It wasnt though. Seriously.

Yeah, your pretty much garbage, I was hoping my lame stupid diss would start something, but I see you nothing but an ignorant lame ass nigger.

Yeah I know man i just freestyled this shit not givin a fuck, kind of venting really, lol. fuck this kid though hes complete and utter garbage. like his diss lol

Well I read this and forgot to rate, lol of course. Indeed, it was dopeness. Lyrical qaulity was there, flow was present, this has the makings of a great song.

"call your conundrum a country cause your in a large panic state" That was my favorite line man lol . Dope shit. And that spalding line was good too lol

i knew this kid was garbage

No further words be said, battle me. Guarantee I will smash on you.

are you serious? for real dude, go jump in front of a train..

You spelled belligerent wrong. haha. Well, this was an ok diss, it wasnt too personal and I couldnt really find the punchlines, but the vocab was good. You just didnt know enough about him to get perswonal, but it was a pretty good diss all in all.

...fail

battle me nigga

This was not as good as people are making it out to be, but it was ok.

My rhmyes like limbo got women bending them knees low. " U thought that line just6 flowed good man lol nice fdrop

yeah man lmao you smashed him like a grape

Your mean for gettin on his girl.... lmao @ special head

Dopeness.

I was feeling the multies and the vocab is great as usual, I just didnt see many of your good punchlines in there that you usually have. I have seen a lot better from you, but this is still good no doubt man. Nice post.

Well I must say Fresh did have the best verse here. The last line was just ill as fuck. I liked Des and Phenoms too but Fresh verse was def. the best.

This is just insult to injury. You already murdered them all once, did you have to do it again?

It was kind of forced slightly from the length of the lines but still unadulterated murder lol

This is pretty good man, post more shit.

I was going to say you suck, well, you do suck. As this new guy. But as Chris Smithers your ok. lol

Ayy I found her on FB because you got her email as your email for my16 haha

Ray Im gonna be honest. Im gonna read this later, but you JUST posted this, and magick gave it a 10 already. I hereby label him as a dickriiiider. lol im out imma pep this later ghost

This was ok in the beginning, but it really fell off in the end like you just got lazy with it, and wtf is killacam talkin to himself for? ANYWAYS. Not bad man, when did you join GMN?

Well I dont know if this was a diss because you didnt do many personal lines or if its a collab about some shit, either way the punchlines were good.

You in the way for that one... lmao

Word? Ray got the crew goin huh? Well good luck!

So you pretty much killed it. "Deplete my opponets when I enter my sacred rhyme zone Im so ahead of you dudes like your behind my time zone Yall like the westcoast Im the east, three hours ahead of you In that time I could write 20 verses to the one verse you said youd do " And of course that caps line and dope fiend line were ill. Multi Massacre. Illicism. Verbatiously Voracious. Ill Legitimate. Purely Beast. 10 Stars. If you went to the general for auto insurance they would approve you before you stepped in the door, thats how ill this was. Did I mention it was good?

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What is your crew gonna be called man?

Well, as far as I can tell you are getting much better, I like this drop. I feel like Im really starting to slack, I really need to get back on my shit. Nice drop.

I see.. So you probably wouldnt be down for a horrorcore rap or a story tellin shit. How about a good old fashioned R&B song, called Relationships?

I think it will be something alot better when its finished.

Damn Bunnyz. Haha you went in on me didnt ya? I got you though..

Iight man, we good.

No you cant.

Not once did I see a punchline. Not once, did I see a metaphor. Not once, did I notice any actual wordplay. Nine times you said my name. Illville is not really where I reside, I guess you were too stupid to realize I was calling myself a good rapper.. Well, you had some ok flow, but I honestly rate this a five.

Haha I read this earlier but forgot to rate, you love them Dre beats dont ya? Pretty nice, I think you kind of went off subject though, but still good haha

HA! That shit was rather entertaining. And fuck a million. Kids waccckkkkkk!!!! 1 !! ! !! 11 !! ........!!! LMAO

Yeah man thats that emotion right there. Im feelin this.

The whole of verse one just hit home, kind of like my wolf in sheeps clothing how you ended it. "causing me to be a breed that deceives" good multi and nice wordplay. "n be able to love someone inferior when shes so much superior?" that just flowed perfectly, and the rhythm made it like, just ill. I like this man, sometimes I wish I could write deep like you do man. haha

...........fail

I like how you came on this, but it made the flow kind of choppy with all the commas, and the way you ended it didnt make sense, if you like them why dont you correspond with them? Ive seen better from you, but this is good.

At first I though this was Watch the city burn the one you did before, but its not, haha, but yeah this is good man, like always, well do one sometime, i just been working alot lately.

Not bad, I feel that KC recycled a few things, and the flow was off at the ed, but Saint had me weak for a minute, and KC was just pissed lol i liked it though, original and it reminds me of that movie beyonce was in lol

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Definitely a good introduction verse. I agree with most on how the flow is a little choppy, and your end rhymes were slanted, but its still good man, not bad.

"So if they see someone they love leave, everyone becomes impermanent." Thats so true and thats how people and children get abandonment issues. Yeah, this was some real poetry here, I like it.. I might do some, its been a minute since i got deep.

Well you had some hidden punches and some deeper meaning, like the depression of the 1920s. I liked this man, not as good as I thought it was going to be, but it was still good.

Nevermind about that collab..

I honestly rate this a five. We should collab, only because your name is rapper and thats epic.

Must say I was surprised, I wasnt expecting much, I see youve come a long way from what you use to write, this is good man. We may collab sometime.

Check it out its finished, its called Spring Cleaning.

Yeah this is some good stuff, I like the message. We gotta be careful nowadays, everybody does, they just should be, or you know what happens nine months later.

I think Ive seen alot better than this from you before, I didnt like it too much, some of it didnt make sense, and you didnt structure it right. Wasnt horrible though.

Not bad man, it seems kind of like an asian rapper though, like no disrespect to asians, but it seemed kind of like the grammar and structure of speech was thrown off to force the flow, there were some good punchlines, and it flowed well mostly.

Well isnt this just ill as fuck? lol good shit guys, I like the topic too, seems like somethng I should have got on....

We all have our opinions, mine is bunnyz took it. He came harder with more slightly personal lines and just didnt give a fuck. Flowman just didnt do it for me.

Nope. Apart from these other dudes, I actually tell the truth regardless of people I like, ask anybody. I honestly think bunnyz got you on that one.

The man below me is the definition of a dickrider. Just something you should know. But this isnt all that great, not terrible, but I have to give it to bunnyz. Honestly.

Another one of those posts that Im feelin man, you need to record.

Not bad man lol but i didnt really see many of your great punchlines in this one like i usually do.

Not bad, if its your first time trying to rap I think its pretty decent, try to tell a story with something, see how that works.

I just want you guys to know that you fail for allowing godz pimp in your crew. lol

Yeah this is definitely some deep shit, I bet a lot of people go through the same thing so a lot of people can relate to this. Its pretty damn good jess, keep it up.

Swear I read this last time you posted it, haha but yeah man this is pretty damn good.

I like the viewpoint behind this, and what motivated it, stick to being yourself, thats what your best at.

The rhyme scheme seems a bit of in some lines, and the flow as ok, but the overall rating is an 8, solely because I feel you should even out the rhymes and make it flow better, pay attention to the details of it and you can make it better.

Illicism. Again.

Not bad man, I say keep.

Well if thats the case, one is chill and pretty good, and the other one just kind of really sucks.

Well, random killer spree, turned out to be some killer shit.

Lol not bad, but not the best... I know you aint callin Virginia pussy though.

Sounds more like an audio, but not bad, its pretty good, did you record it?

Nice man, I was feelin the flow, crucification isnt a word, maybe you meant crucifixion, but apart from that this shit was good.

Somebody told me you were beast, I am highly disappointed with what I just read. I was lied to.

"My options vary from fags to bitches both breeds see my swaggs delicious " does that mean that you are a bisexual?

I think you should change your name to something cooler. Your content is good, but nobody pays attention to you solely due to the fact of your name, I like your shit, but nobody will read it if you have a name like that. Just speaking my opinion.

Wonderful. I loved that faceless wrist watch line, I will collab, just give me some time.

Well, I see being a lyricist isnt easy either.

That was ill. "You cant just have the blueprints to life, they have to choose you" "You despise me cuz I speak things into existence, my WORD brings LIFE" Those were some of the most in depth things I have read on this site in a long time. Kudos.

"the way I shred him like confetti, its just 2 explicit like a minority murdered hes just another statistic " lmao nice shit. Well damn you just kind of killed anybody who wasnt in GMN. Good shit man, I might just go off and dis everybody too lol

WEAK AS FUCK! YOU GUYS SUCK BALLS! LOL nah just playin, This shit was ill, and i laughed my ever loving ass off when KC talked about pros infected toe, and shit was ill with photon blades hype, and thanks for the shout out in epicgees diss kc lol yall murked.

Decent audio. The flow is a little off, but I hear the passion. Pretty nice.

We will record to this.

Well a host of the show runs the show... so that didnt really make sense..... But not bad.

Not bad man, I like the Folgers line best, and how you played with the Maxwell coffee, if you would have thrown something in there about Pretty Wings for Maxwell the artist it would have been a double punch, but it was still good no doubt.

One of your lesser verses in my opinion, you offset the tone for the flow with a 10 6 parameter. If you would have done 8 8 it would have flowed better, in my opinion. But yeah, and Zay verse was ok but I agree with Chris here, it did kind of ruin it but it threw a different perspective on it too.

Worthy of my approval. Haha, this was good man, keep it up.

he does look like he is one of those guys who thinks their the shit but really arent lol a.k.a A Douche lol

you make him sound like a rare species of pokemon... I choose you.... EPICGEE!!

more like......... LYYYIINNNN!!!!!

What the devil? You didnt kill nobody! lmao

WHAT THE FUCK MAN?! If your gonna diss me do it in bars, not my post. What an eye sore. lol

I wonder who ghost rated my shit like a bitch... lol epicgee posted a comment with a link in it, and it wont show, he gave me a 0 though lol what a hater haha

Profound, Nelson is from The Simpsons.

There is room for improvement, but like I said, nobody can teach you what you need to know, what you need to know you need to teach yourself. You will understand one day if you stay active in music.

I didnt sign up for this contest.....

This was pretty good, I like the message your delaying, it is inspiring. Seems like something pretty good, I think KC could have done much better though. Overall its still great though.

Garbage, leave biter.

Your a biter, heres the proof. allthelyrics.com/forum/lyrics review/70039 rap about a girl that is driving me crazy my first rap.html You are complete and utter garbage.

The title of this specifically piqued my interest immediately. I knew right off the bat that this was going to be something great when I started the first verse and started flowing with it. This is probably the best and realest thing you have ever written besides that one about your angel and how your girl aborted your baby. You definitely need to record this one, and make it a good effort. I think this is amazing man, it describes the life of the common man compared to the rich and famous, Im definitely feeling this, and if you recorded it and it was good quality I would bump this shit in my 87 Caravelle.

well enriched i couldnt really follow your flow, and smokes, you got a lot of the same sounding words, but as far as hard hits go, and punches, and comedy, i think smokes got this one

Doesnt seem right, but fuck it, its whatever bro, Im not mad, just venting.

If you re make this and make the audio sound a little less scratchy and spit it with a little more emotion like your other shit I will be thoroughly impressed. Its still good, but it could be better.

I see you give yourself a 10 each time.... Well Im not really gonna diss back, I could shit a better rhyme than this in my sleep, and I got other shit to do so argue amongst yourself lol

Well here I see no punchlines, no metaphors, no vocabulary, hardly any flow, and zero nameplay. I call this an epic fail. And actually I can assure you my flow is on point, and just all around better than what you call rap, so... "BITCH, GET OFF MY DICK!! GET OFF MY DICK!!"

Not bad, the flow was a little off midway to ending, and I think the rhymes could have been better, Im assuming this was a freestyle though so overall pretty good.

"Now recently u asked me if a dude was tryin to make a move, cuz u didnt know if it was true n u said u would refuse"

Of course this was ill, look who all was on it lol

why would you post an old diss to somebody who already changed their name?

No doubt it was Ill, and a lot of funny lines, but there is a little disappointment resonating inside me, like, the three of you are amazing alone, or on other peoples collabs and normally outshine everybody else, but on this one, nobody had the best verse, and nothing really stood out that much to me. I halfway expected everybody to come harder than they did up here, because you three put together would be more like a dream colla, but this one didnt meet standards. It was good, but I think you guys should do another one all together to outdo this one. Overall it was awesome though, and those lines about the wookies had me laughing lol

"like a vicious diabolical chronicle I smash thru any obstacle " ha i liked that line man flowed great and that sceintists scratching their heads was just funny lol

Well I can see why KB was all over your dick, damn good shit man. If you tryin to collab hit me up.

This was pretty good grime, I think you shouldnt have doubled up your verses because it made it sound a little forced and choppy, and a little off beat, and the bars were too long in some parts making you out of breath and messing up the flow, but the lyrics and flow in the beginning were good.

Too mainstream, I hated it. Lol nah man good job, I do actually like this beat, so I will make an exception, lol. And you guys went in on it, somewhat, seemed a little too mellow and chill, but thats better than screaming, whats good with C Star though. Is he trying to get down?

I fuck with this beat, and you rocked it pretty nice, you got a different style, somethin like mine, something different. Good shit man.

"cut off all your fingers,are love will be on jerry springer, the smell of dead bodys linger,they call me the thinker, the pyscotic brinker,either way i have many names, methods are the same,only the victums have changed," I think this had the best flow to it overall, I also think you will do better without trying to force flow the ending words of the post, just let the flow come naturally instead of trying too hard, and dont rely on that listing shit too much, it kind of makes the flow choppy, its like gloppy grits, but you want smooth and steady.

I believe it. LMAO

alll yalll niggass dumb!!

This is the best thing you have ever written on this site.

damn, i think this is the best diss fk ever did lol yeah hes got my vote for punchlines and sick shit, you just didnt bring it that hard springer

Yeah your pretty much garbage kid. You had NO punchlines, nothing personal about me, and no metaphors or wordplay, you suck man. And your little boyfriend too, Yall just hatin lol Im done with ya, I already won, and thats a fact.

If REAL recognize REAL, how come me, and nobody in my crew see you?

Are you serious kid? Like, the rabbit will actually murk you, lol. Im pretty sure you and your friends are all the same person lol

NOTHING HAS EVER COME OF THIS! ADMIN! YOUR FALLING DOWN ON THE JOB! MAKE THIS SITE WHAT ITS SUPPOSED TO BE!!!!

Feed me rappers just got eaten. lol

I have to say Smoke this was pretty damn nice, not usually your style, I see cali and them females changing up your style a little bit, but its for a good cause.

People started a war so you know we had to finish it, we so special with the sickness you can call us Ill Legitimate...

We can audio collab this shit right here, I can write a verse and get the beat and everything, let me know whats up. We can call it "The Ventriloquist".

That was good bro. Shit was pretty damn nice, the beat was fucking sick, and you flowed well on it too.

"better lock the chastity or ill fuck your girl again, bring so much heat when I write I curl the pen" sceintific on em.... "beyond legendary, I make the night black as sackcloth then spit light on a cloud with heaven as the backdrop" that was just awesome imagery... "you dudes is noiseless, like a mime tryin to be a singer so battlin me is pointless, like a man with no fingers" I cant even begin to describe how ill that line was... Great shit Pro, you havent posted in a while but came back hard like Ron Jeremy on a bitches spine.

Hey man, are we still doing that Picture Perfect Collaboration or not? You kind of blew me off to go and work with Grime.

Nice way to make an entrance into the world of horrorcore. Dope lyrics and pretty nice flow. But if your going to come at me in every song, or my crew, expect a diss, if your serious you can get it.. again. If not, let me know you were playing. It seems like on every thing you do, you wanna come at me, then in the chat you say were cool, thats why I dont fuck with you that hard. But if you playing its whatever. Just to let you know I take this rap shit seriously.

"from the depths of a bodybag my reflection screams, try to redeem my conscience but it was only a dream," and the way you finished it was good too. nice shit bro. you need to record things like this. This might be your best one in a long time

Another one from Evann. Good shit man, I fuck with verses 1 and 2 the hardest though, my best friends name is Stephen too, and me him and all friends been through the shit too. Im really feelin this, make it into a song. Audio this shit. Then inform me.

