anyone who says men should not cry is lying to themselfs cus
sometimes it is alright.
we feal pain just like any oth...
This is for all those i have lost uncle jake,my cousin travis,my
best friend anothony,my granpa tom decourcy,and last bu...
i spit it for the poor,i spit it for the white,i spit for those who
do not believe they have free rights.
i spi...
i give everyone a 10,but Trans...i didnt like his at all...its like
the other 3 went all out,and he did something i could keystyle in 2
minutes,but Shorty i felt did the best just because the flow was
pretty much perfect,BUT an 8 for letting Trans on...
this is the worst diss ive saw at me...all 3 of us would kill
you...Mr U has more thought then your whole shit in one line...i
actually know how to flow,and ill have 4 multies in 2 lines...and
shorty will out vocab you,and use a much more even flow....try with
smaller people cus your just not worth our time....
some lines dont rhyme that great[first 2 for example],and you
should work on more multies,and internals,but other then that this
was a tight post,and i do see progresion
lol really random,but this is sick...
there was a few to many fillers,but its good
My Girls
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.31.10
ok this really wasnt that great,but other then the format really
sucking nothing was below average
this is decent...work on flow with multies,and harder punches more
originality
You...
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.31.10
ummm this is decent....
this right here is mad tight,but flows chopping a few areas
GL on your future man..peace..email/MSN is stoppy12345@hotmail.com
if you ever still wanna collab with me...
Battle
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.30.10
i will
thanks for the mention man...you might come back though..if not ill
see you on MSN,and maybe well collab some time
For collab
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.29.10
now that one didnt need a topic...all around just crazy spit.nice
one
also nice,but not long enough,and still all over,but nice
multies,and the flow was still nice
its good,but theres not really a topic or point that you stick
to.kind of all over,but nice flow and shit....
lol kid..your just stupid...im sorry..i feel bad for you..
record this...i think its perfect for actually recording...just how
i read possibly,but def should record in my opinion...
i dont really know what to say
sick...really nice flow,and like Pro said the lines said alot,good
multies,and all around a nice post
Chaotic got this..only 12 basic lines? raindrop couldnt win with
that...
lol at this dick sucker b~low~me...this was nice man..youve got
alot better,and you even have your own haters now
i really liked the flow,and the all around just raw~ness of
it..agressive,and nice multies...well done
this was tight,but the format is really bad..you need to change
it,but this was tight
its decent man,but its mostly still basic,and the flow is off in
alot of spots,and you still have immature thoughts,but you had some
good rhymes,and some decent thoughts,but just work on multies,and
making the lines more even,...decent
im in pro...
Coven
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.10
probly one of the best youve done in a minute cus the
multie,flow,originaly,and tech was all above average,and theres no
major issues..and not really even that many minors...nice
contest
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.10
lol im in....
i like the thoughts,and the all around rap,but some parts got flow
issues..
mad tight and deep...best one youve done keep working at it...
ready
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.17.10
this was good,but not very complicated....
vets
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.17.10
im def down
"the host of the holy spirit and our father delivers
he will lift all quiters and the mis fiters an sinners" that was
ill...near the end the flow went to being a little choppy,but it
was a good script,and that was 2 nice lines man..
this is ill right here....
aggresive...nice multies..i like this...i really dont have much
else to say flow seemed nice to...ill rate again when "collab" is
done,but way to to be above under lol
BCs Own
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.15.10
nice multies,i flowed it to the beat really well,and with you
writing im sure you would do even better...i say tight script would
be even tighter if you recorded it,and took your time to do it
right
you really need to format this better,but overall it was pretty
good no major multies,wordplay,or punches,but nice
on the real Hype...i said not to long ago on one of the forum
threads "and Hype everybody be sleeping on him now adays,but hes
sick" thank you for proving my point..multies,originaliy,and
natural talent man...fucking sick keep at it..and part 2...whens it
coming?
just wanted to say nice script when the collab is finished ill rate
it then to,and go more in detail,but for now...thanks for the
comment,and putting the hate a side for a minute,and yeah ill be
back just realized i was getting to big of an ego so ill come back
and diss you just to make sure ya got someone to rag on..keep
working at the audio man your one of the best on the site at
that.....
this was deep right here man....can you go edit the 5 you dropped
on my post? either way nice script,and keep working at it
thanks again everyone,and really apreciate the comments you have
left,and the respect you have shown
2nd verse was perfect..and i meen perfect...i liked the hook
alot,and the 3rd verse was also great.first was above average so
all around this post was your best one ive read[and ive read alot
of your post] mad tight
try to make the lines longer,and try to make them even,but for a
start its nice,and if you look 4 to the left of writing theres
forum theres a mini chat in there that you can ask people for help
i love this style,and what YOU did with...fantastic post,and "I
just plant the lines, they blossom and grow into plants of mine,"
had a sick sick flow...
EXHIBIT O
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.10.10
i felt the first verse was better then the 2nd,and those starting 2
lines are ill,and a great opener....keep at it dude youve gotten so
much better
other then the fact some lines are childish this is a pretty tight
script,and a good read...
i 2nd exactly what E Mc said...you should def try to record it...if
you do record it let me know
bars
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.10.10
i 2nd what nelly did for the most part...and your wordplay could
use some help..but your going in the right direction,and now that
you get what multies are,and your working at em theyll become more
sick...
Illmatic
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.10.10
LMFAO.....
New
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.09.10
aight i felt that there could have been more metphores,wordplay
that way it popped a bit,and the closing 2 lines dont rhyme that
great so not the best finish ive saw from you,but the script is
tight,and one you fix these few issues if you want link me
again,and ill re~look at it
Untitled
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.09.10
this was tight in every way,but flow...witch was choppy,but great
post,and keep working at it..
this was nice right here..
it was nice....Nelly looks like a nerd,but is pretty tight..
fun
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.07.10
ahhh this was decent,but not long enough,and nothing really stood
out,but theres flow so just work at the rest.
hi
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.07.10
ehhhh overall it was good,and i like the fact your doing better on
multies,but wordplay and creativity need to go up
i thought the shit was ill...i spit fast so the big words are good
for slowing it down a tad for me....work on wordplay and originaly
though man,but other then those 2 things....stamped legit
also if you want faster advice,or you want to ask otheres to rate
it the "forum" on the far upper left [3 to the right of "bars"] and
in there theres a mini chat that is really nice to use
this was tight right here,and i like your writing style....work on
more wordplay to make it a 10,but its nice...oh and where it says
writing above this comment box you can change it so you dont ruin
others ratings and your own by putting a 5 on it...keep it up.
i 2nd most of what Ensayne said,but i liked "I Zoom SO FAST, My
VISIONS CLASHED, My KNEES ARE GASHED" not a punch though just a
good line with great flow so uncap it,and even up your lines cus it
makes the flow way to choppy for anyway to know where your flow is
going/is at...keep working at it
IM BACK
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.01.10
this was tight dude like Bunnyz said just try to add a few more
multies,and maybe like 1 more really sick line instead of a filler
witch there are a few
this i liked every verse you started like you had something to
prove,and the flow was nice only thing wrong is lack of multies[not
nessicary though] and i think the chorus should be more basic cus
if recorded you want people to be able to rap it with ya..you know
catchy,or just easy to remember
first 7 sick shit,and i think you should back and change the closer
if your leaving it at 8 cus your closer shouldnt be your worst
part,put great flow,nice multie sets,and vocab was nice to have in
it...nice script
this was nice,and i liked the lyrics,and in most parts the
flow..now it does need editing,and the hook was sub par witch you
dont want on your mixtape,but this was cool...would give you a 8
cus its clearly an 8 with the small things you need to take care of
it will be a 10,but rating a 7 for not having lyrics written below
it
Shootout
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.31.10
i felt in some parts the flow are off,and you forced a few
wordplays and metophores,but the script overall is pretty nice,and
there were a few lines that i would sujest using in a 10 caliber
post...keep it up
your lyrics are tight,but the flow does need a tad bit of work,and
you need to raise the vocals a bit more not to mention start
practicing on your editing,but the lyrics them self are tight,and
some of the multies you did in it were awsome so keep working at it
DAWG DISS
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.29.10
if only Dawg knew how to rap at all he could actually say something
back....
Kick Back
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.29.10
great story telling and imigery,and i loved all 3 verses...wasnt a
huge fan of the hook,but maybe i wasnt flowing it right
nothing in this is above average at all...you really need to work
on vocab,longer lines,metophores,wordplay,and of course your
flow...
this was well flowing,but there wasnt that many great lines that
stuck out..the 2 lines Des and Pro mentioned were tight,but there
was a ton of fillers,and i just felt there was to much lack of
wordplay,metophores,and vocab
2nd verse was mad sexy,and all of it was consistent,and there were
some crazy lines,but the first verse flow started a little
choppy....but all around this was mad tight
tight shit bro..flow was just perfect,and legit like it wasnt
forced at all it seems like it just came,and the multies were in
good places,and were good sets...really well done dude keep working
at this
this was pretty tight dude...some parts flow went off a bit,but
there were some good thoughts behind it,and it was creative i felt
it was a 9 and half,but >10
this is decent man,but i know you can do much better basic
vocab,metophores,and wordplay tight flow,and it was consistent,but
work on making more stand out great lines
man this is mad deep,and the first verse killed it in every way,now
i still liked the 2nd verse flow wise,and some of the thoughts you
had i just feel you could have made some more things that stood
out,but the hook was tight,and the first verse would be great
recoreded so tight shit
i honestly like your flow,but make more of a point,or add more
multies,and vocab along with metophores cus it has to pop some
where,or make it really funny,but you got a nice flow,and some
decent lines to work on just keep practicing
this is pretty good dude,but nothing stood out alot,and maybe a
little more length on bars,but this was pretty nice,but some lines
seem like fillers like the start of your 2nd set the first 2 lines
could have been much better...and some of it it didnt need CAPS
only metophores,or something that has to do with his name......
0 for mdot rating himself
ummmm??
lol i understand that,but beats go to raps cus thats what alot of
rap is flow....like its not a rap if it dont flow and rhyme...
decent work on evening your lines cus it throws flow off cus its
supposed to fit in a beat and every beat gos 1/2/3/4 1/2/3/4 so it
should be the same length like the beat is
Insanity
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.10
you need to format it into actual rap format,and the flow is a
little off cus they are not equal or lenght[or close to],and you
should try multies cus you seem like someone smart enough to use
them,but nice job,and keep working on the minor things
i rated again for sake of my ass.....
tight punches great flow,and an all around good cheap shot at
MM..to bad yall lost the first round lmao..but this was really ill
great job yall
this was nice and i like the concept,but flow is off cus the lines
are not even close to the same length,and it should be a little
more complex,but i like the Intro alot,and the hook is tight..just
felt you could have done more with the verse..BUT good job,and keep
working on getting better
i have to give it to Ray,but good battle
GOD DAMN DUDE!! like wow did you really need to do this? murder....
damn dude thats fire...way to come back this will be a close
call....
"I`m so Quick Witted that my Fitted`s Tippin" lmfao thats ill man i
like small effort of multis it wasnt over done for a diss,and and
it didnt distract me in anyway and the flow was solid..put some
good thoughts in this,and its a good diss,but its not perfect or
unbeatable so cant wait to see Ridas
got to give to to see Mic Lord cus of "CDs D.N.A" lines it just
through other dudes flow off way to much...neither was great,but
mic lord took it...
dude just leave....sad little kids now adays
lmfao...drama needs to start reading before he rates..
haha thats great bro..honestly man i hope they let us both back in
we could be great again
this is wonderfull,and what i remember GMN being..way to revive
something that was going downhill...*Claps for GMN* great post and
maybe yall should make a part 2 cus it seems to me you both still
had to say aswell cus flow whys i felt that you guys could have
gone all day
Chaotic won this..it dont look like Rock and Roll really tried like
nothing in there was great it was all just good,and when battling
on this site your gonna have to make some type of impact weather
its much better mulits,more clever,more personal,or just funny,but
none of these did i see so yeah theres my vote..
i felt the first like 14 were fucking great,and then the rest fell
off a bit,but i think you should go back to that point,and finish
it proper cus it looks like you just wanted to finish it,but either
way this was mad tight keep it up
"after I put i dildo in this POCKET pussy hell be shittin
sideways," LMFAO nice dude this was sexy right here cant wait to
see his round 3 aswell
this is decent,but there was like 2 multis,and with this simple of
thoughts you need to use multis to make it stand out....decent
post,but make it more complicated,or start working on your multis
lmfao...i like this dude you should make it a full post
Freestyle
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.12.10
i like what your trying to do with it,but thanks to the lines being
so far apart its hard to switch flows like that,and some of it is
to simple,but its pretty tight if you work on it a bit
what you have so far is good,and if you finish correct this will be
ill so just keep working at it
this was pretty good,but nothing hit really hard...you need to get
more personal,and the flow is off in some spots make the lines more
even,but nice
gotta agree with Simp...def still sick,but i that the ALL GREAT
PHENOM can do better then this
honestly tough desicion for me cus both were good,but not great,and
the both had some lines that stood out,but i call this a tie,and if
you want to get a vote out of me youll need a round 2
Hype got this cus he killed all of it,and leanpockets kind of bored
me at moments,but both were great,and i almost gave it to pocket it
just cus Hype needed those many lines
best post you have done nice multis,and tight flow work on making
it more complex,but it was good
THIS IS
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.10
i have to agree with Bunnyz..you did really well on this,and the
only thing missing is maybe a few multi sets in there,but this was
tight,and fun to read maybe work on the lines being a little closer
in length also
"these fukin fakes change there looks, i dont even regonize there
ways" you should have made a better 2nd line to that cus it was a
good set up flow whys,and with all you could say,but this was
cool,and i like what your trying to do with it,and i like the topic
flow was pretty good..nice script
i have to 2nd what Pro said cus recorded this wouldnt word for the
fact the line lengths are no where near each other,but the lyrics
and stuff are tight,and i like your idea for rhyme scheme,and how
you set things up,and but make the lines the same length to make a
better flow to it
i want back in....
wow mad tight bro,and both of you killed it..Pro had more good
lines,but thats because his is so much longer...boogey has a really
tight flow,and it all just went tight together...way to go guys
ill multies,great lines,and devine flow....my favorite of yours
that you have done..good vocab,and good wording you know its not
perfect,but this is mad ill,and its featured bars type probly
around 8
LFB DISSSS
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.08.10
this was mad tight,and it was good,but the multi line i question
cus theres not any great multis in there,but it was ill,but try to
even up the lines a little bit to make a better flow
battle me next...
well i understand all of them,and these is fucking great...the
flow,vocab,and all around structure is fantastic...i actually
enjoyed reading this i will have my eye on you.....
"ease the time like you was high but im your syndrome" i liked
this,and if you had made a 2 line set with it where it made maybe 2
punches with the same 2 set could have been your KO,but i liked
this,and it was tight,BUT some times they dont rhyme,and you need
to work on putting atleast a few multis in there
lmao leanpocket...this is due today right?
clearly nelly
this was tight guys....i love some of the set ups you guys did,and
Pros 2nd closed it strong...keep it going
this was tight,and i like the way you came out,but flow was off in
areas try to make your lines more of the same length,and some vocab
never hurt anyone,but i like the way your heading,and with some
work you could honestly become really good.
i agree you need to do audio,and your boy solo needs to do this one
with you..i like the hook alot,and you straight killed your verse
and i think it flowed great.your boy also did really well,but yours
stood out more to me
"Camilot.. I pull the sword from the stone in the booth..
Have a conversation with you about wisdom and the fountain of
youth.."
all of this was sick,but that is my favorite part,nice multis in
there tight flow,and some great 2 line sets.good metophores,and
other the slight lack of vocab this was fucking great
lol put me im always in these
haha thanks for the shoutout man,and this is tight bro work on some
minors like maybe some multis,or maybe just some vocab,but this was
nice
standard
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.10
well its really nice to see you back Bo...if you ever want to talk
to people they got the forum in the corner with the mini chat,but i
have saw better then this from you,but thats probly just cus you
havent wrote in a while
collab
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.10
topic????
i vote Pro both were beyond fire,and i did find that MR Us punches
were slightly better,but i actually like Pros delivery more,and
felt like Mr U had some choppy parts and i just felt in his 2nd set
that he could have done much better and kind of just waested 4
lines on something i think are 7s on the site can write.but Pro you
did get beat on punches,and his flow almost got you if it wasnt
choppy in spots so next time step it up further cus this was mad
close....
mates
4.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.10
pitty pat child rhymes..
