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Just when you thought I was finished I got serious wit it Game face on, both hands fisted Like I went to clinch on Something there... that never existed Tryna get a grip for I flip like a gymnast Revisit ma first L (loss) Ill never forget it Fuck that feelin I aint down to relive it Ma head spinnin round As I frown from each image Heart start poundin I feel so surrounded... By what couldve been... If I didn throw the towel in Really wasn down for shit I was such a coward then... Took too many days off Way too many plays off Then I wasn ready Maybe never shouldve played yall But now im back And im ready for the face off Tip off, kick off, yup Whatever fits dogg Now im on a mission You ca call ambition Pardon the rendition Its just how I spit son...
friends
grimemc
glover
simplicity
twisted

rival

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Im Back xpert - 03.05.10 - 0.00/10
What up my16... I been gone for a few months... bout to get back on my grind.... LOOK OUT FOR MY NEW POSTS... Aiightt...
FOREVER remix xpert - 11.26.09 - 9.50/10
IT MAY NOT MEAN NOTHIN TO YALL
BUT THIS IS ENGLISH
AND I AINT GOTTA HAVE AN ATTITUDE
BUT I ~MEAN~ THIS
S...
IM GOIN IN xpert - 11.26.09 - 10.00/10
IM GOIN IN, THIS THE MATRIX
STATEMENTS NEVA BASIC
DROPPIN BANNANA CLIPS
CALL IT APE SHIT, IM CRAZY
SPIT ...
FEELIN LIKE A KID AGAIN xpert - 11.10.09 - 9.50/10
~ the beat is more R+B n slow ~

She said we aint at a carnival
But I got tickets to ride you
Now Like a...
GrINdIN xpert - 08.24.09 - 9.50/10
(When it come to grindin)
I be the pegs after the bike hop
BMX type... watch
It come to X man (my name)... <...
WarmUP xpert - 08.23.09 - 10.00/10
I got elmer Fud Bucks(money/ gun shots)
Could you guess wats in ma wrist watch
Bugs bunny carrots, thatll prolly...
quik freestyle xpert - 08.22.09 - 7.50/10
Don think that im gonna ~chill~
Cause the diamonds(ice) on ma neck
Got more ~cuts~ than a freddy kreuger horror...
Must READ lyrics xpert - 07.31.09 - 9.67/10
When you see that X(xpert or railroad crossing)
You best hault, don cross, relax
Imma train, hard bars
All...
sLEePERS xpert - 07.31.09 - 9.77/10
You R a colonoscopist
I know u feelin ma shit
Imma cancer and AIDS mix
Bout as ill as it gets
Feel like ...
TAKEOVER... xpert - 07.30.09 - 9.75/10
Ha ha ha...

Dog, im acrobat fly
Bout to grab on a person n flip
And get crazy as them circuss get
I...
ELLISmat 2 DiSs xpert - 07.30.09 - 10.00/10
Whats funny is whenever
I mention ellismat
Most niggaz responnd
Who the hell is that
And I couldn tell ...
Acceleration . ELLIsMAT diss xpert - 07.29.09 - 10.00/10
You just made the biggest
Mistake of ya life
Who knew ya search for respect
Came with a price
Now ya who...
freestyle xpert - 07.29.09 - 10.00/10
Homie let me take a sec
To freestyle some shit
That I aint think of yet
So all question about me
Ca get ...
Me Myself Nd I xpert - 07.28.09 - 9.00/10
Me, MYSELF and I
Me I never try
I am constantly workin
To make MYSELF a better guy
From age 11 to grade ...
freestyle xpert - 07.28.09 - 8.00/10
Its a lil breezy
My ears froze over
Ice so big
Its givin me da cold shoulder
Im holdin heat
The pape...
freestyle.. xpert - 07.28.09 - 10.00/10
dont need niggaz to take notice
But im fire... the most DOPEst
And don SMOKE shit...
Sharper than a blow fi...
Seen A lot change xpert - 07.08.09 - 9.00/10
Song I wrote a while back...

