahaha good shit man. I see you read my shit by spitting that
Ensayne Asylum line lol. Good stuff man. Now you have made it to
part tw of the audition. Write a Horrorcore Rap, and torture
somebody, preferably a random person off the street or one of your
teachers/professors etcetera. Destroy somebody else with a verse,
and then your in, where you will be able to collab with Joka and
myself. And fuck you enriched we have been over this, I am better
than you. You admitted it.
I gotta say man, I am not impressed. To be honest, I feel like you
did this in 5 minutes. I am going to need to see more out of you
then this. No disrespect, I am just speaking the truth.
Iight, you get in touch with Profound about it asap, and I will
talk to Joka.
Hell yeah man, And Diablo thanks lol can you delete that 5 for me
though? lol . And yeah Joka and Profound Should Horror Core Battle.
Ohh shit! We should do a Collaboration with me Joka You and
Profound and call it Terror Domes... Lol Foreal
Lmao at that free world line from 8 mile, and thanks for the shout
out lol there are too many good points to name, great job man.
Yeah man do that, I was going to if you didnt. This was great
though man, I like it, I might start it up on this website.
Glad I could help man, all Im gonna say is, I see you... And not
many people at my eye level, if you feel me.
Ahaha your taking after me, kind of sounds like some shit I would
say, and I see you took my adviceon the bloodstains on the wall
spelling your name. Lol good shit, now its my turn to murder you.
Lol it was better then the last one you sent me Ill give ya that.
But now its murder time.
Hey Tref who are you coming at in this?
Ok, ok, Ill admit, it was nice. Lol good punchlines and nice
metaphors.
LH hands down...
"insomniac when i go into my lyrical dungeon
i emerge in the morning with six rap artists hearts in my stomach"
niiicceee and thanks for the shout out lol
and gret vocab on "im willingly and dilligently bringing mental
instabilities.. you kiddin me?"
haha good shit man
Lol I gotta give it to you, nice.
I had nothing to do with this, but I just had to post this, great
shit from both of you, but, Im giving the prize money to Hype.
Knockout
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
That was fucking epic...
Knockout
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
What....
Knockout
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
the.....
Knockout
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
fuck...
Nah if he want it he can get it another time, im goin to bed, I got
shit to do, later greasy
Lol change your pwn rating to a ten lol and yeah man good looks lol
he ran after I posted so I dont know whats up with that.
See I had an influence on you, "Take the axe to ya head now ya wigs
is split" Ahaha and "Yall niggas suck more ass then porn stars
giving head after anal" Shit had me rollin! And you dropped your
own name! Ahaha nice shit man. Watch Free World come give this like
an 8 or a 9 lol. Good shit man.
My16Girls
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
Thats what I thought... nigga get all defensive and shit then wont
back up his own words...
My16Girls
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
Separate pages? Nigga, we aint even reading the same book! And keep
quiet? How about you silence me... If you can...
Ehh not bad, post some more shit, I wanna judge you some more.
My16Girls
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
LMFAO! I knew this nigga was gon bring up Toni. We collab, that is
all. But you on other hand... FREE World. Tell me you aint tryna
fuck the bitch?! You just said you wanna see her naked on a phone.
Tell me why you want to see an underage girl naked? I should report
your ass! lol
My16Girls
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.10.09
I mean for real you feel me Simp? Shit is ridiculous!
Free World up in this bitch trying to get that internet pussy! This
was ok, but pretty much no multis or vocab so I give it a 5 as in
not just me leaving a comment. An actual 5
Whenever I take a shit, I stare at the toilet paper.... I pull
these topics right outta my ass! lol, and thanks lion ahaha I hate
it when people stare at me in the locker room, shit makes me
uncomfortable lol
Enriched still sucks!!!!! lol
Lets just remember, you admitted that I was better than you, so
anything you say is irrelevant. Dismissed.
Now I see why they did not post your verse with the rep, because
your verse was crap. Childs play,, Enriched. Just quit rapping,
your own crue disowned you because you could not fucking stand up
to me like a man, and you already admitted that I was better, so
bow out of the rap game like a man, take your shitty bars
elsewhere, and stop lowering my ratings.
Damn this is long as fuck! But I still say it is a masterpiece.
Just stick to what your doing foreal and add a lil more detail like
the way her blood splatered on the walls wrote your name and shit
lol that would be epic i might do that lol
Damn greasy keep the 10s going lol and just comment on her post or
something lol
Damn dude you really wanna join REAL dont you? Lol well this shit
is nice man, change that 5 to a 10 on REAL AUDITIONS and talk to
Tonijo about converting to REAL. Then you may be inducted.
Talk2emgreasy, I need that back to a 10 man. And I am gonna read it
now.
Great shit man, deep and nice flow...
The hook gets stuck in my head... lol
If I didnt know any better, I would accuse this guy of being
Evilbunnyz, but I do not think it is, I think this guy is just some
dude up here who stalks everybody and wants to be nice.
READ THIS
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.08.09
That is respect right there, I feel you man
It is kind of obvious that it was not profound because he would
have said Rapsick Surgeons and not sick surgen rappers, profound
would have spelled it right, and Joka did post THE KILLER on his
page lol he is confused or something
Talk2emgreasy, I wil when I get off work today, Profound, lol, Jon
J, we can battle tomorrow, or later today. Its up to you.
The Game
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.08.09
That shit was nice man. With something like this, after our ble I
may just give you a chance for a collab, then induct you, if your
diss warrants more than an eye opener.
Not bad, lol I know thisis not about me so I am not gonna play and
say it is. But yeah check out some of my stuff boo, been a minute
since I called you that.
This would take some time, I will put you down for monday.
Well, we can battle now or later. In order to get in I need to see
your skills with a battle, consider this an interview, if I
consider you to be good enough, or if you beat me, then you will be
called back for another interview. Which will be your Horrorcore
Rap. When do you want to battle?
FreeStyle
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.07.09
Lol I like how you started it, and ended it, somewhere in between
you kind of got weak though. My advice, take it or leave it, try
and get four lines that rhyme at the end, and do that four times
with four different end rhymes, that way it is more structured and
it will be a 16. That is how I do, and it works for me, but since
it was just a freeystyle it is better than most you know.
Yeah man you can, its Horrorcore though. Write about torturing
somebody. Release all your anger, its a certain way of relieving
stress, and the people love it. Write about torturing somebody,
mentally, physically, and emotionally, saw off their elbows so
their arms fall in two, just go crazy with it. And if its nice
enough then I may feature it in a collaboration I have coming up.
If it isnt, then you still have a piece of something you will be
recognized for, its a win win.
Talk2emgreasy, you are already considered a part of my entourage,
seeing as how Lyrical Hysteria and REAL are affiliated. I think you
should stay with LH for now until you get a feel of everything you
know?
Evilbunnyz, you can already collab with us at any time seeing as
how you are an affiliate. Fallen Knight, I am glad to see you are
still interested. Keep working hard, I think you have potential.
Well I have never heard of you guys, but nice work, J Bravo had the
best verse. Keep it up. Why did you name the crew after a movie
though?
