i was listening to wu tang clan aint nuthin ta fuck wit by the wu
tang clan (of course), and i thought i would try to hi...
steve irwin line...beast. solomon jin line...beast. good diss
lmfao.
i think you win round 2. alot of good punchlines, and i think your
flow was better than your first round. but yup, nice diss
shut the fuck up rock and roll. this was alright i liked your first
one better. not as many punches...imma go read his now. lol
damn. punches galore. i also think you had a better flow than he
did. ummm..yeah, enough said this was sick. "might as well LEAVE,
cause im RAKING you". geesh lol
damn that astro turf line was sick. nice punches in this one. good
diss. cows arent bulls...just for future references
This shit was sweet. You started it out so fucking sick...like
seriously those schemes were freakin beast. But yeah this whole
script was just wonderful imagery...just wonderful lol. Sometimes I
couldnt catch the flow but I was kinda reading fast cuz Im in class
lmao. Lol. Good shit
Lmao. Yeah no dickriding this was dope. That nunchuck shit was
sweet and the snorlax line was dope...awesome
Your second verse was way better than your first verse but your
flow was good throughout the whole thing. Actually I think all your
rhymes were on point. The only thing I really think you might wanna
work on is like your content cuz some of the time I dont understand
what youre even talking about lmao...like fuck the fans? What?
Lmao, but that line ensayne quoted was really good lmao and also
that breakfast and lunch line was dope. Good Job.
I told you cobra...I told you. Bludie that was so harsh lmfao I
love it. Good for a freestyle but I still think it killed him,
nothin much else to say. Nice.
Lol. That was really hard to hear but that dude in the light blue
sounded real nice, although that may have been prewritten. Haha.
You sounded kinda sorta nervous. Lol, you had a lot of filler, but
its dope to see someone freestyle from this site lol. You should do
it again but with a better camera and not such a loud crowd.
lmao...whatta classic
can somebody say epic?...i can...EPIC. lol. this beat is dope..well
its epicly dope. therefore. i feel like some of your lines are too
long...like in syllables, they dont match, so they dont flow...then
again i could be reading it wrong. but its a cool story. all gory
and what not. not to be nerdy, but this is some lord of the rings
type shit lmao. not too many multies, but stories are different...i
understand. so yeah. good job, and have a good tomorrow.
Lmao. Phenom said meat balls and santo said he would rape a bear.
Hahahaha. That was great!
So pretty much after that veins of dope fiends line, this shit got
good, like it had perfect flow throughout, but it only started
getting interesting after that line. But chyeah this was really
good lyrically wise, especially that all caps line, good job
It was alright. Nothin spectacular, but your rhymes are very good,
your lines are kinda long though. But yeah your content coulda been
more creative. Ummmm I think thats all.
It was alright. The flow wasnt awful but you coulda used multies.
Ummmmmm it had a good message but was mostly telling the story and
hoping things get better which I already knew. So uhhh yeah, good
job?
That was.......cool? Another thing that isnt my style....oh
wells... Also, sheep travel in flocks not schools and its lamb
chops, not steak. But uhhhh what happened? Cuz you killed the kid
which was mistaken as a sheep, and as you washed him out in the
sink some dude named Fred killed you? WTF? You see how random that
is? Thats why I feel you have forced rhymes sometimes cuz you dont
always know how to connect stuff. Like that whole sheep part made
sense but then it got random...and a little random is good, but
this is too random.
This wasnt a very good diss. The rhyming was cool. And I liked that
rage against the machine and also that Haiti line, but you didnt do
much dissing. Yup
It sounded like you were trying to exhaust all the multies that you
could lol. But hahahaha at two sets of twins. Yeah it was alright.
my life
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.03.10
You need to work on your rhymes. That shit was really generic. Use
multies and try to focus on the topic instead of going off on a
tangent....didnt really like this though cuz I dont like deep
posts. But thats just me.....
lol. i still didnt think it was that good. and LMAO...ive actually
heard of hipposomethingBIGWORDaphobia, lol. the only good line
REALLY was that att line, but when i read it, it didnt make sense
without the explanations, everything else was self explanatory.
lmao...sorry?...also coincidentally and vocabulary dont rhyme
~Karma~
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.03.10
you emo...lol. this was cool i suppose...you know my feelings on
emotional posts. but you really started getting sad here. reminded
me of grime mixed with ensayne lol. anyways, how come you did that
three line, one line, three line, one line thingy? lol. that makes
me confused. i guess its cool lol, i prefer your more egotistical
verses. but then again what do i know?.....a lot actually. lmao.
liked smoke a lot, didnt like cobras. lol sorry cobra, just dont
really get it...even though you explained the lil wayne
joke...iono. i just dont know...smoke a lot flowed nice though.
The Plot
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.03.10
FIRST OF ALL. that line in all caps was freakin sick...it just
flowed so elegantly...SECOND OF ALL...you keep saying consistency,
but i think thats what youre missing. because you start off nicely,
your rhymes are good, but then you say individual and rhyme with
grammar school, and maybe you gots an accent cuz i dont see how
that flows together. same with pivotal and gene pool...but besides
that, you flow nicely. but maybe you TRY to use big vocab?
iono...but maybe thats just me...cuz i usually just write without
trying to fit in all sorts of big words, unless they fit
nicely...but maybe you just use those on a regular basis...I DONT
KNOW YOU, SHIIIIT...lol...watch him quote this line at me "Now for
illeterates who cant comprehend the shit"...LOL. but for reals,
that was nice, maybe you should try more metaphors...lol i bet you
would kill that shit, but chyeah sorry for making you so angry
GAWRSH...lol. i think thats all i have to say
I dont know what these people were talking about. This wasn good.
Most of it really didn rhyme to good which makes the flow suck
ass. And you were sayin some random shit...sounded like a poor
version of birdman....start using multies and actually think about
your line concepts...heres a ten
Teehee..
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.02.10
Honest opinion? This wasnt good. I actually thought you had a nice
flow, but those were SERIOUSLY elementary rhymes. I mean I dont
like to say that cuz a lot of people claim that some of the shit I
listen to is simple, but seriously, this rap had no content. I
mean, you coulda done some analogies without being dirty. Geesh.
Its not a limit of creativity, just a limit of cussing....so all in
all...didnt like it. HERES A TEN
Is this a rap? If so, I think you need help on your flow, if it was
a poem than thats different. Cuz the lines didn really match at
all if it was a rap...lengthwise...Also. I felt like you were kinda
saying random things and got off topic. Like I could tell you would
start with an idea but it kinda just trailed off. Ummm I can think
of anything else to say...
i like this. you know why i like this? cuz its about EVERYTHING.
not just serious situations, the bad times AND the good times. i
personally prefer to focus on good times, but i do like to see it
all. ANYWAYS. "I believe in originality, but I also believe in goin
with the flow." NOW THAT, is like one of the most relatable lines I
have ever read, even if it isnt rap. also...the color green is the
best color...GREEN GOES BEASTMODE. anyways good post.
I would agree with bludie as I normally do lmao...I read both and
flowman took it, but this post really wasnt that good, like all the
flow and rhymes were on point, but it was pretty fuckin generic.
And I understand he prolly knows little to nothing about bunnyz but
yeah I say he wins, just not the best diss when it comes to
punches. And lol at dumbass subzer0
holy fucking fuck. that was sick as fuck. GREAT JOB. nothing else i
can say but pure epicness.
you really need work on your flow. besides that it was pretty
good...oh you did have some random lines in there that didnt fit
with anything, but iono....yeah, good job?
i think the prodigies KNOWS aftermath...or somethin like
that...iono. but im pretty sure they arent the same person, and if
they are its ok, cuz the prodigies is two people so it coulda been
the other dude.
hell yeah, thats what im talkin bout...that dr line was sick...two
subliminals and shit, i liked that lmao...ALSO...you didnt need all
the caps, cuz some of it wasnt in need of the extra help to connect
it, but yeah, this was fuckin sick..the only line i didnt get was
the nascar one, but still, it was amazing.
lol...well you know i dont like deep verses, but i didnt think the
flow was off. it was all pretty much good, except for the content
which is just me bein a douche lol...good job.
This was actually pretty good, you did fall off a lot though. For
instance messages and presage doesnt rhyme. Also inhale and female
is SUCH a bad rhyme. You should really work on your multies cuz it
seems you cant get your flow down, no offense. Lmao. But it was
still pretty good, better than I expected.
STILL ILL
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 02.20.10
that was a sick beat and a sick flow...awesome. you doing audio of
this? well you should...
Boooooooo
GLOVER
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 02.17.10
HAHAHAHA...your funny. lmao. i dont know what to tell you, cuz you
already know its good.
Warzone
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 02.17.10
dope dope dope...epicly epic...ummm...HOORAH! lol. this was nice.
it was in total GMN fashion...this pleases me....lol alright for
reals though, great job, and epic beat lol.
good flips. you started out great, i wasnt feeling that run out of
gas line, but you ended it nicely. i think you also got him in this
first round too. lol...no dickride...and lol at xxknycexx, as if he
knows what a punchline is.
i dont think misdirection and message rhyme to good lol....um also,
there really wasnt too many good punches...i liked that last line
though lol. but yeah, iono, i didnt like your punches.
that was pretty bad..you lack flow and punchlines
MC Hype 2
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 02.17.10
oh damn...those rebuttals were really sick. and lol at the KC
line..haha. great diss, i think you beat his second diss, even
though i havent read either one of your guys first disses lol.
OH MY GOD THIS IS EPIC...EPICLY EPIC. sick beat. and you shadow
boxed my aura, thats like the sickest way to die...props on this
one. great diss lol.
pretty good diss, coulda used more punchlines, but that fuckin
text/class line is fuckin dope.
Dope ending lines, and that fuckin Aladdin line was nice lmao.
Sweet diss
i never used a rhyming dictionary. you improve your rhymes, as your
vocabulary grows...and i think a rhyme dictionary is basically
biting.
Fuck a vocab. Thats not important but you do need better multies,
and your metaphors are actually nice sometimes but your flow is
off when I read it. Also. You were just sayin some random shit cuz
it rhymed, like that Kim possible line, WTF? Lol
Rising
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 02.02.10
Sick shit. That LOW line was freakin sweet. Great verse
Yeah it was alright, way to make me feel like a douche lol.
Lmao that Uranus line was dope. This was on point though, the flow
was deadly great job
Use multies... Your good but your flow is off
Ummmm.... Iono what everyone else was listening to, cuz to me this
was just eh. Yeah it was alright... Great quality though, but I
dont think the lyricism was any good, and joka sounded like he
wanted to cry lmao. Iono, maybe I just wasnt feeling the topic, or
maybe im just a hater..... Who knows these things?
That was sick... That piss in my territory shit was dope. Great job
Lol at blackanese dragon that was sick. Music shop. Get with it or
get gone.
it was ok...you always do that fuckin thing with the suffixes...and
it doesnt really rhyme...fatality/mentality...but chyeah, lol at
the reference to me haha. but your lines were funny, they just
didnt rhyme to well lol
HAHAHAHAHA...that was hilarious...your hook was funny. lmao...oh
and this is how you spell bloody..lmao...but for cereal this shit
was excellent, everything was clever lol. great job
OMFG this is epic...ROFLCOPTER!
That was fuckin dope. Lol at this is my game...and that was a sick
vaporized aids line lmao...lol great job
Your multies were good, well for the first half at least...they
started getting worse after your random three lines. Lmao... But
yeah I also think you need to work on the way you word your verse,
cuz no offense but your lines sound a little corny the way you say
them...lol but way to diss grime lmfao
I agree with stillmatik....it was ok at best...you need work on
flow and need to start using multies.
the beginning was pretty random...i could tell you were just
looking for rhymes...but it was an interesting story...i dont know
why people always like to tell sad stories...the fuck is wrong with
this emo world?...but i digress...it was ok, you know your missing
multies...but chyeah good job
this was freakin illmatik stillmatik! lol...but for cereal this
beat is so chill, and your lyrics are so chill so it matches
perfectly. damn your on some random shit. but its awesome. great
job
wasnt that bad...you did a three line rhyme which is fuckin weird
lol...but it wasnt TOO horrible..it wasnt the best though...you
need to use multies...they improve skill...
lmao...that was fuckin sick as a dick in a pickle...ummm sorry that
was weird lol. but for cereal this beat is ill....and you killed
it..your flow is so nice..lol. and lmao at the jessica simpson
line..great verse
There was nothing clever in this...I would agree that your getting
better but this was just stating things...you gotta work on
creativity and your rhymes still need help
Well I don like the topic lmao but yeah what ensayne said...more
punches and metaphors...I didn even know it was a story until the
end...and work on multies
Finale
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 01.07.10
Damn hype killed that shit, phenom did good too and grime was
decent, but geesh hype started to sound like an astro for a quick
second lol. Great shit. Lol at double bubble flow
Lmfao that last part was fuckin awesome. Hahaha. And way to get
personal geesh lol. Nice job
respect
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 01.07.10
Ummm yeah. Like I said your not better than me, and you don
completely understand multies. Your metaphors weren really that
good and it you got a little gay in the end there...but it wasn
that bad, yet your still not better
Lol you sound very monotoned, but the lyrics were good. Lol, not
too many punches but you got personal as fuck so it was all good.
Nice shit.
I.L.L
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 01.06.10
your first verse was really fuckin dope, that alpha/omega line was
SICK...and that immortal technique line was nice too...and hype
started out good, but got more average as he went on...but this was
an overall nice collab...fuckin long as fuck though...i hate you
for that...LMAO nice!
i still dont know why cobra even mentions vocab...lmao...but yeah
this was tight...great story, finally something that doesnt involve
random acts of violence. and i cant even tell the difference
between you guys..lmao, those verses were really similar...great
job.
LMFAO at a black mans ass hole...HAHAHA...that was
great...lmao..iono why you started quoting though...lol...but this
was fuckin dope...oh and lol at the d.a.r.e. classes line..haha
great job
That was fuckin sick...everybody did good. I would quote a line
from everybody, but there are too many lmao. Great job
Lol at the last line not rhyming with anything. And lmfao bathing
in urine. Great shit!
Lol...sorry, but unlike Toni I kinda got bored lmao....... It was
just a whole bunch of "I will" so it started getting redundant, but
you did have some pretty nice lines in here so you did do a good
job, I geuss Im just not into this style
GREAT ENDING LINE...and nice flow...but you didnt have a TREMENDOUS
amount of punches...although, that razer line was dope... and also
that malnourished line...lmao. still a good job.
ummmm....i didnt really like flickers verse at all...the lines were
not even, and you werent saying much...but on the otherhand, BLUDIE
KILLED THAT SHIT...a werewolf with a bulletproof vest? Oh my
God...that was epic...nice job bludie...lmao..no offense
flicker...cuz i know you can write better...
"bathe in holy water, streets is my alma mater " FREAKIN
AWESOME...nice shit..lmao..and no it doesnt make sense...lol but i
love it
Stay Fly
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 01.04.10
lol...i feel like this is a repost...but there were some lines i
didnt understand, mostly cuz i didnt know what you were reffering
to...lol...good job though anyways... lol at cumming on a great
dane
lol...this was sick...lmfao at punting the clown...nice diss, and
great way to end it lol...your humorous
that last line was fuckin amazing...and that soul to extinguish the
flame was sick too..great job on this one..
I would agree with pro that ckrisis did better, lol but he sounded
really goofy, and ensayne sounded quite monotone, and he also had
some flow issues, plus both of your verses sounded kinda low. But
they were pretty good verses, not really my style bit it wasn bad
Wow that was nice...I mean the rhymes were horrible lmfao...but
that was such a nice story....I loved the two perspective thing.