Yeah man the message is there, and I bet this line is true as fuck "at the MTV awards bitches be giving fake hugs with no love" the never do look like they mean it, and the whole thing was just deeper in thought than most shit. Good shit man.

Not bad, but not your best, it was ok, but I couldnt really get into it for some reason.

Well, that was rather beastly.

Ha not bad man, I didnt really follow the story but yeah the lines were nice and the flow was there too so good job bro.

Nice shit man, I like the message you guys relayed here, it aint all that gangster shit lol but yeah FK you always were the one to rap about politics and government.

Not bad, to me it seemsa little too commercial but thats how some things are sometimes, delve into the lyrical side. Then you will impress me.

Not bad man, its from the heart, but you should put it in bar form you know. And I dont know if shes your internet girlfriend or what, but I wont judge. Its not bad, just put more feeling and passion into it, like if you actually do be kissing on her and shit then put like how you feel and the emotions that run through your mind.

Not bad man, you need to put one more bar at the end because theres only seven there and the flow is off, if you came up with some punchlines and metaphors instead of just stating it like "heres what happened" and told more of an in depth story, like how she felt, and how he felt doing those things, the emotion going through there bodies and the thoughts running through their minds then it would be better. Just basically put more detail into it.

"you couldnt slaughter me if i stood there and gave you the knife" thats just funny lol and that golden shower line lol and the element line was nice. Damn good overall, he will have to come back with 51 bars to beat this, and he will probably call it Area 51 and make it 51 bars since yours was fifty and outshine you, then you outshine him, and we just got some bright ass motherfuckers gleaming like the sun, until i put on my hater shades and walk away from you bitchies...

It was nice, but the last line was a complete lie, if you gonna come at me dont be subliminal and say respect to me at the end when you talk about me in a song, because we both know Ill smash you and the crew. But yeah man good stuff.

Yeah man this is some deep heart felt shit like your type style man, good to see your coming back with it and not those silly posts you were talkin about. I like it, from the heart, some REAL shit. We both got that female history, we talked about it, Im feelin this.

Well, this was really deep, and I can see how it was inspired those are two great songs. I think if you have time you should record this on a long beat, and just loop the hook. Amazing story here, I think you should have added a little more about Ricky though. But overall amazing.

"we was chewing while your ass was suckin on your chico stick " you just openly announed your gay man. lol and how you gonna act all hard but in the mini chat you gonna ask me if its REAL beef, and I got at YOU. But you brought it to crew, so crew can merk ya too. I really dont like you at all honestly. Get off my dick, for REAL. But yeah, call it what you want, its beef. And I murked ya ass. Not to mention you jacked Nas, and a line from a mixtape that Big L did back in the day.

Damn nice bro, the audio only comes out in the left speaker, must be the coding, other than that this shit was amazing man. We will do some audio collabs soon bro.

The lyrics that she claims to be her own are by Hillside Hoods City Of Lights. I know not whether it is the truth, I dont care. I just wanted everyone to know what happened.

Well I emailed you so speak your peace.

"From family tree to just another leaf in the park// Hope these bright ideas help you see in the dark" Damn that was deep, I liked this, keep it up guys.

are you guys fucking serious? lol everybody on this site would murk you. i bet your somebody here, probably enriched, acting like somebody else. yeah, your both enriched.

Yeah man your verse was pretty good but Flicker kind of disappointed me here. It was too simple. Not her best shit, shes done better. BUT, I have seen worse, so not bad, good job.

The Rock and Stone Cold Steve Austin are the most used in here, but you missed the sock and mankind lol but damn this shit was beast and funny... my favorite part is this. "excuse me who are you again? IT DOESNT MATTER WHAT YOUR NAME IS!" LOL A CLASSIC. you missed the pancake line, lol but still awesome shit man

Nice shit you venomous racist bastard. lol

Who the fuck is ekam? An "unliterate" ass person lmao

Well damn the structure was off like a bitch but the wordplay and flow throughout the whole was...well, it was exclusive. Nice shit man.

Murked.

Yeah. This was a good diss. But you spelling anf flow was off through the whole thing, and the shit your saying "promised fame and fortune" I never promised fame nor fortune to anyone on this website so half your diss has holes in it. But, I will respond.

Dam you for this being so original. I loved it, and I dont see how it could be offensive. It was simply an amazing, realistic story. If I would have stuck to the rating that I was given, MA, this would almost be my story. But I changed it up so I can have a better life and more career opportunities.

Nice stuff man, little basic but it was just speaking REAL really. If you trying to record hit me up, we can collab on some shit.

Lets just lower that rating there... ahh.. thats better.

you really suck man, learn to rap first, then learn to format it right.

lol that hype verse was just funny as hell haha yeah fresh was right about the bludie verse lol you got on hype the hardest though lol good job man

Lol I didnt even know Joka posted this until now, and fuck g til the end. Period. But yeah thanks all who read and rated.

Yeah man you shit all over my version to this beat, I called it Grind Time, and I did it back in 7, I didnt have any punchlines, hardly very many metaphors, but my flow was perfect. But yeah man great audio. We will collab sometime. Might even just use my old verse to this lmao

all u wack Mcs for christman ima send all u smart pens" That was my favorite line lol good flow man and nice vocab. Thanks for the shout out too

Quality shit, as is late as fuck, but still good. Funny lines. And my name is prophecized, so no complaints here.

Yeah Im on and might be for a little while. And ok man its cool, we can release it in 2010. First 2010 collab gonna be a smash, and iight KC.

Yeah like cKrisis said, you should invest in a new mic. I like the lyrics their great, and the beat is epic, but your flow was a little off, and the quality isnt too great. But if you had an actual studio to work in for a while you could do great. By the way did you finish that verse for Picture Perfect?

"far from a phoney,unlike our mod," aint it the truth.

Im looked at as an accident, a hit it and run. Damn, thats some shit. And yeah friends with benefits never work. Somebody always ends up catching feelings, and its not really a benefit in the end. Keep your head held high Jesse, your a beautiful woman who deserves a good man.

lol not bad man, the kfc bucket had me laughing inside my head lol and yeah the flow was on point man, some filler, minimal, but really good stuff man

lol @ the simpson line, i think you could have come up with a better way to do the graph line but its still good haha and the end YOU GAY BITCH !!! I thought was funny as hell because it made it seem like you screamed it lol nice

The end all will soon come into effect...

Its not bad but it has nothing to do with R.E.A.L talk. Its just lines thrown together that sounds mainstream, a few mediocre punchlines, pretty easy to follow flow, but not much substance throughout, Ive seen worse.

lol @ this

then i will blow you cyotes up like a road runner cartoon ... haha nice... i love that show lol.... i will rip one of your legs off and break ya jaw with your heel bone ... just ill.... i will reach my hand down ya throat and rip out ya spine cut ya brain in half then smash em, call it a meetin of the mind mace your face with razor blades lace with cancer and aids infect ur body with bubonic plauge and make you swallow grenades ........ and just the way you finished each verse was epic. Illicism.

Not bad man, a little complex but simple at the same time, nice flow, make it longer and you got a great post.

Whats this? Do I have new dick riders? LMAO! No da ak 47 or whatever he wrote this shit hes right 90% of it is a flip lol

Battle me.

I just want you guys to know I hate you all equally for ruining my epic moment.

LOL @ CURTAIN CALL BITCHING AND LMAO AT FISH HOOKS IN YOUR BUTT CHEEKS HAHAAHH

Well. Guess who cant wait for part two from KC pro and Ensayne? THIS GUY! I want to do another one called The Aftermath, where we do our stories more in depth and finish them off, and if you wouldnt mind could I host the collab as well? And I didnt really like Kid Exs verse that much but it was good enough and KC did great and Pro lol that crazy motherfucker.

Sounds like mainstream. But thats what Hip Hop is, no disrespect. Its good. You just wont see me on it. Sorry to bring you down lol I liked it though

Thanks Profound, your a wise dude, and yeah KC I know man, fuck all that stupid shit. I need to just fucking make it then get on my R.E.A.L game.

Nice guys, KC why do you sound so pissed off at somebody here? And Pro I like this "when the essence of my depression comes to the forefront I trade women in for fluid intoxication and more blunts" and "im heartless like a mortal kombat fatality, ima predator contorting estrogen filled minds like a demented editor" those just flowed nicely to me.

"But its a new year soon, n i say i must find a new way, turn a dark night to a brighter day, let the heartbreak decay as with a new year comes a new plan and a new scheme, and this includes snatching one of these girls from my dreams, " I like that the most. Overall its just like what Im going through with Chauve, the girl I told you about before. I still miss and love her but I also miss my girl Melissa back in Fairfax so Im kinda confused. Overall though man it was great deep and heartfelt. Good stuff.

"Abhorring spit, leave your wrist slit, like its legitimate Forget about the bones just tear them at the ligament" That was some nice shit man, I like this it was definitely Ill. This is how you Rep. R.E.A.L

Nice shit man.

Ehh it was ok, Kerena didnt really put much into it. And lol at my little tiny diss in there. This subject has been done to death though lol but not bad KC

lol @ this being simplicity dissing me with bitten lyrics

LMAO HE SAID POOPSCILES! HHAHHAH POOP! POOOOOOP! lol no but in all seriousnessi take into the account of matter that this was a rather well formatted disscographyertion and that you murked him, lol no but good diss man. need to sea a round too

dude wtf am i in every post of yours or something? lol

n go limp like my dick after it gets beated, ........... hot stuff, like if jess flashed a titty, ....... my two favorite lines lmao good stuff way to rep and have fun at the same time in the christmas spirit lol great stuff man hha

Seems unfinished even for a clip, you need to add 2 more bars to make it better. But fuck the rest you VA homie thats whats good 2 up 2 down was the name of my first song Im Northridge Raised out the hood VA Beach, Squad Up! Get at me! Where you from homie?

Damn bro thats some pretty deep shit right there. Im feelin it.

See this is the kind of shit I want to see reppin R.E.A.L. When one of my members comes weak I let them know. No disrespect your good dude, but I think you could definitely rep the crew better. I want you to rewrite your verse for R.E.A.L COLLABORATION because I think you could have done better. Its up and posted just waiting for a verse from you and another member check it out.

Nice man, good stuff. Your doing better.you spelled my name wrong though lol

This is more mainstream than underground hip hop lyricism. I dont like it as much as your other posts. And in the first verse you kind of went off subject midway. But other than that the flow was good all the way through, and the end of each line dropped nicely with the beat.

I am your father like darth told luke cause the force is with me reincarnate you a thousand times n kill you throughout the course of history I deploy lyrical armies n n slice beef like arbys n serve you hot shit I smash you like twelve sumo wrestlers verses you in a mosh pit ....... its that whole four bars that was just like DAMN 0.0 when you read it lol arbys.. haha good shit pro

Not bad, but you used too many ending successive words. That kind of gave it a dull flow. Still not bad though. But you have done better.

Well Fresh pretty much already summed it up lol but yeah this is some good stuff man. Im glad you dont really think its him like some do lol

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

YOU REALLY GOT WRITE MORE THAN THAT AND BE MORE PERSONAL TO RUN SOMEBODY OFF THE WEBSITE LOL

Nice man a change of flow, not bad. And that I.L.Y shit is true too haha I dont do ily if I mean it.

AM I GOING TO BE THE ONLY ONE TO SAY THIS? YOU ARE NOT THE REAL KANYE WEST! STOP POSING! LOL!

TEAR your PALMS from your WRISTS, your best on the site, HANDS DOWN,// ....... Your phising peoples passwords on your top 10,// ...... if thats true im glad i didnt sign in... i knew that lol... I have botted myspace, im white, sixteen, rich and my mums dead,// Private school, have a fat girl friend, thats enough said,// ....... doing that was just copying 8 mile... just so you know... lol... BUT YEAH! Overall this is your best diss ever! If Chris doesnt come back with something nice or he talks about anything in here or flips Im voting for you.

Damn right! I aint heard from you in a minute where you been?

Naw man this is a whole separate collaboration. We will still jump on that one too though.

THIS COLLABORATION IS FEATURING: ENSAYNE, PROFOUND, YOUNGZAY, AMYTHEST. WE NEED ONE MORE R.E.A.L MEMBER! R.E.A.L MEMBERS HOP ON! MIGHT PUT EMC ON.

THIS BEAT FOR THE COLLAB HARD AS FUCK ROBOTICALLY AINT NOBODY STOPPING ME SPTTING SUNFIRE BURNING THROUGH YOUR BARS LIKE A THOUSAND ANOMALES AND CANT NOBODY TOP ME IM ON TOP LIKE A DROP BE ON THE STREET LIKE A COP BE AND TELL ME WHY IM SO ILL THEY CANT DROP ME LIKE A PROPER GANGSTER TEARING UP THE GHETTO HOPPIN OUT THE WHIP TALKIN SHIT.. HELLO! FUTURISITC GHETTO GANGSTA MAKE ME WANNA SPANK THE BADDEST BITCH WHO THINK SHE THE R.E.A.LEST CHICK CAN GET THE PIPE ALL NIGHT LIKE IM A MARIO SITE SPITTIN FIREBALLS KNOCKIN DOWN FIREWALLS, INTERNET GANGSTER WANNA HIRE YALL FOR SECURITY CANT EVEN BE SURE ITS ME WHEN I MURDER THEE BECAUSE MY FLOW ON SO TIGHT ITS LIKE A MURDER BEAT. R.E.A.L STAND THE FUCK UP!!! WE BOUT TO SMASH! ALL DAY ON THE SITE TALKIN SHIT LOL YOU CAN GET IT LIKE A BITCH IN CELL SMASHED THE INTERNET GANGSTERS DELL WITH A CROW BAR HE WONT GO FAR HE CAN GET IT LIKE A HOE GUARDED WITH A MAXIMUM SECURITY PENITENTIARY SMASHIN THE MOST KNOWN RAPPERS OF THE CENTURY!! FREESTYLE.

HOOK We got a thousand rhymes interlaced with a thousand lines, we told you a thousand times you can get your bodies boxed up like a thousand mimes!

I am hotter than 2 o clock in the summer. I rock the beat to a slumber, ... ILL. LOL WAY TO REP BRO. WE GONNA COLLAB TOMORROW WITH PRO.

Yeah man you know I be on that Horror core. You in a crew? Hit me up if you want in R.E.A.L! I got you, you pretty much inducted me then I made your crew what it was no disrespect But I repped and murked everyone, I feel like you could be a valuable member. Lets talk.

IM ON BRO DONT MATTER WHAT IT IS I RIDE FOR MY CREW!

AHAHA YEEAHHHH MANNN THATS THAT FIREEE!! LOL NICE FLOW BRO. KEP THIS UP. YOU REPPIN IT NICELY!!!

THATS THAT FIRE. THANKS. I LOVE TO SEE R.E.A.L MEMBERS REP IT. KEEP IT UP BRO! THAT FIREE!!

This is why your in one of the best crews on the site. R.E.A.L. Keep it up Pro.

Not bad, yeah except for that I.T. line, but yeah, whats up?

If you want lessons on how to form a decent line I will be in the chatroom. Click Forum and start typing.

Ive never seen a stupider person since the creation of homer simpson ...... LOL....... AND.... m a diabolical chronicle causing u nightmares beyond ur sleep ..... THAT SHIT WAS BEAST LOL AND HOW WOULD HE REPLY. DOES HE COME ON MY16 TOO? LMAO

This is some good shit man, I read your verse before but the updated version is nice. Way to rep in here too guys.

Good shit man, who all did you ghost write for?

I liked the show in lil a verse but it didnt rhyme like fresh said, and kc sick as usual. I like that PCing line lol

Diamonds and pearls man, good shit.

Yeah man Im feeling this, dreams are nothing if you dont actively pursue them though, so keep writing. Good job guys.

Yeah man this is really deep. I got on some shit like this today. I am really feeling this, I like it alot, especially how you said men dont know how to express themselves thats some true shit and that part about being another single mother and definition of a true queen, that hit home. My dudes little cousin is only fifteen and she jut got pregnant too, what is going on in the world? I miss the old days.

I bled my soul out on this song...

Well damn, now I understand a lot more about why you act the way you do. This is deep, the kind of ship true Hip Hop is based on. Good job Kerena, and KC, I expect nothing less. Kudos.