Ahaha nice shit man, I wasnt gonna take the time to read this at
first, but I am glad I did, great shit man.
Lol thanks guys, Im bout to go to sleep! Later! lol
Edited for content and reposted, much better lol.
I like this, you should have said , before I take the tool out my
pocket, it would have flowed much better, and you had a few bars
that was rhymed 5, yes few rhymed 3, but nice shit regardless man,
I am keeping my eye on you, no homo
Will do, check out my shit in the featured bars and whatever piques
your interest if you havent already.
I feel you, and yeah man your not bad keep working at it, throw in
some multis and heavier rhymes and shit will do better
Lol thanks man, good battle, we might go again sometime, when did
you get added to LH?
Somebody that speaks the truth, if none other, you have earned my
respect man.
HATRED
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.06.09
Ahaha I like that belly verse, Belly was my favorite movie, and you
dropped names with out even knowin it, Ensayne and King Cobra. And
damn you ended it nicely with that vacuum line, but at the end I
guess you could find any rhymes, you could have said " Killers hate
love, sweeten your beetlejuice and drink sheep blood." To rhyme
with with street thugs. But great shit all around.
Ahaha nice man, officially murked.
For anyone else that reads this, when I put Close Your Eyes in
italic, that means I am whispering it, and the line speaks over it
right before eyes finishes, and at the end it is bolded and italic,
whispered in a satanic tone of voice.
Shit ws good man, why you puttin my name in it though!?!? ahaha its
whatever though lol
Lol at goon88 but this is ok man, I think you can do better though,
even if your high haha
I already admitted to it, lol
Not bad man, I think you can do better though.
That shit was dope, I liked Fresh verse the best, and the baptized
in fire line by profound. Smoke a lot didnt really do it for me
this time. But it wasnt bad, great collabs overall. And I know
profound said, "Tell Ensayne to join us if he wants to live" yeah
nig I be stalking the mini chat from my phone... lol
More on a poetry tip, and I think you could structure the lines
better, but it was deep man, just structure things better and come
up with better rhymes like you usually do.
Lol I deleted it because I didnt mean it, and everybody knew that,
you suck, and dont deserve a response. Even if you signed in.
Half of this verse was stolen from PYROMANIAK off of
hiphopdirectory.com, and i think he stole it from somebody too
You got that from PYROMANIAK! Off of hiphopdirectory.com!
Its nice but you really needed to make it longer. Your missing 6
bars lol
Its nice but hard to focus on your verse with him spittin it lol
That beat is nice, and Toni and Profound, I liked the verses, shit
was fire.
Give me a break.. I did this in 4 minutes... lol
Nice work guys. Pretty deep, I just wasnt feelin the forgiveness
tip at the moment or I would have jumped on.
How about... Toni and the gang... lololol
Respect man, that shit was deep, make the bars a little longer next
time though.
Lmao bro you said, "is your name MClovin? because your rhymes suck
superbad...." lololol!
You should rename this Fake Talk, because none of this is REAL. I
doubt you have ever murdered anybodys wife, or cut someone with a
knife, and I dont even think you could freeystyle for one minute
without fucking up, so how you gonna say rapping all damn day when
this wasn even half a sixteen? You need a lot of work man. Next
time you decide to name something REAL TALK, make sure you rap
about something you actually do. Dont consider this hating,
consider it constructive criticism.
Ahaha, yeah we do always come up with some pretty good shit. We
gonna make another one soon. This time you pick the topic lol
Dude spittin in morse code or some shit? lol
Simply nice man.
Thats some sexy shit right there...
Epic. Masterpiece. Amazing. I am speechless.
Fuckin killed it man, I may add a story line and submit my verse
later, probably not tonight maybe tomorrow but it will def. be
another murder masterpiece.
ensane
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.02.09
Are you serious?
untitled
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.02.09
DAMN THAT WAS FUCKIN FIRE!
Supreme
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 11.02.09
Nice man, I like the style
Lol I was just bored man thanks for a battle ahaha
Hey its up now, go and check it out and submit your verse on the
post, I will add it, then delete your verse from the post and
comment on our masterpiece. lol
Check out my last post. Its kind of like we arguing when we just
got off work and we live together dating type shit, a relationship
collab jump off makin love type shit you feel me? I am about to
post the beginning jump off and the hook, I will probably have my
verse done by tonight as well. Just check out my last post.
Tonijo, I love how you picked up on the torture aspect, you
murdered them kids. Ahaha and great job everybody. Promotional
masterpiece.
Definitely needs two more bars lol nice doe
Damn well no wonder I liked it lol
Muahahaha! Fall victim to my mind, for I be awesome!
ITS FOUR!! THE ANSWER IS FOUR!!! FOOOUUURRRR!!!!
Uh oh! Name dropping are we? lol nice man
Lol nice shit man, but your two bars short, hance the 9, if you add
two more bars i will make it a ten lol
iight man
True, lol but still man I think this would just be the best thing,
but I mean I am pretty big on this site alredy, I just hate it when
somebody just leaves a zero for no reason on somethng that was
gonna be featured you know?
Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a
lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down
otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an
active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because
most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most
fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because
of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a
bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we
do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able
to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody
can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a
larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on
both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and
a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into
consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters
will lower this rating as well. And I think featured bars should be
changed bi weekly or weekly because me and my crew are making big
moves and we have a lot of peoples attention right now. I would
appreciate your feed back man.
Everyone that rates this please leave a 10, I need admin to see
this!
Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a
lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down
otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an
active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because
most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most
fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because
of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a
bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we
do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able
to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody
can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a
larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on
both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and
a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into
consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters
will lower this rating as well. And I think featured bars should be
changed bi weekly or weekly because me and my crew are making big
moves and we have a lot of peoples attention right now. I would
appreciate your feed back man.
Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a
lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down
otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an
active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because
most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most
fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because
of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a
bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we
do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able
to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody
can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a
larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on
both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and
a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into
consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters
will lower this rating as well. And I think featured bars should be
changed bi weekly or weekly because me and my crew are making big
moves and we have a lot of peoples attention right now. I would
appreciate your feed back man.
Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a
lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down
otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an
active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because
most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most
fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because
of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a
bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we
do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able
to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody
can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a
larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on
both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and
a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into
consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters
will lower this rating as well. I would appreciate your feed back
man.
Hey first ladii 2012 can you change that to a 10, we are trying to
get this into featured bars.
Damn right!
"rip a bitches clit and spit in it till it spills liquid on my
dick"
Epic... lol
We Ball
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.30.09
Hey can you change that 8 to a 10, were trying to get that song on
featured bars like my other one. I would really appreciate it. And
pretty nice flow you got here
With shit like this you could be in the crew by tomorrow. We will
have a talk on the mini chat first though. I have a few rules,
regulations, and expectations of all my crew members.
I expected nothing less. Good job.
Ahaha nice shit man that was awesome, great multis man.
Lmao yes it is, thats why I said my rays never miss, swiftly,
because the move swift never missed...
ill kill you in two rounds, only using one script,
i shoot 3 shots, and hit with six, lyrics writtin wit a twist" that
shit was ill lol
That was fucking nice! Shit had me weak when you said"i will shit
in a bag and slam it over your head until you go mad" lmao and you
ended it proper too man nice.