I grind
Like a train comin to a hault
And get MAD GREEN
Like im runnin...
FairGrounds xpert - 07.07.09 - 6.60/10
Im on top
So this is how I step ma GAME up
Lift up ma leg
Let it drop in Anger
A town stomping
Parti...
KingCobra3 xpert - 07.06.09 - 9.67/10
Lil dude
Prepare to be ridiculed
Im gonna get rid of you
Talkin bout ma moms
Like ya still in middle sch...
ahhh cobra xpert - 07.03.09 - 8.00/10
Bitch... I should smack you
for freestylin\r
In fact dude
This time I give ya
Somethin 2 react to
I s...
king coBRA xpert - 07.03.09 - 8.50/10
King cobra? Hold up
Lean over
You don wanna drive first
Okay ill be chauffuer
Bring a pen, a pad
An...
freeSTYLE xpert - 07.03.09 - 9.33/10
The only thing I prolly lack is consistancy... whatever tho... once again... if ya aint gone think outside the box... do...
Cardiac Arrest xpert - 07.03.09 - 10.00/10
Heard u was hot
Im now a beliver
Ive seen ya
Geeze Ive...got that good wood
Can ya work it like a beaver...
Get GER.MAN xpert - 06.06.09 - 0.00/10
Whats this about
Who ca talk shit the best...

Well kiss ma ass then maybe
You will get respect
Thus...
neva let dat SLYd xpert - 06.05.09 - 8.40/10
Im comin thru in a sleek way
Cause these days
Niggaz want beef think
I won give em the business
Like a ...
OH MA GOD xpert - 06.05.09 - 9.00/10
Song about a party... these lyrics r complicated... the punchlines r complex... if u don plan on thinkin outside the bo...
TRUTH xpert - 06.03.09 - 9.38/10
I get green like the goblin
Im hotter than
Anybody you rockin with
It like diarea
I cant stop this shit...
Competitive... xpert - 06.02.09 - 10.00/10
Somethin I wrote to rick rosss push it to the limit... when he first came out...

Im soo competitive
For sec...
DISRESPECT xpert - 06.02.09 - 9.00/10
This why you aint ever comment ma shit
Cause for the past couple days
You been plottin a diss
Edit, revise, ...
Smeizzy xpert - 06.02.09 - 7.75/10
Smeizzy diss, easy kidd
You niggaz believe this shit?
Im battlin a dude whos first diss
Was a plead for this...
That DUDE xpert - 06.02.09 - 8.80/10
Check this
If a light hit ma neckless
You might think its lightening
So fly, if you scared of heights
It...
MOVE freestyle xpert - 06.02.09 - 6.67/10
I got big shit popin
Like a copa, with a chopa
Will u threatening a hostage
Life, like you gone stop it
...
dIRECTion xpert - 06.01.09 - 8.00/10
Please read it all...N leave a comment

HOOK(sung)

I don know
How to get
Where the fuck im tr...
U can get it xpert - 06.01.09 - 9.00/10
HOOK

You can get it
O, u can get it from the flo up to the ceilin
If u willin, I swear that im gonna ki...
Rock wit ME xpert - 06.01.09 - 10.00/10
HOOK

Rock, rock wit me for a minute
Now just stop and hear me for a minute
Cause I know u niggaz
Fe...
Dear FATHER xpert - 06.01.09 - 9.63/10
Now u aint have to love me
Like ya mother, or ya brothers
But a little show of love
Was really all that I wa...
SORRY xpert - 06.01.09 - 7.00/10
See Ive been thinkin
About the way things have happened
Leanin fowards
Lookin backwards and its tragic
S...
CUT EM OFF xpert - 06.01.09 - 9.67/10
RATE IT...

HOOK

Cut em off
It aint really nuthin dog
When bitches aint jumpin off
Pull em ...
Cocky... nah xpert - 05.31.09 - 10.00/10
Now go ahead
Ask me if I think im the best
Im so cocky, watch me
Even cleaned up imma mess
I make moves ...
Day N niTe xpert - 05.31.09 - 10.00/10
Homie im just tryna stay alive
Hustle through the day and night
For ma dead homies
Never got a chance to say...
From Ma dreams xpert - 05.31.09 - 9.25/10
The chick from ma dreams
Does she even exist
Or is she just in ma sleep
Imma pimp but I been
Thinkin dif...
breezy xpert - 05.31.09 - 10.00/10
THIS IS A Warning... ur reckless trashtalk will be not be tolerated... its kewl that u don want to be in generation... ...
Like me xpert - 05.30.09 - 9.67/10
A verse from another song I wrote... I explain my puchlines in the end...