"Ensayne didnt reply to The Warning, hes scared of me, " FALSE. IM STILL COMING AT YOU. AND THAT BAN BATTLE SHOULDNT HAPPEN, ONE OF US WOULD LEAVE, AND WE DONT WANT THAT. SO DROP IT. "its not hard to get a pic with girls, how about with you touching them, thats impossible for you, neanderthal looking druggie with a double chin.. " lol @ that.... "i like anything shirt, but what the fuck is that polo shit, you got swagg? hah.. thats exactly why cardone went solo bitch.. " lol.. damn man... lol overall looks like you went into decimation mode. good shit.

take the verb out his name, and find this kid is just unable,(UNtouchABLE), And that simplicity doo and shaggy untouchable line was funny haha good diss guys.

LOL @ THE HOOK! But yeah man haha this was just funny, Rida took his diss down though? WHAAAATTT A BIIITCCHHHHH!! lol

Im far from a hater lol as far as Im concerned were still cool, I just dont hit on the girls anymore. Its really pointless.

Well I refuse to, because to me its child pornography. Lol but more power to you.

Swear I thought Hype was the first verse because it was so fuckin ILL. Great collab guys. This shit is ensayne.

Damn homie you went in on Rida, after he came at R.E.A.L which nobody even knew about you murdered him, looks like you picked up on my anger last night and repped in my presence, glad to have you on the team bro. I cant stress that enough.

Dont Come At Me.

The picture on your profile tells me you listened to some Nas and thought you could rap, but this is a fail. Stop saying nigga before I come to your home and personally slaughter you in front of your family.

Yeah man I agree with FK, good for a quick one, if you take your time on it though it could be much better.

"Lastly be kind n give respect where respect is due and in turn itll be returned back to u" You know I was feelin this, even though it was simple, it was REAL. Thats the code that I live by. Is all about respect. Good job guys.

Had to read it twice over to actually realize some things lol nice shit man

Yeah man I like the new style, I just have to find the flow, Im sure it flows well when you spit it but it seems choppy when you read it because of the commas, but otherwise good shit man.

Aww you think Im cute, how adorable. And you think you could have me calling you honey... haha your a silly girl Kerena.

Haha it was funny, because you guys really do do the same shit, I dont really have much to say except you hyped this up so much to the fact that Im disappointed that there arent really that many good punchlines in this. Funny, but yeah, and dont lie you know Jesse dont be all over you on the phone just last night she denied your ass after you been waiting all day to talk to her, and shes gonna do the same thing tonight.... LMAO. Good stuff though Im not hatin.

This is why you cant join my crew.

This makes me feel like Im drunk and maxed out at a party, and like dancing with a girl I would rather be with than my current girl, Im down, already got some shit flowin in my head.

Yeah thats REAL right there, good shit guys, I dont know if you killed two people but its whatever. Good stuff though, I feel you on that paranoid shit, Im used to lockin my door and sleeping with a weapon so I know how it is bro.

Ehh it was ok, not really talking about anything, but the rhymes are good, just not much substance lyrical wise.

Damn, all I need is one mic, because I have a gay ass headset with a gay ass mic with gay ass quality. Good shit though guys. Like always.

Thats why hes in REAL Hype. Raw Talent Productions. Raw Entertainers And Lyricists. Stay true, and keep writing this REAL shit bro.

Damn true, your a good member man. Stay reppin.

Instrumental was pretty nice haha and the flow was good and pros verse made me laugh and hypes verse was just nice lol good job guys

I dont know who you are but you got some flow, join the site.

who are you? and how is this a diss in any way shape or form?

Lol this was good, I have to say if you put this and his last dis up this would win.

When did I agree to being in your tournament?

its like u running on a treadmill, just useless kickin you like popeyes witout the sides nothing but chicken tryna be hard as shit when u soft like linen hook u in the face so hard that ya head start spinning , FUCK! .................................................... you need to tune your lyrics, you arent as sound as me, you aint did a lap, ive ran circles around this beef.. ......................... no words.............................you won? i came from behind like YOU dropped the soap, you arent cold, but your fucking momentum has been froze.. ,........................................... YEAHHH.. I have to give this one to Hype, because his lines just went more into depth, like that slit your neck line blades in your pillow case shit was crazy as hell lol but yeah great battle. ROUND 3?

When I see Rida respond then it will be good, but that 7 gays line was funny as hell lol

Haha this shit was good, but like I said before, I still think you have done better, expect a response sometime.

Damn dude this was REAL good shit man, I feel you on the cops not givin a fuck too. Thats just how it is.

I felt happy reading this knowing I have good members in my crew.

Well, Im on this new attitude where I dont give a fuck what anybody says, and it really helps. Lol. Im down for this.

Still diggin in their ass! lol good shit man haha

Well, that was far better than anything I have ever seen you type. Maybe you could do better, I think your flow could have been better, and more vocab, and more hard hitting personal lines, but nice nonetheless.

OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT WAS FIRE! JOIN MY CREW! WE NEED AMAZING PEOPLE LIKE YOU TO DEMOLISH THE BEST RAPPERS ON THE SITE!!!!

Hey man thats not bad, the flow was perfect all the way through, step up your vocab and you could be beast.

You cant be intellectual if you cant spell it right... "intulectual" lmao and "i in my room clothes the door get some lotion and then count da greens " if that dont scream im beatin my meat with broccoli...

I liked hypes verse the best but you were right it really isnt my type of music. not bad, just TOO commercial.

YOU NEED A GHOST WRITER?

Hype: "Of course you know this means war..." Lol good stuff man

Not bad, not much of a hard hitting diss, but the rhymes and multis were good.

Welcome to REAL bro, join the crew. We will start taking over immediately.

That was some good shit man, lol you only tap ass when you type it haha good shit

The only reason I laughed at this is because if you were in the chat room, you probably would have had something featured too lol but other wise this shit was funny, and REAL is dominating the charts lol

I gotta give it to khaos he just ca....LMAO nah its mr u all the way for those last four multies haha great shit

This shit was great man, nice flow and use of vocab.

Ayy yo E chill out lol aint nobody said you waas bowing to us, haha we just said named like MC Maurice and shit like that are not that original, but yours is EMC stands for something so yeah respect is still there and if you and homeboys want in REAL your welcome to join.

Shitted on! lol @ crash his car hahah

Good shit. And I actually read it. gosh venom is dumb >.> lol

What kind of car do you drive? Year, model, make.

Got personal on his ass. I dig it.

Well, its good, but you know where I stand, and what I said.

Somebody had to get at all the members, and I been dissing the fuck out of them for 3 days, thanks for taking some of the load off lol good shit bro

This IS dope... lol good shit. I like that darkness

Good shit man its deep, I actually think your getting a lot better and the flow was good here too.

"slaughter,butcher,ENSAYNE horrorcore insane BRUTALITY, " I like that, and good job changin ya style up I like it

Yeah man LH is right you are getting better good job, way to be creative haha

Way to rep REAL bro.

It was a quick freestyle I spent like 10 minutes on KC lol

Ha, it was good, but you really rely on the word "bitch" too much. You said it seven times total. Food for thought. Good lines though. But "You should try getting some sunlight...yeah man..LIKE A TAN" Was just conveniently misplaced, it didnt fit at all. Most of this was forced rhymes, but still not bad.

GOOD LORD! Buahahaahaha! That was fucking epic Pro! That line about the sweaters and deleting the pokemon game... man.. if somebody deleted my pokemon game i would cry... LMAOO MURDAAAA!! HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Ahaha chemical warfare, did you read my Astronaut Annihilation? There was a lot of that in there lol great execution greasy

LMAO!!! WOWZERS!! 0.0 you cant spell at all lol but it was funny haha

Doin good man, step up your grammar game though and then it would be awesome. Good stuff though FK.

Diss or collab? Cuz Im still waiting for people disses to roll in lol

I am about to find out who did it.

Thats some MIMS shit lol good stuff man, this actually deserves a 10.

Ehh it was ok, minimal vocab and hardly any flow, the bars are uneven as fuck, it looks like the Appalachians, and there werent really any punchlines. It was alright though. You can probably do better.

Yeah it was pretty damn good, I liked Desanto verse best, Tokio had some good shit, but thats pretty much it.

Pretty deep guys, nice stuff. Simp def. got in on this. And KC, this is normal for you, always deepening the posts.

Lol @ most of this being true, I did ask how you got so good, I wont deny that, I did take EP from ya, but its whatever, and I am a big dude.. lol nice man, I will add you to the shuttle.

"Actions speak louder than words, so I show and tell." Nice, format this into sixteen bars and you have a verse. Post more when you can, you got some real opportunities here with me paying attention...

Is this about you? Or just something random?

I see you bringin it, good job 2Ex.

Damn right, I can make a fire storyline for this, Im gonna be mad cocky on it though, grab some kingdom and what not.

Haha not bad KC, they are getting better I agree with Pro.

There we go. Lol now people will understand.

I fucking hate you.... lol

Ayy REAL is always gettin shout outs lol good job man, this was crazy as hell and long as fuck but the shit was damn good...pussycuntbitch... had to use the other curse words too haha nice stuff brah

Lol good diss, but I beat Cardone 5 0, ask him. He will tell ya man. haha

What Would Jesus Do? That, is the question. Lol and I like that Feck That, I wanna get on that haha

Much better. I like this one, extended, uncut, pure cane.

"Tattoo tears moisten years the sentences vary under comprehension" I had to stop and think about that one for a second, I like this guys, Im only like a fifth cuban, mostly german italian and scottish and well fuck it all but yeah this was good, I know nothing if latin struggles but this was pretty good lyrically.

"they ask me about after life, i say i was born in reverse, already died, now i live to meet my future self in birth, " that did it for me. and that rip his spine out side ways through his nostril was so graphic, haha, record this, then I will be happy. Great stuff Hype.

I liked this man, but k.s.t could have came harder. Explain something to me, why do people do only 3 lines hat rhyme? Then like 5 that rhyme? Why not just stick with the four 4?

The way you talk makes me want to join, but you know I run REAL, thanks for the shout outs always brah.

Recite the words scriptively wrote in ink on the aincient tapestry, .............................Artistically sign my name with your blood in calligraphy, ....................................................Always contradictively challenging the Theory of Relativity, ....... When you delve into the thought of that line, its much more than a lyric, its fucking ILL. I love your style man, proud to have you as a member of my crew. We will definitely complete a beasty ass collab. And I love how you payed no attention to the length, and just wrote until you were finished. People always ask me, "How many bars?" and my response is always, "You can not limit creativity."

"Give us our respect for this lethal shit we inject" You know I feel this man, respect man, you got it from me. And great job guys.

This verse is under rated, I will promote for you. Because this was true.

Lol why didnt I se this before, I like how you got me and bludie name RIGHT there lol good shit toni

Umm.. Well. I liked Fks verse, you just, kind of, didnt do too well... I think you could do better though. Try a little harder next time.

From what I see it could be pretty good, depending on where you go with it, fuck that kid this seems ok. AND YES I SAID FUCK YOU IMATAPARTY. THIS AINT NO PARTY BOY. Finish it another time "Newencore", I like the name, and contact me, I like to see where you go with this.

Hey man I gotta say that was pretty damn good, way to rep.

"But being followed everywhere you go doesnt sound so fresh to me, Matter fact I bet that would be the death of me." Ayy thats some REAL shit man, Im feelin this. Doesnt make me not wanna be famous, but I still like it lol

Why do you rap?

lol he says he quits then writes a diss... haha

"Well, that was a great verse. Nothing like a good cypher to recharge your batteries!" *Falls over on laptop* lol

Yeah man I definitely agree with Bludie, your getting better, I never understood why people do a five line then a 3 line rhyme but its all good.

Flow was good, and it will work fine man, I feel like you could have done better though, we have a very high standard in REAL, your getting there though bro.

"Ensayne scripts so Twisted cant help but Realeyez we gifted " The ILLEST shoutout I ever seen. Lol good job guys.

Some things were spelled wrong, but it all made sense. Otherwise, ILL.

Too many good points to name, good shit Fresh.

fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth

IT EXPLAINS ITSELF... fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth

FRESH LIKES PENIS? fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth

FRESH IS GAY! fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth

fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth Is Fresh really gay? Find out in the next exciting episode of.......! DEEZNUTZ!!! LOL!!!

fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth

fresh |X| 10 Dec 2009, 10:56 oh yeah. lmao...same thing....and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................penis? NO NO NO....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...............mcdonalds.....oh yeah, get them mcnuggets in my mouth

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GIGGIDY!!!!!!!!!

THAT IS JUST AMAZING, YES INDEED.

THAT IS JUST AMAZING, YES INDEED.

THAT IS JUST AMAZING, YES INDEED.

THAT WAS AMAZING

Is the rabbit coming at me?????

YOU ALWAYS ON SOME OTHER SHIT, AND I COULDNT DECIPHER THE VERSE THE FIRST TIME, I READ IT AGAIN AND STILL KIND OF DONT GET IT BUT I LIKE THE FLOW AND MULTIS WHEN I SPIT IT FAST. WELL DONE.

I like the beat a little but not enough to collab on it, otherwise ILL.

The flow was a bit choppy, but overall this was great. You are DEFINITELY getting better, I like that line about the biblical miracle and them being stupid readers, that was dope. But of course it could be better, I like the hook too its catchy, and many words were misspelled but it was great anyways. Well done Fallen Knight.

I expect nothing less from you two. Great as always.

This will work perfectly, you cant shelter or limit creativity. Well done.

Congrats. I see you still put it up, ha, good stuff man, I was actually feeling the flow too... fresh... lol.. but yeah good stuff man. Way to Rep.

Im rather surprised you know what a cypher even is

LOL @ ME BEING FIRST, LOL @ YOU SPELLING LYRICIST WRONG IN YOUR TITLE, AND LOL @ LOLING ON THIS POST... LOL

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It was great lol I think you should have written more FK and where is 2EX verse? lol but good stuff guys

This was awesome, you need one more bar, and the flow in the middle of the first was a little choppy but over all good stuff flicksy.

Lol well kid exs verse was not as good as I was hoping, but, Olive Oil delivered, and hyped the shit up lol, and damn you for popping her collab cherry. Oh well, a vi sa vi, she will be mine soon enough lol

This was good, and pretty, well, good. Lol it seems that your your telling a true story and not on some fake shit man. I think you can do better with the bar format and complexity of the lyrics though. Also one line is short, then the other is long, it makes the flow a little chopped and diced, so your kinda screwed. Lol but good stuff man.

Damn man, Im glad you hounded me to read this. It was absolutely great, and that line about the girls being hoes is so true, I used to love this bitch and she fucked up then I did then she did again. But yeah man, deep post, your getting really good.

Your vocab and flow is getting much better man, just work on the ending structure and what not.

THIS IS GOOD, BUT IS IT SUPPOSED TO BE A FLICKER DISS? IF SO THEN IT ISNT PERSONAL AT ALL. LOL

your a female arent you? lol join the site then start writing, nobody really reads guest work.

That was pretty good man, make the bars a little longer and a little more to write and you could have a pretty good verse. Write more, your under my radar now.

LOL @ PROFOUND, HE IS RIGHT THOUGH.

......lol you just said you suck dick...and theres only three members dude get your facts straight lol

Pretty much amazing.

Lol some of the shit didnt rhyme at all but nice try with your drunk ass haha

Glad to have you as part of the team now 2Explicit.

This was some deep shit guys, Im feelin it, I liked both verses.

LOL I LIVE IN INDIANA TOO DUDE

Seems a little depressive. But I like it. I like the way you worded things, with actual poetic words, like older poetry. Im feelin it.

I feel you, slow flow on em. "my ruthless crucifix judas movement brings fools to the abyss " That was my favorite line right there man. Good shit.

YUO CAINT FECKIN SPEEL WERTH SHEET!!!!! lol good multies though

GOOD SHIT, BUT YOU NEED TO SPELL THINGS RIGHT... LOL

NOT BAD, YOU GOTTA STEP UP YOUR GRAMMAR GAME THOUGH, ITS HIS NOT HES

ITS OK THAT YOU DONT LIKE ME ESPY. I DONT NEED YOU TOO. DONT YOU HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE COME AND FUCK UP YOUR PERFECT TEN POSTS WITH A 7? OR A 9? WHEN YOU THINK IT SHOULD BE A 10. I HATE THAT SHIT.

LOL @ VENOMSPITTER BEING A BITCH AND NOT POSTING UNDER HIS REAL ACCOUNT AND ACTING LIKE SOMEBODY ELSE THIS WHOLE TIME.

This is good stuff man. Are you new? And do you plan on being an active member?