About me
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.30.09
Ahhh ok man, well if we battle sometime that will put you out
there, and maybe we can collab or something sometime.
Ahaha nice, I like the concept, glad I could help a little in the
minichat lol
About me
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.30.09
That was nice man. I like it, last thing, you have to battle me, if
I like your shit, your in my crew.
Lol nah man I told him I was gonna battle him to help him out you
feel me.
Ahaha your getting better already lol im bout to murder you son
watch out
MoRe_BaRz
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.30.09
ok man and go to the top of the page and click on forum and go into
the chatroom and talk in there thats where i am now
We will see man, I am giving you a chance here lol but yeah just
change that rating to a 10 on my post A Mothers Love, and then post
some bars called Ensayne Diss and battle me and I will battle
back, its promotion man.
MoRe_BaRz
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.30.09
Read what I said on your other post, and if you could do me a
favor, thanks for the comment on my bars called A Mothers Love, but
can you go back to that post and click on the little pencil above
your comment and click on the five and scroll down to make it a ten
and press save. It keeps the ratings up man, you will learn all
about it soon.
Battle me man. I dont usually battle new people, or people that are
new to rap, but I think if you really 11 and you spittin like me
when I was 15 then you might have some potential, battle me, and
you will get noticed quickly. And the little five above this when
you type is a rating, when you think somebody spit some good shit
make it a 10 by linking on that scroll bar and scrolling down,
because you have been giving yourself fives.
MoRe_BaRz
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.29.09
Whats up man, you want me to make you famous on this website?
Want me to make you famous on this website?
WHERES MY HOOKER?!?!?!
Alright man, submit your verse here and it will be added then the
story will finish.
Yoo its nice but now I feel like me and Joka cant do our collab
called The Voices because it would seem like swaggerjackin lol
Ahaha nice i spit it and it flowed nice man, that is if it stopped
at exactly 1:00 lol
Check it out Gudsen and tell me what you think, there is much more
work to be done.
Ahaha nice as always.
Nice I liked it, Profund man, you came off a little weak but you
definitely picked it up in t upper middle, lol nice shit from
bunnyz too.
Gudsen starting to sound like Joe from Family Guy lol
E=MC 2
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.29.09
Yeah Joka bro I will put you on, that post collab just me and you,
I want to have an individual collab with each member you feel me?
And a few with all members of REAL.
Ahaha I seen it man, but no there is no room for you on my label.
Lol, I swear I am about to make you and Broccoli famous on this
bitch, again here comes my big ego, see if you can knock it down a
notch.
Dont come to my page giving me advice, on some real shit, most of
the shit you said in here really didnt even rhyme, so before you
think you can come up in my domain giving me advice, get at least
one high rated post, earn sme respect, and dont be bringing my shit
down just because you do not have anything nice. I must battle you
now, even if I do make you famous.
E=MC 2
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.29.09
Broccoli! Why you up in this bitch giving me low and unfair rating
knowing that shit was pure cane? And you are far from someone in a
position to be giving advice.
E=MC 2
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.29.09
Lately I have been on the subject of torture, I have been feeling a
little crazy, the voices in my heard are getting louder. Tell me
what you guys think though it is my first post in a few days.
Another may be coming soon, either called Insomniac, or The Voices.
Maybe I will do both. The Voices may be a collab with somebody in
my deranged mindset. Everything lately to me has been lyrical, hip
hop is running through my veins, I have blood bars. I cant explain
it, i just cant stop rapping. I think that if I did I would submit
to myself and act upon all my selfish desires of the mind body and
soul, no matter how sick and out of the ordinary they may be, I
need to see a therapist. But music is my doctor.
Hey man you got some nice shit, I think you would fit right into my
crew REAL. Want to join? Gudsen and Joka are in.
Awesome man, that last line got me thinking, we should do a collab
called Symphony of Misery. That would be cool, and I want you on my
Camp Torture collab, me you profound and gudsen, shit would be
awesome.
Nice man, good shit from everybody.
This shit is just in the way! Lol I like it, your kinda weird
though. lol
bait
4.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.28.09
You childish lol and you really are not very good, like I tried to
be nice and help you become better, but you took it the wrong way,
its all good though, bitch doesnt get far on this site.
Well Profound, I will tell you like somebody once told me, if you
did that, you should not talk about it on a website! Lol
That alphabet line and THC line were fucking ILL.
I been waiting for this all night! Damn! Makes me wish I would have
got on it lol nice shit guys.
I should not even dignify your lame carcass with a response, I
already told you nigga, I would demolish you, ask anybody on this
website, you truly dont want beef with The Butcher, I dont even
know why I wasted time on you. And I already told you, I am not
about to make you famous by battling me, earn your respect like
everybody else does, new dude, bet you log on thinking you gonna
come in and "smash the game" I got news for you, you arent gonna
smash anything. Respect is earned, not given, earn my respect with
some decent punchlines thrown accurately then maybe I will give you
a chance to shine.
bait
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.28.09
Thank you dylan. I mean this dude rhymed first 3 times then used
hurst... lol that says a lot about his skill level
You do not deserve the publicity you will receive with just one
battle with me, just by posting my name on this website half of the
people here are going to read it and see how bad you are at
rapping, so just quit while your behind. Word is bond nigga, you
can not beat me, even in your wildest dreams, I demolish you
regardless.
Red Broccoli, You are so gay, lol. Thinking you can handle two
dudes, probably can you fuckin faggot. You truly arent worth my
time. So unless you want your mind warped keep my name off of your
page, out of your mind, and far from your mouth, where many niggas
have probably been.
Ahaha its decent man, but for some reason I feel like your a white
boy from new york trying to get into the rap game, I am probably
wrong though lol
real life
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.28.09
It was ok, i see your a novice at this so I will cut you some
slack, but why do I get the feeling that all these people giving
you a 10 is just you on another account rating yourself? I swear
it is you, I mean, Sickness, Spitter? And come on now, Rapjudge?
Man are you rating yourself from other accounts? Lol for real dude.
Ahaha looks like you chopped this dude, I wasnt even gonna waste my
time because of how weak his shit was. "Skull fuck you while I am
jamming to an instrumental." Epic. Lol
Ahaha dont hate and lie on a dude just because you got burned like
syphilis! Good shit man your improving!
Peter Chao:"Derr is Pubis Hair on de Soap BAA!"
P.S. I......Like....... CEREAL!!!!
Ehh, its ok, but it doesnt deserve a reply to tell you the truth,
come harder then this if you want my respect or publicity of me
putting your name on this website...
Reminds of of a light bulb the way you named it, Lol i got maaad
people starting to make random posts with names that have nothing
to do with the bars, lol it was ok, you could use some work though,
but its not terrible.
Lol I give it a ten for originality man
Mary:"That is most good Simon, most good..."
Simon: "Ugghhhh... she is just terrible, can we have like, a
topless scene or something?"
Director:"Uhh yeah!"
Simon:"Really? Great! Well, we have a movie!"
"About as gangsta as harry potters shoes..." Ahaha! That shit was
priceless.