Im Back
1.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.10
lol lmao lmfao
Light Up
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.04.10
hey there sexy this was beast
lol glad you do
go into the forum
you really need to format this,cus i cant even read half of it
untill then....
hmm still basic,but a few lines were tight,and the flow for the
most part was good...
Mike lord
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.04.10
none of it was battle like....like none of it hurt...good lines for
a post,but not for a diss
hmmm parts of it seemed great,but alot of it didnt rhyme,and the
bars are to far in difrent length,not rhyming means your not a
rapper so take more time next time and start with the basics first
i really like the idea of this,and the hook has a good flow,and
other then the 2nd and 4th line i like it cus it seems more deep
then those endings,and you need to work on the the multis and vocab
one of the 2 to make it stand out in some way,but i like the
flow,and the idea you have .....work on it
basic scheme,basic flow,basic punches..im sorry man,but other then
the slightly above average vocab nothing really hits home at
all.like none of it would stick or hurt in a battle.become more
personal,and work on multis cus this needs them,and almost all post
do....not saying fill the whole thing,but atleast put a 2 set of
multis in there
your from detroit?
free write
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.01.10
np...sorry if some of it comes off harsh its just things to work on
we all have them
free write
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.01.10
flow was off in areas,and the whole thing comes off way to young
cus the way its structured makes it kind of pointless to have
metophores of punchlines cus you dont set them up at all,and you
need to make more complete thoughts and add multis,BUT with those
few minor changes with the ideas,and the pretty good vocab you have
it will be mad tight...
yo this good right here bro...BUT theres really no multis,and at
some points the rhyme sceme and ideas seam a little to simple..but
flow is pretty tight,and some of these lines show great promise.
swagger
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.25.10
try to make the lines shorter,and you want them to be equal in
length then start working on multis
this is decent,and some individual lines have great flow,but as a
whole its off cus of the big gap between the lengths,and you def
need more vocab or to add multis one of the 2 cus other whys its
just a post that anyone can do,but some lines flow great,and it
could be tight if you did it right
swagger
4.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.25.10
wow this is really bad.lines are to long,no vocab,no multis,and the
flow is off not to mention its way to basic of thoughts
oh and this is asking for a battle then i will sevre you...haha
like tenis..but join the crew page bruh bruh
thats tight bruh bruh..but you should have made the Sub Zero have a
freeze set up.
...ation
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.22.10
Did u mean u could beat gmn by "i could beat the whole nation?"
overall good piece 10
sad..........
lmao at this retarted kid....
i like this alot,and both flowed really well,but in Bludies there
wasnt any 1 bar that really stuck out for me,and i was waiting for
that,but it was on point,and really shows who he is as an
artist,and the 2nd line was tight.Profound i like the way he came
out,but it fell off at the end cus he decided to wonder off and
diss mike lord i know its cus mike lord did a verse and mentioned
destroying the nation but still...it really does seem your mind is
fucked up though,and you have now convinced me you need
help...tight collab yall Bludie work on something standing out,and
Pro STOP DISSING PEOPLE
you used the right ammount of vocab,and i dont feel you fell off at
all cus with how fast i spit this went really well,BUT use of
multis and internals would have made this much better,and work on
making the imigery better...tight post
this was good,but alot of it dont make sense,but im glad to see you
working on your multis,and just keep working at them
lol put me in
i agree with rida,cus i didnt get it all,but the multis and
flow,are def on point,and there were some great lines in there such
as "Im the king of this rap shit with subliminal tactics." really
well done,and keep working on fixing the minor details,and adding
more of what makes it great
i just have to 2nd "live evil"
this is def sick,and i love it all apart from the 3rd line.lol shit
was mad corny,but work on things like that not coming off as much
of a kid like that,but the flow,multis,inner rhmyes were all on
point,and you did a great job
i might hate you...but this was mad honest,and there was alot in
there some people might not of noticed..some lines were a little to
long,and you could work on putting more multis and vocab cus those
inprove even these kinds of post,but i feel this was one of your
best you have done as of recent,and that you probly put more effort
into this one and that is why
the flow in this was great,and i can tell that you put alot of
thought into it,but there need to be stronger punches,and
metophores if you dont feel like doing the punches atleast one huge
KO one that just lets people know hes on his ass,but good diss,and
just work on the small things
LIVE EVIL
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.14.10
i agree with Mike this would probly sound sick spit,and the multies
were tight along with flow,and the delivery with the impact of your
words was also quiet good,but "Well fuck that you can all go suck a
fuckin dick" you know better then anyone that dead lines are never
good,and thats basicly what that is....tight script
i like the spelling your name thing quiet a few people have done
it,but i think everyone should...tight flow,proper multis,and a few
i really liked,and the lines in a while are just quiet good..but
you do get a 9 for rhyming 3 times cus thats worse then 4 times..
this is better,and the wordplay,vocab, was quiet tight,and the
multis were decent,but the bars are no where close to even in link
so it couldnt flow on a beat..but tight bro,and work on making em
more even
ill shit
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.14.10
yeah only major issue i see is vocab..rhyming up 4 times kind of
shows a lack of other words to use,but i like the post just try to
fix that
this is good,but none of it really popped to me,some of the flow
was oof and areas,and ive saw better from you,but there was some
good punches in there,and some 2 liners flowed real well with each
other keep it up
whats up with the n word
ACCES DENIED lol
good shit,
HeeD
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.13.10
i really like the flow,and it seems your on the right track with
imigery in some spots,but make it a little more vivid,and work on
multis and vocab if you can.well done
Haters.
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.13.10
tight flow,and i can tell you were into it...tight multis nice
script
this was mad creative,and you held it through the full thing..very
well done..maybe make this a style of yours?? not your main one or
anything,but for here and there...and if you can keep a topic at
the same it would be mad raw
ummm flow is off,but its not awful
ummm it needs alot of work bro...
really well done aftermath...
hmmmm quiting it is..
word well done...
wow that was raw....i feel both flows were perfect,and the word
play was about average thats for sure..i feel Joka could have used
a little more creativeness,but its clearly more ill then most post
you will read in a day..
yall ended up killing this..i think Pro went a little to hard,but
it came out great,and yall should do a part 2?
i like this,but its not long enough to be a 10...just because i
want to read/hear more then that..so finish..then hit me up again
this i was ill,and i like the flow,and thanks for the shoutout :
O...but i dont like the first line.not the best way to start a
clearly good if not great rap..
this was mad deep..well done,and i really am feeling this..hmmm
taking of as the deepest on the site? maybe...
wow thats really great..i love the flows,and its great to see a
collab from you 2
mad tight multis,and a tight flow,but i feel yall are only doing
post like this now...and you used to have alot more imigery when
you did deep post,and all around story verses,and then do these
thrown in..i kind of miss guessing what kind of rap imma get out of
you.i know now that your gonna do horrorcore
def record this its raw
dude great vocab,and went really well with the beat...you killed
it,and yeah you got better
this is good,but i have saw much better from you....i think we need
a 2nd round
lmao kid get at my level....then talk shit...yeah im battling GMN
.....whats your non rapping ass gonna do about it?
dude stop...your a disgrace to MY SITE....lol....like wow how sad.
GMN diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.05.10
"Bludie, watch me eat ya men, you can bury them I gotta graveyard
cheap for rent.. " tighter then a virgin whos fat....
Phenomenon
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.05.10
thats raw bro,and a great mixture of vocab,flow,and multis...lord
knows over use can kill a post,but this was mad tight
this was mad tight and both flowed well,my favorite part is lines 3
and 4 of shadows,and the only major thing i have against it is that
Under sad "ray" to many times
wow you bite ass
thats fucking sick..way to murk Pro.
thats tight bro...great flow,and some sick punches in there
thanks for the shout out bro..well done,and nice script
do another round.....she asked for it...you won,but its fair to
allow her the chance in a 2nd round...
whats good shadow...hmmm im gonna have to battle you soon....your
getting up there fast
Deep Shit
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.04.10
this was tight,and legit,but work on using bigger vocab,or multis
just something to make it great
randoms
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.03.10
ahhh Grime you know i want 1..
thats really ill..2 of the best on this site...word
lmao...that really just made my night better...tight bro
I Miss You
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.03.10
deep bro...made me teer up..i think you should finish it..theres
always more to add to the story...maybe a day you remember you 2
having? its already an easy 10,but more for yourself then
anything..
Any Crew
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.03.10
you can join mine....
i think this was great,and one of the best i have read of
yours..keep working at it,but yeah fix a few errors like boogey
said
clearly a 10,and clearly all 3 of you are very gifted...i feel joka
did the best,and all i can see wrong with his is to long of
lines,Bludie only thing wrong with his is i exsepct more multis cus
its him..and Hype was also great,and all he lacked was the detail
that makes you know its hype...all around still perfect well done
multis were the strong point,and your punches were a little
off....really well done exspected less
lol i love haters...
lmao @ you
i second Pro,and just keep working at it
freestyle
0.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.01.10
lol no hope
yeah kid you got a future in it...join the page
Light Up
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.31.10
join the crew beanie..well written,and i like it when you make them
longer lines like this
Keystyle
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.10
not bad bro...flows well...it just dont hit hard enough yet...fix
it up a bit when you have time
thats tight bro.my favorite from you.
thats really ill,and you could be great if you work at it,and take
some advice in the chat from some of the vets
its good,but flow is off in a few spots.
lol i 2nd boogey....i always have to say that.
still really good,and i really like waht you have done,and the hook
is tight,BUT i dont know if i like the fact of i murder never get
caught stuff like that..be more like the real you
What did they think I was gonna do when I came back,talkin about
murder music is back, I fucking made that........haha thats fucking
sick
speaking the truth bro..all Vets need to get together diss some of
the new kids we see slacking...we all pick a target..and just rip
the shit out of em
....thoughts on this??
Were Ill
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.24.10
i agree with boogey...and that one like was def completly wrong...
i feel boogey won just cus Pro didnt seem like Pro..like wow where
is the punch line that just knocks him out?? and Boogey used a
style that was much difrent,but he did well with it...both of you
should still stick to what you guys normly do though
dude....subpar..i will probly never read anything from you again
cus it was subpar
i 2nd boogey....lol
reclaim
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.20.10
"I was not retired I was laying on an operation table wired" def
most sick part....that was nice..seen better from you,but i see you
getting back to it,and this was cool right here..
Freestyle
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.20.10
that was tight,but some lines were a lil to drawn,but well
written,and it has pretty good flow
wow how sick..love how you flowed to this beat,and its a great beat
choice..perfect flow,and just an all around great drop
shit was ill,and kind of kicked it old school....all around a great
diss,and it was so kid the poor kid left
No Pain
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.18.10
"Now You Got An Hourly Wage" lol i felt offended.....good
script,and it was pretty good,but work on making the lines a little
longer,and more even
deadly ill....great flow...
lyrical murdered this,and Bludies flow is always on point,and you
can always choose a line or 2 that really stood out... small pause
from the line before then "Not Bludie, Ima monster from the
lochness" ill..enriched did his thing aswell,but the way he starded
it wasnt really to my liking....well done by all
not bad,but try to be more complex,and i see some times where flow
is great,and then something throws it off pretty far,so try to make
sure some words dont mess up the flow
really ill,and i love the hook...simple yes,but could be catchy
"Alarm the feds" shit was ill..nice post
now that shit is tight...longer lines,and some nice multis in
there..well done,and just work on doing it more like this
shits decent,but your flowing way to basic of things.... make
longer lines,and stop rhyming "ya" so much
shit was mad tight,but there is flow problems...do what Bludie said
thats what helped me,BUT this is mad tight,and with a little work
on flow will def be a 10
not bad,but try to get controll...should be smooth....likes equal
with one another,and that just flow off simple...dont try to do to
much...but work on some Multis,and some vocab,but i feel you could
be quiet good
i really like the flow in this,BUT i like the flow of the first 4
lines the most.....do one all like that...but it was smooth,and
easy to rap....good job
BEAT THIS
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.08.10
i dont THINK i KNOW for FACT that your no where near the
top...couldnt touch me,or abou 35 others on this site..but for some
of the best Grime,Bludie,Ensayne,Boogeyman,Myself,Profound....dont
try it kid
i agree with "tha morgue" it was tight,and it flowed well,but make
it a little less basic....weather vocab,multies,or metophores,but
well done,and just work on small things
i love how you started it...perfect flow,and from the first 2 lines
i was hooked
lol who are you cus you mentioned me?? but Immortal easy.
lmao at comment below..but yeah man you suck
i give it to tini...longer bars,and "cus it seems your a lil to
short" if you made a 2 short refrence off of this as a punch it
could have been ill
work on stronger punches...and making the lines even,but i like
your style,and think you can become alot
i think yall did really well...work on making every word a little
more clear,cus i missed a few the first time,and gave it a 2nd
listen...but you dont HAVE to slow down..you CAN,but you could just
work on being a little louder,and just presenting it better...but i
think it sounded good,and you guys do have recording voices so work
at it
great flow,nice multies,and we know its all honesty,but your a
little to cocky with the whole best thing...really well written,and
im glad one of the vets atleast dropped something off...
its good...and im sure you just started so i wont try to view the
negitives,work on a flow a little every bar should have about the
same ammount of words,and vocab,and multies help every rapper..if
you dont know what a multie is ask your BF,and if he dont know ask
me and i will explain
LAst night
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.26.10
its decent,but some of it sounded a little corny,and you need more
vocab,and multies
its all GOOD,BUT none of its greats...i want smoething that jumps
out to me....you guys all have potential though...keep working at
it
not bad,but it could be better....
i liked this,and it was good...really nice flow,and i like how you
came out....fell off a little at the end though
good,but it needs more details,and flow needs a little
work....unless it was just the format....with you should change
it all flowed great,and i like how long the bars were for
details...witch yall had alot of.good vocab,great concept,and you
guys really showed your creativity and smarts in this....really one
done,and i want a part 2
i like the details,and the ideas behind it,BUT make the bars
longer,and work on multies,metophores,and all around being just as
creative as possible...well written,and i hope you work on the
things ive named,but another thing the vocab is a decent level,and
you did use enough,but boosting it a little wouldnt hurt
i dont think it was bad...i agree it needs work,but everyones stuff
does,and yall probly dont record that offten....i think it was the
wrong beat though...cus yall seemed like you write it,and then just
chose a beat you liked,but your supposed to choose the beat write
to it...cus it didnt seem like you were that into the beat....but
work on it,and i feel you guys could do well with it
LostHere
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.24.10
very deep,and poem like...i like it alot,and there is good vocab
it,and good originaly,BUT its not much of a rap flow..because it is
more poem like.....so work on more of a rap flow....thats for the
bars itself.....as for the freestyle....i felt it was not nearly as
good as the first ones,and even though has more of a rap feeling it
still dont flow right,and not really much creativity
shits ill,but you got to make it longer
not bad...needs editing,but could be great..
i 2nd Gudsen....that line was the best,and this was decent,but
there was no KO for me witch is kind of a bother..you clearly beat
him though,and i feel you are getting BETTER...just not quiet done
developing
man fuck that hater below....great metophores,and the vocab,and
flow was beyond great...maybe to the level of perefect..this is a
20....the rating stystem just wont work for me....
i agree with E MC....but i like the punch ideas you have in
this....things i havent already heard,cus after being here a year
ive seen alot re used,but this was very original,well written
sini 2
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.24.10
lol its cool alot of people do dislike me cus i have mad dick
riders,but i dont ask for em...but yeah man that wasnt even a
diss....i wanted him to delete it before you read it
dude i hate Rock and Roll...with a real passion...only cus he hates
me,but he is better then you....anyone could tell you that...he
murdered you to the point where i would stop writing.....if he
crushed me by that much...delete this before he reads it,and ask
someone to ghost write it for you so you dont have to lose to
him....
wow i loved that flow....really ill...gave some good laughs
aswell...prob best diss i have read of yours
i 2nd Grime,and part of Boogeys...Multies make scripts so much
better,and after a while they just come to you....work on it
practice it....then work on the others Grime mentioned
shit flows perfect,and i got a few good laughs..i really liked the
length of bars,and i think you did this to the best it could be...
it was cool....poly should have wrote 2,and i felt he didnt come to
hard i give it to boogey
good rap
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.21.10
its decent,but you need better flow,and longer lines,and stronger
metophores,or punches
shits tight,but none of it really hit that hard for me...great
flow,and well done,but i dont see it as a KO
i think its good,and has some good flow in it...its prob not a
honest post there right,but most raps arent...good job
poly clearly won this....davey rhyme me 2 times..that shows me you
aint got shit to say
this was tight,and had a great flow,but not all of the punches hit
completly...well done for your return,and im glad your back
shits pretty tight,but i 2nd poly and ensayne...you gotta make you
sure you write it perfect when you do something like this,cus it is
more visible
i vote nelly to....flow,and vocab def went to Poly like he killed
that,but set up,punches,and things like that go to nelly.....really
good to read..
really well written,and prob the best i have read of yours[ive read
a few that i havent rated],and you seem to have took more time on
this one
ME
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.16.10
good shit nice vocab,and just work on making it a 10 you know
theres a few things wrong with it
yeah.....
thats really ill....great collab,and maybe the best verse ive saw
from each person....best work best collab that GMN has done since
its restarted
this was written almost perfect...like this was great to read,and
the 2nd set i really ejoyed....keep this up man ill be sure to read
what your writing as of late
search
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.14.10
dude this is good well done...great style of writing,and it flows
well......work on making it more complicated,but the way you write
is nice
Tears..