Matter fact..I think rida grew tits...

lol @ b robb thinking I was talking to him. but now i understand why he came at me lol

LOL are you dissing me dude? Not bad, but like be real, if you dont "bust macks and sell crack" dont talk about doing it.

"severely" sever each one of ya body parts then put them back together randomly and call it abstract body art ... damn and all after that lol good shit man

LOL @ how he ended it. Get him to join the site. Hes good so maybe we can battle or collab

If you talk to bludie tell him to read whats on my page about the constant family slaughter, he can still submit a verse

Im glad you could talk about it with me and write about it, its a real healing process you know. And fuck what you guys think about me for being sensitive Ill whup ya ass in the streets. But yeah Jesse, Im proud of you.

Well I dont have a problem with Gudsen, but I must say... This was mean...

This is going to be good...

I WISH I COULD GIVE 9.5"S BECAUSE THIS WAS GOOD, JUST A LITTLE BIT OFF. BECAUSE YOUR FLOW IN THE END WAS A LITTLE CHOPPY THEN IT PICKED UP. OVERALL GOOD THOUGH, BUT PROCESSING DIDNT GO WELL WITH THE LAST 3 BARS, NOT TOO SHABBY THOUGH.

Lets get it.

If Icollab with you, you will be instantly famous. So if you have a good subject, I will do it.

YOU CANT SPELL BITCH! WITH BIT! FUCKING BITING BITCH!

BITER!!!!!!!!! ATTENTION MY16 WE HAVE A BITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

biter...

GET A FUCKING LIFE YOU FUCKING IDIOTS! YOU PISS ME OFF TO NO FUCKING END. GET A FUCKING LIFE, OR END YOUR OWN. I CARE NOT WHICH! YOU FUCKING SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 UGGHHH!! I WANT TO GRAB YOR FUCKING NECKS AND JUST TWIST UNTIL YOUR HEAD POPS OFF LIKE A BARBIE DOLL! FUCKING BITCHES! I WANT TO SLICE YOUR THROAT AND BATHE IN YOUR BITING BLOOD. I WANT TO BOIL YOUR BRAINS IN BIOLACERATE OIL! FUCK YOU BITERS! I WANT TO STONE COLD STUNNER YOUR ASSES INTO THE GRANITE AND BUST YOUR SKULL OPEN WITH A TIRE IRON! FUCK YOUUUU BITERS!!! YOU ARE ALL FUCKING BITCHES! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!FUCK BITERS!!!!!!! P.S. You cant spell bitch, without bit. Ensayne

Well, if nobody else will comment in agreement, I will do it myself. FUCK BITERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FUCK YOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thats not bad man, make it better formatted, easier for the eyes, and it would be great.

oh lol ok, can you go to A"NILE"ATION and click the little pencil and change it to a ten for me?

dude leave the site, we dont welcome gang members who suck at rapping.. or gang members period.. or people that suck at rapping for that matter.. so you should really just quit while your behind...

LOL IIGHT I SEE YOU, BEFORE ANYBODY JUMPS ON HIM, THIS IS MY DUDE, AND WE JUST HAVIN A FRIENDLY BATTLE. SO DONT GET MAD CUZ HE DISSED ME LOL GOOD SHIT NILE, I THINK I GOT YOU THOUGH. WHERES MY TWO GRAND? LOL

Good stuff man, but I have to agree with the phenomenon, you vocabulary here is immense, but you need to put more words into it to make it longer, and make it make sense more, instead of commas to make a stop flow you feel me? Other than that there are a few words misspelled but nothing horribly mispelled. Good post overall, just take into account what I said.

You should get KC to read this, it was good man. I like your style man. We def. gonna collab.

you better bar format this lol

This is some hot shit. Lol I like hypes verse the best, bludie and joka came hard too.

Im feelin the flow here bro, haha i love that word asphyxiate, i cany spell it without google lol

Aha thanks fresh

LOL WOW DUDE!! JUST WOW!! HAHA MONKEY FUCKER LOL

Deep stuff from the heart, I like it man. I"m lovin the multis and internal rhyme you got goin while still teliin what you gotta say. Thats good.

LOL TUTRONE TOLD ME ABOUT THIS, NOT BAD, LOL THANKS FOR THE SHOUT OUT NIGGA, BUT FORMAT IT INTO BARS AND IT WILL BE BETTER

THERE! HAPPY?! LOL GOOD SHIT MAN

Deep shit, is this true or just like from a movie or something?

That was good man, I liked the flow, and I see I got you on some vocab too. Dont be gettin too cocky though lol

This was some good shit here lol and fuck that dirtyd kid I think he went to my school lol I beat that kid in battles multiple times

Yeah the line that fresh said was my favorite too lol this was good guys

GREAT SHIT GUYS. FEATURED BARS! LOL

Admin is really fuckin up lol. Great collab guys. But why did this have no ratings but it was on top and featured bars? I got shit that has like 16 10"s and maaaad people liked it, but I wont complain too much, admin is just rotating the fame torch. So its all good.

Overlooking the shadows of pharaohs shooting arrows at black sparrows eating MC’s skeletons like bone marrow ..... That was fucking ILL.// ................................................... Out of the womb, born varsity letterman Your girl fond of my voice, so when I’m in the booth I let her in..........Lol I liked this line because, well it was just cool lol...................................................I used to be a radical tyrannical cannibal Hannibal leaving you in manacle’s in a position intangible ......................................................I Loved your internal rhyme multis here man. Shit was great..... Over all, I think this deserves to be on top rated bars. And I have nothing against you Lil a, but that was a bitch move you did giving him a zero.

Lol yes that mermaid sex was fun to write, I enjoyed every second of it! Lol.

Well you know Im still gettin on it man

MMMMMM SON THAT SHIT WAS TIGHT!!!

I love your rhymescheme in this one man. The end scheme is dope.

YOU LEAVIN NIGGA?!

This should be top rated.

Fat bitches dont burn calories... thats why their fat... lol good shit man, real deep. Full of insight about your life. Good stuff man.

Ahaha I like that last line. Good shit Misses Flick. lol

Yeah I remember that, and Morgan and Jasmine were over too, I was trying to protect my females too. But yeah, the dude didnt really have a gun. Good stuff though ma.

I think that if you made it longer, and went more into detail and used more vocab and multis then this could be something great. It is good though. You are getting better.

LOL I DID RAP ABOUT SOME GAY SHIT BUT YOU COULD HAVE JUST PUT THAT LINE IN THERE BECAUSE I POSTED MINE FIRST... HMMM.. LOL AND I SEE YOU GETTIN PERSONAL WITH THAT VIRGINIA BEACH LINE LOL GOOD SHIT

LOL MY NAME WAS NOT MENTIONED HERE ANYWHERE. I GUESS HE KNOW BETTER.

PUT YOUR SHIT IN BAR FORM AND STOP TYPING PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!

Good shit, now just write a storyline about how you are demented like somebody, preferrably a mastermind killer.

lol at that leonidis line.. that was my favorite part of the movie lol and, he listens to AKON naked rubbing his nipples with KY while he SMACKS his balls, LOLOLOLOL!!!!

Check the hands on the mic, tell me what my future holds. and I follow dreams, left everything behind like it was a last name. Those were two great lines that I liked. Good stuff though yeah definitely add more. Hit me up if you want to collab on this, if not its whatever. Still good shit though.

Man, I had to focus. Down to the REAL man. This is good.

I STILL CANT GET OVER HOW YOU SPELLED JESUS WRONG.............................................................. ........................................... C"MON SON..................

WHITE BOI DOES PROFOUND... LOL

YOU FORGOT THE E AFTER BEFORE!!!! I LOVE E"S!!!!!!!!! YOU BASTAAAAAARRDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!

Lol thanks for the shoutout, and that filler and lame flips line was funny haha

YOU SPELLED ADVICE WRONG!!!!!!

YOU SPELLED PRECISE WRONG!!!!!!

YOU USE ROLE IN THE WRONG TENSE!! IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ROLL!!!!

YOU SPELLED JESUS WRONG!!!

Profound + 2 lol

Lol I called you King Tut before I saw this post, and you might not realize it, but you droped 2 names here, mine, and Envy, which is Joka lol, Ilike it man, Feels like I influenced a couple peoples posts today after my Crown of Thorns verse. Good shit homie.

LMAO AT THAT TOAST IN MY WORLDWIND!!! HAHAHA GOOD SHIT NAME DROPPIN

I shed tears to this man, I cant imagine the pain of losing a child. This is great man, it should be featured. Im sorry you had to go through that, but it makes you a stronger person. One love homie.

Stazia reminds me of the girl I fell for HARD. Her name was Chauve. I really loved that girl. And Alisa reminds me of my ex Jessica. And DAMN man, my girl right now name is Melissa, I love her, but she lives in VA, so I dont know how things are gonna go. And dont let go man. This aint no fuckin homo shit this is REAL TALK between two men so any people saying its homo fuck you. Dont give up on love man. You seem like a good dude. Just keep hope man. Much respect on this post from the heart man, I know it hurts reliving the memories, trust me I know. But its good to vent. Stay up homie.

Thanks mom, dropping words of wisdom.

Oh I read this before man I see you added verses by other members though, and I appreciate the respect of you putting REAL first, and my shout out from you and Solo. Good shit man.

Thanks man. I love writing from the heart.

Legend... Thats right.. New post coming soon entitled Legend.

Lol at you guys arguing then making friends, haha check out my new post Crown Of Thorns. Its some REAL shit.

Yeah and thanks for the apology man. Glad we can squash the beef. @ Worldwind

LOL FUCK YOU AND ENRICHED DICK RIDING ASS

LOL IM BOUT TO MAKE A POST CALLED "DROP THE MIC" AS A DISS TO ALL THE WACK EMCEES HERE LOL

LOL THAT SWAN SON DID IT FOR ME. I GOT OFF. SQUIRT SQUIRT! LOL

DAMN JOKA GIVE ME SOME TIME TO WORK ON THERE LOL AND OK KC SOUNDS GOOD

WHY YOU GOTTA FUCK UP MY RATING? LOL

Etrane, make sure homeboy pays me my proper respect. Thats all I got to say.

Lol Flicksy, haha dude Enriched and me were cool but he is like all over you so its kind of really in the way lol

Good shit guys. So is Tref back or what?

WELL THANKSGIVING FEAST IS TOO FAR AWAY NOW LOL AND WE CAN STILL DO BLOODY MASSACRE BUT I THINK CAMP TORTURE IS JUST A LOST COLLAB LOL WE WONT DO THAT ONE.

Lol he really is on my Flicksy clit like a damn pair of panties doe...

Its not bad, but I must say you payed way too much attention to his post, I bet you didt copy and paste, you knew it by heart. I have seen better from you though man. This was kind of thrown together like a sloppy jumbalaya.

Man, I like the flow, but you definitely need to use some vocab man. And a few multies wouldnt hurt. Some internal rhyme and wordplay would spice it up too.

THIS IS GAY! I WANTED LEGENDS!!!! I CALLED IT!!!!

Garbage... Lol just kidding man. Great shit, you could Join REAL if you wanted to wif you consistently post like this.

Good shit man, glad your back.

Mr. Untouchable: 4, Ensayne: 7, Realeyez: 6.

Lol thanks for the shout out, and trying to steal my fans.... lol

If you read all the commenst all the way through then it is only 4 votes for Mr. U, 5 for me and 6 for realeyez. Unless were counting people that do double votes, which I dont think we are.

Mr. Untouchable:4, Ensayne:4, Realeyez:6. Lets keep voting.

Giving this one to Ndi, they talked about their last battle too much and then ndi just came in and dismantled their mandibles.

Stillmatik definitely.

Read it earlier and thought I commented, well, good shit like always man lol i liked that teriyaki line haha

oh iight lol well thanks for the clarification, i totally forgot about it, its just a bar lol but yeah man thanks

Good shit Flicksy, and dude wtf enriched... come on man. Your getting me back to the time when I really didnt like you...

LOL!!!!!!!! that is all

Lol good shit man. I feel like I am becoming a very largely talked about person on this site lol

Repeat fucked up your rating... Lol. Phenomenal. That is the only way I can describe this. We will definitely collaborate soon man. I see you have stepped up immensely since you started.

You wack as FUCK NIGGA! I guarantee I could beat you, hands down... Literally... I would STOMP YA FACE IN LOL

This is the definition of bitchassness. Niggas biting my lyrics. Good job on the copy and paste though. I never knew you were capable of such amazing actions. Biter.

What the hell, are you a blood or just fuckin illiterate? Either way you still need to use the letter C in your raps... If you were blooded you would have put c in SacK, but whatever man, not bad though, just step up your grammar.

Nigga if you asked about me you would know I have 2 Record Labels, one I produce under, and one I use. So get ya facts straight before you come at a titan, WHO IS IN FACT BETTER THAN YOU. Now go work on your technique, your a bit rusty, and for your own sake keep my name out of your mouth. Dismissed.

Yeah man sure, I wasthinking the same thing. Maybe something crazy. Lets toss ideas back and forth. How about Cloud Nine, like something to do with idk man lol lets chat about it on the chatroom or up here lol

Yeah but he needs the practice, hes a beginner, and he wants to do battls to get better. So yeah, he is a waste of time, but you will be helping him, he isnt that bad for a first timer, I have seen much worse.

No problem man, Im kind of training him too, I started teaching people up here, giving input on how to get better. People like to learn from me.

"always callin people dickriders, thats exactly what a gay would say" Ok that was the simplest line in here, but it made me laugh so loud it woke the dog up lol good diss man

Ahaha, good shit man, I told you, I knew you would come with something nice. He probably wont be coming with no low ratings and hating because I let him know about the rating respect factor. But yeah, good shit mn, I hope he comes back at you.

"got my first hooded sweatshirt an Spat heat leavin england like a desert" That was a fire ass line right there, I like how you flowed with it before and after, "Watch a few more biters emerge who then get comments saying thats his best work" That shit is true as fuck! Niggas be biting shit from eminem all the time and saying its theirs. Overall good post, and I love the way your flow came at the end, it was good man.

lol in the chat he was like, is he good? and i was like, you shouldnt battle him, haha, but he was like, well i would rather get my ass handed to me then back own like a bitch, so i think hes gonna diss you lol

Well kyle14, its a process,you should try following a rhyme scheme, and rapping to a beat, each drop at the end is a bar, on most beats, so if you can spit something nice to that bar by the end the beat drops on the stanza, your flow will get better, as far as metaphors go, look around and compare something to something else to make it sound good. Live Example: This kid is really bluffin, he about as hard as a mini muffin. There is a box ofmini muffins on the counter in the kitchen, so just look around. Compare things, make it funny.

Good stuff, I like the flow in the first verse the best.

That shit was pure fire. Great collab Grime and Hype

Hey that shit was nice, might need another verse though, what do you think?

Simplicity is so Gay.........he makes Richard Simmons look like Hulk Hogan.

Fresh is right.

Simplicity is so Gay.........he makes straight jokes.... LOL!

penis..........................

Ahaha nice shit man, that Casual T line was dope.

The animal went to work.

why super fresh.. why?

Its not bad man, but I think you could do better. From now on you need to post it in bar format though. We tell you this all the time lol

Not bad man, I like the flow, but make your bars even in rhyme scheme, sometimes you do three rhymes and it is kind of off, but not bad man.

It was ok bunnyz, lol but the ensayne in the membrane line is a little played out and the gay lines are too lol but not bad.

Pretty good man, I think if you put more time and effort into it instead of freestyling it yu could from multies and word play better. Good shit nonetheless.

Bludies verse is done, its on his page, and this is nice as hell.

Good stuff man, good message too.

Good shit as always man, when are you gonna post that Escaped Verses Collab?

AGRABBAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOBCAAAKKEEE!!!!

Fresh is a noob...

Evilbunnyz, in my ensayne opinion, I think, in order for you to be more evil.... You must....RAPE NUNS!

Not bad man, looks like you went to work on this one and put some heart in it, like gime said the flow was a little off, in the first verse, but it picked up in the second, and it was pretty good.

Well, Mr. Untouchable, all you have to do is study my flow.

Its not bad, you have a long way to go, I think if you use more vocabulary and form longer bars and do a full sixteen and pu more effort into it, you will get much better.

Post something, something new, with vocabulary, and multies, and try to tie in some word play, and I will check it out.

When I fist started this site I used something called rhymezone. Rhymezone.com will help you with vocabulary, main thing you do, read the dictionary, seriously, I have read the dictionary when I got bored ad my vocabulary is impeccable if I do say so myself.