This is amazing, but I think you should switch the name to Empty.
It seems your souls were empty inside as you spit this, theres a
lot of pain in Toni verse and a little pain and confusion in bunny
verse, I think Empty would nood name for this because Tonijo said
she knocked it back and bunny said you wanted another serving. I am
just suggesting, just trying help. Another nice collab though.
Tonijo, we might do another soon too. And bunny if you want to me
and you could make one too.
This shit was nice. Plain and simple. I like the line about the one
apple eve wasnt able to pick, that was original. I think you should
start naming your 16s and not just put 2nd 16. But your learning,
and thats good that your coming hard with your first few posts.
Keep it up, I may have a spot for you in my crew, only if you spit
real though. From what I see there is nothing outrageous for me to
warrant it as a lie. So you have my attention, make sure you keep
it.
Hey man I see you arent in a crew. Would you want to join mine? Its
called REAL. Raw Entertainers And Lyricists. Let me know if you
down.
ensayne
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.26.09
But yeah just take what I said to mind, we will battle later and if
its good then you may get in. No beef, just testing.
ensayne
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.26.09
why did he post on this it was directed towards me lol
ensayne
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.26.09
Oh I was about to say! Lol well if you can do good enough against
me in a battle then I will consider it, battling commences 6 hours
from now, I have some things to take care of and when I get back we
will battle and if I deem you worthy you are in. I dont like to act
all high and mighty, but I am pretty nice if I say so myself and
everybody knows me here, so yeah, being part of my crew is a pretty
big deal. You feel me?
I like the flow excpet I dont know if you actually make more than
me or anybody in a week compared to my salary, I only want to hear
REAL talk from anybody in my group you feel me?
ensayne
7.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.26.09
Its ok except, I mean I dont hate on homosexuality, but, I mean you
know dont be braggin about it man lol
all crews
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.26.09
Just like everybody else I want to see an amazing post about how
you deserve to be in the crew, I havent added anybody to my crew
yet because I havent found anybody that is good enough unless they
were already in another crew.
all crews
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.26.09
If you nice, and I mean reall, really nice. Then I would probably
let you in mine. Post somethin new and ill judge if you good
enough.
Hey man its cool I dont mind if you get better lol Im proud of you
man. Its all good dog.
As Ensayne leaves the room fallen knight falls asleep, suicide
general hears his voice as he awakens, then Joka awakens in a
sweaty panic, knowing not where he is, and the screen goes black.
The next day on the news it was discovered that the man known as
Ensayne was the abductor of the three victims...
Ahaha I just had to put myself in this somehow it was nice as hell!
Lol
Ahaha I liked it man it was nice, you should have made it 15 bars
to make that finish you in 15 line click... lol.. but yeah man good
shit, check out my post called A Mothers Love. Its not just another
post, its a story about events in my life.
Haha my first post was wack as hell.... lol
Hey man this is about what happened between me and my mom man,
please dont call my mom a bitch.
Needed a rating lol
Gahh! Change that five to a TEN!!!
Yeah man you can. This is just the sign up. Thanks for signing up
lol
Ahaha your getting better, man. That was ok, just dont use so many
lines, put them together. I think you did much better battling me
then battling other people because you dont want to impress them,
but I think you want to impress me. Well good job. But you didnt
beat me, but you are gettting better, oh and read my post called A
Mothers Love, its about what just happened tonight, the reason why
I was in tears, real shit man.
READ
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.25.09
How you gon swaggerjack... a swaggerjacker?! SJ squared! lololol
Wayne equals bitch... he is the biggest swaggerjacker in
history....
It started off good and stayed ok until the third verse, where it
went downhill, picked up a little in the end but not as amazing as
I was hoping, it did not hurt my feelings lol but it was still
pretty good.
Fuck you that was such a rhyme! Lol its all good, I aint mad.
If you leave a comment, make sure its a decent rating as well and
not just a 5...
A few good ones but I think you could do better, give ms a minute
lol im walking home and typing on my phone, watch out for my round
two!
Lol G til da end you gotta change the 5 if you liked it Haha
Ahaha Profound you gettin on my Camp Torture collab? And Cobra
check the bars my diss is up lol
I ..... LIKE..... CEREAL!!!! Haha yeah man I will go first. Lol
Profound on my type swag random ass shit lol
Alright we might start working on it tonight or by tomorrow
definitely.
Yeah man we have never battled before. How about it?
The lines beginning with Deadly Assassin and Shadow tactics were
some of the best shit I have ever read lol, props
This is deep, we may collab sometime.
creeping
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.25.09
That was smurfing good!
Lol its like the new thing in rap man, and look forward to the
part two! Coming soon to a website near you! My16bars!
Alright man, I can do it tonight when get off work, and you know I
always spit REAL lol
Yeah man I can be in yours, I can probably get my verse done
tonight when I get off work.
Matter of fact read my Camp Torture Collab Signup. Maybe you could
hop on, it is my Criminal Minds sequel. Its all about freeing your
mind by torturing innocent victims, its really fun, lol check it
out.
Yeah man, this is the realest shit I ever wrote. Thats why I called
it Real Talk.
Ahaha nice, never seen you up here before but thats probably
because I joined like 2 months ago, lol but yeah man hit me up we
might collab sometime. Ask about me.
Where is it? Did you send it to my email or something?
2everyone
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.24.09
When do you want it by? I can probably do it tomorrow morning.
2everyone
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.24.09
Do you want me to make an appearance on your collab?
We have to think of a really tight name for the next one, I want it
to be just pure torture, we all have the same victim, and we will
all contribute to his demise, and it should be the devil. Ooh I am
starting to think of things lol
Its nice man, at first I was bout to snap because you used the same
title as me, but I cant hate on something good, it was nice lol.
Check out my shit called Real Talk (64 Bars).
Yo I dont wanna just come at you saying that you biting off my
lyrics, But, I did use pretty much that EXACT same line about the
HIPHOPpottamus.... It was in one of my disses man... I mean I
liked it a lot except for the line you used that I said lol and Im
not accusing you but it is a little fishy man, that isnt a very
widely used line..
Well I dont know wh the fuck yall fighting... Because....
I.........LIKE..........CEREAL!!!
This was really nice, Tonijo, we will definitely be collaborating
again sometime.
You know what, we just might, or a remix with other people too lol
Cant stand it that white boy rappin" WAS THAT DIRECTED AT ME? LOL
Not bad guest...
Its amazing Toni, Im feelin it, really deep and heartfelt.
Masterpiece...
I will check now
Haha its pretty good, I never understood why people only do three
lines that rhyme sometimes, it just boggles my mind.
Lol this is true, but I get so much positive reinforcement when I
talk about myself, people just love it lol so I am a crowd pleaser
Yeah man will do
Hey man did you get time to finish your verse for the collab?