Blingin like the sun
You loo...
Influence xpert - 05.29.09 - 10.00/10
Guys u might have to excuse me on this one... I wrote this a while back... just wanted opions on it... its basically abo...
Why Rap xpert - 05.28.09 - 10.00/10
Its possible I made a fool of ma self
Tryna proove that I was cool enough ta
Manuever through influences
Wit...
Simplicity 2 xpert - 05.28.09 - 10.00/10
Simplicty 1, simplicty 2
I ripped you the first time
Your sublimely screwed
Im the envy of you
Everythin...
Simplicity xpert - 05.28.09 - 10.00/10
Whats all the hostility
Dog you not feelin me
Pause. I gotta be hot
All ya bitches GRILLIN me
BEEF nah.....
a Lil X tra xpert - 05.27.09 - 9.00/10
You know the kid
Stay propa
Like I had a job offa
Homie I pull the car up
My rims look like flyin sauce...
pussy money weed xpert - 05.27.09 - 7.00/10
Beat just started
You ca say im endin it
Why? Cause im killing it
In four bar incraments
I be on ma ...
Fuck You xpert - 05.27.09 - 8.00/10
Hook:

Fuck you im doing wat I wanna do
B4 you I was doin wat I wanted to
Now u here imma do it righ...
fisrt battle xpert - 05.27.09 - 7.00/10
A little battle me and Twisted had... He got me... ill admit it... one of the few dudes I actually have respect 4....
A challenge xpert - 05.27.09 - 9.00/10
Show me a challenge
Im bangin a judges mallet
Im blazing, w/ fuckin talent
And aiming it a these cowards ...
SCREAM xpert - 05.27.09 - 10.00/10
I wanna see that white flag
Yup surrendar
Lil x uh end ya
You aint close to the kid
Like you a sex of...
aMille freestyle xpert - 05.27.09 - 10.00/10
A mille ya hear
Feelin like I got a 9 milimeter
Right hear
Cause the beat is soo scared
That it stud...
300 SPARTANS xpert - 05.27.09 - 10.00/10
Never a dissapointment
Are you ever diassapointed
At the top, Ill be there
Like I have an appointment
u could never xpert - 05.27.09 - 9.00/10
Title... you could never be this fly