What do you need help with specifically?

Real deep flicksy. I liked it, it really gets into the soul of the media, and exposes people for who they really are.

Much better, you put it in bar format, you came hard with good vocabulary, and you just wrecked shit.

Prtty good shit man, I need to get back on the multi game myself.

Lol yeah it will be soon, its part of a collab thats coming soon.

Lol yeah an I might just delete this and post it again tomorrow.

Ahaha I like the topic, good shit, I might put a verse on it too lol

Whats good, who is the crew leader here?

Leave 10 ratings only please.

Like Still said, shit is solid. Flow like a liquid. And I let it pass like gas... lol

Hey man I feel you on this shit, we all been there. Just try to live a good life man, you can get out and have a better life, you just have to believe in yourself.

Lol I liked it, it was funny. But you should relly start making it in bar format so its easier to read and not like a paragraph.

It was deep

LMAO! WOW LOL

Damn, I like how this flowed and the way you tossed the words around, good shit, check out last post, I think its the best I have ever written.

Good shit bunnyz. Pretty good beat too.

You know I had to peep the post with my title in it, good shit man.

That bend the bars/ lyrical cage line was fire. Good shit man, truthfully, I dont like free world either. He is fake to me.

Nice man, I see your getting better.

Lol Etrane, nash and hydruzare both one guy that comes in the chat and talks shit, then leaves without posting bars lol

Ahaha good shit man, that hit home.

Pretty good man. I never payed much attetion to you to tell you the truth, but your pretty nice.

Well then this 10 is for realizing your own skill level, and accepting your own faults even at the premise of my offer, I have respect for you in that aspect. And maybe with some help you could do as you are saying and get up there, until then, I guess just keep watching me. If you want to collab sometime dont regret to hit me up.

Not bad Flicker, you gotta write a little more though. And yeah if you want you could join REAL, thats my crew, Im sure you know though. But yeah if you want you can tryout.

No problem man, Im just here to promote and help people get known, respect man, I look forward to future collaborations with you.

About time this got up, good shit from everyone.

This was good. But you hyped you and them up so much that I was expecting a little more from them, not xactly a let down, but it was ok.

Good diss toni

Lol I just wrote and stopped when I was finished, you cant limit genius. Ahaha.

Better, you formed about 2 multis without knowing it, but make your bars longer, combine them, make them flow better.

Lol you came at Grime too haha good shit man

Oh My GOD! WOW! I AM GLAD I DIDNT FACE YOU! YOUR A LYRICAL MASTERMIND!! Lol no not really, you got a long way to go before you can battle me homie. Keep at it though. This isnt terrible, your just a beginner. Everybody has to start somewhere.

"Feet stompin your face in time to face what you facin, and what you facin is jason with a mic makin his statments." THat was good, and that line about the the four aces in the same hand was nice lol

Ahaha thanks for gettin at him, I wasnt gonna waste my time, I think you should start combing your lines t make double rhymming bars, it would be much doper that way.

This was great man, if you started like this then you know you shouldnt be leaving.

Lets go 12 rounds

He still typin in caps too lol

Damnit Pro. This is the only 0 I will ever give you because of your decision, dont let other people dictate what you do, your stronger than that and better than most. So your ass better come back. Lol man forreal thats in the way. Are you retiring from rap or just this site?

Lmao wow dude, nice, when I do mine its probably gonna be more of just a storyline in story format and not diss format lol

"I own heaven as well as hell, so theres no need to repent" Shit was nice, andI love parkous, lol I want to learn it one day. Guess what, Im taking this verseand making it a collab with me and you, and call it Mental Lexicon. Lol cuz my verse on lexicon was great and this flows perfectly with it.

that as so stupid. and no tref you wouldnt lol

BEST RAPPER ALIVE!

Love it, its really deep and good use of imagery. This is gonna be a good collab lol

Your only as good as you think you are. This is only nice if you mean it.

Not bad man.

Hey man this shit as nice, if you ever do wantto join my crew, you can horrorcore battle me, and you can get in, lol and yeah I got a fan in flicer, she said she read all my stuff, and she fine too lol but yeah man good post, and thaks for the respect. We may collab sometime.

Lol that shit went beast on his ass.

Not bad, I like the cncept, just structure it better, form bars and not lines, use better grammar and what not. You will get farther that way.

Profound came on the serious tip, bunnyz came on the playful shit, it fits well together. lol

Any one interested in joining must first battle a member of my crew, if none are on at the time, you will battle me, depending on your skill level, we may go a second round, a horrorcore match, allowing me to asses your lyrical murder skills. Then we will speak from there.

This is pretty good, I didnt understand the line about the feathers though. Overall it was good though.

Leave 10 ratings in your comments please.

Great vocab in the collab, and I like the hook. If you recorded this it would be good.

Do not rate.

Its good But I havesen his alot lately so its not very original per se but its still good.

I know Im late as fuck on the post, tis was ven beforeI signed up lol but yeah profound told me about this so i had to read it, great shit man.

Profouns is up 3 0.

Lol FK you never beat me.And yeah man great diss, Im with my girl right now so I will get back at you a little later. Good shit man. I looked to you because your name was similar and what not. And thanks for the compliment. I will check out some of your shit, I didnt read it all just saw the names but I will check them out. If you keep it up you could get into my crew.

Lol thanks man, battle back haha and you will get better, just post a diss to me.

Lol good shit bunnyz ya furry fuckhaha

Lol its not a thing about pride Im just trying to help you get better and get your name outthere, I see you have some potential and I want to help, its not a back down thing its just one guy helping another, but yeah thanks for the compliment and I will post my diss tonight. Come back when you can.

Not bad, you need to write a little more from now on though because this is only 12 bars. The site my16bars.com lol good job though.

Pretty good stuff man.

ike this man, its real deep. Makes me wanna get back into poetry.

Overall it was good, but the first line didntmake sense, butthe last four were nice. And the whole thing flowed well.

Lol not bad Nile.We might collab when you become more of an active user.

Poetic.

That shit was nice. Lol bunnyz gavea 9 because he wasnt on it haha

It was alright.

This is Ill.

Your getting better man.

Could be a lot better, I dont know if you really "in da streets" like you say you is though. And talkin bout guns and shit man come on, if you "a grown ass man" why you talkin bout childish gangster shit? Lol Im just sayin man, get more lyrical.

Bunnyz. No offense. I liked his verse better.

OOH CAN I JOIN? I AM PRETY GOOODD!!

That shit ws awesome man. The beat needs to be longer though lol I know you cant help that but it was nice.

Nice like always. Good collab.

"I spit an cause a spinnin cyclone thats fucks up the worlds time zone." Great line.

Commented on Bunnyz page but i will here too, this was great shit man, bloody bunnies lol

That shit was creative man. Great flow.

One point for each bar because it was nice, if you add more or make another it will be better. But welcome to my16bars newcomer, I am Ensayne. Ask about me, Im pretty big here. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Nice man, lol free aint joinin though, good practice though.

Your geting much better

Hey man that shit was nice!

Not bad man, I think Im still gonna have you battle somebody though.

Good shit man, edit for the spelling errors though on police thing. Overall great though

Bloody Bunnies! That shit was epic. Great shit guys.

Nice shit man. Great flow.

This might be the best I seen from Venom.... But desanto got it easily.

Nice. You got him.

The first four bars were terminal son. Awesome post.

Great vocab man

Great shit man lol i always like a crew diss

Lol I like that his talent stops startin part

Hey man this sounds a lot like my song called Turn Your Back, about how my old girl didnt wanna talk to me after some shit, I like it man, deep and from the heart.

Nah nigga you fuckin suck

Well it turns out my brothers cr is crap so hes getting a new one and I will be out there by next monday. And Bludie Ill be living there for a bout 9 months or so. Until I leave for boot camp.

Damn we was supposed to write? lol i freestyled this shit.. Wish I knew, I would have put more into it, son it aint lookin good for me! haha

Ehh, not a great battle, but J from the AQ has my vote.

You kindadissed yourself talking about, short, sweet, and rough.... lol its ok though

Good shit man

Better than most of yor shit, your getting better man

Great vocab man

Nice man, when you get a chance you hink you could change that 5 rating you left on my page to a 10 for me? i like my shit to be feautred lol

Givin the gold to Greasy on this one man, he came harder no homo

Lol shit had me rollin

I read this before I guess I didnt leave the comment, good stuff man, from the heart.

Untouch took the battle but the poor favor doesnt seem to flow because thats not how it said, good overall though

This actually is pretty good, I like the details. Work on your vocab and flow a little if you want to battle somebody, but you just seem like you would do poetry.

Must have spit that shit fast because the ars were so ong thatI couldnt read it fast enough to know how it would flo with the beat, but grat lyrics man, as always. Make sre to check out my collab with toni coming soon called Spaced Out.

Yeah for real, and why the fuck you hatingon me? stick... dumb ass fuckin name lol

Great shit man, Im gonna be stepping my vocab game up in this tournament just in case I have to battle you. And that would be a good thing for to do anyways.

Can I be a back up judge?

Are you serious? LMFAO!

The rabbit is hopping right along aint he? lol good shit

Am I too beast to compete?

Yall took me out the competition?

now yall REALly in the way... lol

Yall in the way..... lol

Lol I know cobra it wa a quick write and lol at Tref

Your my REAL whore and thats it... lol yeah.. Your worthy. Go join REAL.

Nice I like how you said you wanted to join in the rap lol well I guess I will kill you now... again... lol then I might let you join

Talk About Gruesome.... lol

THIS IS FUCKIN FIRE TO THE BEAT WE GOTTA RECORD MAN!

Lol iight but change that 9 you left to a ten for me man

Givin this one to Greasy

Thanks KC and Greasy lol this girl got talent now I am bringing out the stops to see if she can handle it and come back, and I might add her to the crew.

Check out my diss Torturing Tref and come back with something nice.

Nice, time for my round two.

Nice, Im bout to murder you though. lol

Not bad Tref, getting better, now let me check that diss to me lol

Well, I dont know how all this happened. Lol but this was good too

Regardless of you betrayal that shit was ill, but are you coming at me too, saying "if your from Lyricity Im literally paving the lyrastreets" ?

I could add 8 more bars...... lol

We should really record this.

Sound like you was really drunk ll

Ahaha nice man, just what I was expecting.

to find the REAL best battler Well I am the leader of REAL... so... you know... lol

Nice man good shit. I like that snow globe line lol

Ripped. Ahaha nice shit man.

Well viceroy wasnt good at all. Slim came ok, but you still too hype off your own shit, and caramel and rambo dont rhyme. it was Iight though. Like it sounds like your trying to rap like somebody on the radio that didnt make it

im the main source of rap, somethin like a lobby ? I didnt get that line but this wasnt too bad

Is this supposed to be a verse... lord in heaven...if it is you will never get signed... EVER!

"jeezz another one..haha taking over my 16 " ? What.. nahhh... you look like akon on crack... and why it look like you sittin on your moms bed? lol

Why the fuck you lookin like that, crooked eyes and shit... Lol and there is nothing slaughter about this, you rapping filler. Thats all foreal lol

I cant understand what your saying... And stop raping the page.. you posted like 18 at once.. you are in the way

The flow was a little choppy becaus the bars were so long, but I liked it over all. The methods were normal, nothing too special, but I think its your first time so its all good. We will put you in a collab. And soon you will be inducted to REAL.

This shit was niiicee.. I couldnt get a shout out or anything though? lol

Indeed.

Ehh it was ok, the flow was nice, but there werent any really good punchlines or metaphors. It was ok.

You reposetd this like 3 times. Lol I read this before, its not bad. Im not really into all that government conspiracies shit but this is pretty good

Speechless. This is wonderful, you should record it.

Lol its all good man. I am not expecting much out of this contest, its pretty biased from what I see, but I will give it a chance

Thanks man, you should post some shit. too.

A BA BA BA BIRD BIRD BIRD, THE BIRD ISTHE WORD! A BA BA BIRD BIRD BIRD, THE BIRD IS THE WORD!!!!

Yeah I did make it sound pretty cool Huhh? lol

This shit is like a discussion board... lol

Makes me hungry... for flesh..... lol nice shit man

Lol NDIhas had it out for mr for weeks lol read my post

Lol no thats fine with me, just know I am doin 16 bars regardless of the rules lol

Well in order for me to compete I ask that you change it back to 16, this is my16bars not my12bars, and change the match with me and greasy, I feel like you guys are trying to get him out too fast and so does he. These are my requirements if you want me in the competition, if not I can bail.

I can look at the chat from my phone but I cant post anything in the chat room, its a tease... lol

What if we do not have access to a computer and can not email you the verse? But can still post it, is that ok?

Alright, that works too. When and where do we submit our verse? Or is it just by a post basis?

Yeah me and Greasy on the same page.

I read it again but it did not specify whether or not a judge can vote for himself or another judge who is competing. To make it completely unbiased the judges should not be allowed to compete.

Really depends on who all the judges are, because I dont want anybody to be able to rap and judge and vote for himself or their friends, and I dont want like one of my haters as a judge either lol so who are the judges gonna be?

Interesting, Im down.

The collaboration will be entitled Terror Domes. We might rap about decaying the brains of innocent souls with the mindless lines we spew from our epic mouths. Rather, we may rap about torturing the spirits of the innocent, until the very core of their character collapses in a pool of blood...

This is better man. If you took your mind off hating me so much and put it into actual lyrics you would be able to do better. Good job.

Man seriously I am not about to waste my time arguing with you on somebody else post, so just hop off my mother fucking cock. Seriously man, you fucking suck, embody agrees with me, so just do yourself a favor and back out of this website, leave with the shred of dignity I allowed you to keep by not telling you to kill yourself. Dismissed.

Ahaha Smokes... Yeah Enriched for real man stop hating on me its getting rather pathetic.

Lol Iight man and seriously enriched what the heels? Walk away from this shit man you are a disgrace to hip hop lol

Oh ok lol well that was before I was here so I never knew that lol and I guess you could change that to a 10 if you want to lol

Ahaha good shit man. I see you read my shit by spitting that Ensayne Asylum line lol. Good stuff man. Now you have made it to part tw of the audition. Write a Horrorcore Rap, and torture somebody, preferably a random person off the street or one of your teachers/professors etcetera. Destroy somebody else with a verse, and then your in, where you will be able to collab with Joka and myself. And fuck you enriched we have been over this, I am better than you. You admitted it.

I gotta say man, I am not impressed. To be honest, I feel like you did this in 5 minutes. I am going to need to see more out of you then this. No disrespect, I am just speaking the truth.

Iight, you get in touch with Profound about it asap, and I will talk to Joka.

Hell yeah man, And Diablo thanks lol can you delete that 5 for me though? lol . And yeah Joka and Profound Should Horror Core Battle. Ohh shit! We should do a Collaboration with me Joka You and Profound and call it Terror Domes... Lol Foreal

Lmao at that free world line from 8 mile, and thanks for the shout out lol there are too many good points to name, great job man.

Yeah man do that, I was going to if you didnt. This was great though man, I like it, I might start it up on this website.

Glad I could help man, all Im gonna say is, I see you... And not many people at my eye level, if you feel me.

Ahaha your taking after me, kind of sounds like some shit I would say, and I see you took my adviceon the bloodstains on the wall spelling your name. Lol good shit, now its my turn to murder you.

Lol it was better then the last one you sent me Ill give ya that. But now its murder time.

Hey Tref who are you coming at in this?

Ok, ok, Ill admit, it was nice. Lol good punchlines and nice metaphors.

LH hands down...

"insomniac when i go into my lyrical dungeon i emerge in the morning with six rap artists hearts in my stomach" niiicceee and thanks for the shout out lol and gret vocab on "im willingly and dilligently bringing mental instabilities.. you kiddin me?" haha good shit man

Lol I gotta give it to you, nice.

I had nothing to do with this, but I just had to post this, great shit from both of you, but, Im giving the prize money to Hype.

That was fucking epic...

What....

the.....

fuck...

Nah if he want it he can get it another time, im goin to bed, I got shit to do, later greasy

Lol change your pwn rating to a ten lol and yeah man good looks lol he ran after I posted so I dont know whats up with that.

See I had an influence on you, "Take the axe to ya head now ya wigs is split" Ahaha and "Yall niggas suck more ass then porn stars giving head after anal" Shit had me rollin! And you dropped your own name! Ahaha nice shit man. Watch Free World come give this like an 8 or a 9 lol. Good shit man.