ITS TYLER! LOL
Why did you reply to my post then delete it? Are you scared to
battle me or something? lol
Lol man we were battling earlier I posted against you I guess you
didn see it
Sound like some eminem type shit lol not bad
I only put the nine to get your attention, i will change it after,
Check your email leedaone@yahoo.com or whatever lol and find the
Criminal Minds Message i sent you and read it and post your
storyline and bars then send it back to me
I got it man. Just waiting on the other two from Profound and
Stillmatik.
jubilee
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.22.09
Hey can you go and edit your comment and change your rating to a
ten please? lol
Then change it to a ten!!!! Lol
Haha i know you can do better, but watch out for my verse two
because like Joka said, I make fire like the original cavemen.
Ahaha its up man, check it out.
Hey man I just sent the storyline and verse to your email, check it
out.
Hey man check your PM
Check out what i have so far, our storyline is connected, and its
an escape plan, we can all work on a verse of how we all escape and
go on a killingrampage individually, basically after we all escape
we go on our own murderous killing spree, I am going for the slow
torture aspect.
Shit was nice man, Im going to start working on my storyline now
and my verse tonight probably. I may ask you to make a different
verse to follow the storyline though. Just keep a heads up man.
Perfect.
"You a boombox with no chord or batteries no power in flows and no
voltage to challenge me
Only thing Fresh wrecked is his chance to earn Beast status and
beat Matik but lost tragically" That shit was Criminal. I want you
on my Criminal Minds Collab, I think you would be a good person to
put on it, like we were talking about collborating before. Just
check my last post and read it all and the comments and that will
explain everything.
"im rippin these bars like hulk hogan if he caught a charge" Haha
nice, check out my last post called Criminal Minds Collab, read it
and tell me if you want in on it. I think you would be a good
person to do this collab with.
Sounds Good Man.
Ahahahah he put gold teeth on him!! lol
I want the verse by Friday October 23rd, and you can send it to my
email: Ensayne@rock.com
E man, Dash Manny right? Let me see your verse first and if I like
it enough I will include it. Nothing personal you just dont have
any bars on your page for me to judge your skill.
This is just the proposal, I havent started any actually work on it
yet, I will be commencing work on this very soon, I think there
will be no hook, more of a badass storyline. Busting out of an
Insane Asylum late at night. Roaming the streets looking for
someone to torture type shit.
Joka, your in.
Onlookers: "Ooh ooh Ensayne can I jump on it?"
Lol
I know ben rinehart aint on this site.....lol
If you ain take this shit from somebody else than that shit was
fire my dude lol
I see some potential in you. I want to see more from you, nobody
usually piques my interest, so consider this unusual. Keep in
touch, I want to see what you can do when you write.
Thanks guys, I was watching The Boondocks one night, and this is
basically an Indefinite Description of The Blind Swordsman, and
his actions taken on that specific episode, step by step, or, as
Huey qouted him, "The Blind Nigga Samurai".
Freestyle
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.19.09
Ha I like this shit, reminds me a little of my own flow. Join the
website, I don usually do this, but Ill give you a chance. Nice
for a new kid.
Its Halle Berry, and it was ok, Ive seen better.
Nigga infernal you lucky I dont chop ya ass. That shit was pure
fire, no kerosene, what the fuck are you talkin about? Props my
dude profound for this nice shit. And fuck that infernal nigga. And
yo check out my shit called The Blind Swordsman, I think you will
like it.
I love this, but quixotic is pronounced key ho tick. So it is kind
of off, but it works. I was watching the Boondocks last night and I
was inspired by the blind man that beat up grandpa, not the ugly
blind guy, but the one in Huey dream, the blind nigga samurai.
Therefore I created a new form of flow called Indefinite
Description. Watching the movement of the blind nigga samurai I put
it all into words as best I could remember. The Blind Swordsman was
my outcome, check it out, tell me what you think, and maybe can
collab sometime soon.
A new era has arisen, the art of Infinite Description.
Im committing ti to a lyrical psyche ward, because those last four
lines were ENSAYNE!!! Haha
Nice, but you need a lot more to make it into somethin better.
Disperse raps like gumball machines, ha I liked that, and why you
say shiz? lol
Yeah I feel you man, I will check it out sometime.
WTF
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.17.09
Nevermind I got it
dis
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.15.09
This is definitely not a six! Dude is crazy, lol nice shit man
I LIKE CEREAL!!!
Ahaha man you be coming with the funniest shit! Check out My last
military diss called Dishonorable Discharge. And you trying to
collab with me and Still?
Not gonna deny something that was nice, even if it was a diss to
me, but check this out right. You have officially been
DISShonorably DISScharged.
Check that shit.
Ha it was pretty good, gimme a minute
That was one ghastly flow my dude. Solid.
2EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.13.09
Depends on how much spanish you use and if its basic lol I took two
years of spanish but that was two years ago lol
Did you go under guest and post then rate your own shit? Mr.
Formula, who I have never heard of.
I didnt really like it, its ok but its also a little gay... Just
the lines you used, even if he said them lol
Thanks man, all I really wanted was the respect.
Haha I been waiting for this since I heard you say it in the chat,
nice man, you gotta put me in one lol, oh and I was gonna ask you
if you wanted to collab with me.
"Home run straight shots, head shot with led pops leaving dead
cops "
TALK ABOUT A TONGUE TWISTER! Nobody could bite off of that because
"you cant remember that shit! Haha nice man
Blow ya mind through the realms of time, call this a lesson in
waves" Matik earned some respect from those four that contained
that Haha, I would qoute more nice I write all this from my phone,
Haha nice shit guys. I need to collabs with somebody sometime
I like the concept man, maybe you can throw in something about
welfare, I forgot it was called fuck the government so I cant help
much on this lol
Haha thanks yall, but watch this dude hate and come and fuck up my
rating with a 0 or some shit lol
Gotta say, that shit was nice. Respect. Check my Dash Manny diss
Called Dash Manny Demolished.
Haha thanks man
"My symptoms leave me terminal, hes neglected of the sickness" That
shit was hot. Haha how old is matik anyways?
Nigga you the one scared wont fuckin sign in and take your beating
like a man, fuckin get off this website and grow some balls pussy
ass bitch, in mini chat all talkin bout Ensayne is a lil bitch
nigga fuck you and ya guest shit, and fuck this argument im goin to
bed! Pussy ass nigga
Im not gonna battle you unless you sign in
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.11.09
dude must be talking about me
Sign in, how umma diss a guest? Thats just rude. Lol
Lol why are you guys teasing this dude?
desanto..
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.10.09
Lmao Desanto
The only thing you MURKIN is your flow, cuz that shit is dirty and
just terrible, and I dissed you lol
Ha nah man the shit is done I posted that shit on your post before
I read the other one, all is it peace now man, I was just pissed
because you called me a fourth grader lol but we good now
I guess I can leave you alone, all this shit probably humbled you
anyways.
Battle back, or delete your page...
Well dont mess with me, I dont play well with other children.
Ahaha, this diss fool! Battle back or delete your page! Thats the
rule!
You right FK, this dude is pussy, hes a thin mint. Ahaha.
Nigga WTF are you talking about? Are too pussy to battle me? I just
dissed you twice and I see nothing back from you. Bitch.
You know something, I actually just read this for the first time...
ABOUT FUCKING SUCKED!! JUL YOURSELF! this really deserves a zero
for a rating, if you read my shit it is at Desanto an 8 if not a
solid 10 like everybody else thinks, so go kill yourself bitch
Who the fuck is this nigga afrocain? Next!