Great job, but for cereal you need to work on your rhyming skills
LOL at that line eazy quoted...that was awesome. but your diss to
bludie went weak...lmfao...but why do you rap three lines in a row?
i hate when you do that...its annoying... yeah you started off
good, and it got weaker as i kept going lmfao...good job though, it
wasnt completely horrible or anything, i just know you can go
harder...
who was this aimed to? im confuzzled..either way, it wasnt that
good...the only nice line was that easy mac shit...and some things
didnt even rhyme...imma give you a nine so you dont get butthurt
SOOOOO im not sure if idiosyncratic really works, but imma let that
slide, HOWEVER, cynosure is a noun, and joka used it as a verb so
chyeah that doesnt work...and ensayne...what does egotistically
subliminal mean?, but yeah...joka you need to work on flow, and the
only thing wrong with ensaynes was, it prolly coulda been more
egotistical..i mean it was pretty nice...but you started hurting
people in your verse, and that doesnt really mean anything about
egotistical...lol...good job?
lol...this was nice, but i think simp got you...however, you coulda
made it nicer by switchin your led zeppelin/rock n roll lines, that
way it was a harder punch...and my favorite line was "my uppercut
put your head in the clouds, now your sleepin with angels".
swweeeet
Lol at the backwards lines lol. My favorites were both the first
two and the tv show lines lmao nice shit
Your flow was perfect but I couldn really hear your lyrics cuz I
couldn really here you lmao. Thats the only thing
Lmao youll be back. That was a sweet diss though, that down for 40
line was nice. It was all pretty much epic. peace
Optimism
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.31.09
Don worry mc damage I got it.... Your a whore lol. This is too
deep for an immature douche like me to relate to and your flow was
very weak BUT I suppose since there are feelings and emotions and
what not this post does have a lot of soul so its good, not rap
good just woman venting good. Smiley face....
That was good... Lmao there were major flow issues though lol. But
the story was pretty good lol
It was pretty good. You need work on setting up your metaphors
though you can just be saying like all the time, and you should
work on more creative ones too, but this wasn bad at all, this is
the kind of content I prefer to read over imagery and what not
Lmao that was good, you had some nice punches but nothing
remarkable lol. But yeah that flow was nice. However next time you
want me to read something as long as this Im not gonna lol this was
way too long
KillaHex
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.30.09
Lmfao. That fuckin "so far ahead of my time" line was so sick...
And lmao at the grill line and lmao at the online games line lol
that was awesome
That was flippin awesome!!! Eazys verse was good but dbox fuckin
killed that shit. Lmao that hard on line was hilarious
this is a high quality collab...people pay attention, this is how
you do it...astros bitch!
oh my god. that was epic...now thats the rida i know and love...no
homo...lmao...but yeah those first four lines, awesome, that homer
simpson scheme, awesome! great job on this one.
lmfao...omg your metaphors are fuckin amazing...lol, that hip hops
air line was siiiiccckkk...lmao...plus your post was short so i
actually cared to read it..lmao..great job
Lol at realeyez. But that was so fuckin fantastic. Frees Ferrari
line, lights priest lines, and tokios weed line were all fuckin
epic great job everyone
Lmfao that was awesome that plan to fail shit was epic... But the
bestest part was tokios shit talking lol nice
LMFAO...this was freckin epic...lmao at tokios line... "YOU KNOW
THAT WAS SHIT. WHAT THE FUCK HE GET A TEN FO?!" LOL awesome
yeah the flow was off...like you were forcing it to work...it wasnt
horrible though.
LMFAO that was really good. those lines with the albums in it, were
great, and i liked that "i admit you can spit, not rapping but deep
throating " line....that was funny hahahaha. i didnt see his diss,
but this was great lmao..good job
oh my god that was fuckin epic...everyone KILLED that shit...nice
job people...holy fuck, for serious that was nice...
this list fails...no mr. u, tokio, status flow, FUCK IT...your
missing the entire astros list...and king cobra isnt better than
me...lmao
LOL. its funny cuz that prolly isnt the real twisted.
fuck toast..vocab means shit...i would much rather read this shit
from profound than some vocab post...but this was fuckin ILL...fav
line "glock nines pop spines n cause chalk lines" that was so epic
you fuckin gangster...lol
i really liked them both but sometimes lil a wasnt rhyming lmfao...
like his first two lines werent really rhymes...but like all his
content is so sick. and cobra is so hard to follow..lmfao..like
when you start listing stuff its hard to follow your train of
thought, it was still good no doubt, im just not really feelin your
listing things style, but thats just me, you do what you gotta
do...all in all this was pretty good. nice job fellas...
so your lacking multies, but that didnt even hurt your flow...like
all the lines were perfect in timing, so it flowed nicely...and the
youtube thingy didnt work, but luckily i know the instrumental so i
played it in my head when i was reading. LOL...good job.
that was insane...twenty minutes? geesh you musta been hella angry
lmao. "make you toss a salad, body parts on a thousand islands"
that line was dopetacular! geesh you went personal as a
muffucka...great post, but damn...slow your roll lol its only the
internet, no need to get worked up...LOL...great job
that was fuckin epic..you had metaphors out the ass and it was
amazing...lmao..great job. this was perfect
LOL gross. i actually thought that was clever though lmfao
lol your gonna hate me for this...but none of your punches were
excellent. like they were good, but nothing WOWing. i was expecting
more.
OMG...that left 4 dead line was fuckin amazing...great fuckin job.
lmao.
you know he would rape both of you right?
not even joking i think phenom took it...lmao..but im not gonna
explain cuz its already over..
oh my god...now thats how its done...imagery at its
finest...FUCK...desanto is a demon, and hype is an oracle with
bloody pores in his horoscope....OH JESUS that was insane...GREAT
job...loved it...
nice flow...i liked your maze/two a days lines the best...lmao. the
only part i was confuzzled about was the last line...i didnt get
it. lmao..good job though.
you had some really good stuff..lmao..like that dick and pinky
line...but the only thing is, you waste some wordplay on just
filler lines...like the first two had some word play, but it wasnt
really a diss. and then sometimes you point things out that dont
need to be pointed out. like, dateline/pedofile monster is kinda
obvious to recognize. oh yeah, and chubby chase isnt an actor..lol
its chevy chase..LMFAO..but good job nonetheless. like you had some
hard hittin punches...that sonic line was sicktacular! good job.
DAMN this is hard to judge...i kinda wanna call it a tie
too....FFUUUUUUCCCCKKKKK...cuz phenom came with that...fuck you i
already won shit,...and hype came with that...you better not close
your eyes cuz Ill slit your nuts off shit...DAMN IT...im gonna give
it to phenom, cuz he was more diverse...he went from earthquakes,
to shooting hype, to chicken, to cancer, to fuckin his girl, to the
army, to vomiting and shit...hype was mostly like...im gonna kill
you, im gonna kill you, im gonna kill you, im pretty much gonna
kill you...BUT he did have some sick ass rebuttals. it was VERY
VERY CLOSE...but im gonna give it to phenom....lol hypes gonna hate
me.
LOL...the last line didnt rhyme...but it was like the best lines.
HAHA...good job. also haha at calling him the whitest kid i
know...HAHA..thats a funny tv show though for reals..lmao
that was so sick. everyone did good. and everyone went all
gangster..LMFAO..great collab.
LOL at phenoms wax on wax off...LOL...and lol at hypes flip about
the urinal and the soap...lmao...that was good, but i think phenom
took it, cuz he had more punches...even though he had a longer
verse..you should limit your verses to a standard number of lines
next time...but anyways yeah im giving it to phenomenon
DAMN..lmao..i bet he regrets it, and if he doesnt hes retarded.
LMAO...but that religion line was nice...however i found this
especially sick..."Cause Im doing thing your guns cant, when I let
my lungs blast.. " just damn. good job
sooo phenomenon had a better flow in my opinion...well in some
parts...but its a battle, and desanto KNOWS how to
battle...lmao..his punches hit harder...and were more
consistent...phenom had a lot of filler sorta kinda...but yeah..my
vote goes to desanto..(no bias) lol
LOL...i think he got you, but that ass typing line was funny as
fuck. you should work on setting up your punchlines...cuz you put
them out there, and then you follow them up with filler... so put
the filler BEFORE the punchline and it can be better...awesome
"everyday was fuckin fresh" LOL i caught that subliminal!
lmfao..but this was cool..i would agree with everything mr. u
said...but just saying, it wouldnt hurt to have good rhymes with a
good meaning..LOL..good job...stupid poetry..lmao
LMFAO nice outro...and my favorite line was about him changing
names but still not rapping good..LOL. i didnt read his diss, but
this was funny...and also you should start using multies...lol
otherwise good shit..lmao
lmfao..finally this shit gets posted...but chyeah, lets see anybody
come better than this...lol its funny cuz they cant
lmfao... you guys are funny...dbox had sick metaphors, and so did
rida, but grime kinda failed with scene kings/mean
things..LOL..haha. good job
LMAO...dope shit..nice period flowing line...lmao and also
subway...LOL..good job
LMAO...i was loling at your thunder thighs line...LOL...good job
LOL why would you even bring SK back? its not like it ever, EVER
ran shit, so the point would be...well there wouldnt be a
point...so yeah... good verse though..LMAO.
LMFAO..at the last line...haha...but my favorite was when you did
the math problem ROFLMFAO..that shit was great...good job
LMAO she has a penis I KNEW IT! LOL good job...i dont know if she
even does disses...but that really doesnt matter lool...got
her..good job
lmao at rays reaction...but my favorite part was when you said he
was super fresh and shit compacted together...LMFAO...man that was
great..
you still have flow issues. lol. let me teach you about a multi
syllable rhyme...see how you rhymed your first two end rhymes with
blow spots/get lost...well it could be way better with blow
spots/show stops or get lost/next spot...i mean i know that wouldnt
make sense with the lines, but the rhymes are better, so you gotta
practice tryin to make shit do that...cuz it flows better when blow
rhymes with show and spot rhymes with stop instead of blow not
rhyming with get...it just makes it sound funny...your content is
good though...i liked that last line, you just need to work on the
flow
doesnt matter, as long as you let him see your penis ensayne...LOL
lmao..cuz i can care right?
...YOUUUUUU SUCK ASS AND NUTS...AT THE SAME TIME..WITH YOUR BIG ASS
MOUTH...lmfao
that fucking spelling thing with all the letters in the beginning
was fuckin sick...like normally its lame, but you pulled it off
nicely. great job on this whole diss.
what the eff is that? LMFAO... the astros would pwn your face in.
did you see what happened to ensayne? ROFLCOPTER
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
hello?
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
im gonna eat your babies! but only if you ask nicely
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
penis?
8.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
lol...that would be so funny....oh god of irony..please allow that
to happen....eight, cuz of last night..
7.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
yeah...what that mothafucka said...naw but for reals...this was
some type shit....LMFAO...naw im just joking..you suck zebra ass,
you fucking NOOB. seven cuz your cute though
LOL....dudes gonna have to live in mexico...ROFLCOPTER...
DESANTO
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
LOL...naw lets keep shit astro from now on...LMAO
lmao...dont get your hopes up ensayne...he has the history, lmao.
all odds are against him
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.13.09
damn..i was gonna give you props, cuz i thought you had gotten
better...oh wells, once twisted always twisted. lmao...
DAMN...that was fuckin sick...like DAMN...it literally saved his
life..nice one on this shit. lmao
your flow is so fuckin ill...every fuckin time, you have sick
flow... nice shit
LMFAO at tokios last line...and rofl at desantos first two... and
NICE at cardones swine flu line...LMAO...good job, im not gonna
lie, with no dickriding whatsoever...you killed him. astros, and
you already know
SSSSSOOOOOOOOO....i was dissappointed cuz it was a story...but all
your rhymes were good and shit...i was just sad, cuz i thought
there would be punchlines...and all your lines are hella
long.LMFAO..but yeah...good job
lmao...i understand the simplicity of this verse...cuz yeah, his
sucked. LMAO. a ten for talkin bout squirrels
ROFLCOPTER AT MC MAURICE
Fantasize
8.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.12.09
you have major flow issues.....lmfao....it was cool though i guess,
if your into that sorta thing...but i really liked this
line...."Thats an oxymoron, just like how you think naughty is
nice"...yeah that was cool, but you gotsta learn about multi
syllable rhymes...cuz you didnt use ANY. lmao...and your lines were
all out of wack, not very close in size so it puts off the
flowingismishness
holy jebus...that went hard. got all personal and shit. that was
epic...epicly epic. LMFAO... GOOD JOB
LMAO that was awesome...rofl at cardones wally world line...and all
of desantos metaphors were sick. lmao...Astros run it, cant stop
this shit.
i would agree with bludie...why the fuck do i ALWAYS agree with
bludie? lmao...either way...it was cool. grime was sorta off with
the rhymes, but it was cool...and like twisted said...work on the
multies cobra..you started out good, but you started getting off
point
you need multies...basic rhymes makes a basic verse. i guess it was
good...eh...im not into deep shit, but chyeah work on multies.
LMFAO at the last line...you were just bein a bully, it wasnt even
like a diss. ROFLCOPTER. but seriously this was sick. good
job...and stop being lame dawn...putting a six on a diss is the
gayest shit evar...
Astro.
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.11.09
see guys...this is how its done....all the other crews think their
the shit, cuz they can talk about the same boring ass story with
the same boring ass content...this is what true creativity looks
like...Astros never cease to run shit bitches!
damn...that mother nature under the weather part was sick. lmao.
and ROFL at the last line and the parenthesis, hahaha. lmao...good
job...and also cosign what dbox said. lmao
damn hype killed that shit. and flicker didnt do too shabby.
lmao...all your content is good, but you gotsta work on the actual
rhymes. try using multi syllable rhymes. improves flow
tremendously.
i liked bludies the best, but everyone else did awesomely as well.
great job...and that beat is fuckin raw.
so i know it all made sense...but i cant remember what ANY of it
was about. LMFAO. good job
lmao at your last line...but i think you should put commas in
between words when your just listing adjectives. lmao..like in the
first two lines for instance, that way we know its not supposed to
form a sentence. lmao. good job though
lol...you said my flows immaculate twice in the same verse. but i
liked this line the mostest..."Faulty spitters with flickers in ya
fuse"
haha...its funny cuz its all you
lmfao at the mommas tits line...you always have good flow, but its
weird, cuz you have an odd structure, but i can still read
it...hmm..either way good job
lmfao...you got personal on the dude, and he didnt even know you
were battling. LMAO..good job
no wu?
that was fuckin sick...i dont know why olivia was laughing.
lmao...but yeah nice verse, and what a bitch at kid ex for giving
him a 9. LOL
ummmm.....lol i dont think this is what ensayne wanted. lmao...but
it was sick anyways. lol yeah what bludie said....damn bludie
always makes excellent points about purdy much everything. LOL.
well i have to go desanto...but realeyez was like one diamond on
his chain away from beating him. LOL. yeah this was a close one,
but i have to agree with bludie about the topic thing. great job to
both of you, but i gotta give it do desanto.
LMFAO...i laughed at that same line profound...this was a great
diss.. and i also laughed at that joe budden/method man line.
ROFL...great job
i wasnt feeling your flow at all....lmao...and you use suffixes to
much....well maybe their not suffixes, but you use the end of the
words too much instead of rhyming the whole word...and down
syndrome doesnt rhyme with collar bone or danger zone, so i dont
know how that got in their... you should try to use more multies,
cuz that last line was sick...but work on the rhyming...
click me
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.09.09
i hate you
lol that was cool.
so i didnt read it again..cuz i read it this one time, and i
remember it was hella long to get through, and i didnt understand
all of it...but yeah i thought i did pretty good. LOL. good job?
yeah, yes, definitely good job!
p.s. LOL its funny cuz he wants us to call him sideways fuck.
i feel like i have to wash my self now because i read your post.
lol. but this shit was sick... in both forms. lmao...fav line...
"OH NO THERES NO BABY INSIDE, THERE GONNA TAKE MY LISCENSE THIS
TIME" lol and you spelled C section wrong. lmao
lmao...my favorite part in simps verse was when he was talkin about
bob marley. LOL that was funny, oh and the end part with the
flinstones references hahaha your comedical...as for
stillmatik...lol at his dustbowl reference. HAHAHA. but besides
that, this is what i have to say...STILLMATIK IS ON SOME OTHER
SHIT. like for seriousness, you got an inner demon dude, gettin all
religious and shit. nice verse though. lol good job from both of
you
that whole jesus part was sick. nice rhymes
haha your such a revolutionary. but in all seriousness this was
awesome. all that number shit was confusin me though. lmao. but
then it all made sense in the end. great job
HAHAHA...nice ending that made me laugh.. i also liked when you
said he was white washed like a black cop..HAHA..so
stereotypical...but my favorite was the line with fresh in
it...HAHAHAHA. that was awesome. GOOD SHIT.