Thats what I thought... nigga get all defensive and shit then wont back up his own words...

Separate pages? Nigga, we aint even reading the same book! And keep quiet? How about you silence me... If you can...

Ehh not bad, post some more shit, I wanna judge you some more.

LMFAO! I knew this nigga was gon bring up Toni. We collab, that is all. But you on other hand... FREE World. Tell me you aint tryna fuck the bitch?! You just said you wanna see her naked on a phone. Tell me why you want to see an underage girl naked? I should report your ass! lol

I mean for real you feel me Simp? Shit is ridiculous!

Free World up in this bitch trying to get that internet pussy! This was ok, but pretty much no multis or vocab so I give it a 5 as in not just me leaving a comment. An actual 5

Whenever I take a shit, I stare at the toilet paper.... I pull these topics right outta my ass! lol, and thanks lion ahaha I hate it when people stare at me in the locker room, shit makes me uncomfortable lol

Enriched still sucks!!!!! lol

Lets just remember, you admitted that I was better than you, so anything you say is irrelevant. Dismissed.

Now I see why they did not post your verse with the rep, because your verse was crap. Childs play,, Enriched. Just quit rapping, your own crue disowned you because you could not fucking stand up to me like a man, and you already admitted that I was better, so bow out of the rap game like a man, take your shitty bars elsewhere, and stop lowering my ratings.

Damn this is long as fuck! But I still say it is a masterpiece.

Just stick to what your doing foreal and add a lil more detail like the way her blood splatered on the walls wrote your name and shit lol that would be epic i might do that lol

"hell no" he replied with his eyes waterin like he caught an elbow stick to non rhyming conversations over your cell phone " niiiicceeee lol fire man

Damn greasy keep the 10s going lol and just comment on her post or something lol

Damn dude you really wanna join REAL dont you? Lol well this shit is nice man, change that 5 to a 10 on REAL AUDITIONS and talk to Tonijo about converting to REAL. Then you may be inducted.

Talk2emgreasy, I need that back to a 10 man. And I am gonna read it now.

Great shit man, deep and nice flow...

The hook gets stuck in my head... lol

If I didnt know any better, I would accuse this guy of being Evilbunnyz, but I do not think it is, I think this guy is just some dude up here who stalks everybody and wants to be nice.

That is respect right there, I feel you man

It is kind of obvious that it was not profound because he would have said Rapsick Surgeons and not sick surgen rappers, profound would have spelled it right, and Joka did post THE KILLER on his page lol he is confused or something

Talk2emgreasy, I wil when I get off work today, Profound, lol, Jon J, we can battle tomorrow, or later today. Its up to you.

That shit was nice man. With something like this, after our ble I may just give you a chance for a collab, then induct you, if your diss warrants more than an eye opener.

Not bad, lol I know thisis not about me so I am not gonna play and say it is. But yeah check out some of my stuff boo, been a minute since I called you that.

This would take some time, I will put you down for monday.

Well, we can battle now or later. In order to get in I need to see your skills with a battle, consider this an interview, if I consider you to be good enough, or if you beat me, then you will be called back for another interview. Which will be your Horrorcore Rap. When do you want to battle?

Lol I like how you started it, and ended it, somewhere in between you kind of got weak though. My advice, take it or leave it, try and get four lines that rhyme at the end, and do that four times with four different end rhymes, that way it is more structured and it will be a 16. That is how I do, and it works for me, but since it was just a freeystyle it is better than most you know.

Yeah man you can, its Horrorcore though. Write about torturing somebody. Release all your anger, its a certain way of relieving stress, and the people love it. Write about torturing somebody, mentally, physically, and emotionally, saw off their elbows so their arms fall in two, just go crazy with it. And if its nice enough then I may feature it in a collaboration I have coming up. If it isnt, then you still have a piece of something you will be recognized for, its a win win.

Talk2emgreasy, you are already considered a part of my entourage, seeing as how Lyrical Hysteria and REAL are affiliated. I think you should stay with LH for now until you get a feel of everything you know?

Evilbunnyz, you can already collab with us at any time seeing as how you are an affiliate. Fallen Knight, I am glad to see you are still interested. Keep working hard, I think you have potential.

Well I have never heard of you guys, but nice work, J Bravo had the best verse. Keep it up. Why did you name the crew after a movie though?

Ahaha nice shit man, I wasnt gonna take the time to read this at first, but I am glad I did, great shit man.

Lol thanks guys, Im bout to go to sleep! Later! lol

Edited for content and reposted, much better lol.

I like this, you should have said , before I take the tool out my pocket, it would have flowed much better, and you had a few bars that was rhymed 5, yes few rhymed 3, but nice shit regardless man, I am keeping my eye on you, no homo

Will do, check out my shit in the featured bars and whatever piques your interest if you havent already.

I feel you, and yeah man your not bad keep working at it, throw in some multis and heavier rhymes and shit will do better

Lol thanks man, good battle, we might go again sometime, when did you get added to LH?

Somebody that speaks the truth, if none other, you have earned my respect man.

Ahaha I like that belly verse, Belly was my favorite movie, and you dropped names with out even knowin it, Ensayne and King Cobra. And damn you ended it nicely with that vacuum line, but at the end I guess you could find any rhymes, you could have said " Killers hate love, sweeten your beetlejuice and drink sheep blood." To rhyme with with street thugs. But great shit all around.

Ahaha nice man, officially murked.

Nice man, the thing with the years wa a little confusing lol but i got it. Good job.

For anyone else that reads this, when I put Close Your Eyes in italic, that means I am whispering it, and the line speaks over it right before eyes finishes, and at the end it is bolded and italic, whispered in a satanic tone of voice.

Shit ws good man, why you puttin my name in it though!?!? ahaha its whatever though lol

Lol at goon88 but this is ok man, I think you can do better though, even if your high haha

I already admitted to it, lol

Not bad man, I think you can do better though.

That shit was dope, I liked Fresh verse the best, and the baptized in fire line by profound. Smoke a lot didnt really do it for me this time. But it wasnt bad, great collabs overall. And I know profound said, "Tell Ensayne to join us if he wants to live" yeah nig I be stalking the mini chat from my phone... lol

More on a poetry tip, and I think you could structure the lines better, but it was deep man, just structure things better and come up with better rhymes like you usually do.

Lol I deleted it because I didnt mean it, and everybody knew that, you suck, and dont deserve a response. Even if you signed in.

Half of this verse was stolen from PYROMANIAK off of hiphopdirectory.com, and i think he stole it from somebody too

You got that from PYROMANIAK! Off of hiphopdirectory.com!

Its nice but you really needed to make it longer. Your missing 6 bars lol

Its nice but hard to focus on your verse with him spittin it lol

That beat is nice, and Toni and Profound, I liked the verses, shit was fire.

Give me a break.. I did this in 4 minutes... lol

Ahaha wow man, that was kind of funny. lol

Nice work guys. Pretty deep, I just wasnt feelin the forgiveness tip at the moment or I would have jumped on.

How about... Toni and the gang... lololol

Respect man, that shit was deep, make the bars a little longer next time though.

Lmao bro you said, "is your name MClovin? because your rhymes suck superbad...." lololol!

You should rename this Fake Talk, because none of this is REAL. I doubt you have ever murdered anybodys wife, or cut someone with a knife, and I dont even think you could freeystyle for one minute without fucking up, so how you gonna say rapping all damn day when this wasn even half a sixteen? You need a lot of work man. Next time you decide to name something REAL TALK, make sure you rap about something you actually do. Dont consider this hating, consider it constructive criticism.

Ahaha, yeah we do always come up with some pretty good shit. We gonna make another one soon. This time you pick the topic lol

Dude spittin in morse code or some shit? lol

Simply nice man.

Thats some sexy shit right there...

Epic. Masterpiece. Amazing. I am speechless.

Fuckin killed it man, I may add a story line and submit my verse later, probably not tonight maybe tomorrow but it will def. be another murder masterpiece.

Are you serious?

DAMN THAT WAS FUCKIN FIRE!

Nice man, I like the style

Lol I was just bored man thanks for a battle ahaha

Hey its up now, go and check it out and submit your verse on the post, I will add it, then delete your verse from the post and comment on our masterpiece. lol

Check out my last post. Its kind of like we arguing when we just got off work and we live together dating type shit, a relationship collab jump off makin love type shit you feel me? I am about to post the beginning jump off and the hook, I will probably have my verse done by tonight as well. Just check out my last post.

Tonijo, I love how you picked up on the torture aspect, you murdered them kids. Ahaha and great job everybody. Promotional masterpiece.

Definitely needs two more bars lol nice doe

Damn well no wonder I liked it lol

Muahahaha! Fall victim to my mind, for I be awesome!

ITS FOUR!! THE ANSWER IS FOUR!!! FOOOUUURRRR!!!!

Uh oh! Name dropping are we? lol nice man

Lol nice shit man, but your two bars short, hance the 9, if you add two more bars i will make it a ten lol

iight man

True, lol but still man I think this would just be the best thing, but I mean I am pretty big on this site alredy, I just hate it when somebody just leaves a zero for no reason on somethng that was gonna be featured you know?

Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters will lower this rating as well. And I think featured bars should be changed bi weekly or weekly because me and my crew are making big moves and we have a lot of peoples attention right now. I would appreciate your feed back man.

Everyone that rates this please leave a 10, I need admin to see this!

Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters will lower this rating as well. And I think featured bars should be changed bi weekly or weekly because me and my crew are making big moves and we have a lot of peoples attention right now. I would appreciate your feed back man.

Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters will lower this rating as well. And I think featured bars should be changed bi weekly or weekly because me and my crew are making big moves and we have a lot of peoples attention right now. I would appreciate your feed back man.

Hey man we need top have a talk about a new feature. There are a lot of people up here giving unfair ratings, and tearing down otyher people publicity out of spite, that is not cool man. As an active user I propose we do away with the ratng feautre, because most people up here just leave a five, and it could be the most fire post on the website, but nobody will know about simply because of the fact that none of the knew people know how to rate, and a bunch of people up here, are just plain haters. I propose that we do away with ratings and do only comments, that way we will be able to do away with the "hater movement" and move on to where everybody can get better known, this will bring in more users, attract a larger crowd, and boost ratings. Also, I am promoting for you, on both of my myspaces, i have brought in about 10 users this far and a few of them are very active. I hope you take this into consideration, but you probably wont even see it becausethe haters will lower this rating as well. I would appreciate your feed back man.

Hey first ladii 2012 can you change that to a 10, we are trying to get this into featured bars.

Damn right!

"rip a bitches clit and spit in it till it spills liquid on my dick" Epic... lol

Hey can you change that 8 to a 10, were trying to get that song on featured bars like my other one. I would really appreciate it. And pretty nice flow you got here

With shit like this you could be in the crew by tomorrow. We will have a talk on the mini chat first though. I have a few rules, regulations, and expectations of all my crew members.

I expected nothing less. Good job.

Ahaha nice shit man that was awesome, great multis man.

Lmao yes it is, thats why I said my rays never miss, swiftly, because the move swift never missed...

ill kill you in two rounds, only using one script, i shoot 3 shots, and hit with six, lyrics writtin wit a twist" that shit was ill lol

That was fucking nice! Shit had me weak when you said"i will shit in a bag and slam it over your head until you go mad" lmao and you ended it proper too man nice.

Ahhh ok man, well if we battle sometime that will put you out there, and maybe we can collab or something sometime.

Ahaha nice, I like the concept, glad I could help a little in the minichat lol

That was nice man. I like it, last thing, you have to battle me, if I like your shit, your in my crew.

Lol nah man I told him I was gonna battle him to help him out you feel me.

Ahaha your getting better already lol im bout to murder you son watch out

ok man and go to the top of the page and click on forum and go into the chatroom and talk in there thats where i am now

We will see man, I am giving you a chance here lol but yeah just change that rating to a 10 on my post A Mothers Love, and then post some bars called Ensayne Diss and battle me and I will battle back, its promotion man.

Read what I said on your other post, and if you could do me a favor, thanks for the comment on my bars called A Mothers Love, but can you go back to that post and click on the little pencil above your comment and click on the five and scroll down to make it a ten and press save. It keeps the ratings up man, you will learn all about it soon.

Battle me man. I dont usually battle new people, or people that are new to rap, but I think if you really 11 and you spittin like me when I was 15 then you might have some potential, battle me, and you will get noticed quickly. And the little five above this when you type is a rating, when you think somebody spit some good shit make it a 10 by linking on that scroll bar and scrolling down, because you have been giving yourself fives.

Whats up man, you want me to make you famous on this website?

Want me to make you famous on this website?

WHERES MY HOOKER?!?!?!

Alright man, submit your verse here and it will be added then the story will finish.

Yoo its nice but now I feel like me and Joka cant do our collab called The Voices because it would seem like swaggerjackin lol

Ahaha nice i spit it and it flowed nice man, that is if it stopped at exactly 1:00 lol

Check it out Gudsen and tell me what you think, there is much more work to be done.

Ahaha nice as always.

Nice I liked it, Profund man, you came off a little weak but you definitely picked it up in t upper middle, lol nice shit from bunnyz too.

Gudsen starting to sound like Joe from Family Guy lol

Yeah Joka bro I will put you on, that post collab just me and you, I want to have an individual collab with each member you feel me? And a few with all members of REAL.

Ahaha I seen it man, but no there is no room for you on my label. Lol, I swear I am about to make you and Broccoli famous on this bitch, again here comes my big ego, see if you can knock it down a notch.

Dont come to my page giving me advice, on some real shit, most of the shit you said in here really didnt even rhyme, so before you think you can come up in my domain giving me advice, get at least one high rated post, earn sme respect, and dont be bringing my shit down just because you do not have anything nice. I must battle you now, even if I do make you famous.

Broccoli! Why you up in this bitch giving me low and unfair rating knowing that shit was pure cane? And you are far from someone in a position to be giving advice.

Lately I have been on the subject of torture, I have been feeling a little crazy, the voices in my heard are getting louder. Tell me what you guys think though it is my first post in a few days. Another may be coming soon, either called Insomniac, or The Voices. Maybe I will do both. The Voices may be a collab with somebody in my deranged mindset. Everything lately to me has been lyrical, hip hop is running through my veins, I have blood bars. I cant explain it, i just cant stop rapping. I think that if I did I would submit to myself and act upon all my selfish desires of the mind body and soul, no matter how sick and out of the ordinary they may be, I need to see a therapist. But music is my doctor.

Hey man you got some nice shit, I think you would fit right into my crew REAL. Want to join? Gudsen and Joka are in.

Awesome man, that last line got me thinking, we should do a collab called Symphony of Misery. That would be cool, and I want you on my Camp Torture collab, me you profound and gudsen, shit would be awesome.

Ahaha.. I....LIKE....CEREAL!! And this isnt half bad either... lol nice man.

Nice man, good shit from everybody.

This shit is just in the way! Lol I like it, your kinda weird though. lol

You childish lol and you really are not very good, like I tried to be nice and help you become better, but you took it the wrong way, its all good though, bitch doesnt get far on this site.

Well Profound, I will tell you like somebody once told me, if you did that, you should not talk about it on a website! Lol

That alphabet line and THC line were fucking ILL.

I been waiting for this all night! Damn! Makes me wish I would have got on it lol nice shit guys.

I should not even dignify your lame carcass with a response, I already told you nigga, I would demolish you, ask anybody on this website, you truly dont want beef with The Butcher, I dont even know why I wasted time on you. And I already told you, I am not about to make you famous by battling me, earn your respect like everybody else does, new dude, bet you log on thinking you gonna come in and "smash the game" I got news for you, you arent gonna smash anything. Respect is earned, not given, earn my respect with some decent punchlines thrown accurately then maybe I will give you a chance to shine.

Thank you dylan. I mean this dude rhymed first 3 times then used hurst... lol that says a lot about his skill level

You do not deserve the publicity you will receive with just one battle with me, just by posting my name on this website half of the people here are going to read it and see how bad you are at rapping, so just quit while your behind. Word is bond nigga, you can not beat me, even in your wildest dreams, I demolish you regardless.

Red Broccoli, You are so gay, lol. Thinking you can handle two dudes, probably can you fuckin faggot. You truly arent worth my time. So unless you want your mind warped keep my name off of your page, out of your mind, and far from your mouth, where many niggas have probably been.

