check my shit out.. i wana know if my shit is good so i know whether to keep writing or not.....

when i spit on the mike
i know im ill and i decife
every puzzle there is even despite
that i walk in the da...

haha spittin free:
fuck a bitch, fuck a nigga too/
yeh bitch now its me dissin you/
step down without a frow...

look a lookie here
yo im tripin
whats that sound in my ear
i cant stop feelin high
yo dude like no lye ...

im 6 feet under and im askin
were the bud at g and what you blastin
this shyt right here is whats crackin
go...

no need for me to kick an introduction
the streets already know who is bustin
t o n i k i do this all day
if...

clip clip clap n i caught him of gaurd
big pistol packin quick crying cus i thought you were hard
bitch back dow...

too simpo ma nia how bout some omre wordplay

sounds sick im down

that shit is weak

good shit keep it up

sick shit

its ight

thats some crazy shyt

i forgot tot give u a ten

you get down g.... check my stuffout let me noe what you think

thats wasup...check my shyt out yo..i need feedback

fuck that shit is strong dawg foreal.. check my shit out ell me what you think..

i like this. its bangin..check mine out tell me what you think

thats some hard shyt you tellem haha... check mines out n let me get some feedback tell me if im included

wow your right. i am speechless.that is some good.............pice of shyt lines... i mean seriously....good joke kid good joke and by the way when it said 16 bars they meant like freestyleing and rappin like mc status u feel me not bar as in snicker bars haha

they e wack

haha shyt is sick yo....

wow not to talk shyt or anything but i think u should work on it a bit more cus it sounds like ur gay. i mean the feeling of rap is like an innocent girl sweet n kind? and u have a scrap book??? yeh its pretty gay.. well good luck on it..lol..

thats pretty sick yo

that shyt is sick.. check mine out im new n shyt

its alright.. check mines out i need feedback//

that shyt is ill.. keep it up/.. i need feedback on my first so check it out plz. thanx

pretty sick. check mine out.. im new to this shyt

poet delirious knows whats up.haha he said, "we really need the whole scene with Krews you know? and a individual mailbox for everyone...so we dont have to communicate with just comments you know?.... thats all im asking...Krews and Mail.... oh...we should have a Freestyle Page(with only freestyles) Colab page(collaborations of course) Battle Page(battles) and possibly a chat room....idk...this aint christmas but it would be nice....Krews...Mail...Individual pages for differnt types of songs and battles" and thats what this needs lol