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.12.10
thats perfect man....really well done.
great flow,and you had some good punches in there...work on making
the punches a little more hard,but great post
they good.....home boy Def let off some speed at the end
KC Read
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.11.10
lol funny
pretty good....flow has some small issues,and you do need to be
more complicated.....well done
tight...i like this style,no one else writes in this way....makes
you difrent....well done
12 Rounds
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.10.10
i will try if you find it worth your time...
tighter then a male in JDC ass crack.....you know juvy so hes still
ok.....umm lets try again....tighter then 4 rights....hunh i would
just end up in the same spot...TIGHT like knut huggers on
balls.....that one will have to do
this is good,and it could be great,but the first 2 lines didnt
rhyme,and it aint long enough..just put a little more work in it
love the flow,but i feel that you could have came harder with the
lyrics
great flow,and it was really easy of the tounge...would sound great
recorded..well done
3RdCo DiSs
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.07.10
he cant beat it....what a sad death for him...
not the best ive heard from you,but you got some of the best audio
on the site
try to cross rhyme a little less,and if you could add
Multies,metophores,punche......more of any of em....then it would
be a 10...but well written,and great flow
well done....some things were slightly soft,but flow was good,nice
vocab...just work on a few things....[Multies,more
punches,metophores] just a little more of one of these,but good
post
ill...great return...lol i knew you wouldnt be gone
long....fantasic flow,and really great word play
love how you started the 2nd verse....great flow....good hook,but
some lines were a little corny,and you had a few to many
fillers....but this was good to read,and well done....keep working
at it
tight job....seen you do better in some ways,but best flow you have
done..keep working at it.but your becoming beast
i 2nd boogeyman....picked up alot after 4....well done
your indeed a great lyrical beast...seen better from you though,but
this is a good script,and fun to read AND "The one you call your
maker, God? Well guess what? Im his creator" stop copying my cheap
shots at god...lmao
this is tight...yall know you could have inproved in some spots,but
the flows were good,and both of you had some great lines
Good shit.
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.02.10
lmao that shit made me laugh in a few spots.....tight man.....great
vocab,flow,and lyrics are nice man...tight job
decent flow,but your lyrics fall "shortman"
Wannabe
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.31.10
great flow.and you have a great format...lines go well
together..and i seen you do a few multies,and attempt a few work on
them a little more,but nice script
Death Row
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.31.10
great flow,and i really like how you started it....not to mention
the last 4 lines did finish it well
My Love
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.16.10
really well written,and yeah i busted up laughing at that last
line...really well writin,and second Freshes comment on the
flow,and multies thing
beyond ill...that was what i would say is actually a 10....i know
we all just hand em out now,but props yall actually deserve it
you really need to fix this.....make into something no one
has.....add multies,methophores,and some punches,not all of em,but
atleast one of those per post....and work on flow every bar should
be about the same amount of words cus each bar is the same length
Unclear
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.12.10
its good....but i feel flow is slightly off,and that some lines
really dont have to be in there...nice vocab,and i like some of the
things like "Hard to understand like your pen is smeered" but ya
need to make em go harder
its good
i would love to try,cus this is perfect,and i would love to be on a
post that is clearly gonna be epic,but i know you wouldnt like my
verse.....but this is beyond ill,perfect flow,and you should record
this verse
ill shit...Phenom is so beast now....i remember when he first got
here *teer falls* they grow up so fast......lol yall did great
i 2nd Sir Smokes comment,and also agree with E Mc that ridas got
much better at the end
love the first 2 lines,and the flow i really liked....you should
record this one when you get the mic
you did alot bett3r then i thought you would..and i agree with Sean
that was my Favorite part,and good flow
tight punchlines nice flow...i like this
lol good shit.....but i am on probation now.lmao
Battle Me
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.10.10
your in outlaws? i did not know that.....but whos first?
Battle Me
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.10.10
lol if you dont wanna battle me fine then.....
Battle Me
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.10.10
i am down if you want......
thats beyond sick.....great post,and make a part 2
it was epic...really liked it,and 2 always work well
together....nice to read well done
great diss....had me laughing,but what did he do?
if your doing 4 i am down for 4th verse,and i would do hook if yall
need
its pretty good....guess my crews in beef with yours
though...exspect a diss soon
i like the flow,and the emcee style,but try to make of a point,and
stay on topic,or atleast make 2 lines each go with each other
ummm
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.06.10
aight got a topic?
love the flow,and script alround is really tight,but you could have
used a few harder hitting punch lines
good shit.....i 2nd Fresh comment
The Plot
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.03.10
this stuck out to me "A million thesises you need a websters to
define me" i really liked the flow and concept of it.....really
nice sripts....maybe start working on multies now
The Plot
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.02.10
shits tight.....still love the vocab,but flow has gotten better,and
staying on point in topic and finishing though has gotten better
that turned me on...lmao...nah tight shit man...really well
worded,and great flow
my life
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.02.10
its good....try some multies,metophores,punchlines[i know this isnt
the kind for a punchline] just make it stand out more....you want
to be way better then the rest not just better
to E Mc below....depends what cha meen by better....i feel jokas
had a better flow,but the imigery by Phenom was like a
20....excelent post by both,and i hope to see more
lol i got some good laughs out of this....really will done congrats
"Respect"
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 03.01.10
good vocab,decent flow,but it dont rhyme that great.....raps are
supposed to flow off the tounge while writing/reading this it looks
quiet good,but spitting it out loud causes some issues
shit is ill most people mess up while spitting big words,and i
loved the flow....your voice aint perfect for rapping,but flow and
lyrics were great
tight man....good imgery....i could have been the person in the
back of 7 11 watching,or at a bus stop observing.....i could have
been there
give me like 30 minutes....
i have seen you do better...flow seemed pretty nice...but it seemed
like someone who had just started rapping....like nothing was ill
punchlines,or something that showed that you stood out from other
rappers
negitives of sex.....lol yeah....lets see that one...
Jet Speed
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.28.10
haha thanks for the mention....shit was tight..nice vocab..flow
could have been a little better though
great post,and i love your post latly....they have been deep,and
right no point
Hate On Me
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.27.10
first 2 lines did not rhyme right,and you need to work on flow on
this one a little....cus the lines are uneven
i like the flow alot cus i spit fast,and i feal that the vocab is
great not to much or to little....good job
try not to rhyme me,me,me show more vocab,and try some
multies,punchlines,and methophores....just make it more to the
point that it awws people,and funny lines sometimes....if you read
something and laugh then you know that it was a nice line
my crew
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.27.10
i agree with below...nice flow,but make your vocab grow,and maybe
find a better topic you know?
City, City
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.27.10
its good....flow needs work
i like the way it flowed...like if i recorded this it would be
ill,and great vocab...well done
court date
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.25.10
i like it,but you have to make a rhyme scheme...other whys its hard
to tell where lines start and end...please make one with a proper
rhyme scheme so i can give you more advice
CANNONS
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.25.10
great flow....wonderfull flow...thats all i can say
Gods Bitch
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.25.10
this is decent,but i know you could have killed him,and you can
tell you just wanted to prove it took no effort....some nice
content though,and some funny shit
ill....my favorite from you..maybe its cus my kind of post,but
anyways this made me want to read it...make more like this
this was mad tight....vocals should be just a little louder,and
maybe put a little more emotion the next time you record something
like this,but flow and lyrics are great
this was really nice....you both did great..i 2nd Mr U
though.shorten it a little cus it was a little hard to flow to,but
i spit really fast so i could fit it in a bar....but great post
this is on the real....but i think you should add more....make it
more detailed cus i want you to tell me more.....
that is sick...def a 10....this was beyond great...this is why i
feel i am slacking,because of how great yall are doing...great
collab
tight...shit was nice...i didnt really picture you doing something
like this,but its shows your good versatiliy
Freak Show
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.23.10
disturbing bro....great lines...umm im scared though
ill...so sexy....well its Definet to me now that your better then
me
aight i like the hook.....and the 2nd set...BUT the first set i
felt flow was a little off,and it all seemed pretty forced....scrap
the first set.
good shit Pro...all around this was a real nice diss,and flow i
really liked keep it up
why did you even try?
in my honest opinion its a 9,but i wont mess up your rating.....a
few spots where the flow is a little
off....lyrics,vocab,concepts.....are very ill good job
this was nice...good freestyle...your getting better
good shit fam...
Incredible
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.16.10
better then your other 2.....really nice flow
simply amazing...i just keep reading it again,again.....this was a
great script
wow really?
in order to get in GMN you would neen either Hype or Bludies
permission....i would sugest writing the best rap you can,and
posting it as "GMN READ" and seeing if they will let you in
its good....but your a little all over the place....allow the
reader to feel your flow while there reading it.....start by
formatting better after each like where you put the / press
enter....then start the next
its good....nice flow..still could use inprovment...
one of the best flows you have done...still need a little more
things to make it more complicated...better vocab,multis,or
metophores but your getting alot better.....oh and i made round 3
: }
yeah i feal ya.....but im already known on here......if i want more
respect i gotta win it all
lol yeah i feal ya.....i guess....i really aint good at battling
lol nice on telling the other guy to vote for you
aight man.GL
its good man....i might not respond tonight...might have to do it
in the morning....cus i am doing audio,but i will respond soon
shit was tight.....good lyrics..great quality....i really enjoyed
it
great way to start man....you will be great i think.....GL with
GMN...glad to have ya
Still Here
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.04.10
i agree with Des......good shit man.
2nd on Tournys comment.......shit was tight....you will probly make
2nd round
shit is really tight,but i dont know who your oponent is so i cant
count him out
i am going anthrax.....neither did great.....but i belive that the
flow of antraxes wins it......but methphores,multis,and vocab you
both need alot of work on......both better step up or they WILL
lose next round.....oh and i almost went banger just cus at the
begining anthrax tried to flip
FreeStyle
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 02.03.10
it was cool.....queit tight...flow could have been a little
better,but its some shit
can yall go give a vote on the battle? newest thing up.....
shit was mad tight....flow,punches on point.....he will need alot
to beat this
shit was good.......good flow,nice vocab,but puchlines wernt there
and i dont know if you can really rap this part " ventriloquist
Take off your mask to show your true repulsiveness "
i really like this one......Chorus was amazing.....emotion in
voice,and clarity are perfect...i think Joka should flow a little
more kind of sounds like your talking sometimes,but this is ill,and
a great job
shit was nice......needs a little work,but good job
FreeStyle
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.29.10
haha thanks for the mention.......lol great shit man......Vocab is
getting great
i agree with Repeat.......great story nice twist well done....flow
just needs a tiny bit of tweaking
it was tight....but 10 is perfect......i dont hand em like everyone
else...10 would meen you need no work....witch you do.....flow is
on point,love the beat,BUT lyrics could be better,and editing could
have been done better aswell,keep the flow bring more vocab and
punches that i know you have to your audios aswell as your
writtens....good job
i agree with Damage didnt really get it,and the
vocab/multis/metophores any of the 3 could be better
really nice vocab...good flow.....good shit.....getting better
shits tight.....yall killed this....and you 2 do well together
shit its KC if you want me
i do audio.....
E MC is in ANG
dude REAL has audios coming out everyday,and i reped 2 times
today,and have posted 4 today......REAL is still here.....
simply great...you did awsome,and this is what i like to read
great job...i like this side of you,but you know this is my
style....great post man...vocab,and flow were on point
really tight lil a.....still keeping it real....good shit
i actaully agee with toast....flows were perfect,and that last line
left a good inprint in my mind....
shit was ill....great flows...methophores were there....simple 10
shits good...you got to format it....and i still dont know why your
dissing me,but this was straight.....needs a little more vocab,and
flow might need a little more flow....cant really tell cus of
format
really deep...witch is my style...great topic..great beat
choice...great lyrics....had to lisin twice to get all of it..maybe
make it a little more clear,but this was really ill good shit
"and how kobra say he gone leave but stays on as a king" haha
thanks G...good shit
you won..good job...you have done better,but it was
tight....congrats on the win
shit has a ill flow....you used names well....good job....Def
finish...thanks for the shoutout
ill ass fuck.....thats mad tight
its quiet good,and you did a really good job for your first diss on
the site,but i think you could have done better.....
really good flow...i like the hook alot....i feal you still could
have done a little better,but really good
shit has a really nice flow...i went right through it.....i have
saw you do better,but this was really nice
yeah thats heart filled good shit
great collab...yall did well
you got the voice,and you flowed well...just pick up speed a
little.....
killed it,and this is completly Honest.....great
vocab,flow,imegery, congrats one of your best
shits tight good job bro
shits hella tight...like Ckrisis said i see a Audio collab in the
future
ummm format it,make it more complicated...
intire shit is sick.....Great collab
really good shit....Def really good post....alot better then most
new people
Go Hard..
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.19.10
2nd on Cardones......great collab guys..Mad Dog is still a fag...
Great story....i found the flow in really nice.....great post
of course ill do a verse.....great shit
you have a great style of writing,seems like it would sound great
rapped
its a real shame no one else rated this.....i think its a great
writing style,and your lines our very desriptive,and making a story
thats complete......needs a little better flow,and maybe a little
more vocab,but great shit
destiny
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.14.10
shit was good....i would say a 9,but we got a few to fix....really
nice post man
shits hot.....lol but did you read my Gudsend diss before you wrote
it? lol i made a barbie and fresh refrence in mine to........but
really nice diss,vocab,flow,punches were all there
shit is hella long.......but some sections in there were great....i
think maybe you shorten it more to the point,but murder is
something to be proud of
this would sound great recorded,and at the end of "Ella…Ella, im
free like south Africas mandella
Ella…Ella, I shine brighter then Capella star
The friend of rock a fella," fella should echo onec....nice post
man keep it up
great story.....flow was great if you rapped it right....the people
below excluding Mr U and Kerena just dont see our flow,but great
post man
its really tight.....i agree with E Mc though.....ill flow though
good shit yall.....wow that was deep.....i love you both lol
Def record ill flow and "not a menace to society, ima threat to the
universe
my vocals got aliens scared of humans words "
ill flow,and you made some great points in there.......like about
mainstream
good desciption and flow......maybe add a few multis,and more
vocab,but not all require that so its got a great flow 10
i know you can do better,but flow was pretty good,but it needs
"tweaking" as stillmatik said
you have gotten so much better......great flow......good job furry
frined.....and gudsen is right GMN is a good choice for you
shit was hot ill flow......and of course your multis you always
seem to have in there
lol 3rd time?
hell of a way to start man......still dont know why you want me to
teach you though
get the lines more right on length......but i really liked
this....possibly one of your best in my opinion
your getting much better......cant wait to hear how you record this
one
really good shit.......i had forgot Kerena had me lisin to
it....didnt know it wa the same one.....you killed it
Mutilation
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.09.10
yours beat his....i didnt think that was possiable.......but you
killed it.......i think you finally beat hype
beyond great,and the best you have done......by far....great story
made a picture in your head of what was going on,and realy nice
lyrics
*looks sees a murder scene walks away* 911 911 SOMEONES
DEAD.....they replied "no thats slaughter"
Life
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.07.10
that was ill....i love how you started it.....damn....