........bitch
Faggot ass nigga probably masturbating, cum chest ass nigga.
Just to lower your rating
Still hatin
WTF this nigga is so wack! You rating yourself talkin like your mom
nigga go drink some cyanide! Fucking moron! And stop hating on my
shit, nigga I will fucking chop yo ass, new pussy, you dont run
shit except when you trying to get away from your gay thought!
Fucking faggot ass nigga. Couldnt get pussy if they sold it,
matter of fact they do, and even rotten diseased hookers wont let
you fuck for a buck. Fuckin stupid ass nigga.
Sure man, go first, two rounds.
Haha tell me why I can only put this in Em and Dre voice, lol
reminds me of that song, shit was nice man.
Oh and can you check the shit I did against Desanto.
We can both put it up for a vote.
LMFAO!! Dude! this shit is hilarious! Strive wonder touched my face
and read an essay. Haha that shit was weak as fuck!
How the fuck is this standard? I saw your diss against me, you
truly fucking suck, dont quit your day job.
Haha thanks for the rating Desanto, I know this was before we
resolved shit so its whatever lol
For anybody that doesnt understand the first line, Texas
Instruments is the leading calculator brand, and texas holdem is a
card game, hence the reason he is folding. Put it together and you
will understand.
Dude stole my swagg, Haha shit was nice, look forward to reply
soon.
Haha thanks for the ratings and comments.
Im charging you with first degree. Haha, yo check my shit called
Desanto Autopsy.
You murdered that shit what the fuck is maniacal talkin about?
Not my best just some quick shit lol
Can hold his own like masturbating amputees, ha nice shit.
Haha that shit was nice Im feolin the multis
Ha dude at first I thought you were ok but really your not, I have
no respect for you, and the only scripts you flip is when you
rehearse ya shit.
Dude quoted my bars in every single one of his verses.... and said
I had fillers? This doesnt deserve a response.
Its alright but you gotta learn a better rhyme scheme Homie, I know
you can do better.
Fuckin jock! Ill rip you later...
Iight man, f you need me just call 1 800 BUTCHER
Haha Im in that process right now.
Are you juggalo?
Chill out comin at FK like that. You dont want me to destroy your
cerebral.
Ha dude what did that down down forwards b mean? You playing
gamecube or somethin? lol
You look like this dude named brandon I used to beat up in middle
school
That shit was amazing, Profounds name fits him well.
Thanks man, I always like a good battle.
"Get ya shit hand tossed like pizza in italy" That shit man, Haha
and "Bruise ribs and collapse lungs like body shots" sickest line I
read lol. Check out my shit called Solo Soulja Shutdown. It was my
best diss so far lol
Ha I like that Hahaha and blah blah blah shit lol, yo can you
delete your last comment on my post and re rate my shit COCAINE, I
don want just a five on it because you didn get to read it
because I was editing it.
Shits nice man,and I left the crew because Im starting my own, I
got my two dudes to join so Im starting one called REAL and keeping
all our shit copywritten and under my label. And REAL stands for
Raw Entertainers And Lyricists.
This is monkey piss...
Ha I like that part about siamese brothers, but I seen better from
you.
That shit was nice man. Check out my latest shit.
This shit is decent man, I can relate to that years worth of work
crumpled up in old notebooks and shit Haha sometimes I just look
back on how wack I was lol
aint diss
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.06.09
Lmao he said you couldn give the new guy a break, good thing he
didn battle me lol
What the hell is a gen uis? If you meant genius then that is pretty
ironic, Haha but no seriously you definitely are not the best
rapper on this website. And all those grammatical and spelling
errors will get you nowhere in life.
Thanks russ
This is really bad
True it is but I still murdered this dude.
I posted
Aha thanks.
I sent an email to the contact us link but never got one back, I
thought that was the way to sign up, how do you do it?
This is nice man, oh and actually you can go first. I got somethin
to do. I can be back pretty soon though.
Let a nigga hit it on the table like ping pong... haha nice and Im
feelin the hook man.
filled with comets, stars and sun/where punks get lashed &
stung/and cunts get bashed & burnt/dis another smash isht son/new
kid,new flows integrated with classic stunts
ha i like that shit man
Aha thanks for the ratings yall.
Shit is nice man, stay bobbin my head lol check out my latest bars
and if you want to check out my audio.
"I steer with my dick".. haha Im feeelin this shit man, bobbin my
head. It skipped a little at 2:07 and 3:00 but it was still a solid
flow regardless.
Yo can you rate my Solo Soulja VS Ensayne
FUCK LOVE
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.05.09
I feel you on this man, I used to be like that, but in time youll
move on and learn to accept the things that you cannot change.
Theres an old saying by Reinhold Niebuhr: “Lord grant me the
serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to
change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.”
Live your life by that qoute, its the best thing you can do.
Burdened
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.05.09
Thanks still, first real shit Ive written in a while. And yeah I
will FK.
Thanks still, I love this one, read my Burdened shit, it kind of
ties in with this.
Haha this shit is sick, yo can you check my last two posts? Solo
Soulja Shutdown, that ones a diss, and Burdened, some shit about my
life.
Haha nice this shit go hard. Can you check my last two posts? Solo
Soulja Shutdown, and Burdened.
Real talk I can wait to heare this, it is very interesting, oh and
could you rate my last two posts?
Thanks man, that really means alot, its nice to have a little
encouragement other than everybody dissin me.
Epic...
FEED ME
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.05.09
The first line of your verse was from a lil wayne song but the rest
of it was pretty nice. You doin good.
Ha check my last one, its called Solo Soulja Shutdown
Haha you spelled ignoramous wrong but I like the do, it was a
little mediocre but your learning lol umma come back in second
Haha thanks man you part of what made me known on this site, lol
and all the other people that kept dissin me, but yeah man well put
and thanks for realizing, I think you have some potential, keep it
up.
People stay quoting me. Haha, your getting better, I liked that
line about public indecencies and prostitute tickets lol
GOD Y
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.04.09
I like how your expressing yourself, I can tell your goin through
some shit on some real I lost my best friend too, I loved her so
much and I was in love with her, and we were more than friends, so
I know how you feel man. I look forward to seeing the rest, and
just try to talk about your feelings and not what anybody thinks
about you. Its about how you feel, I write shit all the time and I
don give a fuck what anybody thinks because I know the shit is
nice,you just gotta be a little cocky but humble enough to accept
the things you can change. Real talk man.
Damn thats a shame I was just gettin to know your flow.
Haha thanks for rippin this dude, he been ridin my dick like a
bitch for a week after I battled him dude was suicida. But yeah
shit is nice, and thanks for quoting me.
FMR you gave an unfair rating, this shit is ok man, but I think you
can do better.
Homie I have never lost a battle, and this diss doesn even warrant
a return. I have to admit your getting a little better, but, you
still rhyme all your words with the same words, you still need to
have spelling and grammar lessons, and you still haven earned my
time, my respect, or my ranking, youll have to come harder than
this.
Haha and thanks Solo.