Verse 1

I came from the gutta
Where the drunk niggaz studd...
Its all good xpert - 05.27.09 - 10.00/10
I been grindin now
Im ready to skate off
Flyer than the take off
Of tony hawk in his prime
Inside of...
Keep it movin xpert - 05.27.09 - 7.00/10
I know im hot shit
And I be on the block with
The top kicks, don stop
It prolly make ya socks wish
T...
ARAB MONEY xpert - 05.27.09 - 7.67/10
You aint heard the last of me
Ma flow so sweet
Shit I prolly got a cavity
I hop on the track
And I r...
Crack Juice xpert - 05.27.09 - 8.00/10
Some beat on this crack juice instrumental cD... check it
They tryna do it
Shit I done it
Get a clue, I fu...
comments
My16 Stand Up Ft. Eazy A 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
I like the concept...
FOREVER remix 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Yeah wat didn u like... so I can make it better
mainstream murderers for collab. 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Who da fuk is alkada... I don think we supposed to be teamin w/ them... but other than that I like it
FreeStyle 3 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Damn I feel dumb as hell after readin this... not cuz it was bad tho lol
equipped 2 spit 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Minus 3 for the 3 parts I didn like... but the rest was ight... specialy the last punch...
Rhyming off my sidekick(The Foundation) 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
I liked this... it was a little simple... like u freestyled it... but it had a message...
FEEDMERAPPERS DISS 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Its ite
IM GOIN IN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
I wrote it after the other one... I like the beat a little more...
Youngwayne Vs EazyA 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Eazy A takes this one... young wayne aint got it... no need to take this seriously
These cold streets 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Yeah im diggin this homie... flows tight...
444444444444 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.27.09
Its short but its hot...
IM GOIN IN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.26.09
aight...
xpert read this lol 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.26.09
Aint nuthin to read wtf?
IM GOIN IN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.26.09
Im on my sidekick so if I was to type it in the list won come up... so go make a post under the group nd ill join
Fallen Knight Life Ft Shadowman 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.26.09
Tru shit always gets a 10 from me
my verse for ensayne lol 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.26.09
How do I join
IM GOIN IN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.26.09
Shit... y not... im down
Hype Vs, Ensayne ~R1~ 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.17.09
HYPE HAS MA VOTE
freestyle.. 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.12.09
Wat? Nothing... ok let me xplain... 1~u smoke dope... 2~a damn is put in a flow of water.... 3~look up chia pet The rest of the shit is self explanatory... wtf
"Ensayne" Torture (Horrorcore battle diss) 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
U crazy
As Tears Run Down My Face FT bunnyz 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
Damn... this shit deep as hell... bunnyz... sry 4 ur lost... but ur verse was official... a lot of emotion and a visual... good stuff...
SK VS LH VOTE 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
Damn... hype is crazy wit it
evil bunny diss!!!!! 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
That last punchline was crazy
quik freestyle 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
BORING... ? I GOT SO MUCH SWAG DAT EVEN IF IT WAS WAK.... IT WOULD SOUND HOT... u need to hear it on a track I guess
FEELIN LIKE A KID AGAIN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
Yo... this ma first time on here in like a month.. I peeped ya page n ya crew... u spit some hot shit... but for now imma ride solo... just got off a serious writers block... nah mean... but ill get back at chu ight
FEELIN LIKE A KID AGAIN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
What crew son?
WarmUP 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 11.10.09
Yall niggaz is stupid... dis shit is fire...
g.till.da.end DISS 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 10.29.09
Who r u?
Brothers at war 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 10.29.09
Intresting
Those Rainy Dayz 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 10.28.09
This shit right here...
Flipz vs. King Cobra 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 10.27.09
Ma vote goes 2 FLIPZ
rise of the master (every 1 read) 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 10.05.09
I like the beastiality line
would you miss me 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.30.09
Ten points
GrINdIN 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.25.09
Ok... let me explain... play by play 1. On a bmx bike... pegs r used for grinding... 2. In X men... cyclops eyes did some crazy lazer shit... ma name is X... I shine... get it 4. A lot of ice on ma watch/time was froze... 5. White fox is and artic fox 8. When newborns are first born... they can se shit... 10. Fishermans knot is used to put 2 lines together... in my case bars/lines ~ in rap ill means ur a sic lyricist... and electirc eel shocks shit ~ if u don know wat a mystery shop is u r an idiot...
Glover diss 2 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.23.09
Lmao.... good shyt
Glover diss 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.23.09
8 points
IM BREEZY (Diss) 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.23.09
Ha ha ha
TANTRUM 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.22.09
Nine points!
phonerings diss!!! 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.01.09
The first 6 bars go hard.... good diss...
RAY DISS 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.01.09
Woah... this suprised the hell out of me... guess I was sleepin...
Football 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.01.09
N e thing about football gets 10 points... entertaining
Must READ lyrics 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 08.01.09
Oh snap... ray didn diss me... thanks lol... and I do record... just can now... im tryna buy a computer... give me a month...
Negro Please! (NY Edition) 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Rap has changed... bottom line... never would I say biggie was over rated... then... biggie was hot(or our hip hop legends)...... now all his shits classic... since then hip hop has... evolved into somethin different... or died out... as some people would say... thats how shit is... shits hot... people get over it... and then nostalgia kicks in...
