This Plane
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 03.09.10
haha fireeee. i like the way you opened your verses on this oneee.
haha in the locker room? real homo lmao butttttttttt youre a cutie,
i couldnt really hear the first dude but it sounded like you killed
him lol the dude in the blue was fireeeee though, and i liked your
verse against him better than the first. hahha yeah.
haha good stuff as alwaysss
you all killleeddd it haha i think fresh had the best verse thoughh
this is so fucking cute! i love your writing honestly, its my kinda
style. great job (:
haha this is pretty good, good job
good rhymes, but yeah its short make it longerrrrrr
the fuck is leukothea? dont quit your day job bitch, oh and say hi
to jerry springer for me
hehe just keeeding love ya boobface
The Plot
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 03.02.10
i feel like i have seen big improvement from you saintly saint...
good job (: make this longerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
haha, good job hubby. i cant decide if i like this one better than
your last, i think so though cuz i like this beat more haaha (:
aww, i like this. i like how every break is like a new subtopic
haha it covers everything in a relationship. good rhymes, and flow
was pretty on point. (:
wow, this was good, i dont think ive ever heard any of smokes audio
im impressed, kc you were good too, in my opinion flow was a bit
off but hey what do i know about flow lol
Teehee..
9.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 03.02.10
haha silly silly silly.. but i like it lol
haha i actually really like this beat for some reason.. good stuff
from both of you, i like the last few lines of bunnys verse the
bestttt.
haha funky beat on this one i like it, good rhymes as always and
good topic, were both fans of the "lookin in the mirror" type shit
i guess haha. good jobbbb (:
haha i already read this, idk why i didnt rate lol but yeah i love
seeing all three of you guys relate on an emotional level together,
rhymes were great as always
haha i dont think ive read much of your stuff, but good job i liked
thiss
verrry well done, im glad to see this side of you (:
Some of the most honest stuff I have ever read from you. Obviously
i would be a fan of this cuz its my kinda stuff, but I really
really liked this one, you not only include the emotion of the
inner you but also the actions upon those feelings, great job.
you guys are definately a good pair, and i love both of your
writing alwaysss, and good Shutter Island reference haha i liked
that part
poetryyy, about family, or a special relationship. something DEEP
and emotional
ugh, i hate these subjects lol, but as always good stuff. this is
actually some of the best ive seen from kc in a while, and as
always good rhymes from both of yaaaaaa
yeah like everyone has said, work on improving your flow a little
bit, but you have potential
haha i like this, lots of pretty clever lines
Jet Speed
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 02.28.10
pretty good, id say ive seen better but still, my favorite lines
are 8 & 9 (:
ive seen better from you, but its still good. (:
amazing as expected, you really have gotten alot better. both of
you killlled it
i stuck rhymes into my veins till the words struck mind, and as the
tough times fell, i learned to duck, dive, weave as the leaves turn
into ash and burn off the trees, decieved, the clouds told me i was
here only to bleed, to watch the seed grow only to be sluaghtered
by greed
yay i really like this post, im glad you are confident and like
ensayne said, motivated again. as always love your writing
i should give this a zero for all the women out there.... i hope
you never get a girlfriend lmao
10.25.2008
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 02.22.10
love itttttttt haha of course
great job phenom, nothing less than expected of course.
goood stuff from all of you, i think this is some of the most
truthfull stuff ive seen you write in a while kc, good job.
pretty gooood for a freestyle haha
not really my style lol but good rhymessssss
i like the metaphors in this, and the last few lines were really
truthfull, well the whole thing was haha. goooood job!
good job, i love this jedi song to beginnn with haha, i like your
second verse the best
IM BEAMIN
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 02.06.10
haha this is funny, i like the intros to both verses
see, youre good! haha i liked it (:
yeahhh this is good lol
Still Here
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 02.04.10
haha youre gay, but good job
work on your flow a bit, but i think it was pretty much a tie haha
great, as always. good story, and yeah it had a nice twist on it.
suckadick
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.29.10
I ALREADY RATED THIS i said, eww but good rhymes lmao
very nice proooo (:
psht i already liked this on facebook you shrool lol but yeah, i
like it. haha
i really like this one actually, the hook is good, and i like the
last few lines of verse one, and the first few lines of verse two.
haha
VENOMSPITTER BECAUSE HE SPITS VENOM..
this is really truthful, i like it. i like the bridge a lot
lol, this is great
Praised
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.26.10
wow this is really good, the lines are like perfectly the same
length lol
youre getting better and better haha goood job!
its definately different from your other stuff, i like it though.
good change, it shows youre versatile and actually talented lol
good job
deeep, i like this, good job, fav line "Why is Cupid shooting at
my chest when my heart is stomped out near my feet ? " lol
i like this, i like it when theres different people/persepctives.
good topic.
i love reading your stufffff, its always great, last few lines were
my favorite
you always do these kind, i dont like reading them lol but it had
good rhymes
DETROIT
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.25.10
haha very nice
hahah very niceeee, good job hubby
Ministry
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.24.10
great job, this post was excellent
i think i liked phenoms verse best, but you all did a great job on
this!
goooood job asshole
i like this, its really honest which is what i like to read.
i love thiss, deep stuff, exactly what i like to see
haha veryyyy nice fiance
haha i really liked this! im proud
this is goood, but is constabulary even a word?? lol
swinging
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.21.10
i dont like reading this kinda stuff lol but it was good
haha i likeedd this
i like the last few lines. obviously the whole thing was amazingg.