LMFAO...mine was better...jp jp..but yeah good shit
LOL AT FLABBERGASTED....haha good post.
that was sick...kassions second verse was far better than his
first. LOL...i like longer lines...it sounds better...and
stillmatiks verse was awesomely amazing. good job
LOL...you had major flow and spelling issues...HAHAHA..sorry it was
funny...but it got better in the end....imma give you a ten for
bein a bunny. HAHAHA
that was cool....even though i hate deep verses...but it was cool i
guess...i just get bored from bein so serious...anyways nice
job...but this was my favorite line....."and like the Towers we
fell like Jenga, only nobody wins"
TWISTED
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.03.09
LMFAO....this is better than my toe lint diss
awesome...lol. and i understand why they think your mr. u.
now...you are quite talented
that was sick... you guys both said some real witty shit...the
first three lines in the third verse flowed perfectly rida. and
this was an awesome line from hype... "the only thing that matters
is the genius behind my eyelids". great job
ssssooooooooooooooo.....mermaids and mermen actually have
genitalia....and infact they are just wearin fish suits??? lol ok
if you say so...and lmao cuz you killed her with sex....and another
thing...this was a funny line..."I got blown out his blow hole it
was so awfully sick" HAHA...gross
that was a sick ending...it was all serious and what not, but i
guess thats cool. LMAO...nice job anyways
WOW...that was sick. nice punches, nice multies, nice flow...loved
it.
LOL AT THIS ATTEMPT
LMFAO...that was epicly epic...
i liked it...it sounds like the end all, lmao...but i know it isnt
the real end all.
well sinced you asked for it...imma do it...lol gross....lets look
at the first rhyme...see how you rhymed untalented brain/unwashable
stain?...that was OK, but it is better if your multi is more on
point...for instance...UNTALENTED BRAIN will rhyme better with
UNBALANCED WITH GAME....what does that mean? how can you set that
up? i dont know its up to you.........thats were you gotsta be
creative and what not....now as for UNWASHABLE STAIN, you can rhyme
that better with UNSTOPPABLE NAME....can you see how that rhymes
much better than yours?...and then you rhymed mercy/poverty....that
wasnt too nice....MERCY can easily rhyme with WORKING, WORTHY,
LURKING, THIRSTY...the list goes on, and POVERTY can go with
PROPERTY, STOP HER PLEASE, WATCH HER SNEEZE...iono, somethin that
rhymes better....but its even better, if you rhyme the words before
it together... for instance...COMPASSION OR MERCY, can rhyme with A
BASHIN OR MERKING....see how that works out? multisyllable rhyme
schemes improve flow and make you look cool. lol...so just use that
shit, and stick to bein creative and what not...and you gots it...
lol. how mcawesome was that? mcLOL....haha
this was alright i suppose...you need help with your flow...it
should really be somethin else, but you might cry if i dont give
you a ten. so heres a ten...if you want more advice i can type you
a paragraphs...lmao look at me, givin advice, you would think im an
expert....AH, but i digress....penis
lmao...all true, all true...LOL
THAT....WAS...FUCKIN...DOPE....O...M....G... you merked
satan!...mad props. lmao...good job
FR3SHK1M0
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.02.09
WOW...i just read my comment, and geesh im a fuckin jerk. lol
FR3SHK1M0
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.02.09
lol...mine was definitely better. LMFAO...but yeah, i can help you
dont even fret...for one thing, you see how you did that thing
there with every other line rhyming...you gotsta make your two
lines into one line....for instance your "They call me freshkimo
cuz i live in the ice" is equal to my "polar bear jackets, candles,
no electronics". so yeah, you only really did four lines, but THATS
OK. im helping you... after that you can work on multies... which
you actually kinda have... but instead of doing these rhymes...live
in the ice/musics so nice....you should do these kinds....polar
bear/frozen hair...see how polar and frozen sorta rhyme? yeah stick
to that...and then just work on bein creative, and your as good as
me. LOL
ended it nicely...that was fuckin sick... great flow and nice
punches....favorite line... "And distribute the powder among my
bars to make my lines great,"....haha nice
that was all epic and whatever, but your first four lines. JESUS
CHRISTO...that was so ill..great job
well...you didnt really diss them much. lmfao but you did say some
sick shit. LOL. like this line... "i rap in spirits , cuz im a
uncontained demon" nice imagery...thumbs up!
ROFLCOPTER...i have to agree with what ensayne said...but what
really made me laugh was your second to last line. LMFAO that shit
was classic. HAHAHAHA. man your funny
that was nice...great ending line...and this line right here....
"Like pyramids as my shelter, Im fairly protected" that was real
sick. i havent read their shit, but im almost positive you win.
lmfao
LOL you must read a lot...that was sick. i like imagery stuff.
awesome
white ass
7.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.02.09
WHY DID YOU CAPITALIZE GOOD? THERE IS NO NEED FOR THAT
CAPITALIZATION
lmao...i already told you i dont like deep stuff, but i decided to
read it anyways..ROFL...and i guess it was cool, i know your all
emotional and what not, so i suppose it was straight from your soul
to my eyes, in that sense, good looks. oh yeah, here is a sick
line... "And when these cows want beef I bring the cattle to their
death" it just flowed so nicely... good job
white ass
0.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.02.09
YOU FORGOT THE SPACE BETWEEN "," AND "THATS" IN YOUR THIRD LINE
ROFLCOPTER! its funny cuz i did laugh at that line..hahahaha. that
was great. and lol at "half past u SUX a cock". what a great diss.
really good job, i always laugh at your complex metaphors
im giving it to ndi...he had multies and horrorcore shit...and ray
had horrorcore, but he was missing the multies...and desanto had
both, but i think ndi had more horrorcore, and real witty shit...so
yeah, my vote goes to ndi. there it is. lmao
alright.....FUCK...i really wanna vote for bludie because of two
things..." gotta question for yer necks...come here, lemme axe it"
LMFAO...and because his flow was amazing in that verse...but im
sorry...i HAVE to give it to hype because he came more horrorcore
then bludie did. and his multies were on point. so hype gets my
vote, but i really think if bludie woulda gone full out psycho like
i know he could, he coulda got him. lol.
PLEASE VOTE BEFORE YOU READ THIS, CUZ I DONT WANT YOU BEING
INFLUENCED BY MY WORDS...i like how everyone did nameplay...and
this was WAY FUCKIN CLOSE. this sucks cuz i feel like people are
gonna start to dick ride, but whatever. lmao...so im gonna have to
go with ensayne, because he had some real disguting shit, and nice
multies, which were the basis of this round. and that is not to
take ANYTHING away from realeyez and mr. u, cuz they both probably
woulda beat me this round. well either way, im just gonna say, fuck
this vote...it still goes to ensayne, but it could easily go to any
one of them. yeah, i hate you for making me judge.
lmfao at the KKK line.....classic
simplicity is so gay he makes super fresh feel uncomfortable
LMFAO...your so fuckin random
LMAO you humor me.
LMFAO at "I sense a pussy, vibrate". oh and those first lines were
very clever. great job on this one.
LMFAO.that was epicly epic. its funny cuz you dumped him in the
end. ROFL
lmao at the self prop giving! good job. i liked that parapylegic
line. rofl
yeah that was a nice flow, and youre right that was a sick first
line
lol. nash and hydruzes faces...meet my good friend pwnage. LOL
FK DISS 2
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.24.09
LOL..ended it nicely...loved the casper/ghost writer lines...and
this was awesome.."Your mentally challenged, not mentally
challenging" LOOL...good job
LOL at ensayne not knowing you were good...what a noob.
lmao...anyways nice verse. i hate you and your metaphorical ways.
you clever bastard!
LMFAO AT YOUR ENDING..nice shit though for real. im gonna say you
beat him lmao. oh and lol at your first two lines too. rofl...good
job
that was nice...and lmao at your ending. rofl
LOL at crookid...calm down, its only a rating, hes not gonna kill
himself over a zero. ROFL...and hes foreign so of course his
grammar is fucked up. lmao...oh and CC, i forgot to ask you...you
said in the beggining you had something to get off your chest.
lmao. and what exactly might that be? LOL
ROFLMFAO
LMAO...your effin weird...i like how you put COMPLETE at the end
there. lool..shoulda put CUMPLETE. ROFLCOPTER!
LOL... nice ending. and i would tell you that you need to work on
punchlines and creativity, but i WAS reading your lyrics, so i
understand the filler. lmao...oh and you had a nice flow on this
one..good job
LOL i agree with bludie..but yeah it was cool i guess. you know
what you should do? instead of hurtin yourself...drink your
problems away. lmao..jk thats stupid...but for reals, go play video
games...and take it out on some fuckin noobs. ROFLCOPTER
i liked it. you could use a little bit of more comples rhymes, but
you got your point across. great job. and i liked how you called
him out about the sexist shit...good move on your part. lmao
LOL...pwn to his face...and another LOL..cuz you said fucker up
when you were talking about grammer...fail. but good shit anyways.
lmao
it was ok i guess...i wasnt feeling your flow, and your lyrics were
decent at best. i liked the way you dissed desanto WAAAAYYY better
than gudsen. because when you dissed gudsen you said he was gay,
and just kept making stories up and shit. just work on sticking to
metaphors and being more creative..and work on your multies too.
rida diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.22.09
i actually like your diss more than their diss bunnyz. LOL...your
second lines in each verse were really dope. lol and you ended it
very nicely...lol nice dismount. HAHAHA...good job
this was alright i guess. lol...um ray didnt have too much
metaphors or wordplay, so i didnt think he came hard enough...no
homo...and rida had wordplay, but he didnt have too many hard
hitting punches...so yeah, i think you both could have come
harder...no homo again. LOL
GOD DAMNIT...didnt i tell you not to do one of these??....fail
its a good thing i didnt have to vote on this, jesus christ it was
close...i woulda said tie. lmao...but i bet you these douchers just
started agreeing with the first vote. lol...not all of them, but
some of them. LOL. but once again great battle, too close for me to
call. dont think you lost 5 0 breezy, you really lost 4.9 5, you
woulda PWNED a lesser opponent. props to realeyez too.
LOL...you know that one guy too? yeah dude that one guy with the
hair? and the eyes? DUUUUDEE....thats like my best friend.... I
ALWAYS GO TO THAT ONE PLACE WITH HIM...and we always drink that one
drink....its funny cuz he looks like that one other guy from that
one show.LOL...this was funny btw. lol good one
MMMMMMMMMMM....that diss got my penis erect. can we collab? i wanna
GO HARD with you...
you dumbass...i went under his name, cuz i know his
password...everyone knows his password...and as a matter of fact,
your fallen knight so suck it.
im gonna say rida cuz he kept me more entertained...better
punchlines and flow...FK wasnt too bad. it just sounded like a lot
of filler lines...and also...QUESTION! is fallen knight CC? cuz i
think he is. lol
ummm....stillmatik destroyed him lol...that was an easy win..but
stillmatik came hard as fuck..."L.egend like Smith heart of a
Spartan I Will leave Red beaten and parted" that was fuckin
dope....i mean awesome LOOL...but yeah he had way better lyricism
and way better punchlines. stillmatik gets my vote...oh and red
rum....shoulders doesnt rhyme with louder. LMFAO
LOL...profounds first line killed zay los whole verse. LMAO...that
was a dope line, and lol at dirty pee in a cup...good job..PROFOUND
FTW
geesh...its a good thing you dont hate me, cuz i would be scared of
any diss you might dish out..lol good job...and way to get
personal..ouch
this was fucking close...but im gonna have to give it to
simplicity...and this is why....although i feel like bunnyz had
better flow, simp dissed him in almost every line..lol and simp
ended it fuckin hilariously...so if bunnyz didnt spit so much
filler it woulda been dope...oh and i like how bunnyz went personal
in the end too. lol...but i just think simps consistent punchlines
were awesome... loved the head and shoulders thing...and
bunnyz...loved the come hard/limp scripts. LOOL...again it was
really close but simp takes it for me..PENIS
lol at what hype said...but yeah that was a good diss...the only
thing is, when you said nigger, you should have used somethin else
instead of wigger...LOL lame rhyme right there. but overall good
diss.
that was fuckin dope...all gross and evil and what not..LOVED IT.
lmao..i liked bludies " Find us up in yer cupboard chillin with the
moths an shit"...LOL....and i liked bunnyz "head to clit, yea i hit
her, sent that bitch to hell in two coffins"...fuckin dope...great
job to the both of you.
that was dope...i loved how you went back and forth..that was a
really good tactic. lol. it kept me entertained...and wonderful
lyrics, and awesome flow and perfect everything. lmao
im gonna give it to hype. this is why...i know he had more
content...but all of it was creative, and had plenty of
punchlines...ensayne started off nicely, then he was gettin random
lol, then he was gettin personal which i really liked, but i guess
because hype wrote more, his punches won it for him. so yeah, fuck
you if you dont agree. lmao. good job to both though... fav.
lines...hype...."ive proved lyrical cannibalism, ate the butcher
like a prostitutes vag.. one whore down" LOL..that was
funny......ensayne... "Im the main show, you the hype man, so there
no chance of you beating me,".....wonderful nameplay.....and
my16hater...PAY ATTENTION...these are not supposed to be freestyle
raps...they are written, and judging it based on likeliness of
freestyle is stupid. love you
this was fucking close...but im gonna give it to simplicity because
he was more creative...like i didnt get that hittin the gym/jim
line until i read it over again...and that shit was mind
blowing...lol...he had some more creative punchlines, while ndi had
good punchlines too, but they were real simple (no offense). LOL.
so good job to both of you, but i think simp got it
im gonna say untouchable got this because of the more consistent
flow...and more clever punchlines...like every line hit
hard...great job to cobra though...this was one of his better
battle verses...but yeah mr. u took it for me
LOL...shoulda put him in the carpet....gross
wow......WOW...that was amazing..lol. i probably should have read
this earlier...but seriously this was dope. like every verse was
fire...it had consistent flow, and nice lyricism. GREAT JOB
lol...gothics dont cut themselves....emos cut themselves. but
besides that it was pretty good...a few mistakes here and there,
but all in all it kept me entertained.
LMAO..."not another bitch"..haha. that was funny. but in all
seriousness good job. lol. i liked that thermometer line too. lol.
great job
that was fuckin dope...long as hell, but fuckin dope. you had some
crazy words, that i mostly understood, lol, and you had awesome
imagery. damn..that was dope. lol..oh and i liked that
"volcanoplay" line. lol. that was dope. penis
DAMN. that was dope...toni went straight homicidal, jesus. lol..and
bunnyz made me laugh in the beggining of his verse...then hype just
took his dick out, and smacked those bitches. lol. good job
everyone. lol penis....
lol...that shit was so random...ummm...good job with the rhyming.
lol. but you must be a little tipsy, cuz that was some random shit.
LOL...or maybe im just stupid and i dont get the deeper
meaning..lmao
it wasnt that good until the last two sections..but those last two
were dope...i like how you put everyones name in it..good job
Hype diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.12.09
that was dope...not too many punchlines, but you did have a
consistent flow... the only thing is you should probably stay away
from "ition" and all suffixes in general, because its like rapping
the same word, for instance you used condition, exposition,
commission and recognition in that order...if you rapped commission
and condition it would sound better because the first parts rhyme
along with the end...and the same with exposition and
recognition...yup...and thats that...OH. and lol. you spelled
ignorant wrong. LMAO...
it wasnt really much of a diss. lol. i expected more dissing, but
it was dope with all the lyricism and your vocab. lol. nice!
~CLASSIC~
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.12.09
that was ill... i liked this line.."just sayin I passed
expectatoins when they said i couldnt make it" iono why, it just
sounded cool. lol good job
lol. your big words hurt my brain....
lol..i dont remember signing up...but im in!
jesus. you guys got some big egos. LMFAO. nice shit. i liked the
name dropping stuff..oh and untouchable came the hardest. lool
you always have trouble with flow when your writing stories
cobra...iono...but i still seem intrigued to read, cuz its a story.
LOL....and bunnyz was goin crazy...jesus, all sorts of internals
and shit...good job to both of you though...just work and making it
flow better cobra...and use more multies DAMN IT!