Hip Hop
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.07.10
co sighn the phenomenons comment......great rap....just make your
verses a little longer,and maybe at multis if your good at
em....but dont force then
needs better vocab...i like the flow.....i feel its a 9,but for the
fact of not ruing your rating gave it a 10
flows sick
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.07.10
you have become beast since joining GMN.....keep it up.....not your
best,but i really like what your style is becoming
first rap
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.07.10
you need a better flow,and more vocab......you need to make way
more complicated.......keep trying to make yourself better
that was nasty
I.L.L
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.06.10
that was I.L.L holy shit that was nice
deepest ive seen from rida,and Joka is becoming beast
great collab....you 2 go alot better together then i thought you
would......nice flows...great lyrics
very vivid picture,solid flows,went really well together,and good
vocab......it is a 10...for onec i didnt have to hand it out
9 rounds
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.06.10
Audacity.com
9 rounds
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.06.10
a mic and thats it......just download audacity
9 rounds
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.06.10
i do audio
9 rounds
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.06.10
aight my bad.......it just wasnt there,but nice hook cant wait to
see it done
i really like the flow,and subject.....just work a little on vocab
what kind of Info?
im down
once again make it longer,and try to make this one a little less
all over the place,and focus on your point better
its good has a nice flow make it longer about 16 lines
this would actaully be a really good hook
i like this alot.....toast is right,that it is a 9,but considering
the content i give it a 10
you should make the GFs side longer.....but it was a great rap
really good post man......deep......it dus need a little work,but i
aint gonna fuck up the all 10s for ya
king cobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.03.10
lol battle me you retard........it wasnt even my post i just
reposted it....im a VET here get your little ass to my level
i love your flow.....EVERYONE THE WEBSITE OBSERVE HE HAS TOP 5 ON
FLOW ON THE SITE....shit is fly bro....good job
great post....sorry i didnt read at first....this was amazing.....i
agree with Simp yall great together
I am
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 01.02.10
nice post......i like the flow
lol Eazys right that part was awsome.....you killed it
got to love the word play......its always great......profound will
need a really good verse
i agree with the phenomenom that stood out to me aswell......such a
vivid picture of what you ment.......great one right here
that was fucking awsome this part was my Favorite thuogh "NOW your
mothers pissed
lookin down at you thinkin... "why couldnt my son be more like the
other Chris""
some good punches....should have been a little better...flow could
have used a little more,but it was a really good diss for a quick
one
ill flow.....but vocab needs work......you rhymes with "it" twice
in this........
good shit.....but im your competition,and im only 16 to so age aint
a factor....
i am redoing the verse right now bro.....let me know if you read
this so i know your on
KillaHex
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.30.09
aight Def ill.....had to read it twice cus i didnt get it all the
first time,but that was Fire
really hot shit.....greatest part of it was flow,it was just so
perfect in that way
not really any puches,and the flows a little off....for a regular
verse this is tight,and like a 9 and a half,but for a diss you need
to come a little harder at your oponent
great punches,great flow,and i LOVE the chorus.......sexy
shit.....i guess the Astros are so high they cant come back down at
this point
Grime diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.29.09
hey hey hey goodbye bye Grime
perfect GMN material.....great shit man....
thats ill....nice to have ya back bro....collab soon
easy 10......this shit was pefect man....would sound great
recorded...i just spit this,and im thinking about taking it
PARICE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.28.09
great flow......could have used a few puches,but the flow was good
enough to make up for it
king cobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.28.09
lol who the fuck are you?
good diss...i felt the flow was somewhat off,and you could have a
came a little harder
its decent make it longer
killed it....like dominated it,and Great puches Tokio......nice to
see you post...haha rootcanal line was the best
its decent.....could have done alot better though
aight did you read my verse? so you know what i was saying
my Kanye diss 2 is when i did it
lol dont stress it....its not like you tried to do it....im just
saying i probly would appreciate it more if i hadnt done that verse
I agree the cards thing is decent....i would probly like it more if
i didnt do a card thing in a diss 5 days ago
what you looking for a response? i meen i know im great when you
only mention like 15 people,and im one of em
its decent,and it would sound good recorded,but i have saw you do
better
lol i know this is in my direction,and i dont diss that
much......everyone told me i cant diss so im trying to prove i can
i disagree with pro......if feal eazy was just basic....i give it
to lil a
i think you really did a good job on this.......good shit
Lost
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.27.09
lol so mean.......lol i cant stop laughing.......hahaha my stomech
hurts stop.......*no fuck you keep reading* i cant im laughing to
hard.....*fuck that read its a great diss* im crying
though.....*suck it up*
aight that was fucking awsome....killed it on flow,and make some
great points
New Audio
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.27.09
great audio man......you should start posting again......ive read
all of your raps
Kid made me belive he wanted to kill me,and God......Profounds was
fucking ill i meen wow dude great shit,and i like Ensaynes story
alot,and Pro and Ensayne both had great vocab,and ill flow by Kid
man you know i agree with you on this......our verses are Original
and REAL this shit that i i hear bothers me man,and half this sight
is becoming like that.......radio play jizz and shit.....they even
bump it all the time like Gucci man and plies Waested was something
inportent
sick flows.....vomit on the toilet sick......want a verse from me
bro?
To My Girl
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.26.09
good shit man.......i like this,and im sure she did to
join my crew Insane Spanish Cobra Nation
really nice diss bro
good rap......are you gonna be a active member on the sight?
yeah bobbygoff and same to you nelly G.......cus so far we
e King
Cobra,Queen Cobra,and VenomSpitter......so if yall could be Insane
Cobra...Prince Cobra...Deadly Venom....something to do with the
crew name
bobbygoff......you dont look to bad man......but would you start a
2nd profile with a difrent name? that gos with the crew better?
can i get on the 2nd to?
really nice vocab
ill ass flow,and way to kill the vocab
Def 10 but ensaynes right you got to start putting this hard of
effort in every post thats how you become great....
lol shit made me wanna start erasing what im writing at the current
time cus it dont compare,that aint fair,*gives explict a kind of
gay dreamy stare*
lol great subject,but flow was kind of off...and vocab could use a
little more
great,and true shit
lol i like the ending good shit guys.......few flow and
mistakes,and the vocab could be a little better,but i really like
this
Calm
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.25.09
of course i will get on this
no were not were fucking with a biter who cant rap
its not bad..pretty good,could be formatted a little better,and
could use better vocab,but i like it.......and if you wanna lay a
track down together i will
thanks lost
lol i know i told everyone that......dosne he realize hes been
caught
Hate
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.25.09
thats a fantastic rap.....great job
My Story
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.24.09
good shit man....im from Detroit to
lol you cant rap
My Story
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.24.09
really nice verse,but there are a few flow issues becasue of
rhyming like how the first 2 verses dont rhyme and then it and
attain,but all around a really nice verse
thats some real shit man...like that is very honest,and a point of
view i think we all share....you expressed it well
sure man if you want thats cool with me
really nice man.....good job
sickest flow youve done.....rapping this out loud is like heaven
out of a voice box
really good diss dude
that was sick grime....Ensayne has a point with 8 mile,but it was a
great diss...best one you have ever done....way to come hard when
it matters
THAT IS FUCKING SICK......didnt really have a point to it,but there
were points in it just not a main one........that was great to read
though
lol aight man GL and have fun.....
im down you can go first.....or we can go at the same time your
choice
nelly G
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.24.09
thanks man
aight go ahead and diss me
aight man you going first am i going first or are we both writing
at onec?
lol google it......bitin
kc diss 2
1.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.24.09
lol another bitin one.....its called google man
wow i can find it on bebo.com thats nice dude....lol it meens its
either prewritin or you you stoll it witch on is it?
lol its clear your either using already writin or biting now cus
you make em less then 1 minute,and there complety difrent
styles,and none of mention me or the other person ever.....you dont
flip or anything
good,but make it longer,and the end was a little off flow whys
damn.....you got talent man....if you keep working on it,you could
join a top crew[REAL] start coming up on here,and start doing some
audio drop a mixtape great lyrics man
really nice shit,and you should join REAL yall would work well
together......great post man
lol aight man give me a minute.............
KWIQUITTID
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.23.09
instant death.....ill dig a grave for the body
haha i like this alot bro good shit
much better.....make a hook......take your time make it 3
verses,and make a intro about when they were here and a outro in
respect to them.....remember this is inportent do it right
i like it alot,but i agree dig a little deeper man......make me
feal your pain
i really like this,great diss man,yall doing a round 2? i wanna see
it
i like this alot,but there are a few minor flow issues,and you put
me in your top 10 to......so lol yeah
i would say 8 cus theres some very minor flow issues,but for how
quick you did it this was nice,and i want to see what he comes back
with
nice man,i like yours can you check my "Kanye round 2" since you
read the rest of it
i like it,but i feal you should make it longer
that vocab is sick,and your getting alot better.......to bad your
crew is never on
ha i like that rida first 4 were the shit
good rap man.....i responded.....cant wait to see your round 2
LOST SOUL
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.23.09
theres a few very minor flow issues,but i like it alot,and i like
your style,there was just nothing that really stuck out in it
lol ok "kanye" fire
yeah i did enjoy reading it,but im used to better metophores,and
more lyrics that ive never heard....good post though man nice to
see you do something thats not a diss,and it had a great flow
KC?..........KC?
great vocab,but there was some rhyming issues like if you rap it
out loud not all words go together just cus they got the same
ending,but this was fantastic
Favoritism
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.23.09
that was great,and CO sighn twisted cus this Vet approves....great
rap,vocab was on point good shit
i like this alot....sick flow......and really onpoint on everything
ha thanks for the shout out man......i love how you only mention
like 3 people,and im one of em.....thanks man,and this is Great
pain suffering,and all to much smothering,
always muttering,you would think your were mothering,
i cant stand it,your always nagging in my ear,
more dislikable then a manly queer,
tell you what you should be struck by fear,
cus your day of judgment is coming to near,
not overlooked by me.......i got mad respect for yall.....always
got quality lyrics,and shit thats original
i really like it,but it dont really rhyme...like i rapped it out
loud,and some of it still flows proper without rhyming,and rhyming
is not required,but its alot better for flow reasons,and its kind
of come to the point where you have to rhyme
who made this list? thanks for putting me on and all,but why did i
get number 3? i dont even put myself at 3 more like 9 or 10
great rap.....way to Rep My16......me and ray did the
same......nice to see you 3 collab
who are you?
do you know what punchlines and mulits are? and flow? read mine you
will learn something its like 10 down go leave a 0 to be a hater
no puchlines,no multis,no vocab,and flow is off......delete this
one and try again
no puchlines,no multis,no vocab,and flow is off......delete this
one and try again
you really need to format this......then i will read it,and give a
rating thats not a 5
its good,but its not GREAT vocabulary
alot better then your first one,and he will have to come back hard
to this
you need to pick up the speed.....lyrics are correct,but rap is
like 70 percent about the flow
dude its a privite video.......take it off private......
Stand Tall
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.21.09
Best i have seen of yours......honestly....this was fantastic
damn Ensaye.....my verse dont touch that....great verse
man......nice to see you let go
its a 9 in my opinion verse 3 was awsome,and 2 was decent,but 1
nothing really hit me that was special,and the flow seemed slightly
off in that verse.....2 and 3 were really good together though
Sick flow....great lyrics,but if there was a little more vocab that
would be awsome.....great story though...hella nice picture
painting words there
those lyrics are sick,and if you rap fast like i do the flow is
fucking ill,your cuasing my so many alegerys i need a alergy pill
needs alot or work.......nothing stood out,and the first like
pretty much tells you how bad its gonna be
i can do either one....cus i can relate to both.....my dad was
there for a totel of 3 years so its my mom for the first one,and i
am on probation and still selling weed for the second one
From the Heart.....thus making it REAL......respect for coming from
the heart....i think you should redo this one again with your
inproved vocan on a 2nd verse and a intro story like you do now
the 3 of us need to collab.....feal me?
you won this one! i read both post
great vocab....good flow.....lines might be slighty to long,but at
my rap speed sounds great,and yuo could use a few more like major
punches but great diss
Old Days
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.19.09
actually i like it alot........E mc is right though make it
longer.....a 10 cus i see what it CAN be
this is whas fucking tight,and you killed Simp,but i feal Mr U
actually did better in his verse......no offense....i think you
should throw another at him thats longer...and bust more personals
like you did to Simp
king cobra
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.19.09
dude you suck.......you come on here onec a month to diss
me........your sad hop off my dick
that end wa fire........like as in like wow thats sick.....the
lines might be to long if you have a slow flow though
killed em.....murdered bludie laying on the floor peeing on himself
.........cant wait to see his him respond
that was a great battle,and to be hoenst it was really close,but i
go Hype cus there was a few things that i know greasy could have
done better....like when he said "treat u like a female dog, so
take it bitch im on top" probly should have added somthing
like....micheal vick stauts your beggin me to stop....O J status
how the last thing you hear is pop..
its honestly a 9 but because of the story makes it a 10.....lyrics
made me sad,but the flow,and vocab both need a little
work......R.I.P to your friend
SICK FLOW....lyrics were great,and this is what i like to read
locked in your mind there are things you cant hide,like if your
down to ride,will stay by a homies side,weather i can trust you and
confide,or if when bullets fly if you would hide,will you feal
pitty? or dwell on pride,will you take advantege of a young girl
legs wide,never forget the block where you reside,or how when god
comes you can not hide,speak to the lord when you need someone to
confide,nah not really cus just like god the whold religion lied
nice i like this......format it better though like this.....King
Cobra the all great call me divine/so perfect so divine i deserve
my own shrine
great flow by both......there was nothing that stood out to me
though
great flow to it,and i like the way you put it all
together......lol rays right though the new name is funny
FREESTYLE
1.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.16.09
not worth rating.......
lol nice Mr U,def won, but new kid got some skills
MM all day good shit ray
i kind of agree your jacking 2pacs style to
much.....pic,lyrics,name........but its a really good rap,but maybe
you should go back to GTTE
its good,but toast needs better vocab,and FK needs to shorten the
verses a little,and make it rhyme better at the end cus like
everything is a cross rhyme or you said bullshit 2 in a row
its good,but toast needs better vocan,and FK needs to shorten the
verses a little,and make it rhyme better at the end cus like
everything is a cross rhyme or you said bullshit 2 in a row
LH Diss.