Nah I aint have time, I might check them out later, but I might
pull out of this crew because I aint have no back up from my own
people lol not that I needed it I think I handled myself nicely
considering, but I had some back up, my point is I rather be on my
own make my own moves and shit you feel me, and like if you read
some of my shit I guarantee you you gon be like yo how the fuck did
he come up with that line, sometimes I amaze myself, and I aint
sayin im the best either but I am pretty damn good for somebody who
doesnt even really battle, I do R&b lol
Iight I feel you, yo at least you at ain come back at me talkin
some shit like most dudes would have done. But I recognize your
flow Homie, do you recognize mine?
You quickly became noticed because you had beef with me Haha but on
some real shit, you held your ground against me and I haven found
anybody that could do that. So respect. Haha and the only reason I
had the site diss was for promotional reasons. More people reading
means more people coming to the site which means more bars you feel
me.
Lol I don NEED anybody help, I just though it would be fun, and It
would be good for the site because you don see somethin like that
often, it would bring in more users, and promote my16bars. I think
you read me wrong man.
Lol and this dude Feedmerappers isn even part of the crew, and
remember in my post when you said, ill murder your entire crew...
your pathetic, that was TLR lol
Why you dissin the people dissin TLR? You said you was down at
first. And you said you would help me lol I think you got confused
with somethin
FUCK TLR
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.03.09
Haha Im feelin this shit.
Haha I got you bro, just keep it up til tomorrow and when everybody
has they shit posted umma put it all together.
tlr diss
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.03.09
Damn Homie, Haha I agree with you, this shit is nice. I ain even
know about they other crew member lol
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
hourglass
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.03.09
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew
called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my
last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put
it in a post.
simp diss
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 10.03.09
Ay yo just post the TLR diss and imma grab it from your page and
make a post
Haha thanks arachnid
When I win just admit it lol
Its funny how you just join and think you da king, homie for real,
and Im not trying to be mean, I haven seen anything nice from you,
you don stand out in a crowd in any way. So you better go hard or
delete your page.
Doubt it, I mean you can try your hardest, but you will never beat
me.
Yeah he is pretty dumb, yall take shit so personal, its just rap
chill the fuck out lol
Thats because Im so raw man, I don follow the average rapper,
everything I say is a punchline, thats how I do. You just mad
because you new and gettin picked on. Haha
Some good lines, but nothin too nice, haha check my shit
Thanks man haha tell me why one dude was like, "Why everything you
say a punchline?" lmao
Ha thanks man you right, Im not in GMN Im in Underdogs Kaos but Im
cool wit mostly everybody lol
Yo can you check my TLR and FMR diss.
Oh and can you check my TLR and FMR diss too.
Im feelin this shit man, its like what i ne writin for real. Oh and
can you check my TLR and FMR diss.
Haha this shit is nice man, can you check my TLR and FMR diss.
Oh and can you check my last diss, TLR and FMR
Damn this shit is deep homie...
No, your really still wack homie, and your part of my next diss,
check the listings because its the third time you got ripped.
Check the listings!
Yall dudes suuuuucccckkkkk! Haha why did you even join this
website? Its for lyricists, not flowless bastards.
Somebody call the sanitation department, because we still got some
garbage left...
This is my16bars. Not my10 bars, learn somethin.
You just said you have a 2 inch dick with balls the size of
venus......
Thanks Dbox lol and yeah man I will
Aha shit was nice, I had a similar flow about taking a break at
work lol
Lunch time, crunch time, listen for the punchline, better pay
attention umma only say it one time, headed from the frontline for
my alotted run time, smile on my face shining brighter than some
sunshine.
I was hungry as a bitch... lol I like this shit man
Haha thanks I was weak dissin this dude and his crew
Well check the next one because I dissed you too.
If it wont nice then why you keep coming back to read it?
Because thats how fuckin RAW I am...
Tell me why he never came back lol
I only commented this to give myself a ten... Haha
And this dude wants a rematch?
Damn you stupid
Nigga done fucked up my ten... Im cuban you stupid fuck... Ill
handle this tomorrow.
Haha thanks I actually thought this my worst diss ever, I guess its
ok.
The only thing you could tear apart is your lyrics, because they
suck, I highly recommend you take my advice and stop rapping before
you develop a mental disorder. Coming at me is what drove you over
the edge. So just stop. Before you get hurt.
Calm down miss j I said I THOUGHT you were biting off my shit, one
of my collabs is called The Heist. Dont disrespect me again or your
shit will be ripped.
Ha For a minute I thought you was seriously biting off my shit
Well he came at me so I had to come back. Thats just how I work.
Haha thats that shit Homie
Battle me, post first.
Damn dude, you might want to see a therapist or something. Make me
feel bad I ripped you lol
This didn even deserve a repose but I was bored and tired as fuck
so fuck it man just go to sleep...
Garbage...
The last time you had a taste of blood was when your lips were
chapped.. That shit.. Haha nice, we gotta battle sometime.
Just to let you know there will be a full post about our battle,
and how you didn come back...
I guess you ain comin back...
so here I am wackin in the tub, missin that slit like damn what the
fuck... Lmao that was hilarious
Thanks man lol funny thing is Im actually an R&B Artist.
Haha thanks yo, it was just a thing me and my brother did. He did
poetry and this is my return lol
Well my point is, instead of trying to battle someone else you
should finish yours with me. I posted, its a two round thing.
I see you gave yourself a ten, how about I offset it with a zero?!
Haha no I wouldn do that... or would i... youll never know! well
you will when you look but who cares! GURD!
Like I said before... only you... How do I even come back from
this? lol
"You see theres death at the tip of this tongue, life at the breath
of this lung"i liked that part
You rhymed face with face...
Haha thanks doc
Your just mad cuz I was cocky lol
hmm
9.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.30.09
Haha only you would come with some shit like this lol
Im in
Stop hitting yourself
With all due respect read the description. What have you done? Do
you have two record labels? Have you had performances? When did I
hear you on the radio?
Do you really have a tech nine? I don believe so. Ahaha.
Check my shit, maybe we can collab.
Scary as a demons clit... Haha shit was funny. Check my VINCENT27
DISS.
FREESYLE
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.29.09
Heinz is ketchup man.....
gudsen17
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.29.09
Haha yeah I knew I heard this shit somewhere. But I did like that,
Im the man in the raincoat outside of your home, Im the man
threatening you over the phone.
no.... leave..
mc smurf
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.29.09
"my boredom compells me to murder this dude like the most gruesome
felony" Haha I liked that shit
That was absolutely horrible.
Thanks.
Haha thanks man, check the Come over shit, that got me some radio
play a while back.
Go to jamglue.com, sign up, search Ensayne, and I have this and
three other songs available for download.
Thanks man.
"Im out here in the wild like crocodile dundee" haha nice shit man,
check my last two posts.
Thanks man, it was like a hood anthem lol everybody had this shit
on they myspace and ringtone haha
Even it out...
Had to do it...
Had to do it...
Haha thanks for the support. Im about to upload a few more of my
best songs.
Yeah I feel you. Ok count me in.