LMAO AT THE LAST LINES....but those first bars were pure fire. lol.
great work
damnit kobra...i hate reading deep stuff....lol...but this was
dope, everyone did nicely, and profound just raped the shit out of
it in the end there
yeah seriously...i agree with ensayne about smoke a lot...it wasnt
bad, but it wasnt too impressive...however besides that i think we
ripped that shit profound...good looks
Fear.
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.06.09
Damn...everyone did awesome...how can you say Astros lost it? fuck
every doubter...we still run this shit
you ended that shit nicely, but you didnt have many strong
punchlines in it....i think you could have done better
LMFAO at your ending lines...but seriously that "another 6 feet
thing" was dope...good job
nice shit...all imagery and what not....im never closing my eyes
again LOL
OMFG. that was awesome...whats with all the lime/time type rhymes
though. lol. everybody had some in their verse. tonijo started it
off hot...bunnyz kept raping it in the ass, and profound executed a
perfect fatality! also....i loved that shaolin line profound. it
was SSSSOOOOOOOOO dope! great job
im gonna say smoke alot got this....even though his lines were way
unbalanced and unstructured...i forgive him...yeah seriously
though, i think he came with harder punches...sorry dbox...i still
love you
im not gonna lie, it wasnt very good....your lines are way too
long, and dont really end with a good rhyme....heres a
hint...ticket doesnt rhyme with basket, not very good at
least...and you didnt have any punchlines...sorry. so work on
shortening it up, and your lyricism
LOL. i like that dead pet in an alley line.
actually it starts off like this.....i wanna be the VERY best, the
best there ever was.......step your game up bitch!
can you stop rapping....your making my eyes hurt
you guys can suck a penis together....and thats not even me being
rude or anything...seriously i dont discriminate....im all for gay
rights...LOL
bad trip
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.04.09
lol. this definitely sounds like you took mushrooms. LMAO. good
rhymes...iono if they connected to great, but your supposed to be
high so i forgive you. lool
im gonna give you a ten for being foreign and knowing more bigger
words than i do
nice job...i dont really like serious raps...but yeah you guys did
an awesome job...especially with the little role playing
thing..although its not really role playing for hype but yeah
anyways. nice!
penis penis penis
Maniac
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.02.09
wow...that was dope...it flowed perfectly and shit...awesome
job...and lol at that kim kardashian line
that was pretty sick...im not really into gangster rap, but your
flow was nice
damn. that was sick...last line killed it!
that was some sick ish
i didnt see too much dissing in here...and the dissing you did do
was just empty threats...in other words, i didnt think you were too
creative. ALSO, you gotsta learn about multies, those things get
you places, also they improve flow...so work on that ish
jerk
6.00/10
posted by fresh on 11.01.09
Ill give you a six cuz it rhymed....and calm down, jerkin is just a
trend. dont pay too much attention to it
LOL. he makes a valid point
that was some sick shit right there...good shit
LOL at gudsen...you got jokes dude!
what if i start pwning his face in? then do you have his back?
DAMN. this reminds me of something i would write....like seriously
its just random punchlines and good flow...LOVED IT....i liked that
"got more shit comin then my hard dick," line. LOL
damn. that was sick...i liked that katana line, and i liked that
rewind for the illiterate fucks line. lol. awesome
joka diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.28.09
LMFAO AT THE FIFTH QUEER LINE.. hahaha man that was good
lol. that was dope, but i dont get why you put random rhymes above.
lol
DAMN. you guys came hard. that shit was sick. and that beat got me
goin psychotic...good job on this one
LMFAO. THAT SHIT WAS HELLA FUNNY
that was awesome. i dont know if this is a repost. lol. its just
cuz grimes in it, but yeah, its dope anyways...like
seriously..grime said we were drinkin sunny d straight off the
sun...WTF? you couldnt be more awesome than that. and crazy just
killed it in the end there. lol. ASTROS BITCH!
actually...untouchable is the longest serving member on the
site...either him or prodigies...but ive been here longer than you
grime, so you still cant say that. lol
your pic is disgusting
LOL. that was sick, and hilarious....as soon as those two sonic
lines hit, which were fuckin funny btw, it got better and more
exciting. and that EGG line was sick... because i dont know if too
many people know that birds die when they eat rice....lol. so yeah
that was subliminal shit. good one on that shit!
damn. that was sick...the fucking autopsy line was DOOOOPPPPEEE
LMFAO. its funny cuz he thinks hes better than me... but that ndi
line where he thinks about you too much had me laughing. lol. and
none of that diss to me was relevant. lol. good job?
lmao. that was random as fuck...and HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA why are
you thinking about nditullio and king cobra while getting head???
lol. i guess thats your own personal business. lol
simp diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.23.09
lol. that was a lot of random shit. im sure simplicity can handle
this, but this one made me giggle...HAHAHA no homo
DAMN. that was good. emotional and deep and mind boggling and what
not. lmao. i personally am not into these kind of songs, but i
recognize talent when i see it. so yeah good job on this one.
i liked your lines and everything, like the imagery was cool.
especially that "if death in battle is glory only the reborn
knows"...that sounded cool. but you did something in the beginning
that angrified me....you rhymed three lines in a row, and then
stopped. that is an uneven number of lines and it makes me mad when
people do it. lol sorry, dont worry im not gonna hurt you, im not
gonna hurt you... but yeah, your rhymes were...eh...ok but i did
like the imagery stuff. awesome
eehhh. it was whatever...and i didnt know we were homies. LMFAO.
but for cereal... i dont even know who itz sage is, and how he got
in our crew... so fuck him. lool. but heres one thing that pisses
me off that rappers do.... in your fifth line you said "this dudes
garbage the best is what he is seeking"....which is BACKWARDS talk,
and i dont think it flows or sounds good. its like you forced it to
rhyme. yeah that always pisses me off. and once again, i dont know
who itz sage is. so dont regard him as an astro from now on.
lol. good shit again. i already told you your voice was kinda low,
but i could still hear you.... also it still reminds me of an ice
cube diss. lool. good job
couldnt follow the flow again. LOOL. maybe im reading it wrong, i
seriously cant tell, but i tried doing it to the beat and i
couldnt....do you do audio? i would like to hear it if you
do....anyways. i liked the story and imagery in your lines. lol.
you whip your own ass.. haha.
K.I.N.G
8.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.22.09
ummmmm....that was ALL over the place. like it didnt really make
sense, but it did rhyme.....ummmmmmm. you had some cool internal
rhymes, but you dont rhyme too good at the end of lines, so im like
WTF? but heres a thing that pisses me off. you will rhyme one line
after another, then you throw a random line in the middle that has
internal rhyming, but doesnt match up with any other line....for
instance, you first two lines matched...then out of nowhere, the
ground/sound/bound line comes in and doesnt match up to any other
line, which forces you to have a three line rhyme(which doesnt make
sense) to make the first part even....iono maybe im just being
critical, but yeah, work on your end rhymes...and try making
sense... PEACE
I AM RAP
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.21.09
"Youve been on Xtube? Better know thats my spot" LMFAO.
hahahahahaha
Untitled
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.21.09
lmfao. that was SOOO generic.
jeesh that last line hit hard. lmao. good verse
LMFAO at jfromtheaq....but anyways. nice shit here, i like grimes
the best lol. "thousand sluts on the dick". haha. but yeah, that
felt like a cypher when i read it, it was ill. good job
oh damn. that last line was ill. and yeah, no offense, but all your
rhymes werent too exquisite in this one. like they were multies,
but just barely. lol. iono, maybe im just being harsh. nonetheless,
those guys couldnt match it, so its ok, you didnt waste any good
rhymes on wack people.....love you
wow. that was a sick ass flow. you started it off strong and LMFAO
at how you ended it. good work on this one. ASTROS! lol
:( :(
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.20.09
you are a horrible person. LMFAO. but that new paint line was good.
LOOL.
this is a sick instrumental... but yeah, i couldnt really like
follow your flow, because your lines are all long then short then
long again. iono, i wanna hear like an audio of it. but as for like
the lines, they were sick, like all your vocab is mad nice. and
some of the rhymes were off, but mostly on point so yeah good job.
this was pretty good. you didnt have multies all the way, and i
thought it kinda hurt your flow, because it would all vibe good
until it hit a non multi line. beside that your rhymes were ill.
and LOL. you called yourself a sittin duck, which isnt really a
good thing but w/e. oh and you didnt really end it too strongly,
besides that chyeah, good job.
lol. i remember this. it was the original version of the ransom
collab right? it was sick anyways. i liked that phantom of the
opera line. sick shit
that was sick. that fuckin subzero line was awesome. good job...now
on to verse 2 lol
im gonna say desanto won. even though his last round wasnt as hard
hitting as his first one, he was still consistent. trax was ok in
the first round, but didnt even make too much sense in the second
round, so yeah, my vote goes to desanto.
that was really sick. i would have preferred if bunnyz jumped on
the multis train. and maybe if tonijo was SLIGHTLY more on point,
shes got it, but just a little tightening up wont hurt. profound
did awesomely. and as for the content in everyones verses, that
shit was ill, had me goin psychotic and shit. good job
L M F A O
DAMN realeyez killed that shit. gudsen was good too, but realeyez
was better.LMFAO. anyways nice.
damn son. are you signed? if not, you should probably get on that.
get your paper soon, before i hit the scene. LMFAO
that was so sick. lmfao. its hilarious too, and i liked the
beginning and the end. haha. fuck all haters, if you think im
talking to you then i am......*sighs* lets get this over with, drop
the beat. haha that was awesome. and as for the lyrics, that shit
was tight, i thought this one part wouldnt flow, but then when you
said it, it worked perfectly. i applaud you. lool
wow. how homicidal of you..... i would explain how your flows off,
and complain about no multies, but its a story so i gotsta forgive
you.... nice story by the way, you effin psycho.....love fresh
lmfao at the grasshoppers line. good shit
lmfao. i was not aware that bludie was a vampire. and hahaha i was
laughing at that alaska/cuba line
NICE FLOW. however you didnt say much. should think about your
punchlines more
evilbunny
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.14.09
DAAAAMMMMMNNNN. nice shit. i like that price is right line. nice
shit here
im giving you a two. because theres two things your
missing.....nuts. and two things you shouldnt have.....boobs. and
two things you like.....dick and more dick. so heres a two for you!
damn. hype came the hardest...lmao. gross. but anyways, no offense
to anybody, but Astros did this song better. lool. good shit anyway
though. haha
OKAY. slimy g isnt riding cock or anything
this format is weird... i had trouble following the flow, so maybe
you wrote this to a beat??? either way, i noticed a lot of your
lines were mixed and matched when it comes to length, so that threw
me off. plus i didnt see a lot multies in their. there were some,
but not a lot. however i did like your imagery and metaphors, so
good job on that
fresh...
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.13.09
what jerks. those douchebags. sup CC
oh fuck. tokios comin after me now. lol. that was hilarious because
super fresh DOES love cock. hahahahahaha. good shit
damn. that was nice. i liked stillmatiks the best. awesome though.
shoulda let me rip it a new one
lol. i was about to give you a nine, and tell you everything you
did wrong, but then i found out it was a freestyle and i forgive
you....nice shit. thats a long ass cypher...fuck you musta been out
of breath. lol
FUCK. now i gotta look shit up and shit. hahaha. alright imma get
back at you. nice shit BTW.
alright im starting
flippin? no flippin? who goes first?
lol. alright rules???????????????
why would you repost this? i already destroyed you. lol
lol. it was pretty good. i didnt notice too many punchlines though.
but i did see that fruit punch shit. that was nice. Im kinda big on
the metaphors and wordplay and i didnt see too many, but DAMN. way
to get personal with the starbucks thing. lool
lol. that was sick. anal is the only way you hide dicks....hahaha
nice nice. now only if we had some voters.....
yeah get at me then
damn. now thats some sick shit right there. consistent flow, and
good rhymes. loved it
chyeah. nice shit. god were awesome
yeah. lol. realeyez just pretty much raped him. lmao. maybe you
shouldnt tell stories rida, like not in any offense, im just
saying, when you tell stories about realeyez being raped by his
dad, it gets irrelevant sometimes. but yeah realeyez had some crazy
vocab goin on. plus the word play.OMG. that net worth line killed
it. good job both of you.
holy fuck that went hard.....cops just raided with tear
gas.....fuuuuuuuck. damn. i wasnt expecting much, but im gonna keep
an eye on you. JEEESUS. great script
lol. damn. keep it classy! haha. nice verse
lmao. that was awesome
damn. we killed it
damn that was ill. lol. i love this song too, the one with eminem
and dre. damn nice remix. haha
hahahaha. that ant shit line was hilarious. omg i was laughing.
haha
this was actually pretty good. like you have a random ass format
and style. like your not dropping lines, but fragments of lines or
something. its awesome. good job
GOOD SHIT. YOUR LIKE THE BEST HERE, NO DOUBT! lmfao. hahahahahaha
lol. are you serious? if you dont consider yourself one of the
best, than why would you be in the crew with the best? not too
smart i see....
Randumb
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.07.09
was that a subliminal diss at astros? now you know we cant have
that. lol but good shit here. especially that simon says/simon said
thing. haha classic. THUMBS UP!
this is a weird ass format, but i kinda liked it. imma give you a
ten. ja ja ja. thats some mexican laughing for ya. haha. and wtf
cobra? i thought you were the least biased person, or so they say?
your so ugly, your reflection killed itself!. hows that for a diss?
holy fuck. he just locked the door. now you know cobras never
gettin back in. good job keepin it real and shit bludie
im gonna give it to glover. that was some nice lyricism right
there. Good job on both sides though. and lmao. jfromtheaq got his
panties in a bunch. HAHAHA
desanto gets this one. that teenagers cleavage line had me rolling.
haha. and wtf cobra? why is your first verse all random formatted?
but anyways good battle. oh and i liked that line from cobra about
the halo 3 glitches. HAHA
LMFAO at the normal sized rubber on my dick part. haha that was
good. thumbs up!
this is way to long for me to read. so im just gonna give you an
eight like profound. haha. im sorry thats mean....oh wells. and
chyeah, its not the fresh crew. IM FRESH. thats me, im a member
just like you. so theres no crew between us. just a sick collab
thats all that was. there you go.
this is awesome. i like how everybody mentioned me. haha im so
conceited. but here are my favorite lines..... FRESH: "your walkin
and your preachin, but your talkin to a demon,"
King Cobra: "oh and not just cus it rhymes but my brothers name is
trevor," LMFAO.
Profound: "yall just some little foots im the biggest crook like
sharp tooth" BRINGS BACK MEMORIES. lol.
DESANTO: "Cause Im all about my CREAM like a COW.. BOY, I must be
from TEXAS!" that shit was mind blowing.....
"Tokio just stood there cryin screamin WHATS HAPPENING". lol. i
imagined tokio doing that in my mind. and it was hilarious. HAHA
lmfao. hahahaha. omg im so fabulous ppl must love me!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. great. and that diss went hard. good job and shit
lol ended it nicely. good looks on the shout out. lmao and i like
how you dropped bludie in there too. haha
L M F A O. that was so awesome, gotta love the metaphors. ray vs
stevie, and the aids fuckin flu. but this was my favorite shit "Im
throwin it up like i swollewd my area code" great job
haha. that was nice. coulda been longer though
THAT WAS AWESOME. well at least profounds part was. jokas was ehh,
ok i suppose. but yeah, i understood like maybe half of all that.
lol
lol. why didnt your first two lines rhyme?? HAHA. lol. but good job
on this anyway. gotta get your noob bashin on. lmao
lmfao. that ish was so random. and i dont wanna know about your
stepmoms bleeding. or your thong for that matter. loooool
nice shit here. yeah i understood that traces stuff lmao. i liked
that soulja boy line, and you ended it nicely. great shit
nice rhymes. not too many punchlines though
once again awesome. lmao. i like when you stutter in the end.
hahahahaha. good verses though. and i hate you for that ending
part. lmao
simp diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 10.04.09
lmfao. you started that with a great two lines. nice shit here
fuckin awesome. that second line hit hard. lol. good shit. im
puttin it in the forum
sorry, but its not very good. no clever lines, and the rhymes
werent complex. mostly one syllables. so heres a six for effort!