brandon cardone 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Lmao at grimes comment...
MY hard rap 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
That verse is HOT... to bad EVERYONE know u aint write it...
sLEePERS 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
I know... condrads 2 u... Ive been on the site... I just wasn postin... im ready to put ma name in some of them polls... ha ha... n e ways... about sk... no offense but I think imma roll solo for now... but ill get bak at chu
sLEePERS 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
almost 3 months... nd...Idk... whos to judge... we need to come up with a definition for the word VET...
sLEePERS 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Yea ur right... Won happen again SIR... I promise...
sLEePERS 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Its a doctor that checks your ass for colon cancer... I belive... LMAO
sLEePERS 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Lol... yeah... this some shit I freestyle in ma head at work... imma put it on a beat tomorrow at work...
I NEED A NAME 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Let it be know fresh... I have a simular oj line... and I didn bite off u...
I NEED A NAME 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
Can hate on this one...
im illy 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
NINE POINTS!!!
random war like bars 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.31.09
felt like a scene in a movie... nd... Nice punchline... in the 2nd bar...
Feelin Myself 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
Doesn Lack swag... ha ha
Stay true 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
This is a good concept... I get the point but the lyrics need work... but u r new to rap... so just keep writin...
TAKEOVER... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
idk wat happen to r battle... nobody voted
EVERYONE VOTE ellismat vs xpert 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
Watis going on here?
ELLISmat 2 DiSs 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
Get paid tomorrow... imma hit up best buy... and get to work... when I get a chance ill def. Check out that or those mixtape(s)... 4 now... im out tho... work in the a.m.
ELLISmat 2 DiSs 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
Ight... good look...
ELLISmat 2 DiSs 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
Yeah man... Badly
ELLISmat 2 DiSs 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.30.09
I know it... im tryna get a computer... so I can rhyme to some new instrumentals.... Ive been writin to the same ones for a while... and its really startin to show... soo I been workin homie...
Respect cypher( for real mcs) 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
OMG.. Haters won like this... but I think its FIRE...
Xpert Diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
WTF was that... I typed 6 30
Xpert Diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
60... in ur timezone.... if I leave now
Xpert Diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Write a diss now if u want... but im going to the gym
Xpert Diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Ight...im headed to the gym now... ill be back around 930... ill hit u up
Xpert Diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Ha ha ha... it was kinda funny... should we do 2 rounds...
Acceleration . ELLIsMAT diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Lmao... cheater...
ONLINE!!! 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Lets do it... whats the topic
ONLINE!!! 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Who!?!?
ONLINE!!! 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Da kidD!
Fat Midget Dance! 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
HA HA HA!!!
killed that shit 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.29.09
Im feelin it
flows see through 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
First bar was funny
venom diss 1 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
I was thinkin the same thing
venom diss 1 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
First half was fire
Me Myself Nd I 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
Tryna find and instumental cd...
Shit Critics... (aka Haters) freestyle 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
I liked the first4 bars... the 2nd 4 bars... flowed well... but u said shit mad times... the rest of it was ight... I liked the concept...
The top 3 people on this site are...... 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
Obviously no on the list...
polar bear dizz 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.28.09
Lol... wat???
Fucking Vote 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.09.09
Everybodies scurred 2 vote... ha ha ha... GLOVER won...
I Miss You 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.09.09
It was hard for me to read this... not because it was bad though... because u told a story... and I could imagine eveything that was goin on... this is some deep shit man... sry bout ur loss...
Depressed 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.09.09
Damn...
Seen A lot change 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.08.09
Just 4 bars short of a 16
Your A Bitch 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.08.09
Lmao... its just a punchline...
FairGrounds 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
Y do u want to battle me soo bad...
lyric city 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
Its all good bruh... don worry the five u just posted made it a lot better... lol... u can edit ur ratings... people don post ratings u r right... my guess... is they don want to offend n e one... no offense... idk
Ideal Party 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
A 1... lol...
FairGrounds 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
Cmon... a 7?
rampage 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
Then again maybe this site does need some honest ratings
rampage 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
Ur punchlines r creative... but givin people ones... lmao btw... prolly aint the best way to introduce urself...
crazy 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
I liked this... punchlines nd a flow... good shit
Heiz,Prodigies,Mr.U 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.07.09
10 points...
FUCK RIDER 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.06.09
This shits funny... good but funny...
xpert 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.06.09
I get off work in 4 minutes... imma write another verse 4 u....
Style so sweet 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.04.09
Crash... u r a beast... keep it up...