Ha it was just some late night entertainment no homo. And are you
the leader or is it more of a team? Cuz I run my own shit you feel
me? I don have nobody tellin me what to do, but I could be a team
member if thats how it is.
Haha nice man, nothing personal on the diss, thanks for keepin me
entertained. But yeah dude "flawless" dissed you right after me
just repeatin my shit, maybe thats why he call himself flawless, he
using my shit! Lol, naw but for real, he bit off a little too much
of my lyrics then he can chew, so umma come at him tomorrow, talk
to you later Homie.
Man, you get no respect, you bitin off my lyrics, and you chewin on
my diss. Everything I said about Flipz you repeated.
You gotta put them all in one thing so I can rate them next to
eachother
Haha alright post your diss to me and well take it from there.
Relax. You starting to feel yourself a bit too much, and its
producing less than profitable lines. No disrespect, but I seen
better from you. And didn you use that lettuce is wilted in
another verse?
You in a crew?
I agree with bludie, it wa ok, you seemed too hyped up on your own
shit to really come up with something amazing.
Admin. Man, is this still going on? I see it hasn happened for a
month and some change lol
battle
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.28.09
How about you battle me? I guarantee a different outcome.
YOO tell me why I was thinking about using a ron jeremy comparison
earlier lol
But you stole shards when you said you shit on they plate and its
time to eat, I said that in a diss against somebody, eh maybe its
just a common line. fuck it you still get tens
ensayne
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.28.09
Haha I just seen this, Ill think about it yo, Well talk later
Yo I didn even get past the first two lines, it was just homo, you
get stuck then fuck him? Homie, no.
Ha sorry meant to make it a 10
Yo check me out at:
m y s p a c e . c o m / E n s a y n e m u s i c
Im actually an R&B artist.
Haha ok I gotta give it to you, you came hard. Check my recent shit
Homie you already lost, nobody even knew about your comeback.
LMAO!!
Haha nice, you put the restless to sleep, that was nice.
gutta
10.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.27.09
Haha yo im feelin this, you ended it nice.
Ahaha shit man! That was nice. 10s easy.
Haha yo this is nice, get at me if you feelin a collab
Haha thanks man, nothin personal, you pretty good.
Haha nice, yo check my slimy G diss and tell me what you think.
Homie, you had 0 punchlines.
How you say you gonna get noticed and buy 16 cars but then you come
right back and say your pockets swollen? Dont make no sense.
Post first
You need to learn how to spell homie
Are you serious? Well, back to the lab again.
Haha wow, why did you even waste your time dissin him? Nice
Very nice, very rare to see as well.
Fuk My Ex
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.27.09
Dude, don do this to yourself again..... you make yourself look
pathetic....
I think you should go and talk to ill wizzy... you somewhat on his
level.
Ahaha
Thanks for the lucky 7, it can always be perfect.
dis
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.27.09
I rate on overall quality, I liked a few parts so I gave it an 8,
nothing personal, I just call them how I see them. And you can
check my last diss I just posted.
dis
8.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.27.09
Aha I like lean like a hypotenuse and bruce banner manners lol shit
was Iight
BATTLE
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.26.09
Battle me
you dumb
I don understand your bars man!!!
Lmao
Battle me
YOUR WAAACK!!!!
How the fuck! is this number be one on the charts?!
Dopest
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.25.09
Are you retarded?
You need to turn this into a track, no fuckin joke Ill put this
shit under my label... Contact me
Ahaha! Ahh shit! Thats your lyrics homie! Down the drain!
Haha wow your just terrible. Look forward to a come back in 3 2 1
check the listings!
Freestyle
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.25.09
Lmao Ahaha wow so I stills just read your shit. YOU SUCK! KEEP
YOUR DAY JOB AND STOP RAPPING YOU NON FLOW HAVING LYRICLESS FUCK
and I just recently found out there was scoring! 0!!!! AHAHA
AHAHAAHAHAAHAHA!! ENSAYNE STRIKES AGAIN!
P.s.
I am high off my ass right now, but can still recognize the quality
in your lyrics, which none was detected, I seriously suggest you
find another hobby, maybe model air planes.
peace out homie and better luck next time!
Freestyle
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.25.09
Lmao Ahaha wow so I stills just read your shit. YOU SUCK! KEEP
YOUR DAY JOB AND STOP RAPPING YOU NON FLOW HAVING LYRICLESS FUCK
AHAHAAHAHAAHAHA!! ENSAYNE STRIKES AGAIN!
P.s.
I am high off my ass right now, but can still recognize the quality
in your lyrics, which none was detected, I seriously suggest you
find another hobby, maybe model air planes.
peace out homie and better luck next time!
Freestyle
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.25.09
Listen, I didn even take time to read your shit, but I can say one
thing, get off wayne dick, ill wizzy, lil wayne ripoff, you told on
your own crack house with a tip off, Haha, I don even know if
really happened, but I know one thing, you need to stop rappin,
clips for a audience, they never stop clappin, a snippet for a my
fans, they never stop snappin, shit happens, but your case is
closed, like an unsolved mystery, your history hoes
GOOD NIGHT WISCONSIN!
LOLOLOLOL
Im sorry, that was just TERRIBLE! His name is Keanu Reeves. So it
doesn rhyme with Rihanna. Please stop rapping.
The only hot part was sinister, come to your house to rape your
sister, then sit down with your family and eat dinner
lol that was funny
LMAO
Brun got this shit down pat
It was in new bars, it might be on my page, Im new to this lol its
called:
Comin at EVERYBODY!!!
it was posted last night
Battle me, respond to my last post.
AHAHA!! 10!!
but damn homie you dissed a child... LMAO
Oh but that kick in your door and snatch your eye lids shit was
crazy I give you a 10 on that and 8 on the designer named louie so
a nine overall on them two lol
Haha wow that dude mc the prodigy or whatever is terribly, but yeah
man good shit, some of the punch lines were on point like a number
two but some needed work, I give you a six overall.
Seems like a little was actually sited from pap but this is a
little different, kudos. But for the future, do somethin a little
different. Like somethin that hasn already been done. Overall I
give it an 8. Still good shit though.
Thugging
0.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.19.09
And you said I suck, bitch this the wackest shit I ever read in my
life!
I been thuggin all my life packin a six inch knife...
You sound like everybody else on this fuckin website!
You SUCK, on some real shit, you ain even worth my time, I was
gonna battle you but your not even worth my bars. You need some
serious work.
Too bad I can give you a negative zero. Haha
P.S.
Your bars are terrible
LOL
I dissed you, come back hard, its in*: Comin at everybody, thats my
last post.
Yo I dissed you too lol check my last post
I dissed you, come back hard no homo
anyone on
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.18.09
That dude stupid. Lmao battle me, respond to my last post: Comin at
everybody
I dissed you, come back hard.
Damn stil came hard on this, nice work. Good lyrics.
I dissed you, check it out and come back with somethin nice.
I like this shit, Dirty Harry came hard, nice name by the way, good
song by The Gorillaz.
Oh and check my last post, I dissed you. Come back with somethin
nice
Generic
I think you could do better.
Drink her period blood. Thats fuckin nasty
battle me
5.00/10
posted by ensayne on 09.12.09
Post a diss.