Ahaha its decent man, but for some reason I feel like your a white boy from new york trying to get into the rap game, I am probably wrong though lol

It was ok, i see your a novice at this so I will cut you some slack, but why do I get the feeling that all these people giving you a 10 is just you on another account rating yourself? I swear it is you, I mean, Sickness, Spitter? And come on now, Rapjudge? Man are you rating yourself from other accounts? Lol for real dude.

Ahaha looks like you chopped this dude, I wasnt even gonna waste my time because of how weak his shit was. "Skull fuck you while I am jamming to an instrumental." Epic. Lol

Ahaha dont hate and lie on a dude just because you got burned like syphilis! Good shit man your improving!

Peter Chao:"Derr is Pubis Hair on de Soap BAA!" P.S. I......Like....... CEREAL!!!!

Ehh, its ok, but it doesnt deserve a reply to tell you the truth, come harder then this if you want my respect or publicity of me putting your name on this website...

Reminds of of a light bulb the way you named it, Lol i got maaad people starting to make random posts with names that have nothing to do with the bars, lol it was ok, you could use some work though, but its not terrible.

Lol I give it a ten for originality man

Mary:"That is most good Simon, most good..." Simon: "Ugghhhh... she is just terrible, can we have like, a topless scene or something?" Director:"Uhh yeah!" Simon:"Really? Great! Well, we have a movie!"

"About as gangsta as harry potters shoes..." Ahaha! That shit was priceless.

This is amazing, but I think you should switch the name to Empty. It seems your souls were empty inside as you spit this, theres a lot of pain in Toni verse and a little pain and confusion in bunny verse, I think Empty would nood name for this because Tonijo said she knocked it back and bunny said you wanted another serving. I am just suggesting, just trying help. Another nice collab though. Tonijo, we might do another soon too. And bunny if you want to me and you could make one too.

This shit was nice. Plain and simple. I like the line about the one apple eve wasnt able to pick, that was original. I think you should start naming your 16s and not just put 2nd 16. But your learning, and thats good that your coming hard with your first few posts. Keep it up, I may have a spot for you in my crew, only if you spit real though. From what I see there is nothing outrageous for me to warrant it as a lie. So you have my attention, make sure you keep it.

Hey man I see you arent in a crew. Would you want to join mine? Its called REAL. Raw Entertainers And Lyricists. Let me know if you down.

But yeah just take what I said to mind, we will battle later and if its good then you may get in. No beef, just testing.

why did he post on this it was directed towards me lol

Oh I was about to say! Lol well if you can do good enough against me in a battle then I will consider it, battling commences 6 hours from now, I have some things to take care of and when I get back we will battle and if I deem you worthy you are in. I dont like to act all high and mighty, but I am pretty nice if I say so myself and everybody knows me here, so yeah, being part of my crew is a pretty big deal. You feel me?

I like the flow excpet I dont know if you actually make more than me or anybody in a week compared to my salary, I only want to hear REAL talk from anybody in my group you feel me?

Its ok except, I mean I dont hate on homosexuality, but, I mean you know dont be braggin about it man lol

Just like everybody else I want to see an amazing post about how you deserve to be in the crew, I havent added anybody to my crew yet because I havent found anybody that is good enough unless they were already in another crew.

If you nice, and I mean reall, really nice. Then I would probably let you in mine. Post somethin new and ill judge if you good enough.

Hey man its cool I dont mind if you get better lol Im proud of you man. Its all good dog.

As Ensayne leaves the room fallen knight falls asleep, suicide general hears his voice as he awakens, then Joka awakens in a sweaty panic, knowing not where he is, and the screen goes black. The next day on the news it was discovered that the man known as Ensayne was the abductor of the three victims... Ahaha I just had to put myself in this somehow it was nice as hell! Lol

Ahaha I liked it man it was nice, you should have made it 15 bars to make that finish you in 15 line click... lol.. but yeah man good shit, check out my post called A Mothers Love. Its not just another post, its a story about events in my life.

Haha my first post was wack as hell.... lol

Hey man this is about what happened between me and my mom man, please dont call my mom a bitch.

Needed a rating lol

Gahh! Change that five to a TEN!!!

Yeah man you can. This is just the sign up. Thanks for signing up lol

Ahaha your getting better, man. That was ok, just dont use so many lines, put them together. I think you did much better battling me then battling other people because you dont want to impress them, but I think you want to impress me. Well good job. But you didnt beat me, but you are gettting better, oh and read my post called A Mothers Love, its about what just happened tonight, the reason why I was in tears, real shit man.

How you gon swaggerjack... a swaggerjacker?! SJ squared! lololol

Wayne equals bitch... he is the biggest swaggerjacker in history....

It started off good and stayed ok until the third verse, where it went downhill, picked up a little in the end but not as amazing as I was hoping, it did not hurt my feelings lol but it was still pretty good.

Fuck you that was such a rhyme! Lol its all good, I aint mad.

If you leave a comment, make sure its a decent rating as well and not just a 5...

A few good ones but I think you could do better, give ms a minute lol im walking home and typing on my phone, watch out for my round two!

Lol G til da end you gotta change the 5 if you liked it Haha

Ahaha Profound you gettin on my Camp Torture collab? And Cobra check the bars my diss is up lol

I ..... LIKE..... CEREAL!!!! Haha yeah man I will go first. Lol Profound on my type swag random ass shit lol

Alright we might start working on it tonight or by tomorrow definitely.

Yeah man we have never battled before. How about it?

The lines beginning with Deadly Assassin and Shadow tactics were some of the best shit I have ever read lol, props

This is deep, we may collab sometime.

That was smurfing good!

Lol its like the new thing in rap man, and look forward to the part two! Coming soon to a website near you! My16bars!

Alright man, I can do it tonight when get off work, and you know I always spit REAL lol

Yeah man I can be in yours, I can probably get my verse done tonight when I get off work.

Matter of fact read my Camp Torture Collab Signup. Maybe you could hop on, it is my Criminal Minds sequel. Its all about freeing your mind by torturing innocent victims, its really fun, lol check it out.

Yeah man, this is the realest shit I ever wrote. Thats why I called it Real Talk.

Ahaha nice, never seen you up here before but thats probably because I joined like 2 months ago, lol but yeah man hit me up we might collab sometime. Ask about me.

Where is it? Did you send it to my email or something?

When do you want it by? I can probably do it tomorrow morning.

Do you want me to make an appearance on your collab?

We have to think of a really tight name for the next one, I want it to be just pure torture, we all have the same victim, and we will all contribute to his demise, and it should be the devil. Ooh I am starting to think of things lol

Its nice man, at first I was bout to snap because you used the same title as me, but I cant hate on something good, it was nice lol. Check out my shit called Real Talk (64 Bars).

Yo I dont wanna just come at you saying that you biting off my lyrics, But, I did use pretty much that EXACT same line about the HIPHOPpottamus.... It was in one of my disses man... I mean I liked it a lot except for the line you used that I said lol and Im not accusing you but it is a little fishy man, that isnt a very widely used line..

Well I dont know wh the fuck yall fighting... Because.... I.........LIKE..........CEREAL!!!

This was really nice, Tonijo, we will definitely be collaborating again sometime.

You know what, we just might, or a remix with other people too lol

Cant stand it that white boy rappin" WAS THAT DIRECTED AT ME? LOL

Not bad guest...

Its amazing Toni, Im feelin it, really deep and heartfelt.

Masterpiece...

I will check now

Haha its pretty good, I never understood why people only do three lines that rhyme sometimes, it just boggles my mind.

Lol this is true, but I get so much positive reinforcement when I talk about myself, people just love it lol so I am a crowd pleaser

Yeah man will do

Hey man did you get time to finish your verse for the collab?

ITS TYLER! LOL

Why did you reply to my post then delete it? Are you scared to battle me or something? lol

Lol man we were battling earlier I posted against you I guess you didn see it

Sound like some eminem type shit lol not bad

I only put the nine to get your attention, i will change it after, Check your email leedaone@yahoo.com or whatever lol and find the Criminal Minds Message i sent you and read it and post your storyline and bars then send it back to me

I got it man. Just waiting on the other two from Profound and Stillmatik.

Hey can you go and edit your comment and change your rating to a ten please? lol

Then change it to a ten!!!! Lol

Haha i know you can do better, but watch out for my verse two because like Joka said, I make fire like the original cavemen. Ahaha its up man, check it out.

Hey man I just sent the storyline and verse to your email, check it out.

Hey man check your PM

Check out what i have so far, our storyline is connected, and its an escape plan, we can all work on a verse of how we all escape and go on a killingrampage individually, basically after we all escape we go on our own murderous killing spree, I am going for the slow torture aspect.

Shit was nice man, Im going to start working on my storyline now and my verse tonight probably. I may ask you to make a different verse to follow the storyline though. Just keep a heads up man.

Perfect.

"You a boombox with no chord or batteries no power in flows and no voltage to challenge me Only thing Fresh wrecked is his chance to earn Beast status and beat Matik but lost tragically" That shit was Criminal. I want you on my Criminal Minds Collab, I think you would be a good person to put on it, like we were talking about collborating before. Just check my last post and read it all and the comments and that will explain everything.

"im rippin these bars like hulk hogan if he caught a charge" Haha nice, check out my last post called Criminal Minds Collab, read it and tell me if you want in on it. I think you would be a good person to do this collab with.

Sounds Good Man.

Ahahahah he put gold teeth on him!! lol

I want the verse by Friday October 23rd, and you can send it to my email: Ensayne@rock.com

E man, Dash Manny right? Let me see your verse first and if I like it enough I will include it. Nothing personal you just dont have any bars on your page for me to judge your skill.

This is just the proposal, I havent started any actually work on it yet, I will be commencing work on this very soon, I think there will be no hook, more of a badass storyline. Busting out of an Insane Asylum late at night. Roaming the streets looking for someone to torture type shit.

Joka, your in.

Onlookers: "Ooh ooh Ensayne can I jump on it?" Lol

I know ben rinehart aint on this site.....lol

If you ain take this shit from somebody else than that shit was fire my dude lol

Ahaha this shit hit harder than some haze, better then verse 3 Haha, but yeah man shit was dope.

I see some potential in you. I want to see more from you, nobody usually piques my interest, so consider this unusual. Keep in touch, I want to see what you can do when you write.

Thanks guys, I was watching The Boondocks one night, and this is basically an Indefinite Description of The Blind Swordsman, and his actions taken on that specific episode, step by step, or, as Huey qouted him, "The Blind Nigga Samurai".

Ha I like this shit, reminds me a little of my own flow. Join the website, I don usually do this, but Ill give you a chance. Nice for a new kid.

Its Halle Berry, and it was ok, Ive seen better.

Nigga infernal you lucky I dont chop ya ass. That shit was pure fire, no kerosene, what the fuck are you talkin about? Props my dude profound for this nice shit. And fuck that infernal nigga. And yo check out my shit called The Blind Swordsman, I think you will like it.

I love this, but quixotic is pronounced key ho tick. So it is kind of off, but it works. I was watching the Boondocks last night and I was inspired by the blind man that beat up grandpa, not the ugly blind guy, but the one in Huey dream, the blind nigga samurai. Therefore I created a new form of flow called Indefinite Description. Watching the movement of the blind nigga samurai I put it all into words as best I could remember. The Blind Swordsman was my outcome, check it out, tell me what you think, and maybe can collab sometime soon.

A new era has arisen, the art of Infinite Description.

Im committing ti to a lyrical psyche ward, because those last four lines were ENSAYNE!!! Haha

Nice, but you need a lot more to make it into somethin better.

Disperse raps like gumball machines, ha I liked that, and why you say shiz? lol

Yeah I feel you man, I will check it out sometime.

Nevermind I got it

This is definitely not a six! Dude is crazy, lol nice shit man

I LIKE CEREAL!!!

Ahaha man you be coming with the funniest shit! Check out My last military diss called Dishonorable Discharge. And you trying to collab with me and Still?

Not gonna deny something that was nice, even if it was a diss to me, but check this out right. You have officially been DISShonorably DISScharged. Check that shit.

Ha it was pretty good, gimme a minute

That was one ghastly flow my dude. Solid.

Depends on how much spanish you use and if its basic lol I took two years of spanish but that was two years ago lol

Did you go under guest and post then rate your own shit? Mr. Formula, who I have never heard of.

I didnt really like it, its ok but its also a little gay... Just the lines you used, even if he said them lol

Thanks man, all I really wanted was the respect.

Haha I been waiting for this since I heard you say it in the chat, nice man, you gotta put me in one lol, oh and I was gonna ask you if you wanted to collab with me.

"Home run straight shots, head shot with led pops leaving dead cops " TALK ABOUT A TONGUE TWISTER! Nobody could bite off of that because "you cant remember that shit! Haha nice man Blow ya mind through the realms of time, call this a lesson in waves" Matik earned some respect from those four that contained that Haha, I would qoute more nice I write all this from my phone, Haha nice shit guys. I need to collabs with somebody sometime

I like the concept man, maybe you can throw in something about welfare, I forgot it was called fuck the government so I cant help much on this lol

Haha thanks yall, but watch this dude hate and come and fuck up my rating with a 0 or some shit lol

Gotta say, that shit was nice. Respect. Check my Dash Manny diss Called Dash Manny Demolished.

Haha thanks man

"My symptoms leave me terminal, hes neglected of the sickness" That shit was hot. Haha how old is matik anyways?

Nigga you the one scared wont fuckin sign in and take your beating like a man, fuckin get off this website and grow some balls pussy ass bitch, in mini chat all talkin bout Ensayne is a lil bitch nigga fuck you and ya guest shit, and fuck this argument im goin to bed! Pussy ass nigga

Im not gonna battle you unless you sign in

dude must be talking about me

Sign in, how umma diss a guest? Thats just rude. Lol

Lol why are you guys teasing this dude?

Lmao Desanto

The only thing you MURKIN is your flow, cuz that shit is dirty and just terrible, and I dissed you lol

Ha nah man the shit is done I posted that shit on your post before I read the other one, all is it peace now man, I was just pissed because you called me a fourth grader lol but we good now

I guess I can leave you alone, all this shit probably humbled you anyways.

Battle back, or delete your page...

Well dont mess with me, I dont play well with other children. Ahaha, this diss fool! Battle back or delete your page! Thats the rule!

You right FK, this dude is pussy, hes a thin mint. Ahaha.

Nigga WTF are you talking about? Are too pussy to battle me? I just dissed you twice and I see nothing back from you. Bitch.

You know something, I actually just read this for the first time... ABOUT FUCKING SUCKED!! JUL YOURSELF! this really deserves a zero for a rating, if you read my shit it is at Desanto an 8 if not a solid 10 like everybody else thinks, so go kill yourself bitch

Who the fuck is this nigga afrocain? Next!

........bitch

Faggot ass nigga probably masturbating, cum chest ass nigga.

Just to lower your rating

Still hatin

WTF this nigga is so wack! You rating yourself talkin like your mom nigga go drink some cyanide! Fucking moron! And stop hating on my shit, nigga I will fucking chop yo ass, new pussy, you dont run shit except when you trying to get away from your gay thought! Fucking faggot ass nigga. Couldnt get pussy if they sold it, matter of fact they do, and even rotten diseased hookers wont let you fuck for a buck. Fuckin stupid ass nigga.

Sure man, go first, two rounds.

Haha tell me why I can only put this in Em and Dre voice, lol reminds me of that song, shit was nice man. Oh and can you check the shit I did against Desanto.

We can both put it up for a vote.

LMFAO!! Dude! this shit is hilarious! Strive wonder touched my face and read an essay. Haha that shit was weak as fuck!

How the fuck is this standard? I saw your diss against me, you truly fucking suck, dont quit your day job.

Haha thanks for the rating Desanto, I know this was before we resolved shit so its whatever lol

For anybody that doesnt understand the first line, Texas Instruments is the leading calculator brand, and texas holdem is a card game, hence the reason he is folding. Put it together and you will understand.

Dude stole my swagg, Haha shit was nice, look forward to reply soon.

Haha thanks for the ratings and comments.

Im charging you with first degree. Haha, yo check my shit called Desanto Autopsy.

You murdered that shit what the fuck is maniacal talkin about?

Not my best just some quick shit lol

Can hold his own like masturbating amputees, ha nice shit.

Haha that shit was nice Im feolin the multis

Ha dude at first I thought you were ok but really your not, I have no respect for you, and the only scripts you flip is when you rehearse ya shit.

Dude quoted my bars in every single one of his verses.... and said I had fillers? This doesnt deserve a response.