xpert 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Igt... imma try to write faster
xpert 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Sry I don freestyle
Im No Newb 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Lmao... punchlines r funny
freeSTYLE 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Thanks...
freeSTYLE 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
WTF... not again... comment this shit... if its a 5 give it a 5... idc...
who wins round 1 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Word! (oO)
haha crash 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Word! (oO)
quick one 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Word! (oO)
fatal crash 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Word! (oO)
FREE STYLE 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Word... (oO)
Simplicity 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
¿(oO)?
Cardiac Arrest 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 07.03.09
Had a bad case of writers block...
Put It Down Hook 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.09.09
Yeah man... this sounds good... check out ma shit titled influence... its a story... tell me wat chu think
EVERYONE 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.08.09
That nigga beef w/ everybody
GRIMEMC 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.08.09
Damn u guys r so lucky... I usta be able to record ma own shit... now I have to save up for a damn computer... this shit suks
16 Bars 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.06.09
Yeah writers block... its a horrible sickness... I get that shit every now n then
Quick 16 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.06.09
DEep... well written
wordplay 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.06.09
Damn... I like
battlin kids 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.06.09
HA HA HA shits funny
neva let dat SLYd 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.06.09
Nigga y should I give a damn about ya post...
neva let dat SLYd 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.06.09
What r u doin
fuck you 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.05.09
Waddup son... I need ur email... G(oO)NiEs...
my new girl 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.05.09
Waddup son... I need ur email...
jus buggin 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.05.09
Yeah... I like it...
wanna Battle.. 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.05.09
Nigga ur raps r on steroids
Day & Night 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.04.09
Good punchlines...
one hitter 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.04.09
Did u write this recently
everyone 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.04.09
Hold upp... did this nikka seriously change his hometown... wtf....
Lil Red Ridin Hood 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.04.09
(oO) > shit....
Caliborations 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
LilXpertJerz@aol.com holla at me...
TRUTH 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I dunno... I freestyled all the lines in my head at work... and wrote em in my phone... and then I edited it and made it a rap...
TRUTH 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
YesSSS... thanks u... All
looking for beef 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
This shit is serious... no lie...
A challenge 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
Hot... even tho im everywhere
u could never 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
This song could be carried by the hook.. N the verses r decent
aMille freestyle 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
Fuck wat ya heard... this shits hot
fisrt battle 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I thought it was creative...
Keep it movin 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I like the first 4 bars... then I kinda fell off
SCREAM 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
This shit is fire... on one of games beats... scream or sumthin
Fuck You 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I like this... don thinks its bad at all
pussy money weed 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
A seven...
a Lil X tra 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
If u heard the audio youd agree this shit is hot
Cocky... nah 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
A 10... this shit is fire... I know it
SORRY 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I rate it a 7...
U can get it 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
Bitch this is a 9... just because I know some of the punchline might be confusin
dIRECTion 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I rate this an 8
Crack Juice 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
I rate this an 8
Smeizzy 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
STFU... please
DISRESPECT 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.03.09
Lol... damn right...
Dirty Jerz 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Damn... this shits crazy... Respect... nd thanks for the shout...
annihilation 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
YeSs... Love da Flow... PluSs this shit funny...
Competitive... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Thanks bruh... nd I will comment it
Elegance 2 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Great CoLABo
married beverly 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Lmao... but otherwise this was nice...
Xpert 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Agreed...
Simezzy VS Xpert 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Yeah I agree... xpert won... n I don even battle like dat....
Xpert 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Yeah man I understand now... I have this competitive issue... I hate when people say they r better than me... even if they r... but thanks for clearin that up
Lyrical homicide 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Ight ma bad breezy... I thought u were sayin that whe u said... I started generation... im waaayyyy better than u.... ma bad son
MOVE freestyle 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
I can belive this nigga fukin up ma ratings... 4 no reason... admin... delete his ass please...
im back 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
N... E... ways.... homie keep writing...
Smeizzy 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
I can respect that... experience vs pure skill... experience usually wins.... so go get it
DISRESPECT 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Its all good... nah mean... I don want beef or nuthin... just can be havin ma name thrown around in diss tracks...