KC im out
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.17.10
kccccc i love youuuu youre my homie remember
Round Here
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.12.10
i feel like i have seen major improvement from you in the past few
weeks... another deep one, this is the stuff that i actually like
reading. i loved this, youre amazing
good rhymes.. maybe add more thought/feeling or detail to your next
post, but overall good first post
damnn i liked this alot, good topic
once again, great job, ive seen a big improvement with you lately,
its like you actually have talent?! lol
im
not a huge fan of horrorcore, but this had goood lines
i actually realllyy like this, i love this original song, i think
this is one of the best ive read by you
gooood job, this is deep, my kinda shit haha
this is definately a big improvement, and youve already gotten
better since your last post. good job!
this is pretty good, good multis, maybe work on just the overall
structure a bit, but in general it was a good post
deeep, my kinda shit haha
good jobbb puppy
I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
ANG REP!!!
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.08.10
wasssup ANG we takin ova hahaha
Rumors
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.08.10
fireeeee, i like really like flickers part on this, yours is good
too though lol
good shit as expected, i like how honest this is.
Life
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.07.10
wow this is pretty good
flows sick
5.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.07.10
lol at the venom benefit reference.. this was goood as alwaysss
i like the hoook, great job with the multis, i need to start
working on those myself lol
this is awesome, i love it, id say both of you are easily among the
best on this site.
girl this is amazing, i love reading "stories" like these,
definately a great job and major propsss on this
goood vocab from both of you, definately a great job by both of you
on this one
i agreee you can do better, still pretty good though
this is goood, pretty deep, i like it
alleyway
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.03.10
this is pretty good, you might want to make the chorus a bit more
detailed, but overall its nice work!
haha damn you guys are dirty, this was good thoughh as expected
very creative, great job, rod is right this would make an amazing
video
great shit as expecteddd
simply amazing. i loveddd this.
haha that was goood, i like it
haha this is funny, its creative, i liked it
goood job on this one hella good
glad to see the emotional side of you lol i liked it
I am
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 01.02.10
nahh girl, i get what you mean, it may not seem like it haha but i
totally understand what youre sayin, im in the same boat haha
this is deeep, very good
yeah this is good, creative and relates to the readerrr.
keeep it up, i like this
omg i love both of you lol
i like thisss, its creative
verry nice
wow lol
haha i like this, its clever
i really like this, especially the last few lines, its really goood
and true
R.E.A.L
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.28.09
this is amazinggg, everyone did a great job, and ensayne is
obviously the most creative one hahaa i liked it
this is really descriptive and detailed i like ittttttt
Lost
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.27.09
haha funnnny, good shit no doubt.. and your lines are hella long
lol
i agree with ensayne, those are my favorite lines, this is really
good i love reading this kinda stuff from you, its personalll but
still relating to the reader
i make everythingggggg better lol
wow this is amazing, very creative, good shit from everyone, i love
itttttt
damnnn this is really good, never read any of your stuff beforee
but this is niceee
haha nice nice
haha goood stuff puppy
Its REAL
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.25.09
hahaha ohh evann, my favorite, merry christmas to you too boyyy
you suck lol just keeeding
goood stuff, im surprised lol
hella good buddy, i love it
i agree with everyone, make it longerr, but other than that it was
great
haha damnn youre an angry lil boy arent you
youre a loser lol
i liked this, you guys are a good team
Stand Tall
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.21.09
ahhh i absolutely love this, you can tell that you really feel this
way. great job.
maddd good rhymes, its always nice to just let it all out in
writingg and express yourself. props to you girllll
pretty good stuff from both of youuu
haha this is awesome, i love it
haha this is amazing. mean, but amazing.
this was pretty good, i liked it. you
e improving.
haha yesssssssss
prettty good
this is really good, its personal which i likeee.
next to you i sound like poop lol........ BUT, youre my first
collab yaaaayyyyyy
this is really good, the beat goes with it perfectly too
like everyone said, you both did reallly well. id vote hype
though..
i actually really like this one, "this earth is my cradle, and imma
put this bitch to sleep,
this world is my table, i put rappers on my plate and eat," haha
favoriteee line
lmao good job on this one
"Shuriken on my side; Ninja tactics that’s how I was raised,
Black belt, bonafide; Acting drastic saves the day." haha i love
that. i enjoyed thisss
mr.u definately got this haha
bothhh of you did good lol
creativity
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.14.09
this was pretty goood, probly one of the best of yours that ive
read.
KC MM now
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.14.09
arent you glad you finished it
lol
good shit
i like this one, good job
lol this is funny i like it
nice shit from both of you, i liked it
one of my favorites of yours, great job
anotherrr masterpiece
Demons
9.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.09.09
veryy nice
still cold
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 12.09.09
job welll done
representttt
ill
get in on the next one haha
yeeeeeeeeeeah boyy lol
i like your comparison to hip hop in this.. once again goood job
haha
yet another great one, girl.
girrrlll, us poets gotta stick togetha ;]
great job on this one, hunnny bunny
yeee good shit guys
amazing
hahahaha oh my god............
yayy good job
POTENTIAL
9.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 11.19.09
pretttyy good lol
Lexicon
10.00/10
posted by jessenluty on 11.19.09
like everyone else says, very good lol
very nice
yepp im a girl haha