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.15.09
lol i got good laughs out of this "wife beater, poor mans wal mart
pajamas.. nope, no swagger,
the only job you can get is a grocery store bagger," i could not
stop laughing
LL flow was way better,and it was clear that he won.......i could a
5 year old read it,and they will tell you FeedMeRappers lines are
way off
fantastic flow,the vocab could use a little more,but you stayed on
point and the flow was on point
i really love you style,and im glad it never changed you still tell
yours in a rhyme format that is very easy to rap to,but i still
dont quiet get some of your lines,cus some of your verses dont
rhyme
its a really good diss,and almost everything is right,but wheres
the Vocab? and the lines are to long
make this one longer,and add more vocab in the ones you add cus i
like the Direction its going
thats nice girl.......not quiet a 10 though cus i did not like the
start as much as the last 10 8 or so
i really like the flow,but i have saw better rap out of you was
gonna be a 9 but becasue of the 5 its a 10
GET AT ME
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.13.09
i agree with grime mc
to much "Ion" but it was a great post....just needed better
punches,and more multis.......great post
"mix your body parts like a mutha*uckin chemist" this and every
line after it were murder before that it was just decent,but those
killed it
great flow......inprove the vocab......but definit keep
nice to see you let go simp....good shit
great flow,and good vocab.....i love reading your post
lol explicts all happy you used his name.......i like the new style
you have devoloped pro
i like the way all the lyrics go and everything,and if i had a
slower flow it would work just not my flow.......nice rap
Code 16
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.12.09
that was such a great flow.....never mind the great lyrics the flow
made it a 10
pussy lips
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.11.09
lol i like it nice subject
really good vocan nice flow,nice to see another one out of you
well if you had not said girl i would do it.....
H.G.M
2.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.11.09
ummmmmmm dont know what to say
i like this alot......make it longer for me
great flow grime let me know when its done
well if you would like KC in it let me know
LH....DISS
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.11.09
nice diss.....i thought it would be longer,but it was good enough
to beat them if i do good i think
real good diss man........nice to see you put effort into this one
REAL would kill you.......LH would kill you........Astros would
kill you......M.O.C would kill jit stay where you belong on the
bottem oh and GMN would kill like MURDER
vocabulary is beyond great,and the storys lines to both were
perfect yes PERFECT great collab guys
dude your sad.....why would you even try me?
wow not in the same leauge as me G......epic fail
mother fucker get at me no vocab,no mutils,and nothing we aint
heard before you fucking suck ass
i didnt read it but my GF did she says its great
wow that was sick,as so easy to read cus it was short
ahhhh flicker that was probly the best of yours i have read you
stayed on subject very well,and hypes was a good backup verse as in
it did not stand out to me,but it was still great
i thought it had a great flow,but i have come to exspect either
better vocan or a few puches out of you........so a 9 for that
reason sorry...
my brain hurts,but i now want to rape you
great return man,and this is a really good verse coming out of
stillmatik....cant wait to see yout future post
just sick vocab,and i will declare this a classic
very nice Des........nice to see you do i a rap thats not a
battle,and it was a great one
brain capacity is me
aight good diss wait till i hit you back
thanks for the comments guys,and joka first verse great vocab,and
2nd one made the think alot good shit
lol the flow was off in a few places,and 2exs verse aint here but i
like yalls alot way to stay on topic
nah man im the King the boy KC is one of the best,and if im not
then its Mr U,ensayne,dbox and people like that get back down to
your level jit
thats hella tight my little bunny friend great vocab and flow was
fantastic
well thats amazing what you do it fantastic
lol damn bro you kicking the whole crew hunh?
lol my bad bro......i will re read it all and recomment later when
i feal like reading it all
damn thats ill pro......simply amazing right there......you sexy
beast
thats deep man...did not read it all eyes got tired...but i am
sorry about you dad being dead,and your GF choking you and shit
man.....sounds rough keep your head up
MOC diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.08.09
good verse man,but everything you said about me was positive
really nice verse dude........you dream about murdering to much
though
lol cobra kick nice....lol thats awsome
lol yeah fresh mine was better to lol jk tonijo this was very nice
thanks for the shoutout
haha i got entrane hunh? that should be fun we like each others
lyrics
yeah but i cant wait to see how your crew gos
lol cus i like just joined M.O.C
damn eazy i wish you would have done this a little earlyer i always
wanted to be in the same crew as you.....
sad.... i meen so sad
yeah i feal ya bro,but everything i write is fire
man this is gonna be fun good luck to you guys.....M.O.C
i really like the flow,and good lyrics bro....i feel you raps are
getting better
epic.......2nd verse is great...probly one of the best of read in
the last month
wow kyle thats deep man.........did you tell your mom you wrote
this?
great collab guys.......flows were just so nice
lol that was nice man i love how many difrent puchlines you have
man makes it fun to read
simply buetifull man....got my eyes watering,and its such a great
topic and such a great desciption with words...simply amazing
damn that was sexy simp!
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 12.01.09
i cant vote on this cus i have saw better from both,and they were 2
completly difrent styles i want to see another round,cus this was
not yalls best
yeah i was gonna do a psycho clinic one with you where we are
roomates
very nice word play was on point,and the flow was fluid through the
whole thing........your getting much better
nice man,i love the flow i can rap this so easy
not the best i have saw you dom,but you have gotten so much better
then you were when you first got here
great flow,but really not any multis or vocab so maybe work on that
a bit althought the last set had some shit i liked alot
Toast DISS
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.25.09
wow i like that much difrent flow then i am used to from you i like
it
good diss you already beat him before this thought your round 2
compared to his was murder
lol damn thats awsome
wow that was fucking awsome
aight i am down
amazing flow,but i liked your vocab more in the other 2
ahh nice flow good vocab gos well with ensaynes it will be a great
post
lol great one bunnyz
i like your style alot
well i would ask if i could collab with you on it,but your verse
pretty much states all that needed to be said
wow your sad
lol that was awsome......simply great
hmmm inpressive and quiet creative
i am not the best,but i am part of the foundation to my16 and that
aint gonna change
your such a sexy beast
a few verses flow is slightly off,but the vocab and the fact that
you stayed on the same subject was on point
ndit won this one........kinda sucks cus i was exspecting more from
explict it after he beat me
your the part of rap that stands for Retard Attempting Poetry
Regrets
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.23.09
wow that was epic simply amzaing one of the greatest collabs i have
ever read
lol i like that very on point
G till da end won
very nice verse very poetic almost but yet it has such great
flow............great job
lol ak47 is on your knuts............good script bro
very inpressive exspualy cus it was 1 on 3 and murked em all
that was sexy i want you now
lol ak47s punk ass could not even make real rap name,and good MR U
it was not your best script but so fun to read
yeah FK i am
great shit but that one guy down there has a point you should have
made a point aswell
fire shit yall loved the flow and vocab to all of this
yeah desanto won but venom came hard do feal bad
i will change my 0 when you chang my 5
bludie no question KFC wheres the kool aid really? WOW sad you
should get raped
lol damn i think he will just shut up
everyone is now part of the "hype" good shit GMN rep
lol you def lost
see this is sad i am so used to these great raps of yours,that i am
not really shocked when you post something this good on the other
hand if someone like shwah posted this i would be like HOLY SHIT
GREAT SHIT
probly the best i have saw you do,and yeah the other one is just
for fun
ahhh nice FK could use a little better vocab,but yet very
inpressive
well damn sounds great makes it as i win i become a star along the
way
i dont know what collab it is for,but your vocab is way beyond what
it used to be congrats you should feel very proud
ndit got this i feel simps flow is off
slight flow issues,but i can say that its much better then the ones
i have read of yours in the past
damn mr u?
lol i love the ending,but the vocab was not as good as some of
yours
a few parts are off but damn i love that first verse can i have it?
lol
lol wow that was fucked up poor new guy
great flow,good vocab ensayne is nasty though so i dont know if
this will finish him off
lol damn man that was sick
why join ensaynes crew when you can join bunnyz,greasy,and me plus
tonijos a girl so you wont be the only one in thee crew
i like it flow is shaky though
really good only problem is you didnt show me the ropes,and you
rhymed it to many times in sets 2 and 3 thats the only mistakes
abortion
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
its basic can you go rate my hype diss its like 15 down
great flow vocab mix it was probly one of my favorite of yours
actually,and can you rate my "hype diss" its my last one i think it
12th down
where?
Collab
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
go to my page and check " as tears roll down my face" we need a 3rd
verse
Collab
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
ummm well you a gangster rapper or a deep meening rapper?
Collab
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
yeah sure but can you rate my "hype diss" first its the 10th rap
hype diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
lol nice vocab furry friend
i will do your 3rd verse for you if you rate "hype diss" for me
i loved it seemed like a horrer scene writen
Trash
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
its decent but i have saw better from you,and if you got time rate
my "hype diss"
My20Bars
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
it has a great flow to it,but needs work on vocab.............hey
if you got time go rate my "hype diss"
decent,but it needs more vocab but im sure you know that,the flow
is great though
yeah that shit was tight,and i may not battle but i got cha
murder,but thats just my opinion i still dont understand why he
dissed us
your verse is good,and if the rest in the collab do well it will be
a 10
its great,but i feel it needs a 3rd verse,and i got a hook that
would go well with it if you want
~One Mic~
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.12.09
cus my boys untouable
TEST ME
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.11.09
honestly i didnt like it at first cus i read it and thought the
lyrics were basic,but with a second read over and rapping it out
loud it sounds great
is there room for KC
that shit was awsome try some multis with those big workds though
loved it over all good flow through out,and good vocab in most
places,but maybe adding a few punchlines
i agree with ensayne you really should record thiss
Wake Up
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.11.09
lol yeah i alrady commented this in the past good shit though
Fear
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.11.09
poetic like,needs alot better vocanb
it was good,but you should increase vocab
URGENT
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.11.09
lol yeah i am gonna believe that
i have been waiting to prove im a decent battler i am in
good for a quicky i like your newer style rida
yeah it was decent your not good enought to beat like half the
people on the site though
that was nice inpressive raps FK you have gotten much better
hey go on myspace so we can im
what did he die of?
what did your dad die of?
thanks guys and mine died march 9th
lol stop giving yourself 5s,and can you comment my last one?
lol first freestlyle was good,second one was a little shakey,and
every comment my last one i think its good
yeah and shes decent at freestyling heard her on thr phone
lol well the ending dont flow right
better then most of yours
i like the rap,but not feeling the ending
lol your funny
Knockout
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.10.09
lol damn that was wrong
My16Girls
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.10.09
yeah i was just talking her on the phone and shit spitting
freestyles thats all
thanks i apprecitate it
lol rida i love you i will send you pics
its her real number shes talking to me
lol do you really want random people from a website giving you a
call?
right above the box it says rating click on the arrow next to
it,and where do you live?
lol i meen if you wanna be Queen thats fine we can take over the
sight together
lol alright,and you know you can give yourself more then a 5 right?
decent,but sorry you can not be the Queen for i am the King jk
lol hell yeah all i got is a 22 though
lol you never asked for my help fallen,and i still did collab with
you when you first got here
yeah bunnyz post the verse so i can see it,and thank you both for
saying i help cus i try
alright you got any subjects or you want one of mine?
lol yeah bunnyz like most new people on the sight no one would read
his raps so he collabed with me witch made him great
where we do a rap together the last 4 i was in are collabs if you
would like i will give you a link so you can see
lol fallen knight screw you i collab will you all the time and you
love me you know you do you homo lol jk
lol nice wanna do a collab together?
lol just do not stress it you do not want beef with bludie hes one
of the best on the sight
well me and him have had are difrences he thinks i am just an
annoying kid and all that but here and there he will act really
nice,and collab you know be generaly nice
its decent for having no point really,but it has a good flow and
good vocab
lol do not worry about bludie hes probly high he really is a nice
guy when he wants to be
yeah i am from Detroit
lol this is how bludie and stax always act
yeah good rap,but this is not a cute website,but i will say your
buetifull
very inpressive but not quiet a 10
"Im a master of great with this chatter I make" that was my
favorite part cus when you rap it aloud that just flows so great
Wake Up
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.09.09
thats the shit right there way to go ndit you spit something from
the heart dont you feel better
Fear Diss
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.09.09
shit is good,but thers a few flow mistakes,and the flow could be
slighly better but it was still really nice
great verse fallen knight you could have wrote a little more about
why the goverment bothers you though
i am in
very inpressive
i will give you a 8,but you can not beat everyone on the sight dont
even try
it was good,give me a minute to diss the other fag first,then i
will repsond to yours
go ahead and fire
go ahead and fire
well congrats he dus not have to diss you cus your so sad that this
time you killed your self
how come you never respond back to me cus everyone says i killed
you
ummmm its good enough to beat starz but i hope you can do better
if you spit at me i will respond
pretty good,needs a little work on flow felt kind of forced
pathetic sad you should feal bad
much better feels like your forcing the flow a little to much
though,but all around a really good rap
decent increase the vocab
sleeper
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.07.09
so much better then when you first arived........grat job bro
Show Hype
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.07.09
probly my favorite out of all you have done very inpressive
i want to add a verse
lol alright not quiet good as the original but wow you really have
talent man
Eggs...
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.05.09
wonerfull i want a part 2
OC records
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.05.09
you need to inprove the length,and flow needs a little work
trash
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.05.09
inpressive but i think you can do better
sameOgame
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.05.09
those are inpressive verses,but make it 16 lines,and format it
better
aight jlive,but can you change the 5!
bad trip
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 11.04.09
lol wow......i meen WOW i do not know what to say
that was a great rap good flow,and something everyone can relate to
thats the way to do it grea job bro
i go option one,and we go back the crew i made a long time ago
Versatile
best post i have saw from you
i like that good collab.......i liked the 2 of yours flow together
yall should do more
lol man can you check mine for me its the newest one up it needs a
3rd verse if you want to do it
that was good.......good flow decent lyrics,but i have a feeling
you can do much better
lol i could have done so much better i need to quit writing at 6 in
the morning good job everyone else
really good and real shit,but it dus need a better hook if you and
your crew need help on hooks ever let me know yall i know i help
the future vets
lol do you need the all great KC
Sick bars
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.31.09
yeah man its decent,but there basic rhymes,and he right not the
right style for a J Z beat
damn that shit is fire......good shit bludie wheres part 2 now?
man fuck the law,they are not real thats there flaw,thats why i
hold a gun to make em crawl,the time has begun for the Anarchy to
rise and the goverment to fall.................theres a hook for
yall if you want to use it
creeping sneaking and coming up on you fast now be ready for the
heart atack,cus its the night where freddy,jason,chucky and me are
back,to old to trick or treat so i give your kids crack,running
around with nothing but a ski mask,to murder and not get caught is
my task,the reason i am angry is becasue of the vodka in my flask,i
am dressed up in a gas mask with a pic axe in hand,cut,rape,murder
you,then bury you in 6 feet of sand,call up the devil with the
fiddle cus i need my band,got dead bodys spread all acrost the
land,now its start to raping teen age girls dressed like
whores,they end up liking it crawling around on the floor,i love it
when they continue to beg for more,...oh your begging me to
stop?,well i am sorry but your pantys just dropped,now your lives
over now have a good time trying to live life sober,cus a demonic
demon,sent here to infest you all with my demonic semon,now my
verse is over and all you hear is screaming!