OMG that was fuckin awesome. the lost general of the wu tang right
here. lmao
wow that was amazing shit. both of you were sick. fuckin metaphors
everywhere. loved that this shit for real. ASTROS, BITCH!
yeah thats awesome. the fuckin part about your favorite rapper
being good before they blow up, that was a nice line. good shit
here
fuckin awesome
LMFAO. thanks for the shout out. hahahaha. but seriously this was
sick. "if u were Public Enemy, u couldnt fight my power". AWESOME
yeah definitely good for a freestyle. i cant freestyle at all, so
yeah, but maybe i should check out some of your writtens.
DAMN STATUS. you killed that shit. you ended it nicely too. fuck
man good collab here
i got a better one......me chinese, me play joke/ me go peepee in
your coke. LMAO
lol. pwned their face in!
lmao. you killed him with the first two lines. but that fuckin
ending line, with the trix rabbit. OMG. that shit was nice
fuckin fire. i like that...."keystyle". haha thats funny. oh and
BTW, its spelled bologna, not baloney. haha. just lettin you know
profounds verse, and grimes second verse were my favorite. awesome.
jkjhkj
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.20.09
awesome.
when you gonna blow up? im waitin for your album. lol
well i voted on the other one, and i called it a tie. because your
first rounds were really close, but i think cardone took it in the
second round. i feel like he had more relevant lines than illegal
did, and he ended it nicely. so i vote for cardone.
once again. kassion is WRONG about race. remember when you thought
dbox was black? hes actually salvadorian. and cardone is half
black, half white. lmao. jesus. but im stuck on this battle because
illegal got a little to gangster for me, but he had some sick
metaphors. and cardone had some sick lines too....FUCK. this was
really close. im gonna say a tie. lol. because you both had even
skill. theres my answer, fuck it.
that was awesome. i liked the gun/tongue lines. sick.
this was nice. you should reformat your rhymes though. like after
every rhyme hit enter so its easier to read, or at least put one of
thes things ////// to let us know its goin on the the next line.
besides that, it was sick rhyming.
hell to the yes! ASTROS run this shit FOREVER bitches! nobodys got
shit on us. fuck that we win, game over, tally your points up to
see who comes second, because Astros can not be beat.
lol. i got a little lost, but i got the main point. good job. your
lines are hella long though. haha
they were sick lyrics and everything, but im not sure if they
flowed to the beat. iono, maybe i read it wrong. but yeah, i mean
they flowed on their own so it is still good lyricism. and HELL NO
YOUR NOT BETTER THAN ASTROS. lol. seriously that needs to stop
before i get angrified. lmao. good job guys
lol. last line killed it. i could tell you didnt try too hard.
hahaha
it was alright. not to many complex lines, and the flow was a
little off. but your rhymes work well.
lol. those are my morals of the day. HAHAHA. but for reals nice
shit. what you should do though is hop on the multi wagon, improve
your flow. nice lyrics though, like good lines and metaphors.
that was sick. that superman breed line was awesome. good job
Damn that was sick. great stories, and nice punchlines too. plus
your flow was consistent. i like that centipede line, i dont know
why, it just stuck out to me. good job
it really wasnt too good. my honest opinion. heres some
errors.....petsmart and retard dont rhyme....anybody and somebody
dont rhyme....well they do, but only because body will ALWAYS rhyme
with body. so yup. there you go
DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT! freakin multis have infected my mind, so now
when i read a rap like this i cant catch the flow. i wanna hear
your audio to hear how it should be read, but yeah, i like your
lines and metaphors and what not. lol. good job
my name
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.14.09
not too good at all. and i dont know where your rhymes end.
completely confusing
lmfao. I swear, i was just listening to this song a couple songs
ago. lol. but yeah, sick lyrics. that kanye west part was awesome.
lol. good job
WOW. lol. this might be the first organized rhyme ive ever seen you
write. lol. not knocking your other shit, but this has like
wordplay punchlines and more of a bar format than your other stuff.
i love it btw. haha. lol. "my hamburger PATTI gets more MAYO then
DOUG". great job on this one
lol. i like how you stayed with the interrupting word things. lol i
liked it. but yeah, no multies, and not too much wordplay or
metaphors. there were some. like that clean up on aisle my16 thing.
lol i liked that. but yeah. you should hop on the multi wagon, it
helps your flow out a lot
lmao. a lot of this went right over my head, but it sounded sick.
lol. you have super uber great vocab
OMG you killed him with that last verse. lol. i was laughin at that
"Give me a Y". haha. good job
FUCK. you murdered him. lol. i like how you said nobody knows him
except for reading his name in this battle, because lol, im like
WHO THE FUCK IS FLETCHER? hahaha. but in all seriousness, there
werent too many punchlines, but it was like ALL diss, so i liked
it. plus that capital word thing was awesome. good job. oh and
great flow too, btw. lol
lol. nice diss. i liked that forrest gump line. haha
lmao. i finished it.
fresh....
8.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.10.09
im not a naughty pirate. that sounds gross. but naw im good for
now. lol.
New rap
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.10.09
fuckin gross, but that gee taaar was hilarious. lmao
lol. CC
OH MAN. that mr clean/shamwowing line was freckin awesome. great
job
awesome as usual. i caught that vampire line. lol. good shit
LMAO. "Dont even wanna see yer name on here change yer status to
hidden" this was great. yeah that guys stupid, good job. lol
FUUUUCK. i gotta agree with killa c, that wyatt earp line was sick.
actually it was all sick, but that line got me. good shit.
DAMN IT! they beat me to it....well anyways, it had a nice flow and
everything, but nothing stuck out to me. so just work on wordplay
and shit.
damn, got friends in the pen like angelica. now thats sick. FUCK
YOUR GOOD.
LMFAO. you can lick your own butt cheek? thats gross! lol. and i
like how you make fun of the fact that you always say spark and
ignite. lmao. haha good shit here.
Rida diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.07.09
jesus christ. way to get personal! lol. good rhymes though.
oh damn. that was sick. i didnt read his diss, but im about to. and
NOBODY better say this is crew dickriding because its not. there is
clearly a high level of lyricsm and flow. good job fellas
lmao. i was OBVIOUSLY the best. lmao jk jk. or maybe bludie. but
HAHA i was laughing at roughrida, and stillmatiks lines.
hahahahahaha. good job to everyone
lol. thats gross. it reminds me of ndis rap about fuckin dead
chicks, but at least yours is reanimated. lol. you should make a
verse where THINGS GO WRONG. lol. good job though.
DAMN. that was sick. bludie that was so sick, when you started it
off. it got me hyped up. lol
all hail
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.07.09
damn that flow is sick. plus you have nice vocab. lol. great job,
ended it nicely
LMFAO. there was no multies or metaphors, but you had to stay on
topic i guess. LOL. nice story. and gross story at the same time.
lol
yeah, ive seen you come harder nditullio. mostly you had punchlines
and then filler lines, so maybe put the filler lines first so the
punchlines hit harder. iono. just my opinion. but i feel like
desanto did well. good job
oh man. that was sick. i love this song, and i think you elaborated
on it nicely. good shit
yeah i was thinking the same thing crazyflow. lol. oh wells, but
yeah that was hella tight. everybody killed that shit. "I fall into
a limo meet two girls with no clothes on," nice line critical. lol
that was sick. "bullets BOUNCING like, TIGGER is loose". freakin
awesome
OMFG that was sick. everybody came hard. man, that was awesome. i
like how you ended your verse bludie, with that little math
problem. lol. and illegal always gives word ups to inspectah deck.
lol. oh and stillmatik just ripped it up in the end. plus everyone
else did awesome too. just way to much to comment on. good job
lmao. at the last line
yeah. good job on that one. im not sure, i could write something
about phones. lol. great job guys
that was sick. had a nice flow. and i was laughin when i read this
"kickin him while hes down and makin fun of his lisp "
lol. thats some Astro ish shit, but yeah it was good. lol good job,
nice to see your writing verses. lol
those were some sick punchlines. lol. i wanna give you a nine just
for that first line. LMAO. but oh wells, it was too good.
YES. i love vocab. its so sick to read intrinsic scripts. good job
on this.
was that a call out in the end there? lol. but yeah bludie and
stillmatik fuckin ripped that shit up. lol. always on that gettin
drunk shit. lmao. anyways good job.
lmao. CC! another new profile?
lmao. this took long as hell, because the forum is distracting.
HA GOT YOU BACK
yeah rida and dbox got this for me. and fuck it if im in ridas
crew, because mestiphos verse was pretty generic, and he fucked up
that last line. see, if your gonna try to take something from imm.
tech. than you gotta say it right. "a billion one celled
organisms". but thats alright. and cobra did good. but i dont think
he came as hard as you guys. YUP. thats my OH PINION. lol
damn it.... you had to go and fuck up. THIS IS BITTEN EVERYONE.
GOOGLE THAT FIRST LINE.
HA. saggin pants...... but all of that was funny. good shit. lol
LMAO. good rebuttals, and i your punchlines were great. oh and nice
flow as well
HA. the priest line was funny
much respect. i dont know what was different, lol, cuz i read your
other one a long time ago. but yeah, this is deep. its good you can
a different kind of emotion in your raps, not just the egotistical
kind. good job
lmao. i like that smaller cock line too. hahahaha. good job
OMG cobra, your so homo. lmao. and stillmatik, was by far the
funniest. im a little confused with gudsens. haha. you got your ass
kicked or raped by gingers? lol either way it was entertaining
didnt rida already use this verse with kid exquizite? lol. well its
still good, and i liked yours too cobra. it flowed nice and
everything. THE ONLY THING I HAVE TO SAY IS........try not to use
the tion suffix, because some people seem to think they always
rhyme because they end the same way. to tell you the truth, you
didnt have that problem, but i like to always steer cleer of suffix
rhyming. good job
yeah. your flow was off at times. not bad though, that was a sick
heart attack line. OH OH OH, and if you switch the second and third
line, it would flow better... it would be brand new/can do, and me
flu/pre school. YUP
gt diss 2
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 09.01.09
LMAO at despicable line. haha.
lol. pretty much summed it up
yeah. desanto definitely got this one. bully had no rebuttals at
all. so um yes desanto for sure. haha
yeah. you guys started off the same, but desanto got it in the end.
killed it. ended it nicely. good job
OMFG. that was amazing. why arent you signed again? the both of you
could seriously blow up big. fuckin awesome. ASTROS RUNNIN IT
EVERYONE
8.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.31.09
how rich are you? lmao
EVERYONE
7.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.31.09
are you gonna pay all the expenses? hahaha
LMAO. i applaud your skill at entertaining me, haha good job CC.
haha
that was a sick freestyle. you should try to keep away from
suffices though. but yeah, better than any freestyle i could pull
out ma ass. haha
Hurt
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.31.09
sick shit flowrescent. you need to get active again lol
YEAH. killed him. lol. everything was on point. lmao at the cum on
your chest line. haha. and the april fools line. lol fuck it, they
were all funny
that was some weird shit. lmao. what the fuck is red tube? and how
much do hounds learn? yeah. sorry wasnt feelin it. lol. NINE FOR
EFFORT
LMFAO. at the last one. man this shit is classic. do another do
another!
LMAO. you know im on some corpse shit! lol. that was sick. your
metaphors amuse me
that was sick. it started off a little slow, and the rhymes werent
that good, but it got good fast. i loved that last line. good job
LMAO. ray said "all i gotta do is say the name jin and her knees
will drop". oh man thats classic! good job guys. haha
much respect terminator
ASTROS: crazyflow, status flow, flowrescient light(kinda inactive
lol), finally free, ovaflo, ghost rida, the grime mc, tokio
thunderbyrd, fresh, prodigies
it started off shakey, but got better toward the end. keep up on
that creative stuff
ummm. this is more like a poem. yeah theres no flow, but the lyrics
are good. ten for effort!
lol. good shit. i like your intro thing. haha. thats funny
who won
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.29.09
yeah. i feel like analyze got this. i felt his flow more, and like
his punchlines better. but seriously good shit on both sides. i
liked how you flipped that genetic thing with the dj kobra. good
shit guys.
lmao. that shit was hilarious. DAMN. i kinda wanna say DBOX, cuz
that shit was funny. lol. yeah sorry rida. i seriously think he got
this. lol. good job though guys
OMFG. THAT WAS AMAZING. that was some crazy ass vocab. plus you
added that Robespierre line. oh shit. im sorry bludie, but you
might be dead. FUCK THAT WAS GOOD
lmao at the jew line. good shit. and that was purdy personal. lol
holy shit!
thats gross..... i dont even know what to think of this... lmao
good freestyle. i wanna read one of your written raps. good shit
here though. lol. lmao you were running out of rhymes. thats funny
DAMNIT THEY QUOTED ALL THE GOOD LINES. LOL. yeah that was short but
humorous. lol. good job
lmao. that vegetarian line was funny. good job
i like his dissin 40 lohh lol.
call me mc belt, the way im spanking these young kids/ im pissin
grown folk urine, your just takin a yung wiz. LMAO. lets play some
operation, Ill let you make the cut for me/ im on the other side of
the hill, which makes me way above 40 (like a 40 year old joke lol)
that was sick. i loved that mortal combat line.
LMFAO at the treadmill line. that was awesome
lmao. get at me then
LMFAO. fuckin awesome. lol that nut line had me laughin
FIRST ROUND: how are rattles boneless? like why would they have
bones in the first place? HUH? also how do you leave a corpse in a
column? SECOND ROUND: whats an outlandish jeweler? and how are they
fake? also, how is he gonna lay on his spleen?. PLUS i dont like
how you said you were gonna shoot him, like you were some sort of
gangster. i mean im fine with you suggesting your machete will kill
him, but a gat? come on!
LMAO. desanto destroyed venom. spitter didnt make a whole lot of
sense. lol.
wow alot of people read this here. but um yeah freakin awesome.
definite improvement. the only thing is, stay away from "ation" if
you can because it tends to sound like a rhyme because it ends like
that and it really doesnt. i dont think it sounded too bad in this
one, and im pretty sure it didnt happen. but sometimes people will
rhyme for instance recombination with evaluation. when they should
be using weak domination, or something in that order. get what im
saying? good work on this one.
WOW. way to turn on your crew. lol i dont know what happened, but
it looks like gudsen repeated desanto on this one "wait this is not
finished till their diminished". lol nice cypher though
ASTROS
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.26.09
Damn. i dont think anybody has ever done it like that. that
backbone thing was sick. welcome lol...
lmao. way to give me credit for my verse. and yeah guys money IS
important. lol. thats why i was admitting, i would do some of that
same shit. lol
yeah that was pretty sick. heres my opinion: desanto and breezy
were sick. lol. good to see you put that verse to good use desanto.
and kid and eazy werent bad. good job. but you still aint got this
on the Astros. lmao
yeah thats not gonna work. just kill 10 puppies.
holy fuck that was good. the thumb/ligaments line was awesome. all
your punchlines were on point. that was fuckin sick
sick shit! i was likin that continuum/continue em line. good work
"im holy...at the cave...they piling rocks" OMG that was sick!
WAY TO MAKE ME WATCH THE VIDEO. lol, that shit was creepy. oh and
this line "Collectin em like Smithers does Malibu Stacy", made me
laugh. lol
i feel like somebody has done this before, but its ok. it was fun
lol
LMAO. that was sick. i loved all of them. especially that fun dip
one for some reason. lol good work.
wow. i dont even know. i wanna say analyze because he flipped some
more shit. but um, this is why battles should be kept short, but
include two verses lol. yeah good shit on both sides. if i had to
vote, i would vote analyze.
awesome.
wow. that was sick. crazy imagery tactics. loved it
wow that was ill. spinna had some sick metaphors. and gudsen came
hard (gross)lol. good job guys
lmao. he said dying helps you a lot. lol. but yeah. you want to
talk about rap legends? just listen to wu. i mean, even though
everybody is all over ODBs nuts that doesnt mean he was bad. i
personally think Inspectah Deck is better, but the clan as a whole
is unstoppable
that was sick. ive seen you go harder though. still good though.
that reciting the alphabet line was sick, and your last line too.
good job
what the fuck is wrong with T.I.? and luda is still big. his shit
is amazing. plus i mean, eminem is a little weaker than his former
self, but im still a fan. and jayz dropped DOA. that was sick. i
mean some songs are just party music, so DONT EXPECT high quality
lyrics. and have you heard kid cudi? hes not even bad. i mean your
not gonna get raw lyrics from a mainstream rapper, but its not all
garbage. study up son!, you might learn something. OH YEAH. watch
mtv music videos. most of them are mainstream garbage, but
sometimes, they play a song that is new and shit, but it doesnt get
radio play. for instance, Kinda Like a Big Deal by the clipse.
havent heard that on radio but i saw the video on Mtv. also. Kid
Cudis Make Her Say. maybe you dont consider these REAL rap songs,
but i think they are definitely better than some of the shit out
today on the radio. yeah, you dont have to go all the way
underground, i try to stay submerged. lmao
ACUTALLY. the astros are the best here. but thats not what im
focusing on. you had a sick flow on this one, like you had long ass
lines, but they still flowed perfectly that was awesome. yeah good
job.
once again. awesome. loved that last line. plus the way you flipped
his flipping of your script. damn, you dont stop do you?
