This is fuckin tight

damn good shit seriously. check out some of my recent shit. the old stuff garbage but new stuffs legit.

good shit

good shit man, check out my stuff

whatever poser

yeah cause you took it out. get your fingers out of your ass hole

you took it out

haha. you probably k now this but as eminem says "you got enemies? good that means you stood up for something in your life."

it wont let me post the link but the song is nail in a coffin by eminem

dude fuck xxjcsxx hes a poser he wrote something thats basically the same that he posted here he used the same begining just ignore the bitch

Dude your a bitch. You posted something wayyy simulare to this on my shit get a life bitch!

This is good keep it up. check out my stuff and tell me what you think.

this is the shit dude. keep it up.

im still tryin though you gotta give me that

ight you go first

man i couldnt even do 16 bars. sorry i need more practice.

my ryhmin skills got you climbin hills. my words kill MCs. cause when i get behind the mic the only thing i can see is a dictionary. Crypts they fear me, nothin can scare me. Im on a mission like a missionary, But im not spreading christianity, Im spreadin whats got me losin my sanity. But wait, my ryhmin sounds like a discrase. sorry killacamm this collab now sucks cause i know i cant rap. thanks for the chance i need more practice. I understand if you dont post my verse.

can i give it a shot?

i would change a few words cause i think the words that came to my mind would work better for it. Its okay you just need a little practice keep it up and work at it. Iv gotten better just listenin to people on here given me pointers and i only been on here for about a week. so dont get insulted by me sayin what iv said cause i mean no offence really your pretty good but i tihnk you could do better.

this is good, and your right i shouldnt have admited defeat...

straight up.

aight aight i messed with the wrong person. Im new to this i did think your song was trash but i really just wanted to TRY a rap battle. and im not just saying this cause i just got dissed im saying this cause i need to learn by experiancing please comment my stuff i think i could learn from you man. your lyrics are pretty good. yeah i dont spit very many lines i ran out of shit to say

Sorry to hear that man.

oh ok sorry we e cool ay tell me what you think of my diss though. im new to rapping and that is litterally my first diss i have ever done so i would like some feed back please. you diss right here is pretty good.

oh ok we are good sorry i take that all back but it was true

what you say?!? thats pretty fucked up man. cause i hate my mom you could do anything you wanted to her i wouldnt give a fuck about that alcoholic bitch! that doesnt give a shit about me.

then what was that comment you put on my shit man? i would feel bad if you really were havin my mom suck for a hit. cause my moms a bitch you could say anything you wanted about her and i wouldnt give a shit i wish the bitch would die.

you talkin about me?

This diss was to his song "in my head 2"

not bad. check out my stuff and comment it.

thats the shit.

any tips for this one? im new to this writing stuff. I cant even freestyle. please give me tips.

I have never written a rap before im a complete new rapper. help me out a little? give me some tips?