My story
2.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.31.09
now try the life you actually lived!
decent shit bro,and its nice to know your liking the sight keep
writing
sexy shit but i am the King of rap
deep emotional pain sounds good
go ahead i can rip anything
shit i am down
lol yeah it is so is mine though
lol thats was not to long good shit give me about a minute
lol yeah i tell storys
lol i am just trying to get decent at battling cus i am much better
at just rhymes
yeah reago if you want to get warmed up i will battle you
good shit man......great flow nice hook
batle me
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.27.09
gl.......you should be able to win,cus i am a vet but i do not
battle
batle me
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.27.09
go ahead and fire......
ha man one day we got to do another one to cus if you have not
looked at my rhymes you do not know that i did not even try
thanks for the fun man got me warmed up for the day cus those were
my first 2
i am down for sure.....and why not just PM you on here?
man theres no point in quiting rap.........but gl man
go ahead and fire at me i will respond
Snake Stew
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.25.09
ha nice battle bro i enjoyed it even though i do not battle its fun
sometimes even though i am not that good at it
Snake Stew
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.25.09
lol i will give you another 9 cus unwind and combined did flow
right,and there were not as many of your great punchlines that i
loved in the first
some really nice punchlines theres about 3 that did not quiet
connect though
lol if you were ready you would just fire
lol cut you slack? fire man earn your respect
lol i already read your pitty ass rhymes simple shit like 1 2 3
yeah sounds good you going first or me?
lol damn dont kill yourself man i gave you a 8 calm down
its not like i said it was bad i just said it needed a little work
just change it around a bit make it a little more complicated
lol ken barbie doll........that is like the funnyest shit i have
saw someone say to super fresh
its the again,again,slumber thats bothering me
ughh most of it dont rhyme it kind of looks like one of his raps
lyrics could have been a little better,but its clear you guys
killed him
wow that was inpressive very creative great flow lyrics could be a
little more complicated though
that was a sexy murder type seen to me.......hmmm gave me a boner
with all the talent it it lol
good shit give a sec to respond
if you would like fire
To my fans
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.22.09
pretty inpressive...needs a little work on the flow
this was fly....theres a few things wrong like is a missing a great
punchline,but your getting much better
hmmm dont know what to say you need work on flow and vocab
i am feeling it althought grime is kinda right you could use some
new beats
ha there i commented
started off kind of slow i enjoyed the ending alot though
Godless
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.07.09
shit is fucking great........by the way i agree on most of it
its decent make it 16 bars and hit me back up when your done
reel good shit not quiet a 10 9.5
ummm i give it a 8 cus i like jokas verse,and PHRASEOLOGY was
decent.....but hurst just pulled a super fresh
we are supposed to be doing a GMN collab to let you know
decent you rhymed it way to many times in the begining though
damn that was tight.....i aint ever saw you do that bludie
lol this is Fan Fuck_in_tastic
i love the flow its fantastic,but i feel like a few of the lyrcis
could have been better near the end
sad pathetic shoot yourself......i am way beyond your level
aggrivated that his daddy touched him with long nails......lol this
and the verse after it made me crack up
damn that was ummmm....fantastic
no pucnhlines,basic lyrics,5 year old flow.........so sad
really fresh flow,needs a little more lyrical talent though
wots good
0.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.06.09
lol past sad,but thanks for the laughs
aight give me 5 minutes
yeah that shits straight you going first or me?
sure i am down how many rounds?
Freestyle
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.04.09
alot better then what you used to do....what you time some time off
to practice
i felt like the lyrics could have been a little better....sorry a 9
damn that was hot
damn i was gonna give it a 9 but i will give a 10 cus although i
think yall over confendent it is not a 7 so i gotta make up for
that
very inpressive
you were not really trying right?
hmmm inpresive....yall should add a 3rd verse......you know like
KCs new flow
i love the transission between singing and rap,and its a difrent
style then that of what you use normly...great job
oh haha i remember this lol killed him....i hope he comes back
hard......
9 probly just cus i already read most of it in the mini chat last
night
its decent......you need to work of the flow more
desanto....the KING has spoken....lol
simp diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.02.09
lol nice after that the 303 probly is enbaresed good shit
very inpressive i agree with simp keep posting
Incite
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.02.09
this one needs work on vocab as well wonderfull flow though
Ice Cream
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 10.02.09
i was really fealig the flow,and good concepts in the rap,just don
know about the vocab
inpressive onec again work on the lyrics a little like the hook
could be a little better
really good man needs a few minor tweaks and becase of the good
ratings maybe you should make a part 2
you know i am always down to collab with you...
dude you suck i do not even battle and it is clear you lost to me
this shit fly as fuck i think joka had the best verse
lol wow your sad
shit was beyond inpressive....one problem like i have told many
there is only one King...lol great shit man
lol nice now i want some acid,shrooms,and weed........its all your
fault people and telling other people about there grug habbits
making them remember theres....damnit lol
good shit breezy nice to see you drop one
clearly a 10 probly my favorite of yours
yo go to my profile and about 15 down is my dad finished check it
yeah i do and i agree,but kinda for a difrent reason i am into deep
meening witch is what nas is best at right after i post this i will
give you a link to my one that got 35 10s and you tell me your
opinion then
lol you can not embaress someone when you do not battle,and ok if
you feel like most of the sight sucks name like 5 you consider good
no one has heard of you,and anyways battling is not what i am
legendary for...everyone knows me as a true life story teller,and
oh yeah since i got 35 10s on one post i think that makes me better
then you
yeah dbox is the shit...nothing against you although since i am
like a legend on here you probly should keep my name out your raps
yo admin count me in...haha this will be my first contest and i
have been here a minute
damn thats real rida nice to see i am not the only one posting deep
meening anymore
you had some really good verse,but there are some minor flow
issues...great job
hmmm nice one man between the 3 you deserve a 10
needs alot of work dude
lol damn that was ill
lol nice desanto i see you still battle all the time
hmm well that was intresting,but it has flow issues
illegal round 1 cardone 2 all around illegal
decent man,but desanto will kill this....oh and i am the ONLY King
good shit bro....happy birthday hope you enjoy it
......Perfect
Hey fuckin retard we gmn not gnm??? U dislecsic shit Get at me.
fire....needs to be more complicated but the flow makes up for it
alright i like this one quiet a bit...one or two spots that need
fixed flow,and you should format it better,and then more people
would probly read
i liked the flow...but some of the lyrics kinda sounded like little
kid rhymes and you should try to make the flow of the rap go better
with the hook
Whats Beef
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.14.09
alright this is good enough to get you into some of the good crews
keep doing ones like this....great flow
well this one needs to be more complicated....and fix some small
flow issues
lol well that gave me some good laughs....well my stomach hurts
from laughing to mcuh so fuck you...lol
lol i agree with the 2 prior
damn nice as fuck....took along time to read but worth it
lol thats fucking great...thanks for the G string line
lol i love these things
really nice man good job
dude it needs alot of work...major flow issues,and you need to make
it more complicated
lol and we are not stopping
fire and yeah hes GMN
of course it needs to be longer,but great lines and of course a
good flow...i guess i should prepare for a crew battle
lol your mother will not even love you
shit alot better then your first great flow nice flip on the ghost
thing alot better then you used to do at battling
lol alright
and it makes no sense you have no lyrical point in ant line after
the first 4 witch is all about wigger chick guess you still have
her on your mind
wow and my lines are basic? attention is the biggest and most
creative word you used,and there is no punch lines EPIC FAIL
wow nice i think you got this one covered...yo check the disses i
have done at george and tell me what you think cus you know i do
not battle much..p.s second one only took 1 minute or less to
responde
i am fealing it great rap.....but wheres the cobra? lol
response
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.13.09
a 10 to make up for this fags 3 cus its like a 8 cus not only did
she responde quickly she also did better then george heres lame ass
would do
Wiggachick
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.12.09
well jr. you suck.....stick to being a little kid with shitty raps
its ok
i like it,but i feal you could have came a little harder sorry got
to give it a 9
i do not curse anymore i only do clean raps
telling your lyrics GET IN MY BELLY like my name is FAT
BASTARD.....imao
great flow nice flip
whats pael?
lol i need a subject to collab
collab on what?
damn breezy complety changed your swag for this one...tight shit
i like how it ended up..repsect and love to those who died
lol i meen these shits are funny,but i just think you could make
ones that are not gay
lol thats fantastic
GMN diss
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.11.09
lol man you forgot to get me and grime
great flow
lol nice
i agree
D Day Diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.11.09
good shit bro...check my last post the new GMN one
slimy
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.11.09
never mind man GMN did not meen to kick me out...sorry bro
great shit man,but that one line you should just remove and replace
cus simp is right
slimy
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.11.09
alright man but you have to give me a little bit i am about to go
to mcdonalds for lunch
good shit guys
slimy
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.11.09
yeah i posted mine so yall could find it easy
alright i will start now
alright,how many bars?
while i was gone GMN kicked me out,when i came back i was just off
the crew page just cus i was gone a week.....but yeah i do not know
who yalls leader is,but yall should talk as a crew and let me know
yall pay me some thought we all know i would inprove the crew
it had some flow issues,but i was fealing most of the punchlines
yo i think you need a new member....whats your thoughts?
shit i want in,I can take my homo verse i already did,and make it
better
decent man needs a little work
really good for how fast you got back at him....not as good as what
you have been throwing at ray though
30 10s now i am adding 31 thank you all so much
rida was beast,but Killa C did this shit gangster....lol and killa
can you delete the 5 as well?
needs a little fixing,but over all great freestyle
you are sad and make the sight look bad
wow glover never realized you had a problem with me
whats the hook? sorry i was at church all day
really i felt ray won great flow,but i want a round 2 and 3 cus i
have not saw shit this good in a while
swagg non existant with his turtle neck and vest
best thing you added
GOSSIP
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.06.09
holy fucking shit everyone he said........."Bleeding my organs",
Fucking spit up my "spleen when recordin",
Im "mean and extortin", So many bitches Im "exceeding the Mormons",
welcome back cardone
trash rapper...what a shocker another big mouth..with no balls
small lack of flow and a few spots,but all around a great rap to
read
damn really fealing your style on this one..Im out of ya so called
solar system
Im out there all i have is pessimism
good shit bro...will you check my featured bar out?
lol i have to agree with bludie,so...Nice, last line shoulda been
"no room" for lames here
rida won i think that is clear
your gonna feed my guts to your dog right?
thats no way to talk about ur mom, aight. lol your awsome
fly ass shit bro
you spit really good,but you ain on enough! can you check my
featured bar?
nice shit grime,but your so messed up i am in GMN so i should give
you a 2
it should have been more complicated,can you check my featured bar?
loved it its great,and i wish you would do more of these
sexy bro
you should format it better so its easyer to read,can you do me a
favor and go check my featured bar?
good flow i was fealing this,if you have time would you check my
featured bar
Lovin You
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.04.09
inprove the lyrics a bit,and make it longer,but i like the
concept,and would you check my featured bar?
dude why do you hack peopls shit? do you have nothing better to do?
and who are you?
yur a fag
dude this shit is fire i think i should jack your hook,and about
half of spinnas rhyme lol
fly ass shit man its only a 9 but i won mess with your straight
10s
the burn
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.03.09
alright got cha
the burn
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.03.09
dude will you check my featured bar for me? i will check any of
yours
first 2 great shit,but i feel like eazy beat you
lol damn sick shit and you did it mad fast after your last post
better then your other shit bro
damn dude that has to be the best shit i have read since i came on
the sight....much respect
good shit rida,but you should diss the other 2 as well
lol you all did great but i really like easy As flow
yeah i will,will you check my dad completly finished?
tight shit can not wait to see the ending.check my newest post, my
dad complete
freestyle
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.02.09
dude first verse is sad i refuse to read more
Cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.02.09
yeah my dad died march 9th this year,and i am going to his grave to
today and i am puting it beside him so did you see any mistakes?
cobra...
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.02.09
sorry dude i am working on my dads rap right above this one and it
needs work
better then your first and really quick response good shit
i request a round 2 but for now i say rida won cus the flow was on
point
good shit bro but i was not feeling how you ended it
lol yeah man when i came back earlyer you were still talking about
me
yo roughrida won
i did man you do talk about me all day and i flipped your script
fucking kick ass flow man
tight shit man had a few spots where flow was off,and could have
made it a little stronger vocab good shit though bro
well the voters say i won round 1 your round 2 was alot harder
though. what did you think about my second?
STORY LINE
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 09.01.09
thats some fly shit,but i think we need a part 2
shit if you got time for me thats cool
lol yeah i used it onec agaist ray i thought it was a clever word
to use....
desanto
man that shit is fire i think i see haters below my comment
really good shit,but i am in Gas Mask Nation now so you guys suck
booo lol
weak shit bra
good flow,good vocab,to long though
damn fresh he already used his?and ok i will try to remember that
actualy it might be weak with the lyrics,but i am really feeling
your flow
you should make it 16 bars just so it is not only like 20 seconds
long when i rap it but good shit
shit sick easy
shit talk to bludie about GMN
great shit man, but can you make your positive friends like me and
myniakal
damn nice vocab
shit i say matik. sorry ray you guys should do round 2 though
it was good,but good dus not beat ray you gotta come hard
shit man i do. good shit bra keep your head up
lol ray you know you won
yeah man you garbage atleast when ray threw one at me i threw back
something worth reading
alright man i was just letting you know cus i just joined today and
crew wars sounds fun
Gas Mash Nation leader is bludie1 and his crew members are god
givin,toxin,lyrical mastermind,sicknosis,and King Cobra[me]
lol good old fucking bludie
good shit man
yeah you can swear all you want fuck,nigga,shit bitch. see
shit straight for a freestyle just tweak it around a bit,let me
know when you do so i can recomment
good shit breezy
theres some parts that are a little off its a 8 if you want honesty
instead of me just handing you a 10
new crew
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.30.09
do you have anyone else?
shit nice collabo guys you should do more together
well we have had alot of fakers such as jessica who was mr hip
hop,and twisted who was just a fake period
thanks for the comment and yeah rida is the shit,i know his verse
was better,but thats ok we do collabs together all the time next
time i will out shine
alright i got me and ridas verse up now on my profile now can you
check it
yo will you go check the one me and rida just posted?
yeah good shit though
i am feeling it,but i not the mike vick line cus i just used one of
those in my last diss
shit i was really feeling the flow,but maybe a little better of
lyrics and maybe a little more personable but nide
who won
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.29.09
djs still are a main part of rap so it is in my blood. why you
still posting on here man this is not beef i just figured since we
both had a line at each other i should post it in one rap
dude your fucking wrong,but 10 for creativeness
its decent for a freestyle
i say rida dbox was a little all over the place
yeah redsoxfn10 won,but you both need to work on standing out more
shit your tooth decay waiting to happen lol
men
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.26.09
quit posting 5s on my shit
i feel like stilmatics verse is the best,but this shit is awsome
good shit i haven saw you in a minute
good puchlines great flow never slowed down it was steady. good
shit man
the grime classic
lol wow no matter what he says he can not beat this
King Cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.26.09
lol you probly are not even from the hood! how you gonna put me on
blast? everything i spit is reel and i did not say anything about
firing at the cops i said i carry a 9 and i do here and there
thats some grimy shit. lol offense to your name
was this directed to anybody? nice lines i feel you dragged it a
little to long out though
needs a little work,but i love the flow,and do you know who was on
your account earlyer?
Bar Cypher
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
i am in gods sinful world where child petifiles rape little boys
and girls/
where your judged your more by your coler then the words that you
speak/
thats my last one goodnight
Bar Cypher
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
ts not my fault i like to see my enemys on there knees/
i leave em in pain like a pelvic inflammatory disease/
i say analyzes just cus mdsanto just dragged on to many bars,but
his lyrics were better
Bar Cypher
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
well as long as we talking about fakes twisted belongs at the
bottom of the lake/ thought we was cool turns out every line you
saw you liked you went ahead and taked
Bar Cypher
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
all these bitches are hard to tolerate/
so i always just go home and masturbate/
Bar Cypher
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
from the east throw the rest beneath crush jits hopes and desires/i
am always on time never say the same line always a random line
about a sex crime
Bar Cypher
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
i think its funny all i find is rhyme biters/and all these dudes
who are ugly claming they pull one nighters/
me doin i
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.25.09
good rap but most of it has basic lyrics,and its to long,but you
got talent
wow your fucking crazy,thats amazing
i say round 1 astros but u give 2 to GMN i feal like you fell off
cardone wheres round 3? so i can decide
noyz had the best verse but they all need a little work
lol thats true leader 9 for the rap,but 10 for your comment
shit was tight my bad about round 2 my famiy had to use the
computer
i admit you got a better flow i say you win,but you need to work on
lyrics i am dead serios go look at me and rays they are on the
second page and let us know who won cus ours is still open
to.....but yeah you won
its just basic man check me and rayfrombk battle hes a vet like a
legend and everyone knows me on here learn from us
Threats
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.23.09
good shit bra
good shit bro, yo check me vs rayfrombk and tell us who won
hey first line you said "just started spitting and ding your times
up" then later said you have been rapping since 99 so its a 8 fix
that and you will have a 9. check me vs rayfrombk
alright post who won on the everybody read haha sorry but i need
ray to know your vote
lol who won?
nice shit bro! can you check the battle between me and rayfrombk
and say who won
Analyze
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.23.09
damn shit was hot,read me and rayfrombk and tell us who won
shit was good but not a 10
had a good flow work on the lyrics a bit,check my last post and
tell me your thoughts
nice that was good lyrics yo check my last post
DMV ANIMAL
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
nice lyrics hell of a flow i never heard of you! check my latest
post cus everyone knows me on here
its decent hey you should check my last post
The return
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
alright pm me when finished
The return
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
yeah just saying where he failed
Suicidal.