fuck the generation 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Who tought u to research... I dropped out... and even if I was... wat chu mean I had it comin... how do u put ma name in a diss track and then say nothin personal...
fuck the generation 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Na foreal I don even know u why r u tryna diss me?
fuck the generation 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Bitch... keep ma name out ur mouth....
That DUDE 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Smiezzy.... for wat... u suk... a waste of time... n stop commentin ma shit wit 5s
Already Did List 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
OMG... that shit was so long... but it was worth it... great story... that shit aint easy......
That DUDE 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Yeah I hear ya... but it actually does flow pretty well... know it might not look like it tho... I switch it up... fast slow... idk...
smashin legos 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Good puchlines... good flow...
NEW STUFF rate it 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
I like the flow homie... would love to here u actually spit it... I got an idea of how it sounds tho... I got respect for a crazy flo...
CUT EM OFF 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Thanks... and imma have to check that song out...
Whos online... 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
That was a joke right?
dear dad 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Sry he blew it off... shits hot tho...
Dear FATHER 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.02.09
Thanks man...
everybody.... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Is that u again sayin u r gonna take over the site... n puttin r names in it... dog... u started all this beef... sayin ur gonna take over the site... then tried to say we said it...
Another fake 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Alright in the 5th post up... BREEZY is that u admittin u wanted to take over this site?
read 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
No ofencia a mi espanol amigos....
MONO 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
WTF!!!! Lol... some cus word... and somethin of the ass... he doesn do somethin... live his word.... englsih or spanish... idk I quit
read 3.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
This here had some decent shit in it... but then it also had some shit better off not said... nah mean... plus I don know how many people speak spanish... soo... that said... a 10 for the good shit.... a 0 for the bad shit... and a 0 for the spanish... 10 out of 30 is 1 3rd... so u get a 3.33333333333
Rock wit ME 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
And nicwess... son as I find a studio... I will... thanks for the comment...
Dear FATHER 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
YESSS... another comment...
woww mono 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Doc... I saw this shit comin... to bad he didn ... FIRE...
Rock wit ME 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Thanks again doc
Dear FATHER 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Thanks bruh
doc 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
OoO... u showed them...
doc 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
They wrote u a diss track?
doc 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Breezy N doc... are really good... y r u beefin?
Superstition 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
This concept is diffrent... Superstition doesn really play a big part in ma life... but uhm comment my cut em off if u can... and whats that phobia...
English Youth 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Liked the concept... wats a blud... u mean like... bloods n crips...? Idk... comment my cut em off.. Thanks
Rabbits Foot 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Flow is insane.... a lot of people can do this... coment my cut em off... thanks
I Feel 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
I liked this up until after the martian part... the first part was good... comment my cut em off... please... thanks
rayfrombk 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
I see wat he sayin... but weezy be all over the place... no offense if u don like that nigga weezy... its not bad homie... comment my cut em off... thanks
My Style 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Short... but I like.... comment ma cut em off... thanks
equal 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Great concept... great last bar...
BRAP 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 06.01.09
Good punchlines...
Rome is Done 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
U told me to...Flaws... ur punchlines r too simple... u change the rhyming patern everytime...
Rome is Done 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Do u always talk to yourself... sike... nah but seriously... sry if u felt I was dissin u...
Think 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
How long u been rappin for...
to da beefers 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
I c wat u were shootin 4
ALL....FEEDBACK!!! 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Good shit...
nike(jusdoit) 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
I thinks its the way u do ur punchlines... idk but whatever it is keep it up its hot
Day N niTe 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
I don know... ur style of writing is just unique to me... its a good thing don worry... imma read some of ur raps and get back at u
Struggle 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Didn read the whole thing but I read enough to give it a 10
nike(jusdoit) 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
I like ur style of writin... its diffrent tho...
Inmate 2951 & Me 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
CREATIVE!
From Ma dreams 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Thanks for the comment
Generation and Vets 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Wrong XPERTS out
retribution 1 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
A 10... if I do say so myself
yo 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Now I understand.... ZZzzZZz
yo 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Ight imma sleep this one over... and get back at yall tomorrow...
yo 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
And simplicity thanks... I try to be... I don even need all the drama... and let me rephrase that... I would like to be respected... don wanna sound demanding...
yo 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Me personally I got nothin against the vets... and I don really want to take over... I just want respect nah mean...