Its alright but you gotta learn a better rhyme scheme Homie, I know you can do better.

Fuckin jock! Ill rip you later...

Iight man, f you need me just call 1 800 BUTCHER

Haha Im in that process right now.

Are you juggalo?

Chill out comin at FK like that. You dont want me to destroy your cerebral.

Ha dude what did that down down forwards b mean? You playing gamecube or somethin? lol

You look like this dude named brandon I used to beat up in middle school

That shit was amazing, Profounds name fits him well.

Thanks man, I always like a good battle.

"Get ya shit hand tossed like pizza in italy" That shit man, Haha and "Bruise ribs and collapse lungs like body shots" sickest line I read lol. Check out my shit called Solo Soulja Shutdown. It was my best diss so far lol

Ahaha man I never seen you come weak, nice. Oh and can you read and rate my last post COCAINE.

Ha I like that Hahaha and blah blah blah shit lol, yo can you delete your last comment on my post and re rate my shit COCAINE, I don want just a five on it because you didn get to read it because I was editing it.

Shits nice man,and I left the crew because Im starting my own, I got my two dudes to join so Im starting one called REAL and keeping all our shit copywritten and under my label. And REAL stands for Raw Entertainers And Lyricists.

This is monkey piss...

Ha I like that part about siamese brothers, but I seen better from you.

That shit was nice man. Check out my latest shit.

This shit is decent man, I can relate to that years worth of work crumpled up in old notebooks and shit Haha sometimes I just look back on how wack I was lol

Lmao he said you couldn give the new guy a break, good thing he didn battle me lol

What the hell is a gen uis? If you meant genius then that is pretty ironic, Haha but no seriously you definitely are not the best rapper on this website. And all those grammatical and spelling errors will get you nowhere in life.

Thanks russ

This is really bad

True it is but I still murdered this dude.

I posted

Aha thanks.

I sent an email to the contact us link but never got one back, I thought that was the way to sign up, how do you do it?

This is nice man, oh and actually you can go first. I got somethin to do. I can be back pretty soon though.

Let a nigga hit it on the table like ping pong... haha nice and Im feelin the hook man.

filled with comets, stars and sun/where punks get lashed & stung/and cunts get bashed & burnt/dis another smash isht son/new kid,new flows integrated with classic stunts ha i like that shit man

Aha thanks for the ratings yall.

Shit is nice man, stay bobbin my head lol check out my latest bars and if you want to check out my audio.

"I steer with my dick".. haha Im feeelin this shit man, bobbin my head. It skipped a little at 2:07 and 3:00 but it was still a solid flow regardless.

Yo can you rate my Solo Soulja VS Ensayne

I feel you on this man, I used to be like that, but in time youll move on and learn to accept the things that you cannot change. Theres an old saying by Reinhold Niebuhr: “Lord grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.” Live your life by that qoute, its the best thing you can do.

Thanks still, first real shit Ive written in a while. And yeah I will FK.

Thanks still, I love this one, read my Burdened shit, it kind of ties in with this.

Haha this shit is sick, yo can you check my last two posts? Solo Soulja Shutdown, that ones a diss, and Burdened, some shit about my life.

Haha nice this shit go hard. Can you check my last two posts? Solo Soulja Shutdown, and Burdened.

Real talk I can wait to heare this, it is very interesting, oh and could you rate my last two posts?

Thanks man, that really means alot, its nice to have a little encouragement other than everybody dissin me.

Epic...

The first line of your verse was from a lil wayne song but the rest of it was pretty nice. You doin good.

Ha check my last one, its called Solo Soulja Shutdown

Haha you spelled ignoramous wrong but I like the do, it was a little mediocre but your learning lol umma come back in second

Haha thanks man you part of what made me known on this site, lol and all the other people that kept dissin me, but yeah man well put and thanks for realizing, I think you have some potential, keep it up.

People stay quoting me. Haha, your getting better, I liked that line about public indecencies and prostitute tickets lol

I like how your expressing yourself, I can tell your goin through some shit on some real I lost my best friend too, I loved her so much and I was in love with her, and we were more than friends, so I know how you feel man. I look forward to seeing the rest, and just try to talk about your feelings and not what anybody thinks about you. Its about how you feel, I write shit all the time and I don give a fuck what anybody thinks because I know the shit is nice,you just gotta be a little cocky but humble enough to accept the things you can change. Real talk man.

Damn thats a shame I was just gettin to know your flow.

Haha thanks for rippin this dude, he been ridin my dick like a bitch for a week after I battled him dude was suicida. But yeah shit is nice, and thanks for quoting me.

FMR you gave an unfair rating, this shit is ok man, but I think you can do better.

Homie I have never lost a battle, and this diss doesn even warrant a return. I have to admit your getting a little better, but, you still rhyme all your words with the same words, you still need to have spelling and grammar lessons, and you still haven earned my time, my respect, or my ranking, youll have to come harder than this. Haha and thanks Solo.

Nah I aint have time, I might check them out later, but I might pull out of this crew because I aint have no back up from my own people lol not that I needed it I think I handled myself nicely considering, but I had some back up, my point is I rather be on my own make my own moves and shit you feel me, and like if you read some of my shit I guarantee you you gon be like yo how the fuck did he come up with that line, sometimes I amaze myself, and I aint sayin im the best either but I am pretty damn good for somebody who doesnt even really battle, I do R&b lol

Iight I feel you, yo at least you at ain come back at me talkin some shit like most dudes would have done. But I recognize your flow Homie, do you recognize mine?

You quickly became noticed because you had beef with me Haha but on some real shit, you held your ground against me and I haven found anybody that could do that. So respect. Haha and the only reason I had the site diss was for promotional reasons. More people reading means more people coming to the site which means more bars you feel me.

Lol I don NEED anybody help, I just though it would be fun, and It would be good for the site because you don see somethin like that often, it would bring in more users, and promote my16bars. I think you read me wrong man.

Lol and this dude Feedmerappers isn even part of the crew, and remember in my post when you said, ill murder your entire crew... your pathetic, that was TLR lol

Why you dissin the people dissin TLR? You said you was down at first. And you said you would help me lol I think you got confused with somethin

Haha Im feelin this shit.

Haha I got you bro, just keep it up til tomorrow and when everybody has they shit posted umma put it all together.

Damn Homie, Haha I agree with you, this shit is nice. I ain even know about they other crew member lol

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo I got like a site wide diss goin on against this wack crew called TLR, if you want in, just post a TLR diss and comment my last post saying its ready and Ill pull it from your page and put it in a post.

Ay yo just post the TLR diss and imma grab it from your page and make a post

Haha thanks arachnid

When I win just admit it lol

Its funny how you just join and think you da king, homie for real, and Im not trying to be mean, I haven seen anything nice from you, you don stand out in a crowd in any way. So you better go hard or delete your page.

Doubt it, I mean you can try your hardest, but you will never beat me.

Yeah he is pretty dumb, yall take shit so personal, its just rap chill the fuck out lol

Thats because Im so raw man, I don follow the average rapper, everything I say is a punchline, thats how I do. You just mad because you new and gettin picked on. Haha

Some good lines, but nothin too nice, haha check my shit

Thanks man haha tell me why one dude was like, "Why everything you say a punchline?" lmao

Ha thanks man you right, Im not in GMN Im in Underdogs Kaos but Im cool wit mostly everybody lol

Yo can you check my TLR and FMR diss.

Oh and can you check my TLR and FMR diss too.

Im feelin this shit man, its like what i ne writin for real. Oh and can you check my TLR and FMR diss.

Haha this shit is nice man, can you check my TLR and FMR diss.

Oh and can you check my last diss, TLR and FMR

Damn this shit is deep homie...

No, your really still wack homie, and your part of my next diss, check the listings because its the third time you got ripped.

Check the listings!

Yall dudes suuuuucccckkkkk! Haha why did you even join this website? Its for lyricists, not flowless bastards.

Somebody call the sanitation department, because we still got some garbage left...

This is my16bars. Not my10 bars, learn somethin.

You just said you have a 2 inch dick with balls the size of venus......

Thanks Dbox lol and yeah man I will

Aha shit was nice, I had a similar flow about taking a break at work lol Lunch time, crunch time, listen for the punchline, better pay attention umma only say it one time, headed from the frontline for my alotted run time, smile on my face shining brighter than some sunshine. I was hungry as a bitch... lol I like this shit man

Haha thanks I was weak dissin this dude and his crew

Well check the next one because I dissed you too.

If it wont nice then why you keep coming back to read it?

Because thats how fuckin RAW I am...

Tell me why he never came back lol

I only commented this to give myself a ten... Haha

And this dude wants a rematch?

Damn you stupid

Nigga done fucked up my ten... Im cuban you stupid fuck... Ill handle this tomorrow.

Haha thanks I actually thought this my worst diss ever, I guess its ok.

The only thing you could tear apart is your lyrics, because they suck, I highly recommend you take my advice and stop rapping before you develop a mental disorder. Coming at me is what drove you over the edge. So just stop. Before you get hurt.

Calm down miss j I said I THOUGHT you were biting off my shit, one of my collabs is called The Heist. Dont disrespect me again or your shit will be ripped.

Ha For a minute I thought you was seriously biting off my shit

Well he came at me so I had to come back. Thats just how I work.

Haha thats that shit Homie

Battle me, post first.

Damn dude, you might want to see a therapist or something. Make me feel bad I ripped you lol

This didn even deserve a repose but I was bored and tired as fuck so fuck it man just go to sleep...

Garbage...

The last time you had a taste of blood was when your lips were chapped.. That shit.. Haha nice, we gotta battle sometime.

Just to let you know there will be a full post about our battle, and how you didn come back...

I guess you ain comin back...

so here I am wackin in the tub, missin that slit like damn what the fuck... Lmao that was hilarious

Thanks man lol funny thing is Im actually an R&B Artist.

Haha thanks yo, it was just a thing me and my brother did. He did poetry and this is my return lol

Well my point is, instead of trying to battle someone else you should finish yours with me. I posted, its a two round thing.

I see you gave yourself a ten, how about I offset it with a zero?! Haha no I wouldn do that... or would i... youll never know! well you will when you look but who cares! GURD!

Like I said before... only you... How do I even come back from this? lol

"You see theres death at the tip of this tongue, life at the breath of this lung"i liked that part

You rhymed face with face...

Haha thanks doc

Your just mad cuz I was cocky lol

Haha only you would come with some shit like this lol

Im in

Stop hitting yourself

With all due respect read the description. What have you done? Do you have two record labels? Have you had performances? When did I hear you on the radio?

Do you really have a tech nine? I don believe so. Ahaha.

Check my shit, maybe we can collab.

Scary as a demons clit... Haha shit was funny. Check my VINCENT27 DISS.

Heinz is ketchup man.....

Haha yeah I knew I heard this shit somewhere. But I did like that, Im the man in the raincoat outside of your home, Im the man threatening you over the phone.

no.... leave..

"my boredom compells me to murder this dude like the most gruesome felony" Haha I liked that shit

That was absolutely horrible.

Thanks.

Haha thanks man, check the Come over shit, that got me some radio play a while back.

Go to jamglue.com, sign up, search Ensayne, and I have this and three other songs available for download.

Thanks man.

"Im out here in the wild like crocodile dundee" haha nice shit man, check my last two posts.

Thanks man, it was like a hood anthem lol everybody had this shit on they myspace and ringtone haha

Even it out...

Had to do it...

Had to do it...

Haha thanks for the support. Im about to upload a few more of my best songs.

Yeah I feel you. Ok count me in.

Ha it was just some late night entertainment no homo. And are you the leader or is it more of a team? Cuz I run my own shit you feel me? I don have nobody tellin me what to do, but I could be a team member if thats how it is.

Haha nice man, nothing personal on the diss, thanks for keepin me entertained. But yeah dude "flawless" dissed you right after me just repeatin my shit, maybe thats why he call himself flawless, he using my shit! Lol, naw but for real, he bit off a little too much of my lyrics then he can chew, so umma come at him tomorrow, talk to you later Homie.

Man, you get no respect, you bitin off my lyrics, and you chewin on my diss. Everything I said about Flipz you repeated.

You gotta put them all in one thing so I can rate them next to eachother

Haha alright post your diss to me and well take it from there.

Relax. You starting to feel yourself a bit too much, and its producing less than profitable lines. No disrespect, but I seen better from you. And didn you use that lettuce is wilted in another verse?

You in a crew?

I agree with bludie, it wa ok, you seemed too hyped up on your own shit to really come up with something amazing.

Admin. Man, is this still going on? I see it hasn happened for a month and some change lol

G O D D A M N !

How about you battle me? I guarantee a different outcome.

YOO tell me why I was thinking about using a ron jeremy comparison earlier lol But you stole shards when you said you shit on they plate and its time to eat, I said that in a diss against somebody, eh maybe its just a common line. fuck it you still get tens

Haha I just seen this, Ill think about it yo, Well talk later

Yo I didn even get past the first two lines, it was just homo, you get stuck then fuck him? Homie, no.

Tell me why I found out Guest was Deesmoove, guest posted a diss against me and then Deesmoove posted the exact same thing. Lol nice shit yo, check my last posts though. I put together a few things.

Ha sorry meant to make it a 10

Yo check me out at: m y s p a c e . c o m / E n s a y n e m u s i c Im actually an R&B artist.

Haha ok I gotta give it to you, you came hard. Check my recent shit

Homie you already lost, nobody even knew about your comeback. LMAO!!

Haha nice, you put the restless to sleep, that was nice.

Haha yo im feelin this, you ended it nice.

Ahaha shit man! That was nice. 10s easy.

Haha yo this is nice, get at me if you feelin a collab

Haha thanks man, nothin personal, you pretty good.

Haha nice, yo check my slimy G diss and tell me what you think.

Homie, you had 0 punchlines.

How you say you gonna get noticed and buy 16 cars but then you come right back and say your pockets swollen? Dont make no sense.

Post first

You need to learn how to spell homie

Are you serious? Well, back to the lab again.

Haha wow, why did you even waste your time dissin him? Nice

Very nice, very rare to see as well.

Dude, don do this to yourself again..... you make yourself look pathetic....

I think you should go and talk to ill wizzy... you somewhat on his level. Ahaha

Thanks for the lucky 7, it can always be perfect.

I rate on overall quality, I liked a few parts so I gave it an 8, nothing personal, I just call them how I see them. And you can check my last diss I just posted.

Aha I like lean like a hypotenuse and bruce banner manners lol shit was Iight

Battle me

you dumb

I don understand your bars man!!! Lmao Battle me

YOUR WAAACK!!!!

How the fuck! is this number be one on the charts?!

Are you retarded?

You need to turn this into a track, no fuckin joke Ill put this shit under my label... Contact me

LMAO!! wow man, that shit was funny as fuck! eatin ya feet. Haha very nice, yo go check my ill wizzy diss, I didn even know he came at me lol respect this shit had me weak

Ahaha! Ahh shit! Thats your lyrics homie! Down the drain!

Haha wow your just terrible. Look forward to a come back in 3 2 1 check the listings!

Lmao Ahaha wow so I stills just read your shit. YOU SUCK! KEEP YOUR DAY JOB AND STOP RAPPING YOU NON FLOW HAVING LYRICLESS FUCK and I just recently found out there was scoring! 0!!!! AHAHA AHAHAAHAHAAHAHA!! ENSAYNE STRIKES AGAIN! P.s. I am high off my ass right now, but can still recognize the quality in your lyrics, which none was detected, I seriously suggest you find another hobby, maybe model air planes. peace out homie and better luck next time!

Lmao Ahaha wow so I stills just read your shit. YOU SUCK! KEEP YOUR DAY JOB AND STOP RAPPING YOU NON FLOW HAVING LYRICLESS FUCK AHAHAAHAHAAHAHA!! ENSAYNE STRIKES AGAIN! P.s. I am high off my ass right now, but can still recognize the quality in your lyrics, which none was detected, I seriously suggest you find another hobby, maybe model air planes. peace out homie and better luck next time!

Listen, I didn even take time to read your shit, but I can say one thing, get off wayne dick, ill wizzy, lil wayne ripoff, you told on your own crack house with a tip off, Haha, I don even know if really happened, but I know one thing, you need to stop rappin, clips for a audience, they never stop clappin, a snippet for a my fans, they never stop snappin, shit happens, but your case is closed, like an unsolved mystery, your history hoes GOOD NIGHT WISCONSIN! LOLOLOLOL