OH SHIT. that N/J OK LINE WAS AWESOME. good shit on this one. didnt
even think it was possible to flip that line. lmao
omg. that fucking "go after Gs, like the letter H" and the Noahs
cape/no escape thing was insane. i fucking love your punchlines,
plus you stay consistent in the flow. good job
i see you like eminem lol. "then your thoughts followed behind,
told your mouth to shutup rewind" lmao at that line. it sounds like
he talks a lot of shit. haha. good job
its random as hell but it sounds sick. lmao
i agree completely with glover. you balanced all your internal and
multi rhymes. and your flow stayed consistent. plus i liked your
metaphors. good job on this one!
TANTRUM
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.23.09
OH MY FUCKING GOD. hold the fuck on, let me clean the fucking
fountain of blood out of my ears, because my mind just got blown
yeah. i dont think ive ever included pokemon in my raps. and if i
have it was probably like a two line thing. so yeah. thats my take,
but you did sum it up nicely lol
fucking sick. all those robot references were amazing lol. and that
fly/maggot line, got me hyped up. good work
FUCK YOUR GOOD. im becomin a fan lol. oh and when you said that
nine lives line. i think you meant pussy/cat instead of bitch lol
i wanna see a round two.
pretty good. not everything rhymes though, like just because they
end in ation doesnt mean they rhyme perfectly. and you used
creation twice. dont know if you knew that. but anyways good work i
enjoyed it. lol
thats mean critical. i fuckin loved this shit. that wireless shit
was Ah mazing. good job
that was sick. lmao. the smoke pot line was sick, and also the off
switch line. fuck it, they were all good. i wanna see his reply now
NICE LYRICS. sick flow, but ummmmm. you spelled august wrong. LMAO
yeah. so i just read your prosperous diss, and i was like, hey i
might as well check out his other post. lol. IM GLAD I DID. this
was sick. metaphors off the wall, and your flow is sick. interested
in a crew? i cant guarantee you a spot, but i can ask lol. your
sick dude, keep it up
DAMN. you have some sick metaphors. that space jam/cattle line was
sick. plus that dudes gay. lol GREAT JOB.
killed it. fuck that bitch. good work as always. and that
bulletproof necklace line was sick. lol. i remember it from the
forum, lol, you put it to good use.
alright. i just lost ALL respect for you. REALLY? your gonna bite
off wu tang? i just checked that shit. does Radiant Jewels sound
familiar? naw son. no respect on this one
lol. so you reused some lines for the collab? well i dont know if
that was ideal.... i did like your flow better in this verse. well
mostly, for instance christmas and campus dont rhyme to great. like
christmas and trick this rhyme better. or campus and stack us are
better too. lol i dont know how to use them. just giving examples.
and that bullimic/believe me rhyme coulda been way better. all you
had to say was you better believe it. woulda been perfect. AND HOW
THE FUCK WAS THIS A FREESTYLE IN 30 MINUTES?
LMAO at compton. thats pretty nice of you for doin this for our
site. lol. i try to find them too sometimes. like if all of a
sudden, they get all good. i google that shit. HAHA.
noyz came fucking HARD. slimy g was ok at best. he ended weak too.
and prosperous started off good, but it got sloppy. no offense to
anybody, just my honest opinion. practice guys practice!
LMAO. spittin on new yorks chin like pumkin. LOL. FLAVA FLAAAAV!.
haha. that shit was beastly tokio
My story
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.21.09
i came in around the time, when you prod and heiz were runnin shit.
lol. Thats about the time, when you were destroying PPG lol.
im gonna go ahead and say good job everybody. i feel like we got
them lol. oh and status killed it with that v for vendetta thing.
good job everybody.
OH GOD THAT WAS SICK! sick beat sick rhymes, sick metaphors, sick
flow. loved it. and it dont stop!
LAUGH MY FUCKING ASS OFF. this shit is hilarious! YO WANT IT, I GOT
IT, PROPOSE IT, ILL SIGN IT!
"fuck taking time,,, no more defensive position
se the plate, see the laces, we hitting no missing" your always so
good. you never fuck up on your flow. lol its so hard to comment
something of yours because ive said it a million times. your
beastly.
that was some ill shit. youve got skills dude
i wanna quote something too guys! "Mann, thats so Brooklyn? Nope,
thats so freeman/
Im sex with the pen, And the ink is my semen/". im lovin your
metaphors.
i like it. lmao ive already read most of it in the forum earlier
lol but yeah good shit, and i dont remember how your style was
before this, but its sick now. stick with it.
FUCKING SICK. thats all i have to say...
that was sick. like a collab/battle is an awesome idea. great job
that was fuckin ill. and fuckin slimy g has a "good feeling". lmao
gross. but i would highly suggest you NEVER join a crew with slimy
g. lmao. but enough of that....great shit. keep it comin
yeah. sick freestyle. i couldnt freestyle like that lol. but my
favorite line was the lactose intolerant/ dairy line. FUCKIN
GENIUS. great job
if you like this rap, give me threes
NICE FLOW. you could definitely write a little bit longer, and use
some creativity in your raps, like more metaphors and shit. but
yeah i really like your flow
ARGH! do you smell that guys? smells like bullshit!
Legacy
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.18.09
sounds like some mastah killah shit! awesome
lets bring that fool twisted back....LAUGH MY FUCKING ASS OFF!
LMAO. that was awesome. you bum!
NEW
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.18.09
you spelled "every" wrong in your headline
good verse. very motivational lol. and youve said spark and ignite
in a lot of your raps. lol i wonder if youve noticed that. either
way. good work
yeah good internal rhyming. you dont really write in bar format do
you? lmao. at least i think thats what its called. im just sayin,
your lines are WAY long lol. but its still good. and heres a quick
question lol. how is it ok for you to fuck a sheep, but some homo
cant be gay? what the fuck?
DAMN. this was sick. i think you should record this. it would be
awesome. and your last verse was extra sick. i loved it all. great
job
yo....
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.17.09
lmao. i remember this one. especially that gynecologist line lmao.
once again great job. but you have crazy mad typos in this lol
haha paranoid much? lol me too
lmao at this diss. and lmao at brandon. oh and lmao at that dumb
bitch who ever is behind da contest. lmao at this whole situation.
and lmao at you laughing your ass off at me laughing my ass off.
lmao
Suicidal.
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.16.09
NOOO DONT DO IT! good shit here
yeah. cuz saying fuck you really hurts me right? who are you again?
yeah i read that earlier. but i guess your opinion doesnt matter
anymore
lmao. angry much?
haha. what happened to this being ak? lol now i know you are not to
be trusted
Read This
7.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.16.09
who the fuck is this? i wanna geuss hip hop
suicide
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.15.09
wow. that got me depressed. which is what you were going for i
think. good job. it was hella long though.
no multis? lol. i like multis, but i only saw a couple. however, i
like the end part it started gettin real good. and most of those
metaphors went right over my head lmao. oh wells. good job
that was pretty sick. i love how you ended that, with that whole
gun shot thing. it was nice
lmao. better than any freestyle i might attempt
it was alright. but im not really into the gangster rap. or at
least not on this site lmao. i would rather read something
creative, but that just me. iono.
nice rhymes. that line desanto quoted was sick
lmao. "white monday thats a low blow". thats a sick line right
there. didnt read what he wrote to you, but you burned him with
this one.
i already told you i liked the lyrics. but you didnt really sound
like you were rapping in this. kinda like you were just reading it
to a beat. iono. just my opinion
that was sick. i liked that powerpuff line. genius!
wow that was fire. tokio was making me laugh and glover went mad
hard. nice work
lmao. you ended it nicely
damn thats sad. much respect on this one
lmao. thats pretty cheap, because most coupons are free lmfao.
FUCKIN AWESOME. you need to get on this shit more
lol. heres the thing. either im really good. which i know im not
that good, and i know this bitch is being gay. but seeing as how
hes listing all the good people lmao or mostly good people, then
that means im STILL UNDERRATED. hell yeah bitches
WOW. realeyez was my favorite by far. let me quote something, "Rida
where the old frame, I saw you changed your profile picture
I guess after Prodigies ripped ya, the gayness of that sweater
finally hit ya". lol had me rolling. why do you guys always fuck
with rida? but great job anyways
alright for real though, no offense but you could use help on your
lyricism. its good, but it could be better. however, this is not
the time to talk about it. because your more into writing deeper
stories, and this shit got me sad. great job. dont stop what your
doing because its good. seriously....nice work
EVERYONE PAY ATTENTION. i understand that there is the I in philly
in this post. however, in his very first post of his round 2 diss,
he missed the I. and thats why i said that. just clearing this up,
and dont worry simp. i wont get mad at anybody voting against me.
as long as they actually read everything, and voted based on skill
and content, not just length lmao. and i honestly dont really care
about a battle lmao. its all in good fun. but yeah. great battle
desanto.
lol. fuck you desanto. you didnt spell philly right the first time.
i remember quite clearly it said, "start it off reppin p h double l
dont forget the y,". and thats why my first line burned you.
EVERYBODY PAY ATTENTION HE CHANGED IT. LMAO. good battle
the only good line super fresh had was his last one....thats it.
rida got him for sure.
AHAHAHA. im laughing and throwing up at the same time. lol you guys
are all gross....i love it! lmao. of course simp wrote the most,
this is his forte lmao
FUCKING GREAT. seriously everybody was spittin heat. and your
fuckin intro verse fuckin killed it tokio. damn that was suck. and
that fuckin simplistic/toker line, had me laughin lol GREAT job
lol. dont go edit your fuckin rap either. because you spelled
philly wrong, and i burned you for it. lol much respect once again.
good battle
lol much respect
DAMN. that was good. im not gonna lie. "style is so old i forgot it
existed" im lovin that line. but dont worry, im comin for you lol
lol it was really short, cuz i suck at starting. and avada kedavra
is from harry potter. lol im such a nerd
haha. where did the multis go? just because the quotes are gone
doesnt mean the multis have to. and i liked the introduction line,
and the three that followed in your first diss. it was good. lol
REALLY LONG THOUGH
i liked it. that 8 mile shit was creative. and i agree with rida,
you shouldve used MORE multis. at least i wouldve liked them lol.
good job
the cs
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.06.09
that shit blew my mind. fuckin nice vocabulary. lol i didnt
understand it all, and i didnt try to, because it would give me a
headache, but it sounded sick lol. good job
yeah bludie killed it as usual, and myniakal was ok. good job
though
haha. that "crack head last hit" was great! good job on this one. i
wanna see this collab now lol
jesus christo! you went personal on this one. lol "fuck new shoes,
i just bought some new feet". that line was genius.
seriously though that was sick. so many internal rhymes i loved it
lol. "my flows profoun, dissin me with you vocab speak 2 sylobols
words or other low nouns" that shit was hot
that mass serial murderer/ living room furniture line was sick.
good job on this one
haha. you ended it nicely. and i love your metaphors. good job
lol. that was disgusting and depressing at the same time. my heart
is crying right now...however it was also funny so im laughin haha.
good shit. your stories are always weird. haha
everyone was on point, but bludie and stillmatik were spittin some
crazy magma shit. both of your vocabs are off the chart. and bludie
i liked that george thoroughgood line. that was some sick shit.
good work guys
haha. the fat kid line, and the spelling bee lines were the best.
haha had me rollin
that was a sick collab. the only person i didnt think brought it so
hard was phonerings. and im lovin no ones vocab, however, im
resenting him dissin my crew. oh wells, it was subtle so Ill let it
slide lmao. good work
lol. good shit, but im giving this a nine, because the quotations
are pissing me off lmao. oh and gudsen, just to let you know, wife
and grief dont rhyme. haha
2 verses
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 08.03.09
lol. ultimate punch is from Hot Rod if you havent seen the movie.
then watch it lol
the fucking supercalifragilistic/ aladocious lines were fire, lmao
but you forgot the expi in the middle. lol. seriously though, the
way you linked that shit up was sick
damn that was a close one. and it really is a tie. however if i HAD
to chose, i would pick nditullio only because, he flipped the
script more than desanto did. but still. lol its a tie
hahaha. dude i love your jokin around raps. they always make me
laugh
lol. gudsen did all the work, because desanto, just had to set up
the rhymes lmao. still good though. im still wantin to see more
multies lol. it improves on flow
? what parasite diss? parasites arent even active anymore,
everybody basically moved either to masiahs or astros.?????????
fuckin fire. every time lol.........
lol. the both of you started gettin crazy in the end. good work. i
like the metaphors
YEAH SON! bless is back. good shit
HAHAHA. hes scared dante!
FINALLY, the news is over. that means the simpsons are coming up
next!
PEACE OUT YOUNG BREEZY. and that is a great song, i have it on my
ipod. so sick
DAMN. lovin the metaphors. good shit
lol. that was good. you should try using multies, it improves on
flow...lol EVERYBODY is jumpin on multies, but it really isnt that
hard to use. oh and i loved this line "ill go mountain climbing
just to throw you off the top of the cliff" genius!
yo...
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.31.09
NICE. "your gynecoligist recommends me,im the original pussy
cleaner". lol pure genius! damn, now i cant wait for the collab
i dont know what to name this. lol any suggestions?
sick shit! nice vocab
THAT WAS A FREESTYLE? better than any freestyle i might attempt
lol..... and i liked all the metaphors
lol why are you dissing nu nu? i cant approve of that because hes
my astro brother lol. but if this was a freestyle, that was some
good shit lol. i like that puberty line haha.
great verses! lol but you guys need to get some better equipment
lol, or maybe edit it better? iono just some constructive
criticism, but still good verses, you should of posted them, so i
could read along lol. but yeah, lol thats kinda what i sound like
if i record, and i only have a headset microphone..... but good job
anyways lol.
bludies collab with tokio got me goin psychotic lol
damn that was sick. you make your own beats? thats some talent! lol
i probably woulda prefered it, if your accent was american lol. but
good shit!
LOL. i looked up prince albert piercing.....gross. but now that i
reread that line, lol, i realize, THAT is some fuckin swagg
HOLY FUCKIN COCKHOLE! that shit was amazing. damn that was some raw
shit, like my toilet after eating a rare steak! damn the both of
you were spittin some fuckin hot bars. GREAT JOB
wow that was some sick shit. lol you are a thug
yes! another flaming track! breezy your rug rash line had me rollin
lol. and tokio again you came with heat lol.
"Call Mr. Rodgers, Change my shoes every half an hour!" that was
pure MAGMA. we are gods
DAMN that was sick. i like that oklahoma line. lol oh and that
harry potter line too! damn you... your too creative
DAMN. straight fire from everybody. and i like that little p.s. at
the end. were gonna run this site like hungry cheetah!
DAMN. for real though, that weight challenge line was fire. great
job
lol. seriously just do all of them. but if i HAD to chose, i would
chose 3, because your vocab was gettin insane
good shit. if thats true, im sorry for your troubles. but yeah, i
can tell that was from the soul. wow that was corny lol
oh hell yes. dose got his bitch ass checked. ive seen this
sooooooooooooooooooooooo many times. and i laugh EVERY time lol.