Beef... 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Prodigies... same here... where did this all come from...
yo 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Ite.. So breezy decided not to be part of generation... and said some of us were fake... he even said fuk generation... but corrected himself by sayin that he didn mean fuk everyone in the group... just the ones that tried to diss him... I think...
Beef... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
WAT?!? Alright I aint tryna stir nuttin up... but YOU said FUK GENERATION... that means fuk all of us... right... or was it just a bad choice of words...?
yung breezy 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
1 to nothin...
yung breezy 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Fuck the generation??? Is that not blatant disrespect...
yung breezy 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
I just don understand y u just flipped the script...? WTF
Fuck generation 0.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.31.09
Hold up bruh... did I miss somethin...
Like me 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Finally FRee thanks homie... and thanks simplicty... I asked for that right...
Better Than You 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Mixed ratings huh... well im gonna give u a seven... this shit is poetic... some of the punchlines wherenice... some of them were just okay... could be great... but it has flaws...
Encore Freestyle 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
I like
drunk as nuts 6.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Done put ur alcohol in a d.a.r.e bag... lol
Influence 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Thanks I been wait for someone to comment this shit... damn...
Strap up 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Where in jersey... do I know u
Mono 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
HA HA HA... I like this nicwess guy... no homo...
The Takeover 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Doc u shits hot 2 btw... respect
Time Again ! 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Damn... I didn understand some the first time I read it... aint bad...
The Takeover 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Lol... ight thanks bruh
laker freestlye 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Did u literaly freestyle this... or write it
Strap up 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Flow is nice... a lot of people got no flow... congrads... u r not one of them... a 9...
The Takeover 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Doc I was on your side too... I keep the same rhyme all the time... so I know what ur sayn... I wasn respondin to ur comment... u just happened to post ur a lil quicker... ya know... I said I liked it....
Ressurection 6.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
with the fireproof punchline... u could have simpily said... I spit in a fireproof booth... It think the was to wordy it took away from the puchline... nd seperate ur bars so its easier to read... this is okay
The Takeover 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
I C wat young breezy is sayn... but I actually c a lot of POTENTIAL in this... sometimes stayN on the same rhyme is bad... but it all depends on what ur sayin... A blood suckin animal... damn im ticked... creative... I like...
get to bussiness 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.30.09
Yes... a 10
Random LoL 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
Im usta shitn... nah mean... just not on myself... u r crazy... lol.. N... How about we just call the battle even...
GENERATION 5.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
U 4got 1 person bruh....
GOTTA 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
Do u want an honest comment?
xpert 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
Lmao... yeah ur drunk... he called me (e)xpert... hit me 2morrow
Bloodbath 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
How big is your brain... lol... sike nah... this shits crazy... this is sooo unique
Disciple 8.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
There is a lot of shit goin on in here man... its definately different... but C me... I don have a problem with that... an 8...
war wit a vet.... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.29.09
Lmao at the comment under mine
im a failure 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Son... im beat for tonight... but tomorrows a new day 4 me... I write better when im fresh... so ill get at chu tomorrow...
war wit a vet.... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Its crazy how I can see this shit happenin as I read it... I respect this creativity...
im a failure 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
great concept. failure. everyones felt like that at one point im sure. ill write to it if u r kewl. W/ dat. now if u don mind me sayin. the hook could be better. and usually a verse is 16 bars. The way u started u 2nd verse is good.
Why Rap 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Thanks... this shit is soo true... ull find me rappin about junior high a lot... toughest years of ma life... im glad u guys like it...
only 15 years old 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
keep writin kid... Lol.. At the comment under mine...
fuck it read all!! 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Thats a keeper.... a 9...
Simplicity 2 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
He mighta got me... wat u think
xpert diss 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Lmao.... alright... I got chu son...
Mr.Jmurray 9.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Agreed.... I give it a 9.5
yo vets 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
How many months... u r a monster.... if u just started rappin son... keep writing... develop ur own style to the fullest.... but maybe I shouldn be givin u advice considerin u r battlin me as I type... lol
Simplicity 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Thats wat it is... thanks... all of u...
Polo Freestyle 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.28.09
Creativity.... so serious.... props...
NJ WELCOME!! 7.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.27.09
Damn... who he talkin about like that
Its all good 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.27.09
I been here ma profile was just fuked up and I had to start over... but thanks guys
ARAB MONEY 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.27.09
Thanks for the five bruh... and I don really battle... I make music... ya digg... but if a battle will get me comments... shit get ma me...
everybody.... 10.00/10 posted by xpert on 05.27.09
Fix ma profile...thanks again
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