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
deep shit man if you even need someone to talk to man hit me up
The return
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
i am but god dus not like me
The return
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
lol how gods a failure...i am trying to prove a point
visiting family it will be about another 2 weeks till i am on every
day again
The return
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
wanna collab?
sss
2.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
you need work
The return
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
damn venom your so much better then you were when you first got
here
TANTRUM
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.22.09
damn glover thats on point
needs a little work but i feel it
alright i am feeling the flow
yeah i know but he has more talent no offense it was not bad
dude simp would kill you
Grime its a single go check my dad complete
damn nice b boy i did not think you were this good yo check my post
about my dad if you got time
actualy yeah it was a good battle but rida you lost
your not bat though u should try to join 1 bar wonders i will put
in a good word for ya
do you see it? like i said no disrespect but i am clearly better
then the rest of the crew
lol i do not want to join but i do own a gas mask lol you know one
of the ones you smoke weed out of
no disrespect i am just saying when I started the crew it was
supposed to be of rappers with deep meenings and lyrics you do not
hear everyday
good shit G
i like it you should make it longer and we should make it a collab!
man it is not bad but is not good this is not anything versitile at
all this is rhymes that been heard like 100 times
lol what the fuck?
like he said half your potential so a 9
dude you suck try to diss me
wow your joking right?
lol i know thats the point of the crew i am trying to start deep
meening raps you have read mine we could take over the sight but i
need you
yo man are you part of any crew?
damn guys fucking ill
damn man i feel you they should definetly feature this
reelest shit you will see...deep man much love in your life may god
be with you
much love to you all we all gods soldiers so you all my family
yo we all in the middle of a collab if you wanna throw a verse on
Skittles
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.02.09
a little short and corny but nice work
one vision
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.02.09
whats a body if there is no herse/
what would i be if i could not spit a simple verse!
man just check em i will do the same for you
def the best but i got second
ha check my heaven hell post and post a verse about it
good shit man you wanna collab?
lol venom won this easy
spitin that killer venom lol
yeah man you can come join us
My name
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.01.09
want to throw mine on here and make it a collab?
Above All
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.01.09
it is nice to see you post something have not saw you in a minute
wanna collab?
My name
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.01.09
damn man definetly better then mine about my name
actualy i liked it nice super fresh
shit in nice great flow lyrics could be a little better
lol i would give it a 8 though can you check my last 2 post? A
honest friend and my freestyle
shit it tight man
Stick Up.
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.01.09
i like it man but i am only giving you a 9 cus i think you should
add a little more cus i know you can do better by some of your
other work
not bad man
assault
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 08.01.09
ummm wow you need some work
shit it fucking sexy good shit
i like this shit man..respect
sexy ass flow no homo
everyone
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.31.09
i am 16
haha nice shit man recruiting time i know jaist wants to join
hell yeah slimy is making the page right now
you make the crew page?
theres no crew there man plus i feel like i can do better then that
crew
hell yeah slimy how about you do the page and shit your the leader
cus my computer is slow
king cobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
alright well i am working on something so you gonna have to wait a
minute
king cobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
i thought we quit beefin
Glover...
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
yo can you make me a pic to?
slim thugs
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
any time slimy
slim thugs
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
ha nice puting the dirty south back on the map
yeah man did not earn a 10
i told you movies do not work on my computer thats another reason i
can not do it till my boy wakes up
i liked it not the greatest point to it but nice flow
youtube.
you find a beat do yours first then send it to one of us who will
send it to the next one
alright lets do this shit
shit you got a mic? and dus sicknosis? cus i am down it might take
a few hours cus i got to get my mic from my boys room and hes
sleeping
hey man can you check the last post i did,and the one that says why
i have my name
hey yo slimy can you check my last 2 post?
my 1 rap
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
i like it
sicknosis
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
alright everyone get started
sicknosis
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
i am down,but what do you meen?
sicknosis
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.30.09
got any ideas? lol you do more collabs then me
you wanna collab?
man i can not watch movies on my computer but can you check my post
about my name?
nice words nice flow just had no point to it
shit i got respect
shit i got you nice diss by the way
sickjesus
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.28.09
lol right
sickjesus
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.28.09
yeah he gave me 2 1s
clean ass shit i will get you back tomorrow!
Choices!!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
has a really nice story to it
uncut
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
alright i liked this one still do not like you though
ha my people with another one this was great guys i think we need a
part 2 though
yeah i am!
fuck this jit thanks everyone for having my back,but he is not
worth it
thanks venom and by the way your just as good as rapping as i am
thank you venomspitter and super fresh
your fucking lucky you do not live near me cus i would kill you
man who the fuck do you think you are?
yeah i am 50 percent mexican and unlike you i actual own a gun oh
and are we supposed to feel bad about your dad dieing? cus mines
dead to but unlike you when my dad died i did not have money handed
to me
i do not give a fuck about your myspace page,you are not hood your
not from the hood so quit acting hoodd
ha my boy Scene King shit fuck that pussy i am done with him
thank you super fresh
lol wow you stupid jit here allow me to post a rap to show you what
one looks like
make one at just me so i can kill your bitch ass
polar bear
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
ha he said he was gonna diss me
deserves a 0
lol wow this is the worst diss i have ever seen man i hope they rip
you off the site
good shit man
king cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
man if i freestyle like the one earlyer it will take me about 7
minutes,but if you want me to take my time like the one about my
dad i will need like 2 hours so i can think abou it
man i said i had no beef with witch i do not with anyone but i said
that before i realized you were gonna staright rip the leader of my
crew!
king cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
alright whens it supposed to be done?
king cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
i know that man,but i got your back we doing a diss at me all?
king cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
man your mad cus i respect everyone?
how many times have people that you have been up agaist posted a 5
on your shit or a 1 even and you were mad as fuck? cus it happens
to me all the time
king cobra
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
you trying to say they do not deserve more then a 5? i am just
asking you to be real
cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
the 5s you put on grime and thems diss theres 2 of em you know it
is worth more then that and you know i got respect to thats why i
am saying change it respect them
rida go change those 5s man or i am droping out the crew you know i
am more real then that
nah it is just that there is no point in throwing my name in there
the reason i joined is cus i wanted to be in a crew and i know your
guyes is full
good shit hes my boy but unlike most people i i give respect where
respect is do but simplicty keep my name out your mouth
a2k2010
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
lol my bad mine was not as good as yours rida i thought you were
almost done with yours so i did it fast so it was done at the same
time as yours
good shit rida ha you see i got 4 10s the only people i did not get
a 10 from was the people in the crew
yeah i got you man i can not see why you guys will not do a friedly
one back but that is straight with me
"how he was a misstake,his parents used a faulty rubber" lol this
is my favorite verse but the whole thing was fire on both sides
dude i am just doing friendly battles man i never said it was
personle everyone know mine are for fun and i said you were the
only good one in the groupe there was not a single line agaist you
most def a 10
cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.27.09
yeah i am down all my shit is friendly anyways so he should not
care
yeam man i am in
shit thanks roughrida who else is in the crew?
Cobra Diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.26.09
well gl man much respect thanks for having me in the crew while it
lasted
Cobra Diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.26.09
man it is not cus your not on it is the rest of the crew i know
your on but i am not doing a super fresh and runing a 2 man crew
[even though we could and still win]
TouchDown
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.26.09
i like the flow alot,but it should be a little more complicated
yo rida how about i leave steady flow and join these fuckers are
never on
EVERYONe
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.25.09
fire at me
dante diss
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.25.09
shit was good
lol do not even have a hip hop song as your ringtone
not bad wish you had made it longer
shit was nice
thank you everyone who has left a comment and everyone who dus in
the future
nice headhuner! yo if you got time can you go check my lifes
regrets post
lol i got a kick out of this and it was definetly random
yo check my lifes regrets
ANYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.24.09
yup thats straight
ANYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.24.09
alright i am down
ANYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.24.09
shit anything you want i am just bored.
how about the features of your own self you hate!
king cobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.23.09
lol your rookie ass is not worth it
king kobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.23.09
you wanna do a collab?
seattle
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.23.09
yo man why would you try to batlle me?
you have no history on the site.
everyone knows me
To Alla ya
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.23.09
what you started a crew?
EVERYONE
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.23.09
who wants to collab?
stead flow
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.22.09
lol when you want it done?
stead flow
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.22.09
well how long do i have?
stead flow
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.22.09
alright
stead flow
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.22.09
i am why?
KING KOBRA
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.21.09
alright
thanks everyone respect to all
how about me?
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.21.09
wow dude i just gave my honest opinion if i made this you would
give it a 8 to your gonna give my shit a 5 when that same one has
had 5 10s how you gonna get mad over me being honest
lol when are we doing a collab together?
just post it thats what i did
am i human or an alien just dus not strike me that well i do not
know
yeah man have you seen the sick shit i have dropped latly?
sick flow on the second part
yeah man peace out man i will miss you in the crew
jddelnevo
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
lol thanks
i like it untill the last verse! not hating jsut being reel to let
you know
lol alright well i am working on a 16 right now but i will fire
back when i have a chance
it dus have a flow i can flow it fast and it makes sense if you
take your time to read it
damn i had never read part 3 and 4 and thanks for the mention in
the true rapper section plus now i do live in florida if you got
time can you read my EVERYONE post thanks
king kobra
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
go ahead i have fun doing friendly battles
shit was nice,but who the fuck are you?
yeah i did and i agree its better after you changed it a bit
king kobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
yeah i got cha man i might be dissing your crew but it is not
personel i did to hip hops crew to and there my friends and shit
personal
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
yeah its straight it sounds better when you rap it aloud if you got
time check my EVERYONE post
king kobra
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
alright i was just making sure you still wanted to
yo you doing your verses for the hard life one with me and johnny_b
?
FREESTYLE
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
i like your flow man but you need to be more creative can you tell
what you think of m newest post EVERONE?
alright well mine are done so now you just need super fresh
thanks man
lol i did
alright man give me about 20 minutes i want to do this one right
make the hook a little better and add a third verse i look forwerd
to watching to see what you drop next
shit is fucking ill and i agree with super fresh you should make a
collab out of this let me know if you need another verse
lol we all killed him can you check the EVERYONE post by me and see
who you think won me or SUPER FAG
got cha
i will do the same and i know the radio producers in orlando
florida so you might just find your self on 95.3
who is this to?
yeah twisted it made my go lising to your shit much respect by the
way
READ
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
alright get me first
wow sad dude my lyrics killed these
WTF
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
yeah we all know dude i am fucking pissed
sorry britain but i liked your words more but i loved Sicknosis
flow so i give it to him
WTF
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
i know this is bullshit
WTF
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
thats what i am fucking saying
SteadyFlow
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.20.09
i am still down with steady flow
damn man i agree with all this! wow
KING COBRA
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.19.09
thank you i added it
i like what you said about the newbies
i love it
respect to his life man good shit,and yeah that was a crew dis they
are not part of steady flow i am a member of steady flow
HI HATERS!
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.19.09
i love the whole "even the smooth can can be grimey" verse but i
was not feeling the whole counting a half mill thing cus you know
thats a lie
Detroit
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.19.09
alright
repping it right! shits tight ha detroits still better
Detroit
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.19.09
yeah man i am in it
shit was straight
if i can get everyone to
yo hip hop can you check out the enenies collab and tell me what
you think?
his King Kobra one is it
alright kid british tell me what you thing of the enemys collab
king kobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
lol the big ass collab is sicknosis i am doing the sinfull world
post i just posted what we got done right now but i will ask
sicknosis about this going on his
king kobra
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
whats this for?
thanks for the add on man
alright i will have mine done fast
shit can we do 5?
alright go read the "sicknosis read" post by me we are doing a
godly rap about how sinfull this world is think you can do it?
yeah i thought in a actual track it would sound good if you spit
your last 2 right into venoms shit! you want me to change it back?
my bad should have talked to you about it
King Kobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
thanks man do you mind if i find someone to do the 3rd verse and
add a choures? like the enemy collab
alright give me like 20 minutes you want to add a verse to one i am
doing?
king cobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
alright man the collabs up sick verses man
King Kobra
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
i like it but can you take out the fuck and the niggaz and replace
them? cus one of the points was to make a clean rap
i already added yours to the everybody so if you wanna see how it
flows together go ahead
you down with me adding one?
yeah it is good enough now we just waiting on venomspitter
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
yeah just post it as King Cobra and yeah venomspitter feel free
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.18.09
yeah pretty much you know it is just a simple one hit me up when
your verse is done
alright man let me know when it is done
alright you got a myspace? or a email that i can send it to when i
am done?
gods sinfull world! if you think you can lets actualy do a godly
rap about how wrong are world is.
alright so what we doing are collab on?
i thought dante was one of are people? and what we doing it about?
shit i did not know that you down for a collab soon?
yeah i am
shit i love the flow
yo da contest can you read my detroit post?
you know you get your opinion on something i actualy spent time on
who the fuck are you?
they know i did not meen no disrespect this was just for fun hip
hop,roughrida,twisted,grime mc,and breezy are all my people
nditullio01 i am going at them cus i want to this has nothing to do
with the crew,and da contest i made this in 20 minutes and hip hop
knows that cus i hit him up on myspace and told him i was doing
this
da contest you did not even read it,and steadyflow i really do not
care if you have my back on this
i am down with ya man if you just wanna spit then just write man
you do not have to be in a crew drop something and i will collab
with you
how do you do that?
got all that see me in disbelief/
the fact that i do not beef to them is a relief/
cus i am the chief/
and when it comes to geting ladys i might just be the thief
thats what i am saying fuck that i am WHITE
KING KOBRA
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.15.09
sorry super fresh but i chose his i have never heard of your boy
KING KOBRA
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.15.09
is "the venom spitter" good? cus i never heard of em
KING KOBRA
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.15.09
who all is with you?
shit was tight dude got my respect
how about me?
grime got this one
everyone
0.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.15.09
fuck you i am white and i CAN rap bitch ass mother fucker
really? sounds like some reel shit to me!
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
yeah maybe i just know that i am good enough that i should be in a
crew
nice shit man
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
i was thinking of starting a new one and you got talent
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
no i really do not
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
nditullio01 you part of a crew?
EVERYONE
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
lol who are you?
UPDATE!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
ha the 4th of july post was not good enough hunh?
yo you guys sound like children what the fuck realeyez made a great
diss,and you guys are giving 5s and shit twisted,roughrida,and
grime you all know you my people but you know this is some bullshit
atleast give it a 8
redo it man take your time
damn dbox i know you can do better
lol damnit you typed it faster then me
lol it could be a she
nice shit man i look forwerd to your future on here
lol we do not accuse people of shit man hip hop thought the same
about the brackets he asumed we thought he was doing em you mise
well tell us who you are
Surgent
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
i was at church everyday i was trying to change my life and if you
want we can still do it right now
Surgent
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
nice shit dante how you been homee?
UPDATE!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
thanks for the comment
keep it
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
nice shit bo peep
UPDATE!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
my 4th of july collab i made it 2 days ago but that is still this
week i just reposted it if you do not mind reading it
of course a 10 ha i feel bad all yours are better
Forgive Me
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
shit was staright work on making it a little more complicated you
know throw something in there we have not heard before
just send a verse and what it is about to stoppy12345@hotmail.com
if you got any people on here we need someone for the 3rd verse
lol yeah i know i was there about 3 months ago.
tell you what man you want to do one together?
your welcome man i was not trying to be a dick but thats how you
learn
alot better man
ATTENTION!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
actually grime thanks to the end of the email address saying uk i
thought it was you
where do you want me to send it to?
and yeah i know i was never invited to a crew i feel left out
you down with me adding one?
ATTENTION!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
ha well before the end of the day i will drop one for your little
top 3 thing i will get some of my people and we will do a collab
for ya
ATTENTION!