ADVICE
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.23.09
god damn your flow is tight! like seriously, its so easy to bob my
head to your verses. lol
DAMN. those were some sick lines. you kept the story intact, plus
you still use freakin prestigious lyricism. great job. murked him.
Nelly
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.23.09
call the cops...... i see a robbery in progress.......LUNATICS
ABOUT TO STEAL DA SHOW. they are fuckin BEASTLY
lol that was sick
HAHA. i just read that you were crash, lol now im embarrassed,
because you can say your a bitch without looking as bad, where as,
seeing as how imma guy, its weird.
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.21.09
hahaha. bubble gum. but nice shit guys. lol. i see your still takin
the fakers out simplicity lol. great job
lol better than any freestyle i could do. but yeah you know my
"raps are still nice" lol.
alright Ill try, but for real though lol my shit is embarrassing.
yup. lol. i really want to learn how to freestyle though, then
maybe, we can go battle some fools at the beach.
lol. nope sober as jesus lol. and i cant freestyle either, fuck
lol!
lol yeah, im like one city over from norwalk. like seriously, go
down rosecrans away from bellflower, and you go through la mirada.
lol. its funny because, it says its not for itunes, but i
downloaded it off itunes. haha. and im from a little suburban city
in cali called la mirada. its on the border of los angeles and
orange county, but im technically in los angeles county so i wear
it on my hats lol.
lol. that was WEIRD.
well i read all of your posts, and im gonna call it a tie right
now, but i want to see what breezy responds with.
DAMN. that was straight fire! GET HIM SON! the doctor evil line was
sick
infested
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.20.09
lol i had to rep my crew because everyone else was reppin MM
MASIAH
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.20.09
HAHAHA. you ended that amazingly, and thanks for not dissing the
parasites...well not completely dissing the parasites. much respect
MASIAHS!
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.20.09
hahaha "short like an elf reachin for a top cabinet shelf". that
was great! good work
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.20.09
hahaha short like an elf reachin for a top cabinet shelf. that
shits great. good work
damn, that wasnt even like a diss, it was more like a deathnote.
good job
Solja
1.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.20.09
YOU FUCKIN IDIOT. i dont know where all that other stuff came from,
because i didnt read it, but you copied, almost word for word, the
bonus track off of immortal techniques dance with the devil, ft.
diabolic. get out of here with that shit. go jump off a building
like that guy billy in dance with the devil who raped his own
mom........jebus christ! your worthless
............FUCK!
yeah i get. i cant think of one....my mind is so slow right now, it
probably got a ticket for racing. did that make sense?
yeah 40 lohh is really good. and im tryin to think of an acronym
for nova. how about Number One Victory Achieved? no thats stupid.
if only tokio was here, hes mad creative. lmao like a female artist
during her period! get it?
40 lohh is pretty sick
Everybody
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.20.09
yo i read that earlier. like i said on the post that was fire. lol.
you should check out eye for an eye, its pretty good.
hell yeah. real talk! LOL. you know whats up with my flows.
hahaha
FUCK! thats some sick shit. everybodys spittin fire today. im
feeling obligated, to write something great.
lol. can you start sucking once in a while? im getting bored of
telling you how good you are. lmao
it keeps provin your underrated. lol. good shit man
yeah, i know. its basically just me as of now that is on the site
regularly, but our whole crew needs to do a collab or something to
make sure everybody knows where we stand lol.
God damn you have a nice flow lol. thats some sick shit right
there. i would say you ended it nicely, but the whole thing was
nice, so mad props. lol. fuck it, you ended it nicely too lmao. oh
and whats up then? are you still in parasites, or no?
stay true
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.19.09
this is a repost, i wanted it on my profile. once again, great job
simplicity.
hip hop
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.19.09
AHAHAHAHAHA. that made ME laugh like richard simmons mom, when he
told her he was straight.
hip hop
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.19.09
dude simplicity, your as real as michael jackson being dead. hip
hop, your as funny as billy mays being dead, and me? im crazy fun,
like going to an asylum and playing go fish!
Stay True
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.19.09
yeah for real though, i dont like to start shit so i keep my head
low. lol maybe thats why im underrated.
Stay True
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.19.09
lol. i never got your email, so Ill post it here. oh and nice verse
by the way, i think mine will match it nicely
well i dont have your email though lol
um. i do have one, but i havent been on it for a looooong ass time.
so you might as well email me. andrujay@sbcglobal.net
lol. i was starting a rap right now. so yeah, Ill make it about
staying true. when do you want it done? oh and im gonna only say
that you guys would have won only because, our crew was hardly
active, and when they did battle, it was probably some real quick
shit, because they just came back and SMACK they had to battle lol.
but we definitely still had a chance
um.................................................................
...................................................................
....................i dont know..........................lmao. i
put a post up for da contest to read like two days ago, but he
didnt answer. and not that im forfeiting, lol, but i dont really
want it to go on. our crews can battle just for fun, but having
everybody vote on it, and losing your crew is just stupid. mostly,
because the voting system, was not set up properly, and like most
of the parasites are never on.
lol. thats some real talk right there. you have to fix your profile
though. ray isnt in your crew, and twisted hasnt been re added lol
dont worry guys. im gonna wreck him so hard right now.
parasites
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.18.09
i dont even know, what these fools are thinking lol. but i made fun
of their crew hopping in my diss. and hell yes we do need to get
our shit together
parasites
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.18.09
yup. like half the masiahs left, and went to sk. and then half of
sk dropped out lol.
Ikon Diss
9.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.18.09
lol. you know what would replace that second line better. "im the
tightest of kicks, so i guess your loose sneakers". yup
parasites
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.18.09
whats up tokio? where you been? theres like no one from our crew on
anymore. especially since bludie left. i had to diss all of sk
myself yesterday. lol.
sk diss
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.18.09
everyone take a close look at that last line, and realize that
there is two analogies. what do fists do? they punch. how do you
end jokes? with a punch line. yeah it blew my mind when i came up
with it.
lol the warriors are sick
prodigies
8.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
pretty good. sorry but im gonna go ahead and say prodigies beat you
this round. you didnt use many multis. like you had internal rhyme
schemes, which were multis, but no multis at the end of your lines.
wow. i would be embarassed if i was him. good job
well you guys started dissin, or at least i saw some of your
members did, so were probably not gonna be collaborating anytime
soon.
WHOS NEXT
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
yeah i know. you have to read all the shit, like in order, just for
stuff to make sense
yeah i saw that. now i have two targets to aim at. lol
WHOS NEXT
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
thats cool. a lot of shit has happened lately
yeah i know, too bad my crew is never on lol
WHOS NEXT
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
nice verse. are you gonna be on more or no?
FRESH bro
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
oh my bad lol misread that. and yeah i dont really like WC other
than when hes in westside connection, i just posted one of their
songs go check it. but yeah im goin to bed right now so PEACE!
roughrida
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
yeah and im goin to bed, so peace!
FRESH bro
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
nah, westside connection is ice cube, WC, and mack 10. but are you
talkin about when dre was in world class wreckin cru? or like when
he was in nwa, on express yourself?
FRESH bro
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.17.09
this shit is raw. lol, but im not that much into gangsta rap
anymore, well, unless you consider wu tang gangsta rap. but how do
you feel about westside connection? i used to listen to them a lot
yeah fuckin sick
oh and timmy. i thought i was supposed to be waiting to see who im
going up against, because if grime is doing a collab against me, i
have to diss both my opponents, and likewise. so yeah shouldnt
everybody wait until round 2 starts?
yeah i know, it just sucks, cuz most of our crew not sending shit
in
wow. he just did NOT stop. he could probably go on for days. fuck,
that was insane. does he battle? i would love to see him tear
someone down
CRITICAL BEATS. he didnt REuse them, timmy just posted them because
that was his last post, which happened to be a diss to anyone in
general. and im gonna go ahead and say its unfair for anyone to
vote against realeyez just because it wasnt directly to simp.
because im sure if he was aiming to diss simp, he woulda made it
much more personal.
damn. once again FIRE from both crews, too bad it wasnt a direct
diss at simp. but he still spit some sick shit, i think i read this
one before. and that fucking name thing simp did was fucking funny
as hell. lol great job to the both of you
yeah maybe
great multis lol. i wanna see his response. the only thing is, i
prefer metaphors and analogies when it comes to punchlines, but
thats just my style. so yeah, but good job
i dont think one member of SE have voted parasites. plus someone,
idk who, voted against me on the whole crews page. and i dont think
it looks good when grime is in your crew, but w.e.
hell yeah. its gonna be great, did you read the idea i had about
three judges? like i suggested prodigies, and kid suggested heiz
and rayfrombk. wouldnt that be so sick, if they voted on our
battles instead of the whole site?
no they arent, theyre like a group, which grime happens to be in.
but oh wells, and yeah i know that shit is gonna be sick. lol no
offense, but i hope he beats you. lol. because if he doesnt, then
that means im gonna be goin at twisted, grime, and roughrida, or
any combination of them lol.
lol wassup? i want this fucking contest to be over already. but its
gay, cuz nobody votes, and i swear, you guys are getting dickrided
by fuckin SE.
then i dont know how you have three
no i think venomspitter, sicknosis, and widastar, are your three
votes
well venomspitter already voted, and why wouldnt dboxs vote count?
unless were waiting for judges?
yeah that would be cool.
we should find three unbiased judges. i vote one of them is
prodigies, either one lol. and anyone else that is skilled and
unbiased.
o.i.c. well if youll allow it then Ill take it lol
alright your back. but this means that your crew gets one extra
person lol. and i dont know where the fuck tokio is, so go away.
lol JK! oh and sick ass bars too, incredible flow
i know this is stupid of me..... but when did i get two votes? i
only saw one from b rizzle
oh and i just checked, venomspitter is in it too.
hold on a fucking minute. isnt skitzo epidemic a whole fucking
crew? which grime is in? and i think sicknosis is in too. so i dont
think that counts
this is gay. dont you know everyone that voted for you?
yeah weird topic.....entertaining though, until the rape of course
lol. but still incredible lyricism good work
damnit. that means ive still gotta wait for a long ass time. gay
DAMN that was sick as hell. good work son. oh yeah and when are you
gonna send in your simplicity diss? i want to see that battle go
down
its hard for me to read, because of the format. but thats just me.
i did like this line though " you can call me speedracer, because i
never get last, lets see you go full blast, and still get trashed"
yeah i know what the fuck?
dududududududududududududududududududududududududududududududuh.
CLASH!
if i knew how to put a drum roll in text i totally would. hold on
let me try.......
fresh
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.16.09
yeah dude no beef. its all in good fun
yeah i think grime won. its on da contests page
well i admit that i said that i have nothing to say against kid. i
HAVE NEVER asked him to write me some lyrics
lol real talk glover
yeah i know but is that vote that hip hop gave to twisted still
legit?
does that mean mr hip hops vote still counts?
sick shit. and it sucks that your leaving but good luck
well seeing as how twisted borrowed a line, which im not saying is
wrong, just not original, i would say their endings were even, if
not CDS was stronger. but maybe im being biased lol. and i hope
that everybody voting isnt voting on length rather than skill.
however, i would say that this is a really close battle. good job
on both sides.
once again simplicity. killed it in the end
there is no round two. its just this
you guys should both vote on twisted vs c_d_s battle.
oh fuck! you both brought fucking fire!
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
oh fuck! you both brought fucking fire!
ALL CREWS
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
lol. i think featherweight is a better description.
iron: BLAH BLAH BLAH, blah blah blah blah blah filler line, i dont
even need to keep dissing you im killin time.
nocan: you aint really ready when i be rippin it, Ill fucking go to
your house and scissor kick your sisters lips.
they are both so fucking great
hahaha iron cracks me up.
yeah simplicity killed him. BI started out dissing himself, and
didnt end it good at all.
leave you down for the count, like draculas people!
no i have not
but doesnt math take the win after all three rounds? i remember i
saw the other rounds a couple of times but i like watching this one
the most lol
oh yeah ive seen this. its so sick. i like how he recycles that
little mathew shit. fuckin rapes him
that was fucking sick. ive never seen this battle. have you seen
the best of nocando posted by mirv5 on youtube? im gonna post it so
everyone can see lol
but like he said your back in. so just write a diss to twisted, and
send it to him
what are you talking about rida you never beat me
yeah just type a diss C_D_S, that way its more personal to twisted.
you cant join bad influence its for these two crews only
yes hes back. you should go get that towel you threw in and burn it
lol. im the only person who won for the parasites so far. oh and
fucking amazing bars by the way
yeah i know. fuck im probably gonna have to go against two people
next.
yay i win!
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
damnit. i think glover should be resurrected, because not only are
we down by a crew member, but his battle with roughrida was really
close.
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
oh yeah so what the fuck is up with that. did cds like throw in the
towel or what? cuz i checked his page and he never commented
anything
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
yeah vets are fine, but i think they prefer talent over experience.
fuck we need a forum section
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
i think the prodigies would rather be parasites.
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
yeah. that is true.
Prodigies
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
i dont know if MM killed them, but i put the nail in their fucking
coffin. its on the parasites page under FUCK GLOVER.
we shall see.
nope definitely not good enough. lol. that was kinda weird that kid
dissed kyloo too.
i appreciate your honesty. and thanks for the vote lol
oh. did cds forfeit?
is that really 2 to 0? i mean i know hes in the other crew but does
his vote still count? not that im complaining lol
hey can someone explain how twisted won versus cds?
how did twisted win?
hey kid exquizite posted his rhymes on my16. so find them and post
mine against his.
great battle on both sides
fuck hes sick. hes definitely in my top ten. at least for main
stream.
Online
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
you might want to get caught up in this giant battle thats going
down. go on dacontests page and read up.
alright i posted one
damn it. hes good in all his battles though, i dont know what his
best one is.
yeah im on still. watching youtube battles. have you ever seen
nocando battle? hes amazing
what the fuck nditullio? i liked when you voted glover better. not
only because were in the same crew, but because that shit was funny
lol.
haha thats a pat on the head for you simplicity. and where the hell
is kid exquizite? he just posted some shit a little while ago
yeah dude thats me.
roughrida
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
yeah dude i already sent my diss into timmy or whatever his name is
now lol. but yeah if you write yours up he will post ours to see
who won
yeah that was a little harsh, but i like that he did that, this way
it proves hes not being biased.
New Crew
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA that guy is fuckin amazing. damn for serious
though, that denzel washington shit was ON POINT!
lol well i guess i cant vote, cuz it would be biased, but sick shit
on both sized. and not trying to diss you bless but arent you and
rida friends? so does your vote REALLY count?
im up against kid exquizite, but i dont know how good its gonna be,
because i like to go second in battles, that way i can turn words
around and shit to diss them, so yeah.
ok good plan
oh i will make it past round one. and dont even worry about it
simplicity, he will get a 90/10 rating. so its all cool
lol. well then its been good knowing ya. and dont apologize
roughrida, i dont want you to have to eat your words later lol.
you mean wait for the parasites to win, so we can point and laugh?
haha. or as hard as it is for an asian guy to parallel park. lol
hell yeah he will. realeyez is good, and im glad hes back cuz now
WEll have more active members
Info
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
yeah good luck to you too. this fucking sucks though, i have
nothing to say against kid. DAMNIT!
Info
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.15.09
yeah how many rounds? cuz i like to flip the lines against people
and im not that great at starting off in a battle, so is it gonna
be like two? but im in!
i agree roughrida. the multis won it for me
yo
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.14.09
thanks twisted, thats a nail in SKs coffin lol. and NO never better
than parasites. haha
yo
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.14.09
no not better then parasites. lol
yo
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.14.09
oh well in that case, that crew collab isnt going down cuz sk fell
yesterday lol. but i had made a diss before all that shit happened
and i sent it to glover, and it was fuckin amazing lol. glover just
posted it under the parasites account like fifteen posts back lol
so you should check it out. its posted under FUCK GLOVER.
yo
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.14.09
i take it this is simplicity?
yeah dude that was a sick chorus. but i prefer your more complex,
rip a bitches heart out, style lol. not saying this was bad, cuz it
was great, just prefer the other style.
they are so lucky they are dead right now, or they would be so
embarrassed
fuck that kid, but i love that shit, sometimes i dont even listen
to dance with the devil, Ill just fast forward to that shit. lol.
it starts at 2 45 remaining on my iPod lol.
lmao its not that at all. i was seriously tired yesterday. we could
totally do it today though, just tell me what its about.
not right now, im too tired. i didnt go to sleep last night for
some stupid reason. WEll do it some other time..... plus arent you
in a crew? you should collab with them.
yeah were cool
alright then cool. we will call it a tie. and im not just saying
this cuz i lost on the votes. its just you can never have everyone
vote, and have a final decision, at least not when its this close.