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
lol who gives a damn as long as you do like mr hip hop did and make
the site better
oh wow another hater down/
shot him stomped him and beat em to the ground/
the difrence between me and you is i got a gun you do not/
ha to bad you a bitch and you have never touched a glac/
just look at the clock/
your time is up/
so i will give you one last chance to apoligize to the best/
surpassed all the rest/
even in distress/
so the difrence between me and you is that i will always stay
true/
you are not a G/
you i can see right through!
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.09.09
lol i know but no one wants to
man it was awfull and you being 14 dus not meen shit
what would you think of me puting a verse on it?
Im Out
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
alright peace
FUCK RIDER
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
shit is sick,but roughrida is my nigga and guys keep beefing you
should no i am hoping he beets you
i like it i added it to the collab
K.S.T
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
alright
K.S.T
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
lol you should both do one about the forth of july so i can add it
to the collab
lol nice diss but the hottest white boy thing you mgiht be a little
wrong lol
Freestyle
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
simple but deep
lol of course i thought it was a 10 or it would not be in my collab
when you did not ask me to
lol i take it you did not read the end i am adding negitive and
possitive everyone has a opinion you do not have to share mine
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
i made mine longer
EVERYONE
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
lol yeah it is independence day. throw down a verse
HIS STORY
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.06.09
sick shit man
i give it K.S.T i like sicknosis lines better but i am feeling
K.S.Ts flow so i give it to him
i am down and lets find a 3rd person and make it three verses and
make a choures how about that dude crach he wants to get better
known
nice shit bro amazing flow
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
it is fast and i would like to get both grime and twisted on it.it
is 4 minutes and 33 seconds thats long enough for 4
impressive shit. and who the hell are the scene kings? sorry i was
gone
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
alright we doing just the 2 of us? or are we asking twisted and
grime and making a full scale collab on some real shit?
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
me and my boy cliff got about 5 i will send one tomorrow hit me up
on myspace or what is your email? it dus not matter to me
xpert
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
lol do not apoligize we doing round 2?
visiting detroit
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
nice shit man you got enough time tomorrow to do one with me? i got
my mike
king coBRA
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
nice i replied
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
gucci mane
nice shit my man
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 07.03.09
me roughrida
"2 years since that day, every day since iv cried" reel ass fucking
line keep it up man
lol thanks simezzy i got a possitive comment out of you
whole thing was hot but spinnas was just nasty in my opionion
King Cobra
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
alright i got respect for this
alright i threw another
georgejr6
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
in 3 days why?
alright i put one up
just posted on it
the best i have ever saw you do
lol just fire a verse dissin me
lol he still got raised in detroit missouri did not teach him how
to rap oh and you wanna battle?
twisted has this sorry roughrida and grimemc you guys were creative
lol if thats the word for grimes
Takin It
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
needs work
My Round 3
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
read mine to it is read all
My Round 3
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
sick shit man yours is way better then mine
Portland
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
i will as soon as my computer stops acting like a fag
Portland
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
yeah i know it deserved a 10 and i guess you got a point there
portlend is not much to work with
Portland
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
yeah but it dus not say what rap would be without your city witch
was the point
nah mines still there
Im Hiring
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
it makes no sense i meen i know me and you are geting better but i
would not put myself up there at the top
Im Hiring
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
lol yeah i know i am not one of the best on the website hell of a
joke though
thanks for posting this grime
Im Hiring
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
lol i know right
Im Hiring
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
lol i know
Im Hiring
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
that vets have not posted much latley
Im Hiring
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
lol alright i am down
nice shit grime.
yo you see feature?
thanks ha i see you got a new hater by the way
i get the mic in 3 days so we will do it then
lol i want us do a track together
well i got to ask you something when we doing one together?
dad redo
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
aft3rmath i am not trying to act hard man i just did not think i
would cry we were not really geting along at the time we had not
spoken in a year before that week
GRIME DISS
1.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.17.09
kingrhymez
you should probly change your name to prince cus there can only be
one King and thats me
ha shit straight took me a minute to read.
go read the cobra vs grimemc and put your thoughts on it i want
everyones
lol you put that smile at the end cus you know you might not like
me but am not the worst rapper
Sea Sick
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
shits better then alright the lyrics are not perfect,but the way i
could flow to it would be fuckin sexy
i am giving it to twisted
Hommie
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
ummmm you might want to work on this
....
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
thanks
shit was nice man King Cobra
hip hop....lol hi whats your name? then were undressed priceless
hell yeah i like the website so much more now that we are doin this
lol yeah it was probly the fucking captions fault lol
lol i know i was about to say the same
and i just bought a mike and all that so soon i will be doing this
with you guys
lol roughrida why did you not vote on me and grimes you opinion
matters to me
grimemc
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
i do not know man yours was tight i agree with everyone they were
pretty much a tie and ok man i look forwerd to seeing it
lol look at the list of comments
respect to the fullest to all
thats what i am saying but he said no!
either way it gos grime thanks for a great competition
holy shit 5 to 5
FREESTYLE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
i got respect for this one
you to grime!
ha first they put me vs j stunna who is one of my people and then
you witch we have always had are respect for each other ha.
tight lyrics man
alright 4 to 4
damn roughrida probly one of my favorites of yours
Beast
6.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
yo man not bad if it was just a freestyle nothing special but it
was not terrible can you vote on me and grimes?
yeah thats all i want is for all of us to make a classic and put it
together
lol nothing special just what you feel just in a classic way not
all this bullshit that makes no sense at the current time something
with meening you know the shit i prefer doing
you to man much respect to ya no matter how this gos
thanks hip hop your making the sight alot better
man submit this to the rep your city second chance
grimemc
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
lol alright i will try to think of one
grimemc
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
lol i do not know if you noticed but i do not do punch lines
grimemc
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
ha naw i am good
grimemc
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
yeah i got cha lol i just ment before 4 days
i am just saying i got you your thoughts are i suck and in my
opinion i am better then you.
and are you doin the second chance?
he has the second chance going on join,and thats good for you if
you think i suck i just said something back witch any true rapper
would do
lol cus you kept posting on my shit when i had not done anything to
you,and you did not even join the contest you knew you could not
win
ha man i got more inportent things then you i am trying to work on
my contest lines
EVERYONE
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
got cha
thanks dante and lucci and dbox i still got respect for ya bro do
not get it twisted
EVERYONE
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.10.09
lol well congrats on the win
i am goin da vivs.
sorry heiz
i got rayfrombk
hey man since you posted on dboxs could you state your thought
about mine?
dbox read
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.09.09
thats my opinon thanks for the 9
nice one it this for someone?
dbox read
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.09.09
thanks eazya and crazyflow
lol wow
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
but i do not do shit to any one i just do friendly battles
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
any time man so you doin a track with me and dante?
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
simezzy why you always beafin with me?
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
alright lets make fun of emos lol
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
thanks for the feed back breezy.
good win realeyez
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
yeah you to man so you down with me and dante?
and what do you guys want to write about?
EVERYONE
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
thanks for the feed back dante and you should do it with us i have
read yours there nice and stuff and we need 3 versed feel me?
rise up
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
i like your view
thanks man same to you.
i would really like us to do one together some time
ha nice one my bad it took a sec i am on myspace to and it is hard
to do both
realeyez
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
yeah go for it
i agree
lol yeah but you still got me round 1 so it did not really matter
lol alright just fire when you get back
and yeah so did you you checked all my ratings but all yours were
good so i could not say anything back about that
realeyez
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
thanks man you ever want to do a collab together let me know hit me
up on myspace the emails on the profile
i agree he won but i want to go 3 rounds
GRIMEMC
0.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
yeah i agree with hip hop
battle
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.08.09
alright go ahead and fire if you need like 30 to read some of my
lyrics to destroy go ahead
nice shit guys
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
wow nice shit guys
thanks grime
ha yeah we both know you won thanks for the fun though
ha short and sweet
Cobra Diss
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
lol short like a midget mad respect man
mr hip hop
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
thanks man
ha yeah i posted on it that was funny
Mr hip hop
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
yeah i read it and threw another quicky
ha nice i am doin another one cus i feel like it
Mr hip hop
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
who did i talk shit about?
batlle
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
alright it will be like 5 or 10 minutes
lol and i am gonna need that gl
wholy shit
nice grime it was hot
lol i still want to know who he was talkin to
ha right you just depressed him for like a week.
i like it hip hop
Ray
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.06.09
alright man and i know i do not diss ha i already told everyone
that i can not do it
hay
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.05.09
lol nice man
OH MA GOD
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.05.09
my emails stoppy12345@hotmail.com
nice one by the way
lol well good now make a full rap about being on grown man status
ha congrats man i have only been 16 for 2 weeks and i love it
REal MCs
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.05.09
thanks for the cobra thing man.
respect for ya and everyone else.
nice work.
peace.
King Cobra
ha i live in florida to nice one guys
alright man let me know when and i will go look at it keep it up
grime
i like it not really my style cus i go really fast like twista but
nice flow,and i love the lyrics
ha i do not know if i am included but nice shit man deserves a 12
but they will only let me go to 10 :[
alright man keep it real
10 it is
dad redo
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.04.09
yeah man we all have my dad died from cancer i cried like a bitch
Featured!
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.04.09
a honest 9 man nice.
yo if you got time let me know what you think of mine
big dadddy kane was really good.
and most of his did not rhyme
lol not all raps rhyme
nice bro real shit
thanks bro it will be up in like 5 minutes.
yo admid where would i send the donation to?
and how much is needed for the new features?
twisted
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.03.09
yo go read my anarchy make a hook and a verse i already got the
first down,and grime had the second
this is actualy one of my favorites of yours
Why Hide
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.02.09
damn much respect
well i have only read one so far but i see your into meaning like
me i will continue to read them and let you know what i think
lol i have only been here a little over a month so thats why i have
not heard of you
i like it man i have never heard of you before but nice
nah nigga remember yur the fag
lol grime you know you won do not even put him on the spot like
that
yeah man take it in any way you want do as if you were doin your
own track about anarchy
alright well either hit me up on here at my email adress witch is
on my profile or on my space by lookin me up with the email adress
alright well i have been wanting to add 2 verses and a hook to my
anarchy one would you mind doin a verse on that? either with my
view or the other side of it
lol what do you feal good doin your more hood status or meaning?
yo grime would consider doin one with me?
to my dog
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.02.09
real shit man i will pray for your boy man.God bless
nice grime,and i can not tell you how to inprove cus your far past
me man.
keep it up
lol nice
mad props man keep it up
doc
4.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.01.09
thats what i am sayin
breezy i a do not have beef with you ok?
i am just rapping i do not want to take the vets spot and like i
already said my thing i was tryin to do is stop the beef
celebrate that young breezy is not here no more
"new generation" never needed u not now not before
alright stop this beefin shit the only reaon i joined is cus
twister agreed with me that we should stop the beef but here
everyone in the New Generation gos startin shit again
i dig it but it has room for inprovment
lol wow i do not no what to say
haha
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 06.01.09
i was gonna give it a 9 but we gotta make up for the fag that gave
you 0
nice grime
not bad
lol i kind of hope he dus not to beef but just for fun ya know
you did not have to type alot.
this all that was needed
alright man much respect for ya roughrida
actualy i got recording time under the kissimmee ballers right now
in down town orlando so nah this ain my only rap career i won be
big,but atleast i know im better then you
War
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.30.09
nice bro
ZACH
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.29.09
umm i would delete this if i were you
i posted a Bulletin on myspace and theres a link on my page if your
gonna put one put Dad please
umm
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.29.09
thanks bro
Random LoL
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.29.09
ha thank you
no not quiet
nice one.
lol and i almost forgot detroit was goin down hill fast
alright my emails on my page hit me up on myspace or here.
alright if you want to redo the hook go ahead and ill make mine 16
when you want to do this?
DWN SOUTH
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
i like it
MURRAY!!!!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
ha thanks for adding me to the list there
Why Rap
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
nice i got respect for this one
MURRAY!!!!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
lol yeah ive only been here a month
MURRAY!!!!
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
yo why is it that in the NEW GENERATION that everyone has been
invited except me?
i am not that bad
yeah may 16th 1993
dude why the fuck do you keep talking about being 15 i just turned
16 last week and your weak ok?
shit
ha nice and to think i was writing one to say we should stop the
beef
exclusive
3.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
dude your just like me you can not diss just try to write
something take time to think about it and maybe then someone might
even give you a 8! i know you ain seen one of them in a while
Anarchy
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
thanks twisted
run
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.28.09
just make it a little more complicated and make it atleast 16 lines
nice one
i got to work harder on my shit before i try that.
well she gave me a warning and i didn lisin,instead i took off for
a weekend with my friends.without calling her or anything so she
said if i thought i was grown then i was on my own.cus shes mad cus
i won do school work.
and since i just turned 16 she thought i would come back and say
sorry and all that but im not going to im more of a man then that
look man i took it off and left you alone i prefer to write with
meening and if you read this you would no that thats not a option
in my life
JMurray
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.27.09
ha wow!i wonder if hes done yet
i meen don get me wrong i like it but his was just really awsome.
ha by the way that comment was fucked up cus its all spelled right
except probly and thats just cus thats how i like to spell it.
he beat you man
yeah man i got respect for this one not only cus its good[not great
though] but also for how fast he made it
wow that was pretty sad
not bad just add a few more lines and shit but i can flow to it.
what part of florida you in?
so you add a verse like in the bible it says judge acordingly judge
not on appearence but yet your still on some fagget dumb shit
judging me cus im white but you think your a G cus you carry a
knife.
you know make a bible rerrence and diss at the same time
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
aigh peace homee.
talk to you tomorrow.
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
yeah my dad was a rapper was well known in detroit,flint,and burton
michigan and he went as cobra king so i flipped it and made it king
cobra.
and yeah im up for that do you want to do it tonight or what?
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
i live in kissimmee,FL but im from detroit im white/indian so ive
cought alot of shit for being a white boy frome detroit rapping but
i haven been doing it for long i started march 9th the day my dad
passed away he asked to take over for him
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
alright man bet.
so where you live?
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
lol im on it right now to.
ha ill send you a request.
i was kinda hoping that fag would try to challenge us im not really
good at battling but i can beat him
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
thanks man we should make a track together sometime.
you got a myspace?
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
yo nice one about your grandpa man it was really good man
roughrida
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
look roughrida don get mad hes just sayin we had all already read
your rap and didn feal like it was worth commenting and yeah hes
better then you look at his music and then look at my one titled
dad read em and learn how to rap
roughrida
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.23.09
true shit
its basic man.
no offense man im just into rap with some kind of meening
rapid flow
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.22.09
thanks man and yeah this one was for you cus you didn like the
flow of the last one.
you got a myspace?
boy to man
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.22.09
i don no i can flow to it cus i go really fast and im not much for
making everything rhyme
Dad
10.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.22.09
thanks guys i hope that everyone who read this now remebers the
good times they had
much respect man may we never forget those have passed
nioe man keep it up.
Drunkkk
7.00/10
posted by king cobra on 05.01.09
nice heiz you always got a good flow to it
how long did it take you to write this?
damn this shit straight
dougy fresh hes better then you so why tell him not to try fool?
reggie 3
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.28.09
lol yeah ive read like half of yours and if you want to quit go
ahead it gave me practice anyways.
ha gay stripper
reggie 3
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.28.09
lol nah i just wanted to give you a reason to continue and have
some fun come on man im new to the game i ain gonna fuck with
people like that ha my bad if you took it like that
oh and i have read your other shit thats why i didn want you to
quit writing
reggie 3
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.28.09
man i don give a fuck about you a rapper on a website talkin about
im throgh i was was just trying to encourege you to continue
reggie 3
9.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.28.09
thanks bro
Unstable
8.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.28.09
i like what youve added now make that one verse make a choures and
make it perfect
Freestyle
3.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.28.09
you call this hot?
my 10 year old cousin dus better step up your game
damn that shit is awsome thanks for comparing me to that
Unstable
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.27.09
yeah just finish it it will be straight
shit is sick
lol your a cobra but im mighty king cobra
nice rap though man
yessa
5.00/10
posted by king cobra on 04.25.09
wow you have talent im new to the website and its nice to see that
some people got talent on here
mr. hip hop