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.14.09
alright cool. then its a tie, and im not saying this just because i
lost on the voting. its just theres no way everyone can vote and
have it a final decision, especially when its this close
well if you go to microphone masiahs post of FRESH it will explain
it all, so yeah.
"Steady checkin necks with my switchblade salute
Goose steppin through yer hood with blood on my boot" that was
fucking sick. im glad your in my crew lol
yeah were supposed to do a collab with mic masiahs against sk. did
glover send you an email or something?
FRESH
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.13.09
oh and Ill probably only do like eight bars, which is sixteen
lines, cuz i dont usually write long verses.
FRESH
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.13.09
i think im just gonna diss the crew as a whole, cuz it takes way to
long to diss them individually. i take it thats you glover under
the parasites account? if it is, let me get your email so i can
send you my verse.
FRESH
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.13.09
well whos in their crew now?
FRESH
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.13.09
lol we would destroy them, and any other crew.
FRESH
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.13.09
yeah i know. someones gotta start throwin big punches before we can
fight lol
nice verse simplicity. and i responded to mr hip hops when he
posted it yesterday so go check that shit out
that was pretty sick, but you got it wrong parasites run this shit.
i just posted a reply to this check it out
much respect but i had to get back at you
Glover
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.13.09
we should get crackin on a collab or something
Bludie
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.12.09
ahahahahahahaha he rated his own shit a one
i just read some of your stuff snyper, and your not that good
yourself
well i would invite you, but the whole crew needs to decide so i
guess Ill get back to you later lol.
SK: RoughRida, Grime Mc (and Grimey), Twisted , Kid Exquizite , &
Critical Beats .... AFFILIATES: Gudsen17 , Poet Delirious, &
Nditullio01. Parasites: Glover, Tokio Thunderbyrd, Kylootheclown,
CDS, Fresh. and youve heard the others. so check em out and decide
for yourself.
(CDS posted this earlier, so i just reused it lol)
lol. well parasites are the best, but i guess its on you.
parasites run this shit
i guess you won then. good battle
actually i only know of scene kings and parasites. there were other
crews but they broke up or something. and i dont think ive seen
like a complete scene king collab, its mostly people individually
repping it. i dont know, lol i have no opinion.
i dont even know what a crew is for, its mostly beefing against
other people but they do collabs and shit too. its pretty cool cuz
you always have people to back you up, but yeah the parasites is
like a newish crew on here, but its members have been on the site a
while, so theyre all good. fuck what am i saying WERE all good lol.
admin you need to delete this fuckin crakin creations guy. hes
annoying as fuck
lol you got me! yeah we could collab, but later though. im really
tired right now. oh unless you join a crew against mine lol, i just
became a parasite today. but whatever hit me up later if you still
feel like doin it
yeah but i dont know if anybodys really gonna read it, because
theres not many people on right now, but Ill post it just in case.
i could always repost
FRESH 2
6.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.12.09
sorry dude, this wasnt that good, but i replied so check it out
i actually liked it. imma reply but this is the last round, cuz my
head is starting to hurt lol.
alright dude lol. andrujay@sbcglobal.net but i dont check it that
often, so you should probably try to reach me through here first
lol.
yeah ill go another round, and we really dont know who won, but you
can post all our disses in one post after and have people vote on
it.
NOT Fresh
9.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.12.09
pretty good, give me a sec
i dont know. like i dont really see a point to a crew, but i guess
i will if you want me to. and fucking crackin creations, what the
fuck are you talking about?
alright dude, i got you
battle
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.12.09
what does that mean?
battle
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.12.09
um yeah, but it might take a while, if im battling both of you
battle
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.12.09
alright but like i said, you first
UPDATE!
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.09.09
check out the battle between me and realeyez, he has it posted as
REAL vs FRESH
did you guys happen to read the battle between me and realeyez? its
pretty dope
i am and i have no opinion
yeah that was sick. i took really long to write though lol.
lol. take that!
hey realeyez, if you still wanna battle, im down. you first though,
cuz i suck at starting lol
thats fuckin sick. its all over the place but i love it
o i get that tackling shit now! lol. thats some cloud shit!(flew
right over my head)
i thought a bar was two lines. like
"i spit fire like a flame thrower,
run that shit by me, and your games over."
thats one bar, at least thats what i thought.
tackling?
Depressed
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.08.09
"Shitting on talentless MCs, And I still persist to squat,
Beat the one that "Rides" once for each fist I got,". that was a
hot line. sick shit, good work
that shit is sick son!
lol. i think its the same, but im not gonna say i know for sure
lol. im not a female, i was just saying, call me what you want, but
Ill still wreck you
hahaha "shitting bars out my ass". andrujay@sbcglobal.net
go ahead, just dont outshine me too much lol
lol. ive been listening to kanye
lol. nice. great hook
sick shit, i just posted a response/branch off/continuation of
this. check it out
not a diss, just a branch off
hell yes! that shit is sick. you guys both spit flames on this one.
this shit will change the world lol
that was sick "well see the truth is, is that they dont exist
along with unicorns, bigfoot and even lockness". fucking amazing
fuck that was sick. you had so many multis in your verse! why the
fuck dont we get noticed? were are all fuckin sick
wtf! im not super fresh! change that! oh and your shit was sick.
gotta love the multis
yeah go ahead. fuck! i forgot to mention you lol. oh wells
not a diss, more of a challenge. and inspectah deck(rebel ins) says
the bomb atomically line in triumph by wu tang
fuckin amazing! sick flow plus crash bandicoot is the shit. hell
yeah. good work
rayfrombk
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 07.01.09
well i guess ill post if you post. lol
that was nice. lol. i got you though
so sick. that gorilla glue line was fire. you should check my week
19 post.
"Youre lyrics are as simple as a teenage girls text is,
And Im the opposite of simple, Even ejaculate complex jizz" <
amazing. plus that bb line was fire too. great job
hold on let me clean the blood out of my ears, cuz my mind just got
blown. lol good job
yeah for sure. we should do an underrated collab
i just posted a sick ass rhyme called weekly contest. check it out
fuckin amazing
savage
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.25.09
also, dont forget to check out my and yung breezys collab called
gods in hand.
savage
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.25.09
just a little creativity lol.
that shit was sick. i like when rhymes are creative
freestyle
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.24.09
was that really a freestyle? i dont even care if it was or wasnt
that shit was fucking sick
that shit was sick. i do agree with c_d_s about the whispering
thing, but it still sounds sick, plus you guys had a nice beat.
also, if you have the time, check out my collab with yung breezy,
its called gods in hand
i think we both did really good. tell me what you think
shit was sick but nobody commented. im gonna repost it.
Ey breezy. did you finish the collab? lol im still waiting
lol i liked status flow last two lines, plus everyone else killed
it. simply amazing. good job guys
comment
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.22.09
fuck clockwise, i spit it ahead of time,
analyze my life, i got no regrets in mine,
leave the rest in line, these are the best of rhymes,
call me a virus, these lyrics infest the mind,
this is fresh/s prime, my words hit your armor,
fuck gettin lucky, this shit is good karma,
so look to the heavens, watch God rock the mic,
just waitin to meet him cuz i sought the light,
and i fought the fight, bein perfect aint easy,
its hard to hold the title, just ask yung breezy,
but Ill always top ya, so dont even start dissin,
its like they had a vision, now all the haters on a mission,
but i spit with precision, i can do anything better,
maybe you just pissed, Ill have a full blown vendetta,
and maybe you gettin warmed, but mothafucka im hotter,
perhaps you spit a lil bit, but i can vomit water,
and yeah maybe you fly, but homie i soar,
call me a raindrop, cuz when it rains it pours.
ANYBODY
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.22.09
oh shit, it is 1 30. but yeah good plan, Ill see it when its up lol
ANYBODY
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.22.09
hey breezy check your last post, i left a lil something lol
comment
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.22.09
maybe a collab? lol
lol im embarassed
lol this is a repost because nobody saw it
New Name
9.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.07.09
nice ending
haha your title is hilarious. i think im done though, good battle,
too bad we dont hate each other or it woulda been great lol.
too bad grime mcs part was copied from Army of the Pharoahs, but
otherwise this is sick. Ill give it a ten for everyone elses effort
lol
Featured!
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.05.09
lol thats sick
lol i dont care either, and i know what you mean about being mad,
its way easier to spit when your angry lol. but yeah idk
fuckin sick. lol loved the iron solomon line, and this won too
>"wow ur quick in 8 hrs he read all my raps plus joined a crew".
good job
once again much respect. this could go on forever lol
fresh
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.05.09
lol that cali line was sick
fuckin sick thats all i can say about that lol. you need to start
posting more
wu tang is the best lol
New York
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.04.09
im from cali, but i live in the suburbs lol so Id rather not rep my
city lol.
lol i got a text with basically the same thing. Ill give it a ten
cuz lakers are the best lol
much respect, i hope it was good enough
alright Ill try lol
lol i am scared but Ill battle you. you can go first, cuz i suck at
starting
lol. i like your flow, its unique. oh yeah, and goodfellas is a
great movie lol.
lol that doorknob shock shit is funny. nice one, Ill give you a
ten, but it really should be longer lol.
and again and again and again lol. i dont know how you said a full
blown sentence while continuing it into the next line and it still
rhymed anyway, but it was sick. good job
lol killed him. i would hope that he doesnt reply for his sake
lol. sorry admin cant help you out. i dont even go on my old
myspace anymore lol. so yeah, sorry about that. but when are we
gonna see those new features to the site? also you should check out
my new rap, annihilation, its pretty sick
thats pretty sick. your flow is crazy good like you just keep goin
and goin lol. oh yeah and if you have the time, check out my rap,
annihilation. but keep that flow tight lol
my time
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 06.02.09
so sick. your vocab is crazy. like every line was fire. keep it up.
check out my rap annihilation, its pretty sick too, kinda similar
styles. but yeah keep spittin that fire
sick ass line right here "I spit so much fire,even the devil
meditated,". nice vocab good shit
fuckin sick wouldnt you agree?
much respect nditullio just had to make sure the west wasnt gettin
bagged on lol
lol you made the fat guy jump the fence off a trampoline, thats
some cartoon shit lol. definitely continue it.
yo
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.31.09
im not even on your list. that hurts lol. jk i honestly dont care
about anything but rapping.
wow i just read both of your disses, and i would say its pretty
close
wow im not taking sides but that shit was sick.
what the fuck. i thought you were with generation?
what happened? oh and sick ass flow too
lyrical
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.30.09
its ok guys you can talk shit, i wont cut your face up. lol. but i
will lyrically kill you. lol
that shits deep
lmfao. that was disgusting! you just made a story about poop, now
thats a talented mc lol. good job though
lol got retarded money someone please handicap me... that line was
hot
that was fuckin sick
rayfrombk
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.29.09
that shit was nice
i reposted it cuz the first one sounded weird. oh yeah....WU TANG!
SUUUUUUUUU. lol
haha you got knocked the fuck out. jk jk, that was a sick ass rhyme
though
damn thats sick
it was pretty good. your lines are real short, and random so its
kinda hard to follow, but your flow is pretty sick
no i wasnt referring to anything, i was just trying to say that
thats how good i am lol
lol. i have no idea what im talking about.
you dumb fucking piece of shit. WHY THE FUCK, would i respond to a
rap that you copied word for word. what a fucking dumb ass.
your flow is a little off, or maybe im not reading it right, but
its still good. i think im gonna give you a ten just for that
seinfeld line. lol
lol i didnt think it was bad. that dictionary chapter line was
straight fire.
SqUiRRelS
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posted by fresh on 05.19.09
lol creative shit. had me laughing. and i dont think roughrida
rates anything other than five so dont worry about it lol.
actually you never dissed me, you were just talking shit on
comments.
faggot you came at me first, then i killed you, and haven seen a
reply since.
sick flow. i ripped this kid too, hes a waste of time
i pretty much raped him
go ahead and jump on it. i just wanted to see what anybody could do
with it
is that a diss to me?
Javelin
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.18.09
thats sick. you have a tight flow
i geuss thats cool. i couldnt really follow the flow though
Last Hope
9.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.17.09
that was pretty sick. a little weird lol, but pretty good
this is called schizophrensic, i reposted it for the collab.
does anybody wanna collaborate on this shit?
im not done, and i know its kinda dark, but tell me what you think
of it
that was sick
ive said it before, and Ill say it again, you are the shit!
hey admin, you should check out my Random Rap. its probably the
best rap ive ever done. check it out.
i have only read this diss. but this spit was straight fire.
lol thanks
i love it please comment
shut the fuck up kid juve
heres a hint. ACRONYM
you should check out my battle with bakstreets. well its more of a
murder, but yeah check it out. i geuss you should check out my
battle with nightwalker, but i didnt kill him as bad. lol
im drunk
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.10.09
your really fuckin good. that decomposin/overdosin bar was
SSSIIICCCKKK
lol murdered him
stop trying bakstreets. you suck
mine blow yours outta the water
i dont really wanna waste my time. but if you feel like you have
to.
im pretty sure you wouldnt.
it wasnt bad, but your not gonna beat me
i thought it was good.
i shouldve let you start lol
battle me
5.00/10
posted by fresh on 05.07.09
i got one for you too.
lol. i really wouldnt want to waste my time on killing something
thats already dead. catch my drift.
im actually not that new but w/e
anyone want to battle?
thats fuckin sick. your shit is so comples. keep writing for sure
that was fucking sick. im not gonna lie. i read all the books too.
but yeah that was real creative.
lol. now hes gotta look up some rap battle lyrics to get back at
you with
i hope you know 99 bars, stole everyone of his raps. copy and paste
that shit in google.
lol. that ed, edd, n eddy line had me laughin
that was sick. i like the thor line the best
that was real sick. your flow is crazy
that was sick, you guys are both really good. this line > "didnt
take class for rap to be my fluent language didnt get the rap from
cats i use to hang with" was my favorite
yeah. thats real talk. you dont see a lot of people with
inspirational rap these days.
runnin it
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 04.14.09
rate this ish. and if anyone wants to battle, post a diss, and i
will respond
lol. ur lines are always incredible
thanks for the feature admin.
Addicts
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 04.10.09
that was really good. i liked the "My flow cant quit, not even
with rehab" line. keep doin it. o yeah and check out my apocalypse
rap.
my plan
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.24.09
nice! i got featured. thanks admin.
that was sick. i liked the "fully automatically" line
my plan
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.23.09
a real quick rhyme
Fresh Air
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posted by fresh on 03.20.09
YES! im liking this anti radio shit.
Freestyle
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 03.20.09
haha that was great. i liked ur big mac and revolving door line.
awesome.
bo peep
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posted by fresh on 02.11.09
hooray lol
bo peep
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posted by fresh on 02.11.09
lol. i would be embarrassed if i got dissed that bad. are you gonna
stay on this site?
is thhe weekly contest still going on? if it is you should check
out my rap "mc anthem" i think youll like it.
i used the word right four different ways, and thought i would add
write in there just for the hell of it
yeah this is all me for sure. i don know if others have used it
before, but i made it up without copying it.
that was good. its good that somebody thanks this website once in a
while
ur metaphors are great, i liked that "hot tip like matches" line. o
yeah you should check out my rap "stupid radio"
Defense
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 01.24.09
that shit was nice. i think its good to promote individualism.
check out my rap "stupid radio" and tell me what you think
you killed it in the end
i liked it. you kept that same rhyme the whole time.
Fuck PPG
10.00/10
posted by fresh on 12.24.08
lol. u said "hot as Ice". it was a good line, but thats still
funny.
i like that bow down part. nice!
that was real sick. ur last lines were amazing
i like your message
that was intense.you painted a perfect.i cant wait for part two
ur metaphors are really sick
the prodigies
glover
yung breezy
tokio thunderbyrd
simplicity
status_flow
stillmatik